Poem

Aidid · May 3rd, 2006, 08:50 AM

You are the key to my heart,
You are my light,
I won't lose sight of you,
Our destinies intertwined,
One day our paths will cross,
You are my guiding light,
I am lost in the darkness,
Without you my heart will yield to the darkness,
Without you I am Nobody,
Without you I am Heartless,
Sometimes I feel you are with me,
Sometimes I feel you are not,
You are light,
I am darkness,
We walk the twilight in between.

Well, how was that? i want your honest opinion

L337 kybldmstr · May 3rd, 2006, 02:20 PM

Wowee.

KHeart_beat_* · May 3rd, 2006, 05:12 PM

That was really good!!!!^_^

Aidid · May 5th, 2006, 09:10 AM

Glad you liked it.
i made it while daydreaming about a special someone hehe

heres the rest of it:

As we walk along this road,
Looking up to the sky lit with stars,
You and I grow closer,
Even in the depths of darkness,
Your heart and spirit shine,
The darkest of shadows cannot stop me,
From proving my affection for you,
I want to take this journey with you,
I want to be with you,
For you are my light.

Ok done I hope I find my light someday.

LadyKairi_19 · May 5th, 2006, 09:55 AM

wow..... very beautiful .... I like it....

L337 kybldmstr · May 5th, 2006, 10:39 AM

That's the most beautiful poem ever . . . I have to read it my would-be girlfriend next Valentine's Day . . . reading the French translation would be cooler . . . :D

May 3rd, 2006, 08:50 AM	#1
Aidid Heartless Join Date: May 2006 Age: 17 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 4 Level: EXP:	Poem You are the key to my heart, You are my light, I won't lose sight of you, Our destinies intertwined, One day our paths will cross, You are my guiding light, I am lost in the darkness, Without you my heart will yield to the darkness, Without you I am Nobody, Without you I am Heartless, Sometimes I feel you are with me, Sometimes I feel you are not, You are light, I am darkness, We walk the twilight in between. Well, how was that? i want your honest opinion

May 3rd, 2006, 02:20 PM	#2
L337 kybldmstr Ruler of Light Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: The World That Never Was Age: 17 Posts: 632 Rep Power: 4 Level: EXP:	Re: Poem Wowee.

May 3rd, 2006, 05:12 PM	#3
KHeart_beat_* Keyblade Novice Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Huntingdon valley, PA Posts: 69 Rep Power: 4 Level: EXP:	Re: Poem That was really good!!!!^_^

May 5th, 2006, 09:10 AM	#4
Aidid Heartless Join Date: May 2006 Age: 17 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 4 Level: EXP:	Re: Poem Glad you liked it. i made it while daydreaming about a special someone hehe heres the rest of it: As we walk along this road, Looking up to the sky lit with stars, You and I grow closer, Even in the depths of darkness, Your heart and spirit shine, The darkest of shadows cannot stop me, From proving my affection for you, I want to take this journey with you, I want to be with you, For you are my light. Ok done I hope I find my light someday.

May 5th, 2006, 09:55 AM	#5
LadyKairi_19 Ruler of Light Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: In the islands... Age: 19 Posts: 570 Rep Power: 6 Level: EXP:	Re: Poem wow..... very beautiful .... I like it....

May 5th, 2006, 10:39 AM	#6
L337 kybldmstr Ruler of Light Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: The World That Never Was Age: 17 Posts: 632 Rep Power: 4 Level: EXP:	Re: Poem That's the most beautiful poem ever . . . I have to read it my would-be girlfriend next Valentine's Day . . . reading the French translation would be cooler . . . :D

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