a Kingdom's Fall: Reign of Chaos

Dusk_Before_Dawn · 05/26/06, 12:53 AM

-first off, this is not a KH fanfic.
- story created by me and TavishMithos, thanks for the help man!
-hope ya like it

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Prologue:

It's been ten years...
Ten years since Ashen has become the world superpower. Dwarfing the other nations, in technology and power....

Before, there were wars between the five nations, Ashen, Cyole, Viskus, The Akaizen Republic, and Levencia. With their own brand of warfare, propaganda, and terrorism, each nation held it's own. No one gaining advantage over another. The day came however, when Ashen threatened to launch bombardments of nuclear warheads at each nation's capitol. Fearing a nuclear war, each nation surrendered, and was ordered to decommission their armies.

The wars have finally ended...

Ashen, a kingdom once filled with uncertainty and doubt, has now become a utopia. Thanks to psionic artifacts, objects that harness one's power, and Ashen technology, The nation became as beautiful, as it was high-tech. Through Ashen in fact, psionic powers were discovered, harnessed, and mastered. Over time, Ashen decommissioned their own army, favoring special forces and democracy to stop uprisings in the nations. Seeing as they had no armies, the nations put up little resistance.

Psionic powers, powers that harness the will and mind of one's body and project it in a spiritual or physical form, brought many new ideas to Ashen. Just discovered five years ago by a scientist name Alan Riezen, was a huge discovery, a discovery that would cement Ashen into history. Everyone had psionic powers, he surmised, knowing technology was not yet advanced enough to tap into their power. Working with Ashen's government, they were able to construct a "Living" chip. It was designed to control emotion and thought, focusing them into different forms of psionic power. These chips were placed into many different objects, soon to be known as psionic artifacts. These "artifacts" became house-hold items, simplifying the lives of many.

Although everyone had psionic powers, not all could bring out their true potential. Most can only levitate a glass of water, or create a small eclipse to escape the sun. For those who are gifted, they are given the name "Psion", and sent to universities abroad to master their skills. Hoping one day, they will come back and bring new ideas to the world. In an effort to unify the nations, Ashen passed their technology to the other nations. It seemed everyone was content, acknowledging the age of peace that was upon them.

Even though they were in an age of peace, trouble stirred in every nation. Ashen's special forces capture most of the criminals, but there are those who can elude God himself. They have mastered their skills, some through stealth, others through homicide. Never caught, they have lost all morality, acting only on their will to survive. It was destiny that they would meet.

Even though the nations secretly hated Ashen, they could never stand up to it's power. Around this time, a group known simply as "God's eyes" arouse, and committed unspeakable crimes.

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Far from all the turmoil, a blonde haired man, he could have been mistaken for a model, awaited a phone call to change history...

"Hello..."
"I understand.."
"We can use any means neccasary...?" a smile crossed his face.
"We'll bring Ashen to its knees, don't worry..."

With that, the man hung up the phone, zipped his suit, and walked towards the door. As he opened it, an unnatural darkness came over the room. His eyes flashing a faint green, he walked out with his coat flowing behind him.

The Age of Peace is over, the Reign of Chaos is about to begin...
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hope i can get some comments on this, its my first fanfic

**Shadalicious Reminisce** · 05/26/06, 01:07 AM

Thanks for acknowledging my help man. This is gonna rock!! And yes everyone the Reign of Chaos is about to begin........

**Dawning Twilight** · 05/26/06, 01:53 AM

*sneezes reappearing* hmm it's good for a prologue. minor editing and a little unclear of som small things here and there but overall very nice. i'd give it a 9.5/10 max *sneezes dissapearing again*

Dusk_Before_Dawn · 05/26/06, 03:06 AM

thanks you guys, il have the next chapter up as soon as 1 more person posts.
people read but dont post. so i thought id add a poll

