Sonic the Hedgehog my way(My version is gonna freak you out about what he is)

[Geist]

This gonna be set in middle age in England.Don't like it deal with it.

CHAPTER 1:TWIN TAIL AND THE BLUE DEMON

Deap in the forest a strange fox was running away from somthing."There you are!Get back Twin Tail!"Yelled a man.
He was chasing the fox what was strange about this fox was as said "Twin Tail."It had two tails.How is not known but it was rare and the man that was hunting it well if you havn't figured it out you might want to wait.Just keep you reading."Twin Tail" was yellow in fur and blue in eyes.He kept running dogs could be heard behind him.The man conered Twin Tail and grabbed him by his tails."You'll fetch me alot a monety Twin Tail.I'm goin' to the market right now."The man said.
The man's dogs kept barking as the man threw Twin Tail in cage and locked it.The journey to the market was two hours in time and measure.Can you imagine the horror that Twin Tail felt felt?Can you imagine being free all of your life then someone throws in a cage and goes to sell you?No ofcourse you can't because your a human top of the food chain domanent speacis on the planet.Well not for long.When the last seller stepped down the man who captuered Twin Tail took the stand placing Twin Tail on the table saying."This my latest capture.A fox with two tails.Twin Tail as I call him.The bidding starts at 20,000 silver coins."
One man yelled"50,000!"
Another said."100,000!"
Then one man raised white gloved hand saying."1,000,000 gold."
The man who captured Twin Tail said."Sold!"
The other man started to walk to the stand to pay.He was in a cloak.When he arrived instead of paying he kicked the man in the man stomach knocking him down.His hood was blown off the wind to reveal he was a blue hedgehog.Everyone started to scream and panic saying."It's the Blue Demon!"
"the Blue Demon" grabbed the cage key off of the man who captured Twin Tail and freed Twin Tail.He grabbed Twin Tails hand and ran at an amazing speed out of the town running through the grassy plains and arrivinging in a desert in 30 minutes where as for human it would have been three days.The Blue Demon stopped and Twin Tail fell on the ground.The Blue Demon took off his cloak and walked over to Twin Tail."Hey are you alright?"He asked.
Twin Tail got up and backed away from the Blue Demon."Stay away from me."He said in fear.
The Blue Demon said."Hey I'm not gonna hurt you."
"Then why did they call you Blue Demon?"Twin Tail Asked.
"That's just what they call me.My name is really Sonic.Sonic the hedgehog."The Blue Demon said.
Twin Tail still a little shooken up from the turn of events said."My name is Miles Prower."
Sonic nodded and said."How 'bout I just call ya Tails?"
"Oh...umm... well.....Alright.I guess so."Miles Prower said.

Chapter end.

And so the chapter ends.
Hey!How come you got to do the first chapter Shadow!
Sonic c-calm down!
Calm down!I'm gonna kill ya!
Your mence meat Shadow!
Tails!No!Please!NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!*is getting beat to a death*HELP ME GEIST!
*looks up from a book*Huh?Did you say somthing?
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Alright I know it was short but how was it?

[XIII Heartless]

Umm...wow. That was interesting, to say the least. May I suggest better grammar?

[Geist]

Yeah well.I probabally will.Wait 'till you what Tails is.

[XIII Heartless]

Can't wait, I'm a big Sonic freak. You and I have similar sigs.

[Shadowysights]

Not freaky....ever read Choas diamonds 3? Oh yea.....

Here:http://cd3.fireball20xl.com/

[Geist]

Look.Tails is what's gonna freak you out.And please don't advertise other fics here.

EDIT:Here's the second chapter.

CHAPTER 2:Where there's light there's Shadow

A figure much like that of Sonic's crossed through a town both rundown and disgusting.People glaring evily at the figure.Unlike Sonic this creatures fur was black with stripes on it's spikes,arms,and legs and white covering it's shest.It's shoes rings on it's calves aswell as his as his gloves on the wrists and his eyes were red with fury,rage,hate,and anger.As he passed people whispered."Isn't that Shadow the bounty hunter?"
"Why does he look like the Blue Demon?"
"His filth should go back to hell where they came."
The hedgehog apparently known Shadow the bounty hunter just said."Pathetic humans.Don't speak of what you don't understand."
He continued to walk the streets until he saw a man carring a glowing emerald.He eyes widened."Could it be?It is.They weren't destroyed they were merely cast out of the heavens.Probabally stolen by the other black hedgehog.The Chaos must be here.On Earth.This is it.I found it my emerald."He said.
He charged foward at the same speed as Sonic and punched the man with more than Sonic could manage.He grabbed the emerald and everyone ran to him in an attempt to take the emerald for their own.Shadow raised the so called Chaos Emerald into the air and yelled."CHAOS CONTROL!"
He dissapeared in a blue flash and reapeared in another flash on a nearby rooftop leaving everyone puzzled as to where he went."Hmph!This human filth is pathetic."He said.
He waited until nightfall when the humans went bed he searched the town using his chaos emerald as a radar to see if another one was near.When he was done he found none.Then his chaos started act up.And egg shaped man approached.The emerald started to act up even more."Shadow isn't it?I have someone for you to kill.I think this will serve as payment."The egg shaped said.
He held out a yellow chaos emerald.Shadow asked calmly with a hint in his voice that would do whatever the eggman wanted."Who do you want me to kill?"
"My name is Dr.Eggman.Your target.The Blue Demon."The egg shaped man said.
"As you command.Doctor."Shadow said obdiently and used chaos control to teleport to a desert.
"This is last place he was sighted."He said.
Just as he spoke he saw Sonic in the distance with Tails.He charged toward them and knocked Sonic down."This is too easy.Your time has come Blue Demon."He said.
Sonic got up and said."I don't think so.And my name is Sonic.But that was interesting moving at my speed Faker!"
"Sonic that was....You really are a demon.And faker!?Your not even to be my copy!So bring it on!"Shadow said.
"You asked for it!"Sonic said.

Chapter end.
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What do you think?

[Sabaku no Gaara]

Very good Geisty! Send chapter 2 up soon I'm a very patient person but still... ARG! Is chapter two up yet? Good characters since we can all picture Sonic and Tails lol... WEEEE!

SnG :lol: <- I like that smiley

EDIT= Oopsie!! My bad Geisty!

[Geist]

Chapter two's right above you.Just wait 'till the final chapter it's gonna be a shocker.Also if you have a character you might like here or any plot suggestions PM me.I'll see if i can put it in.

[Sabaku no Gaara]

Weee! I like it a lot! Way to go Geisty! Geist FTW! (ftw= for the win...)

[Geist]

Cool.Your a good freind.It'll be awhile before the next chapter though.Just keep this thing alive until then.

[unknown_boy]

Hmmmm. not bad, not bad. Just need a little more work on grammer, try to go into detail, and make your chapters a little bit longer. NOT LIKE ME CHAPTERS because I really don't mean to make them that long it just....well I...I go overboard. But good story, and hope to see the next chap.

[Geist]

Thanks U_B.The next chapter will be awhile keep checking in though.

[Geist]

Sorry for the double post but.Also if you want music to play to this fight.Play Live and Learn from Sonic Adventure 2:Battle.

CHAPTER 3:Sonic V.S. Shadow

Sonic ran at Shadow in an attempt to punch him but Shadow caught his his fist and countered and threw him in the air.Sonic tunred ball form before he landed to prevent damage and charged directly at Shadow who went into ball form too.They bounced off eachother flying into the air out of ballform."Chaos Spear!"Shadow yelled and shot three yellow energy spears at Sonic.
They hit target but out of the smoke sonicwas riding one to Shadow without much damage.Sonic hit target but as Shadow flew through the air Shadow countered yelling."Chaos Blast!"
He was surrounded by red energy and caused an explosion hitting Sonic and sand started to fall from what was thought be ground revealing a temple of some sort.Sonic reversed himself and started to run on some sort of wall behind the sand when he landed.An emerald flew into the air from the temple after the explosion.Shadow looked into the air and said."A chaos emrald!"
Sonic jumped off the wall and grabbed it.Using chaos control he warped behind Shadow and kicked him.He used it again an punched him further into the air then using it he warped behind Shadow and went into ball and started hitting him with a barage of attacks keeping Shadow in the air.A red echidna walked out from the temple and asked."What's with all the ruckuss?"
He looked into the air and saw Sonic and Shadow."Sonic Meteor!"Sonic Shouted.
He went up into the air and charged up.Then he slammed down on Shadow with all his strength.Sonic got up from the crater made from his attack and Tails flew down there using his tails.Shadow used the last of his strength and warped away.Sonic held up the emerald he found.It was red and glowing."Chaos emerald.Why does that sound so familiar."Sonic said.
He groaned in pain and put his hands to his head.Falling on his knees he saw an image a black hedgehog stealing seven emeralds.Sonic got up."What was that?"Sonic asked himself.
"You!Tell me who you are!"Yelled a voice.
The red echidna came down and banged fists together.Sonic groaned."Why can't moment's peace."He said.

Chapter end.

So what do you think?