the organization wars - Page 2

TSora · April 18th, 2006, 06:50 PM

Cool...^^...This is getting quite interesting...:D...

zexion_org_xii · April 18th, 2006, 06:59 PM

thanks for the posts guys....ill give the next chapter soon....im still thinking on who should the remaining members be?? if you want to have roxas and axel fight a fav member just let me know

zexion_org_xii · April 18th, 2006, 11:24 PM

alright just fiished the next chapter....

Chapter four…
They continued down the street till they reached a familiar old mansion. “I guess we can rest there for a bit.”
Said Axel practically carrying Roxas on his shoulder. After opening the gates and stepping inside the house to see that it was abandon for some time he brought Roxas to a corner to let him rest.
Axel observed the wound for some time before saying. “It’ll be alright Roxas….” Looking around the place to see that it had a second floor with two doors leading somewhere on both sides, Axel looked back down to Roxas.
“I’ll go look around a bit.” Roxas nodded up at Axel who after walked up to the second floor and opened the door that was to the left.
This room was small with two windows and drapes. In the middle was a dinner table. And scattered across the room were drawings of people he didn’t not know, he walked around going from picture to picture
to stop in front of one that resembled himself, and Roxas. “Wha..What is this?” he asked looking deeper at the drawing. “Its when you and Roxas first met.” Axel leapt around facing where the angels voice was coming from to see a young girl with blonde hair and a white gown dress sitting in the chair. He had no idea on how she got there in the first place, but he didn’t see her as
a threat. “Who are you?” he asked the young girl.
“My name…Namine.” She said waiting for his ext question and when it came she would answer it. “Who do you know me and Roxas? And what are you?
Do you work with the organization?” he finally finished with his questions. She paused for a bit and hen began. “I am a nobody like you and Roxas but not part of the organization. See I’m a witch that they control.
I am able to see into others hearts Axel and they’ve used me to find Roxas and you.” Axel became mad when he heard what she had said.
He didn’t need to ask her any more questions to understand what was going on that particular moment. He ran for the door and swung it open to see that Roxas was being attack by four Dusks. He turned back to Namine.
“You better pray that he’s alright..” and then shutting the door behind him. Racing towards Roxas’s attackers he leaped from the second floor to the first slashing down two dusk’s as they vanished to thin air.
After finishing off the remaining three he ran towards Roxas. “You all right man?” he asked checking to see if there were any marks or cuts on him. “I’m alright Axel. You’d think this was my first time in combat or something.”
Roxas replied before standing up straight. “So Axel what did you do this time?” he said pointing behind him. “What do you mean?” Asked Axel before turning around to see another member wearing the same cloaks as theirs surrounded by dusks. “Axel…Roxas…so you’ve both are traitors to the organization and when I destroy you surely my rank should go up. But that is not why I am here…I’m here for a little Stoll away.” He said pointing to the room Namine was in.
before Roxas could say anything Axel pushed forward with his chakram’s in his hand. “There’s no way your getting your hand’s on her.
We still need to as her a few questions.” He said then launching himself towards the group of dusk’s and the member they were protecting.
Wiping a four out with a few swift thrusts of his chakram’s before shouting. “Roxas…get the girl to safety…don’t worry I will find you.” He was then swallowed into the sea of dusk’s as they surrounded him.

zexion_org_xii · April 19th, 2006, 12:44 AM

hey it would be great to hear some replies....i want to continue on with this story...but if no one is reading it...

bond of flames · April 19th, 2006, 01:26 AM

hey, nice fan fic.its preatty kool

zexion_org_xii · April 19th, 2006, 01:40 AM

thanks alot....ill see if i can get thenext chapter by the end of tonight or something