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05/26/06, 12:53 AM	#1
Dusk_Before_Dawn Keyblade Novice Join Date: May 2006 Location: sleeps in the day, plays at night Age: 18 Posts: 70 Rep Power: 0	a Kingdom's Fall: Reign of Chaos -first off, this is not a KH fanfic. - story created by me and TavishMithos, thanks for the help man! -hope ya like it ------------------------------------ Prologue: It's been ten years... Ten years since Ashen has become the world superpower. Dwarfing the other nations, in technology and power.... Before, there were wars between the five nations, Ashen, Cyole, Viskus, The Akaizen Republic, and Levencia. With their own brand of warfare, propaganda, and terrorism, each nation held it's own. No one gaining advantage over another. The day came however, when Ashen threatened to launch bombardments of nuclear warheads at each nation's capitol. Fearing a nuclear war, each nation surrendered, and was ordered to decommission their armies. The wars have finally ended... Ashen, a kingdom once filled with uncertainty and doubt, has now become a utopia. Thanks to psionic artifacts, objects that harness one's power, and Ashen technology, The nation became as beautiful, as it was high-tech. Through Ashen in fact, psionic powers were discovered, harnessed, and mastered. Over time, Ashen decommissioned their own army, favoring special forces and democracy to stop uprisings in the nations. Seeing as they had no armies, the nations put up little resistance. Psionic powers, powers that harness the will and mind of one's body and project it in a spiritual or physical form, brought many new ideas to Ashen. Just discovered five years ago by a scientist name Alan Riezen, was a huge discovery, a discovery that would cement Ashen into history. Everyone had psionic powers, he surmised, knowing technology was not yet advanced enough to tap into their power. Working with Ashen's government, they were able to construct a "Living" chip. It was designed to control emotion and thought, focusing them into different forms of psionic power. These chips were placed into many different objects, soon to be known as psionic artifacts. These "artifacts" became house-hold items, simplifying the lives of many. Although everyone had psionic powers, not all could bring out their true potential. Most can only levitate a glass of water, or create a small eclipse to escape the sun. For those who are gifted, they are given the name "Psion", and sent to universities abroad to master their skills. Hoping one day, they will come back and bring new ideas to the world. In an effort to unify the nations, Ashen passed their technology to the other nations. It seemed everyone was content, acknowledging the age of peace that was upon them. Even though they were in an age of peace, trouble stirred in every nation. Ashen's special forces capture most of the criminals, but there are those who can elude God himself. They have mastered their skills, some through stealth, others through homicide. Never caught, they have lost all morality, acting only on their will to survive. It was destiny that they would meet. Even though the nations secretly hated Ashen, they could never stand up to it's power. Around this time, a group known simply as "God's eyes" arouse, and committed unspeakable crimes. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Far from all the turmoil, a blonde haired man, he could have been mistaken for a model, awaited a phone call to change history... "Hello..." "I understand.." "We can use any means neccasary...?" a smile crossed his face. "We'll bring Ashen to its knees, don't worry..." With that, the man hung up the phone, zipped his suit, and walked towards the door. As he opened it, an unnatural darkness came over the room. His eyes flashing a faint green, he walked out with his coat flowing behind him. The Age of Peace is over, the Reign of Chaos is about to begin... -------------- hope i can get some comments on this, its my first fanfic Last edited by Dusk_Before_Dawn; 05/26/06 at 01:02 AM.

05/26/06, 01:07 AM	#2
Shadalicious Reminisce Eratzvaju Orsa Join Date: May 2006 Location: A swiftly tilting planet beyond a wind in the door, that came from a wrinkle in time.... Posts: 5,564 Rep Power: 16	Re: a Kingdom's Fall: Reign of Chaos Thanks for acknowledging my help man. This is gonna rock!! And yes everyone the Reign of Chaos is about to begin........

05/26/06, 01:53 AM	#3
Dawning Twilight The Egotistical Bastard Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Making Out With DT Cause He's So Damn Sexy =D Age: 20 Posts: 6,196 Rep Power: 14	Re: a Kingdom's Fall: Reign of Chaos sneezes reappearing hmm it's good for a prologue. minor editing and a little unclear of som small things here and there but overall very nice. i'd give it a 9.5/10 max sneezes dissapearing again

05/26/06, 03:06 AM	#4
Dusk_Before_Dawn Keyblade Novice Join Date: May 2006 Location: sleeps in the day, plays at night Age: 18 Posts: 70 Rep Power: 0	Re: a Kingdom's Fall: Reign of Chaos thanks you guys, il have the next chapter up as soon as 1 more person posts. people read but dont post. so i thought id add a poll Last edited by Dusk_Before_Dawn; 05/26/06 at 08:02 PM.

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