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Old 09/26/06, 05:45 PM   #166
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;~;

Zomg, that made me sad inside. I dunno if it's because Kanny no longer hates Yuna's guts or because it was so ky00te. ;~;~;~;~;

Twas prettah, Gerd. ;~; Just like that sig Amme made. ;~;

Amme's shot > Yuna's shot.
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Old 09/27/06, 12:51 AM   #167
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Aww, Kanynt's not so emo anymore. x3 That was nice, Gerd. Hearts. <3


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I've heard rumors that Amme had a better eye, but I've never seen or heard anything about it.

You can always ask the target I blew a hole in. ;D
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Old 09/27/06, 01:56 AM   #168
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Thanks. XD

So... Yeah. I'll be updartin soon.
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Old 09/27/06, 02:18 AM   #169
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Kanynt and Yuna are no longer fueding to the death?! :OOOO

Good. So is this gonna be the happy end to this tragic story? Or is Kanynt gonna mess it up? ._.
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Old 09/27/06, 02:23 AM   #170
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Kanynt and Yuna are no longer fueding to the death?! :OOOO

Good. So is this gonna be the happy end to this tragic story? Or is Kanynt gonna mess it up? ._.
You can always ask him...

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Old 09/27/06, 03:29 AM   #171
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xD

Yo, Kanynt, you gonna mess everything up wik yer mom?

Not a topic that usually comes up.

that chapter, while not Kat-tastic, was... alright. but I just am not into mushiness.

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Old 09/29/06, 05:28 AM   #172
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Lol, well, Kanynt will probably hate her again considering the first chapter after a certain someone's death, where he seemed rather... Unfond (Spelling?) of his parents... Less, of course, that was from the depression of what will happen... Less, someone else died... I doubt that though.

I think Kanynt may still be upset for awhile and may not like his mom again...

...

Scuse my rambling!><

Anyway, nice update! =^_^=

Lol, tonberrys are a flipping PAIN, I remember fighting them in the cloister place in the under ground floors of New Yevon in X-2... I still gotta defeat him.... ><

Anyway, the encounter with the tonberry was quite amusing. xD

I found it rather humerous.... o.o
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Old 10/05/06, 01:24 AM   #173
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Chapter Twenty Two

-The Ocean Breathes Salty-

Sunday came, and I got a message from Penelope on the commsphere. She had invited me to the school festival. I was already planning to go, because Amy was the one who told me to open my calendar. I was kinda glad that Penelope wanted to go with me. I threw on a black shirt, a white slim hoodie, and some old jeans and got ready to leave. Mom and Asuka were out again for another sphere hunt, so I locked the door behind me.
I ran down to my jetcycle, and sat on it. It felt weird today. The sun was shining and it was a beautiful day. I could miss some things. Walking wouldn't take so long anyway. I made it to her place in about twenty minutes. She didn't dress up all toomuch either. Just a black and white striped shirt with a slim green hoodie on with a pair of jeans and sneakers. As she closed the door, she took my hand and we kissed. It wasn't very long, but I enjoyed it. She pulled her hood over her head and we began walking towards the school. Another forty minutes passed by as Penelope and I discovered things about each other. It got a little warm so I pulled my sleeves up to my elbows as we stepped past the school ground gates.

There was a big lot behind the school that served as a small hangout for the students during lunch. For the festival, several booths were scattered about, each containing a unique showcase of items, games, or foods. Penelope suggested we visit the Saltwater booth, where Dad, Silver, Piku, and Hollow were sitting signing half-assed CD covers for their live CD recorded the night of our performance made with crayons and markers. Dad said because each were hand drawn, they were unique and special in it's own way. Dad drew happy faces, Silver drew abstract doodles, Piku drew the RENT logo, and Hollow drew what he called, "complex art." It was fun to watch. Amy was also there for people who wanted to sign her cast. Good thing I made my signature pretty big. I could see it, even amidst the poorly signed names. "Dad, dad!" Sanae said panting as she sprinted towards the table. He peeked his head out of the booth to see Sanae push several students waiting in line out of the way.

"What's wrong?" he asked.

"Must... Play... Found... DDR booth," she panted. Dad dropped the CD he was signing right then and there. His eyes widened and he jumped over the table. He grabbed Sanae and carried her under his arm as he ran while Sanae dictated the directions.

"Idiots," Piku said folding her arms.

