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Old 07/20/06, 07:12 PM   #31
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I KNOW, man!

If only Yuna and Paine coulda died.

>.>

Then Amy wouldn't be coming onto Ketso in her sleep.

Ketso freaked out and screamed, "MEGAN!" at the top of his lungs. ._.

You best run, foo. Krazuh's gonna go Ukbarm....
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Old 07/20/06, 07:37 PM   #32
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I KNOW, man!

If only Yuna and Paine coulda died.

>.>

Then Amy wouldn't be coming onto Ketso in her sleep.

Ketso freaked out and screamed, "MEGAN!" at the top of his lungs. ._.

You best run, foo. Krazuh's gonna go Ukbarm....
It was Ketso coming on to Amy.

._.
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Old 07/20/06, 08:04 PM   #33
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In her DREAM, fool.

>.>;

And he never would, so she's even more sick than I thought.
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Old 07/20/06, 08:45 PM   #34
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the emo kid is cheering up . your doing better describeing things
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Old 07/20/06, 09:39 PM   #35
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Oh shut up, idiot.

No one is listening to you anyway, you femme.

Geez. C_U has been describing things way good for as long as time has existed. Shut the heck up.

You're useless.

Updart, C_U.
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Old 07/20/06, 09:49 PM   #36
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Nice tabs, but dude, they sound kinda country. xO But it'll get better as the story progresses, right? (And I'll get better at playing them, too. :\)
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Old 07/20/06, 10:43 PM   #37
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Oh shut up, idiot.

No one is listening to you anyway, you femme.

Geez. C_U has been describing things way good for as long as time has existed. Shut the heck up.

You're useless.

Updart, C_U.
Kat, c'mon. Don't start a flame war. I mean, jeez. >.< He didn't say anything that mean. C_U DOES make Kanynt Emo. That's not an insult. And even if you disagree with the whole "describe things!1" issue, like I do, it's no reason to start a stupid argument.

J00 win. Happuh? >.<

Udpart! o:
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Old 07/21/06, 02:03 AM   #38
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Nice its in depth at times some details are unnecesary but your a very good writer...

it's nice suttle and not full of sword fights
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Old 07/21/06, 03:04 AM   #39
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some details are unnecesary
... Am I the only one on these forums who believes that you can never have too much detail? =\

Updart, Gerd! =D Teh Emoness is addicting.
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Old 07/21/06, 03:17 AM   #40
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^Not the only one, Kat.

>.>

People are dumb.
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Old 07/21/06, 05:54 AM   #41
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Chapter time.

Chapter Seven

~A White Smile With Black Lipstick~



Amy fell asleep on my shoulder. I guess I should've given her a heads up about my arrival. I felt a little guilty, I admit, but whatever. That'd go away soon too. The sun shone brighter and had woken her up. She rubbed her eyes and took another sip from her lemonade. "Are you okay?" I asked her. She nodded. She started walking towards the beach and I sat back and closed my eyes. Amy called out to me, it seemed she wanted me to see something. I took off my shoes and began walking barefoot towards her.

"Lookie! It's a crab!" she smiled. I rolled my eyes. "The word crab is a bit tossed around easily nowadays. It can be used to describe any hard shelled crustacean. But, this one's a small crab louse! It's an insect that resembles a crab, VERY closely!" she said. She seemed to know about it, but... I just didn't care. I nodded and smiled to make it look like I cared. I heard zooming coming from behind and I turned around to see three, maybe four, jetcycles zoom by. It was amazing. Those speeds were dangerous. They raced onto the water and the jetcycles hovered over the water.

"Amy..." I said. I watched as the jetcycles turned around and zoomed towards us. I took Amy's hand and began running. "RUN!" I yelled. I was pulling Amy along. I was afraid. I ran, but they got closer. Three of them swerved out of the way, but one of the drivers were heading straight for us. I pushed Amy aside to keep her safe from danger. I jumped up quickly to avoid the jetcycle. I landed on the hood and I crawled up and grabbed the handles. I couldn't take this jet though. Dr. Pliskin had modified my jetcycle from the steering wheel to handles. I tried the best I could, but I couldn't steer it. The driver of the jetcycle was struggling to get me off, but I overpowered him. I pulled his collar and pulled him off the jetcycle and watched the jet collide into the sand below.

Amy ran over to me, worried. The driver took of... Her helmet. Such the coincidence could only be found in fiction. It was Penelope. "Onii-chan, are you okay?" Amy asked. I nodded, but Penelope was angry.

"What the hell is wrong with you? The beach isn't open yet!" she yelled. I didn't mind that she was mad... I just... I was really happy she noticed me. But... How could you not notice the person you just drove your vehicle into? "You wrecked my jetcycle, Kanynt!" she yelled. She... She remembered my name... It felt... Funny. The feeling Amy described... It returned. I watched her run towards her jet cycle, but I just couldn't get her out of my head. I fell over in dizzyness and Amy came to my side.

"Onii-chan, are you okay?"

