My very first fanfic^_^

[sora_luver]

OK this my first fanfic and I don't really have a name for it. This fanfic is writen in first person as a 14yr peasant girl named Sasha.

Chapter 1, In the village:
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I stared silently at the figure that had made me stop my work to talk to him. I demanded he tell me why he was here. He answered, “My reason for being here is to bring you back home.”

As soon as he said this I started to quiver. I yelled to him,” What are you talking about this is my home!!!”

In return he replied, “Foolish girl, don’t you know that you are better then all this, you are not a just some filthy peasant, you are the princess of Radiant Gardens.

“Princess of Radiant Gardens…… why does that place sound so familiar?” I thought to myself. I let him explain and finally I decided that I would let him take me to this Radiant Gardens.

When we got there he told me his name was Gerald. I wanted to see the sites and obviously Gerald knew that because he kept on bringing me from place to place showing me thing after thing etc. As we walked to another place Gerald asked if I knew anything about Chasers.

“Chasers?” I asked him.

“Yes, Chasers they kinda look like snakes but are totally black and made from pure darkness.” He replied.

“I don’t think so……. Wait now I remember when I was 7 me and my mom were taking a walk, when I thought I saw something in the ditch. It was dark outside so I couldn’t really see anything clearly but I swear I saw something large and black slithering in the ditch.” I answered.

“Thank you, that will help a lot,” He said.

“Help with what?” I asked in my usual curious tone.

“With discovering the power that you hold,” He replied.

“What powers?” I asked, in my curious tone again.

“You Sasha have the power to w....ah, no let me go, please!” Gerald screamed.

I looked up and started screaming as I saw it, a giant bird the size of at least a big bus. It had grabbed Gerald and was about to grab me when….



So tell me what you think of it if no one likes it i won't continue it but if you do than i will continue this and if you want to you can post some ideas on how to make it better.


P.S this does have something to do with kh, i'll explain it all next chapter if there is one

P.S.S srry for making it so long