"Seriously," Hollow said shaking his head.

"...I think it's cool," Silver said shrugging.

"Idiot," Piku said super folding her arms.

"Seriously," Hollow said super shaking his head.

"Whatever," Silver said super shrugging as he signed the CD of a certain drooling-silver-haired-bishie lover. I signed a couple myself, but I left early. Penelope and I had some 'splorin to do. There were a few rides set up, and I made it a point to ride the ride the ferris wheel with her. We walked by the DDR booth and watched Dad do the
"In-Your-Face" dance, celebrating yet another victory over his sixteen year old daughter.

"Shaddup. We have on more song," she said as she leaned on the machine and began to press the arrows switching from song to song.

"You really want to watch this?" Penelope asked.

"I watch what happens everytime I go to their place. Sanae's probably going to pick that one song that Dad can't do because she has just a teeny bit more stamina than he does, and when he stops, he loses and she'll win. Predictable. Too bad Dad didn't catch on, huh?" I joked. She laughed and I felt my heart bounce. We left the two at the booth and stood in line at the ferris wheel. The man operating the machine opened the small cart and let the two of us on. We slowly circled up and down and paused slightly. It wasn't the top, but hey, we were close. "...Are you having fun?"

"Definitely, Kanynt," she smiled looking at me. Nervously, I leaned over to her and quickly gave her another kiss on the lips. It tasted sour, like lemons... Or was it sweet? Like a marshmallow? However it was, I ended up blushing. I felt my cheeks burst with warmth as she leaned on my shoulders and stared out at the beach. The gentle rocking of the cart was comforting, but the serene moment has dissolved once the creaking of the machine began and we had made our descent back into reality. During our flight down from our miniature heaven, I took one last look at a birds view of Hollow and Silver signing CD's, Ketso at the pastry booth, ordering the older volunteers around, Megan, fawning over Silver. Kat was displaying her wares of gummi ship parts and minature motor devices, Piku was waiting in line for pickle chips, and Sanae and Dad were still trying to top each other's score. Amy sat on a bench talking with Auntie Rikku and Shinobu was sitting with a group of friends, taking small bites at her cotton candy. We stepped off the cart and she hooked her elbow with mine. We found a small bench to take a small break on. "I'll go get us some kettle corn," she smiled.

"No, it's okay. I'll get it," I said. I went over towards the snacks booth and waited until the volunteer took my order. "A bag of kettle corn and a bottle of green apple soda, please," I said handing her the tickets. She opened the glass bottle and put a straw in. "Two please," I said holding up two fingers. She gladly obliged and added a second straw in the bottle. I returned to Penelope and sat down next to her as she leaned and sipped from her straw. We were silent as we sipped and chewed on the popcorn and soda. The world around us just seemed to fly by as we slowly savored the small moment with each other. It was bliss.

At night, we walked back to her place and she kissed me right before she closed the door. Walking back, I made pretty fast time, seeing as to how dark it was. Mom would've gotten worried if I got back past ten. I opened the door to see Asuka cleaning the dishes and Mom on the couch examining newly found spheres. We talked about my day and then their day and what they did while they were out and I was about to fall asleep from it all. It wasn't very interesting. Well, it wasn't interesting at all, but I just nodded and smiled until I excused myself to my room. Sleep came and swept me into my dream world. Unfortunately, I woke up after it ended, so I don't remember squat.

-End Chapter-

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Old 10/05/06, 01:43 AM   #174
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o.o

I got mah CD case signed. x3

That was so flufflah. Fluff is like cake to a fat child. Well, not to people like Pickle and Kat. x3

That was ky00te. x3333
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Old 10/07/06, 02:26 AM   #175
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^Lawlawl.

._. Pen wears the pants.

1. Invited Kanynt.

2. Kissed Kanynt.

3. Kissed Kanynt.

Kanynt: -feels pretty-
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Old 10/07/06, 03:01 AM   #176
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=O

*Gives Him and Her matching jeans to Kanynt and Pen*

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That chapter was Kat-tastic! =D
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Old 10/07/06, 07:34 PM   #177
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Lol, Gerard and Sanae are lucky! ><

They actually have someone to play against... Lol.

Anyway, very nice update as usual! I'm glad Kanynt's work after all this time payed off!

... Though, I wonder how her life will end...? *Ponders*

Sorry, can't help but wonder about things that! ><
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