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May 18th, 2006, 07:37 AM
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#1 | | Dual Wielder
L337 kybldmstr is offline
Registered: Mar 2006 Location: The World That Never Was Age: 17 Posts: 624 | My KH poem. This is a KH poem about what Sora or Kairi would say to each other. Enjoy!
In coldest winter,
In warmest summer,
In brightest day,
In blackest night,
I am with you,
And you are with me,
And together we
Can be forever free.
In saddest sorrow,
In happiest joy,
In wettest rain,
In driest drought,
I complete you,
And you complete me,
And combined we
Can achieve anything.
In calmest ease,
In most terrifying fear,
In most rebuilding love
In most destructive hate
I support you,
And you support me,
And united we
Can overcome calamity.
In coldest winter,
In warmest summer,
In brightest day,
In darkest night,
I am with you,
And you are with me,
And together we
Can be forever free. | |
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May 18th, 2006, 01:42 PM
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#2 | | Sidekick
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Registered: Jan 2006 Location: with RIKU!!! Posts: 375 | Re: My KH poem. nice poem...i enjoyed it...soo sweet... :)
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May 18th, 2006, 03:34 PM
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#3 | | Dual Wielder
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Registered: Apr 2006 Location: Palm Coast, Florida Age: 21 Posts: 604 | Re: My KH poem. nice poem, u should try to make one with everything rhyming in it that would hold attention better
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May 18th, 2006, 10:00 PM
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#4 | | is a girl
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Registered: Mar 2006 Location: n. 1. a place of settlement, activity, or residence; 2. a place or situation occupied Age: 20 Posts: 5,441 | Re: My KH poem. sweet :) it's cute, i can imagine sora and kairi saying that to eachother!
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May 19th, 2006, 07:27 AM
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#5 | | Is that your answer?
Endgame is offline
Registered: Apr 2005 Age: 21 Posts: 3,731
Currently playing: Sins of a Solar Empire, Alone in the Dark, Left4Dead2, Fallout 3 GOTY | Re: My KH poem. Quote: |
This is a KH poem about what Sora or Kairi would say to each other...
| You are messing with me, right? I mean, the guy has killed hundreds of ultimate evil dark freaks, and he still can't even gasp out a strangled: "Hey...er...Kairi...I...I like...you..."
In what twisted reality would they end up saying this to each other?
Second, while I don't pretend to be an expert on peotry, I don't think this is your work.
Anyway, if you DID write it, good job, it's excellent.
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May 19th, 2006, 08:18 AM
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#6 | | Dual Wielder
L337 kybldmstr is offline
Registered: Mar 2006 Location: The World That Never Was Age: 17 Posts: 624 | Re: My KH poem. It IS my poem, it IS copyright.
'Nuff said. | |
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May 19th, 2006, 10:40 PM
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#7 | | is a girl
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Registered: Mar 2006 Location: n. 1. a place of settlement, activity, or residence; 2. a place or situation occupied Age: 20 Posts: 5,441 | Re: My KH poem. zetsumi, maybe it's what sora wants to say to kairi but can't quite get the words out? :)
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May 19th, 2006, 11:08 PM
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#8 | | Dual Wielder
L337 kybldmstr is offline
Registered: Mar 2006 Location: The World That Never Was Age: 17 Posts: 624 | Re: My KH poem. Thanks snowdog! The next KH poem's done, here it is!
I'm walking this road,
Walking without you.
I'm finding my way,
But not finding you.
I'm fighting for my destiny,
Fighting for you.
But does every step really
Bring me closer to you?
I'm thinking right now,
Thinking of you.
And knowing that I
May never again see you.
So this is my wish,
That you always remember me.
And always love me,
Just as I remember and love you.
Last edited by L337 kybldmstr; July 21st, 2006 at 04:40 AM.
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May 20th, 2006, 04:09 AM
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#9 | | Dual Wielder
getblazedordie is offline
Registered: Apr 2006 Location: Palm Coast, Florida Age: 21 Posts: 604 | Re: My KH poem. try mayb smthng like
kairi: sora, another year waiting, another year worries
finally we can lay under the stars and tell each other our stories
Ill tell u how i waited, without any lies
Sora, i love when u look at me with your big blue eyes"
smthng like dat | |
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May 20th, 2006, 04:14 AM
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Registered: Apr 2006 Location: in your dryer, why do u think so many of your socks are missing? Posts: 117 | Re: My KH poem. its really deep.....have u considerd writind songs, cus that would make a great song! | |
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May 20th, 2006, 04:16 AM
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#11 | | oh u prankstahs ★
Aly-chan is offline
Registered: Dec 2005 Location: Burnin' down the highway skyline Age: 16 Posts: 1,320 | Re: My KH poem. That's very nice<3 It was very deep yes, but it would have been better if they were questions to each other, answering questions with questions.
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May 20th, 2006, 08:51 PM
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#12 | | is a girl
snowdog is offline
Registered: Mar 2006 Location: n. 1. a place of settlement, activity, or residence; 2. a place or situation occupied Age: 20 Posts: 5,441 | Re: My KH poem. :) i love it!
usually i hate poetry but this is nice!
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May 22nd, 2006, 11:20 AM
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#13 | | Dual Wielder
L337 kybldmstr is offline
Registered: Mar 2006 Location: The World That Never Was Age: 17 Posts: 624 | Re: My KH poem. Bumpity-bumpity-bumpity bump! Quote: |
Originally Posted by snowdog :) i love it!
usually i hate poetry but this is nice! | Thanks for that, snowdog! I knew I could count on you! :) | |
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May 22nd, 2006, 02:24 PM
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#14 | | Sidekick
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Registered: Sep 2005 Location: In a pineapple under the sea..? o.0 Age: 17 Posts: 374 | Re: My KH poem. Nice poem <3
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May 22nd, 2006, 10:26 PM
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#15 | | Dual Wielder
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Registered: Apr 2006 Location: Palm Coast, Florida Age: 21 Posts: 604 | Re: My KH poem. your peoms r really nice, they got mystery sense to them, keep writing
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