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Old May 18th, 2006, 07:37 AM   #1
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This is a KH poem about what Sora or Kairi would say to each other. Enjoy!

In coldest winter,
In warmest summer,
In brightest day,
In blackest night,
I am with you,
And you are with me,
And together we
Can be forever free.

In saddest sorrow,
In happiest joy,
In wettest rain,
In driest drought,
I complete you,
And you complete me,
And combined we
Can achieve anything.

In calmest ease,
In most terrifying fear,
In most rebuilding love
In most destructive hate
I support you,
And you support me,
And united we
Can overcome calamity.

In coldest winter,
In warmest summer,
In brightest day,
In darkest night,
I am with you,
And you are with me,
And together we
Can be forever free.
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Old May 18th, 2006, 01:42 PM   #2
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nice poem...i enjoyed it...soo sweet... :)
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Old May 18th, 2006, 03:34 PM   #3
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nice poem, u should try to make one with everything rhyming in it that would hold attention better

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Old May 18th, 2006, 10:00 PM   #4
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sweet :) it's cute, i can imagine sora and kairi saying that to eachother!
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Old May 19th, 2006, 07:27 AM   #5
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Quote:
This is a KH poem about what Sora or Kairi would say to each other...
You are messing with me, right? I mean, the guy has killed hundreds of ultimate evil dark freaks, and he still can't even gasp out a strangled: "Hey...er...Kairi...I...I like...you..."
In what twisted reality would they end up saying this to each other?

Second, while I don't pretend to be an expert on peotry, I don't think this is your work.

Anyway, if you DID write it, good job, it's excellent.
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Old May 19th, 2006, 08:18 AM   #6
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It IS my poem, it IS copyright.

'Nuff said.
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Old May 19th, 2006, 10:40 PM   #7
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zetsumi, maybe it's what sora wants to say to kairi but can't quite get the words out? :)
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Old May 19th, 2006, 11:08 PM   #8
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Thanks snowdog! The next KH poem's done, here it is!

I'm walking this road,
Walking without you.
I'm finding my way,
But not finding you.

I'm fighting for my destiny,
Fighting for you.
But does every step really
Bring me closer to you?

I'm thinking right now,
Thinking of you.
And knowing that I
May never again see you.

So this is my wish,
That you always remember me.
And always love me,
Just as I remember and love you.
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Old May 20th, 2006, 04:09 AM   #9
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try mayb smthng like
kairi: sora, another year waiting, another year worries
finally we can lay under the stars and tell each other our stories
Ill tell u how i waited, without any lies
Sora, i love when u look at me with your big blue eyes"

smthng like dat
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Old May 20th, 2006, 04:14 AM   #10
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its really deep.....have u considerd writind songs, cus that would make a great song!
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Old May 20th, 2006, 04:16 AM   #11
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That's very nice<3 It was very deep yes, but it would have been better if they were questions to each other, answering questions with questions.
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Old May 20th, 2006, 08:51 PM   #12
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:) i love it!
usually i hate poetry but this is nice!
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Old May 22nd, 2006, 11:20 AM   #13
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Bumpity-bumpity-bumpity bump!

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:) i love it!
usually i hate poetry but this is nice!
Thanks for that, snowdog! I knew I could count on you! :)
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Old May 22nd, 2006, 02:24 PM   #14
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Nice poem <3


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Old May 22nd, 2006, 10:26 PM   #15
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your peoms r really nice, they got mystery sense to them, keep writing

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