zexion_org_xii · April 19th, 2006, 05:27 AM

heres the next chapter...i went through this one real quick...so it may not be as well as the others but here it is....
Chapter five…
Roxas knew what he had to do as he ran up the steps eliminating dusk after dusk before reaching the top and to the door on his left opening it and closing it behind him
to see that Namine was still sitting in the chair. “Come on. We have to hurry.” He said before grabbing her and lifting her up off the chair.
Looking for another way out he noticed the windows “That might work.” He said running towards the window with Namine attached to his hand. Glass shattered as he fell feet first outside. Landing in a somersault, he turned to see that Namine did the same. There was no time for him to check himself of any bruises as he grab her hand again and lead her into the woods.
There were gigantic trees covering the morning’s sunlight as they continued through the woods. “do..you..know where…you are heading?” asked Namine hanging on for the ride. They finally stop to take a breather.
Roxas panting his injury wasn’t doing him any good. “I think I lost—“ his sentence was never finished because he was knocked off of his feet and flying back and landing on the side of a tree then fell to the ground.
He lifts himself up and looked over to where Namine was but another cloak figure was blocking his view. The man had wild black hair that went down to his chest, and in his hand was a lance. “So…Xaldin…I see you’re here as well.”
Said Roxas standing up pain rushing through his entire body. “I see that you’ve been taking it a little rough Roxas. You need to stop pushing yourself.” Xaldin added raising his lance above him and then added.
“She is ours. As for you and Axel…we will deal with you when we return.” He said bringing down his lance down at Roxas’s face launching him back against the tree again but this time he fell unconscious.

zexion_org_xii · April 19th, 2006, 05:33 AM

I'm tryign to wite them a little longer. So bare with me people.

TSora · April 19th, 2006, 12:27 PM

Those new chapters are great...:D...I like the dramatic feel of them...Keep up the exelent work...^...:D...

Guardian_Shiro · April 19th, 2006, 05:52 PM

yea...keep up the good work...i enjoy reading what will happen to Roxas and Axel...i dont know where you are going with that Namine charactor but i hope it ends well...

TSora · April 19th, 2006, 07:13 PM

I'm really exited about this...:D...It seems that Axel and Roxas has a strong friendship...:D...

zexion_org_xii · April 20th, 2006, 02:27 AM

thats what i was trying to show....but we will see what happens in the future of this story..im going to have the next chapter up by tonight

chaos666 · April 20th, 2006, 02:57 AM

This is pretty good! I look forward to more chapters! XD

zexion_org_xii · April 20th, 2006, 03:16 AM

thats what i was trying to show....but we will see what happens in the future of this story..im going to have the next chapter up by tonight

zexion_org_xii · April 20th, 2006, 03:17 AM

heres the next instalment.....

Chapter six…
Roxas awoke from what seemed like a never-ending sleep to see that he was in a small room. The room had an untidy bed, which he was resting on. A small window was to his left as he looked outside to see that the sun was beating down on his face. Noisy busy streets had also been shown from outside the window.
How long have I been out? He thought before sitting up to see that he still had pain in his shoulder, and back. He stood up to see that he was still wearing his black cloak, as he reached for the door to his right it suddenly swung open knocking him back into the bed. Axel stood in the doorway before walking to Roxas’s side.
“Ah…I see your up.” He said while Roxas was moaning with more pain now. “Glad to see that you’re alright. You know it’s been two days since you’ve been sleeping…. I thought I was in for but as soon as you left… the dusk have disappeared. It’s a good thing I found you and dressed the wounds or you would have been a goner.” He finally finishes putting Roxas to speed. Roxas sat back up facing Axel before asking, “Where are we?” the sun still beating down his back.
“Twilight town…it seems that the organization stopped looking for us as soon as they captured Namine…but what’s been bothering me is that they used her to find us. I just don’t get this at all.” Roxas looked outside again to see three young children play in the street, and then he gave his attention back to Axel.
“So what do we do now?” Roxas said waiting for a reply.
“Well I was going to ask you that same thing. See I was just following you while you left the organization. Where were you heading? And why did you kill off Vexen, Zexion, Luxord, and Larxne?” Roxas looked down at his feet before looking back up at Axel.
“This…keyblade I must of known why I have it. So I went snooping around in castle oblivion to find out that they have been hiding my answers from me since the beginning. I told them that I would not be their tool so I turned to leave but they attacked me. After that I don’t remember much what happened. But I do remember that I had to head to this place called…destiny island.”
“Destiny Island?”