"I'm just great..." I said. I didn't know what it was, but my cheeks took control and... Just began to lift. Amy smiled and pulled out a camera. The bright flash didn't bother me.

"This is the first time I've seen you smile, Kanynt. It's nice," she said pulling me up and putting the camera back into her pocket. She dusted the sand off my back and I watched as the three remaining jetcycles park onto the beach. Their drivers got off and tended to the fourth jetcycle. Races... That could be fun. I left Amy behind and ran towards the group. Penelope held her helmet in one hand and looked over the checkboard another driver held. I was just going to cool off and apologize for my actions, but a familiar voice made me forget my motives.

"Minor damage to the paint really, honey. It's just sand. Luckily it landed upside down. If the jets were damaged, we'd be in trouble," a man said with a gruff voice. He took his helmet off and put on the sand. Doctor Pliskin. Without the mustache, the man looked sixteen year younger, or... Maybe it's because he IS sixteen years younger. None the less, I began to approach him when I nervously called out his name. He looked up at me and was confused. "Can I help you?"

"Dr. Pliskin! You're looking great,"

"Young man... I umm... I don't know what to say," he said.

"Can I show you something?" I asked. Before he could answer, I ran straight towards the crashed jetcycle with him following me. I flipped it to it's side and showed him the underside. I decided that if I could give him the changes earlier, he wouldn't be so slow with development in the future. I pointed out simple flaws that were fixed in my jetcycle. He showered me with comments, but I made sure that I didn't accept any of them. It was his genius that revealed them to me.

"Who do you think you are?" Penelope's voice asked from behind. I turned around and she pushed her helmet into my hands. "First you try to kill me, and now you think you're some kind of genius scientist? You are really something, Kanynt," she said. The sarcasm didn't matter. At least she said it. I tried to suppress a smile, but luckily she stomped off angrily when I did.

"Don't worry," Dr. Pliskin cut in. "Penny's a bit edgy. Tonight's her first race and she's getting pretty anxious,"

"...Doctor,"

"Yes?"

"You've said you hated the ocean,"

"Why would someone hate something so wonderful?" he smiled. He left me and began inspecting the jetcycle. Amy was tapping her foot impatiently behind me. She pointed out the blood dropping from my leg. I flip my hair around to gain a better view and she led me to the bench carefully. I sat down and she slowly knelt down and pulled some bandages out of her bag.

"Onii-chan, you really should be careful next time you decide to jump in front of moving vehicles," she said pulling one of my pant legs and wrapping my wound in the white cloth. I winced at the pain she induced with her fingers which were covered in salt water. She told me not to worry. "Saltwater is a natural disinfectant. At least I'm not using the alcohol," she said as she finished wrapping my leg. She inspected it a bit more. Blood was still coming out. "Here we go," she said as she pulled the ribbon out of her hair, letting it flow down her back and wrapping my bandages tightly with the ribbon. "Give it a day, you'll be fine," she smiled. She handed me my bottle of lemonade and I opened it and took a sip. I offered her some, but she denied. "Penelope!" she called out. I looked over and
watched as she came my way. "Just act natural, 'kay?"

"What is it Amy?" she asked as she folded her arms. The sun shone brightly on her black leather suit. She kept her hair in a bright pink ribbon which kinda looked good with the pink accessories on her suit. Shapes of broken hearts, lightning bolts, and sillhouettes of cupids all in bright pinks which contrasted her jet black suit. I looked up to her face to see a bright smile with black lipstick.

"Kanynt says he's sorry," Amy revealed. I really hoped she would begin to lighten up. I couldn't stand to see her angry.

"Is it true, Kanynt?" she smirked.

"I... Yeah," I said looking the other way. She sat down next to me and Amy sat on the opposite side of the bench. She leaned over just to get the best of my guilt. "How do you two know each other?"

"We have a big sibling program at school. The upperclassmen are assigned lowerclassmen they have to be nice to!" Amy smiled. "Penny's my Onee-Chan!"

"Is that so?" I asked rolling my eyes. Dr. Pliskin waved towards Penelope, with his shiny bald head glowing in the sunlight. Penelope laughed. It sounded beautiful. "I guess you have to go now," I said as I flipped my hair unintentionally. I swear.

"Hmph. I guess this was fun. I'll see you around... Kanynt," she said as she leaned in and... Pressed... Her... Her....

"Ooh," Amy teased. She took another picture. "Now you're cheeks are pink AND black, her two favorite colors," she said nudging me in the arm. I... I just had to smile I guess... I hugged Amy. Just for a little bit though. Just to show my appreciation.

-End Chapter-
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Old 07/21/06, 06:07 AM   #42
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=O

That was Kat-tastic!

Updart again! D=
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Old 07/21/06, 06:08 AM   #43
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._.

Fic-style drumming.

Now.
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Old 07/21/06, 06:09 AM   #44
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She ... she ...

...

I ... I hafta go. >.>;
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Old 07/21/06, 06:49 AM   #45
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=D

It'll get deeper. And deeper.
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