The truth

[soradude]

Sora ran as fast as he could, sweat pouring down his face, he summoned his keyblade, his hands shaking, and swiped and slashed at the darkness following. He yelled at the top of his lungs "ULTIMA!!!" Suddenly everything froze in place leaving sora on his own. He ran, ran as fast as he could until he was out of breath. Panting, the young keyblader sat down, he thought to himself (where are my freinds, Where's kairi?) Then, a voice popped out of nowhere " Oh poor sora, what a-"
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Sora woke up in a cold sweat, panting. He looked up to see Namine, his girlfriend, holding his hand, giving him a motherly stare, " Oh, poor muffin, have that dream again?" she asked. "Yeah" said sora "but something was different."



Hope you like! Srry for the shortness:unsure:

[Cloud_Unchained]

It's waay too short, and the details are lacking. Give a little more background behind the Sora and Namine relationship, and try to make your updates a little longer. It's interesting, but if it's this short, not too many people will pay attention to it.

[soradude]

thanks for the help, i'll try!

Chapter 2

Sora groaned, tired of another sleepness night. " Yeah, I had that dream, again.....and don't call me muffin." Namine
pouted like a puppy, " but muffin, I've called you that since the 5th grade, You know three year habits are hard to break."
As Sora got off his bed, Namine made her way to the Restroom to " Freshen up" For the day. " You Know," Namine said, Matter-of-factly, " You should take a day off, It might clear your mind, 5 days and 17 hours of working around all those kids Is a VERY good explanation for those crazy dreams of yours" Sora changed into his clothes " you Know i can't do that" " Fine, just," She kissed him as he walked out " Dont Overwork yourself, Promise? "Don't worry, I'll be fine" Sora said with his infamus grin. Namine giggled.

But the child on his way to the waterpark 4 Doors down, had other plans...

Namine walked into the Beuty salon that she managed, Said hi to all the employes and made her way to her office in the back.
Nelly, Her secretary, Was reading a book when Namine walked In. " Good morning, Nel" said Namine. Nelly Replied "Good morning namine, How's your Boyfriend, Sora?" "Oh Fine, Thank you, And your son?" Nelly smiled " He's fine, His Dad took him to the water park Today, gonna teach him to Swim at Flashing Floods." Namine Chuckled " That's where sora works , He's a lifeguard." Nelly Laughed " Great Then, See you At lunch" "Sure thing nel" Said Namine " See ya!"

Hope It's Good, Don't Hesitate To correct, Just Please don't Flame, Not A Good Typer :Blush: