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| PSWii C: | Bread. Uses. Many. Penguins. |
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| Jabberwocky | What a long updart! o: AND THERE WAS VIOLENCE! AND HOTTNESS! AND MUNNY! <3333 Luff teh awesomeness. But I wanna hug Riku and make him feel better. ;~; Poor Ri-kun. ;~;~; KICK ASSHOLE'S ASS, KYLE. KICK IT FOR ME. PLEASE. <-- deep hate for Axel :D Hikaru! Don't feel sorry for that biatch! D:< She dudn't love j00! Find another crush! <.<; |
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| PSWii C: | Could you by any chance help me think up of a new title for this part of the story? Lost Memories is lame, and I reckon that's why hardly anybody's looking into this thread or the story in general. .__. And what's really heartbreaking? A thread labelled KingDumb Hearts has nearly triple the views of the KHLM thread. Last edited by Omni_VII; 06/10/06 at 11:37 AM. |
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| PSWii C: | Bump, because I feel like it. |
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| Jabberwocky | I'm not good with titles. I usually always manage to name my stories after songs. :D; TO RHAPSODY! -Batman Theme- + Bitemarks and Bloodstains + It Ends Tonight + Stars + November Rain{it would work if ... this story took place in November. :D} + Savin' Me + My "Happy" Ending + Before I Go I'm so helpful. ;3 [/sarcasm] |
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| Dual Wielder | I loves your updates....i wish there was more...oh soo more. hey...they should make all the fanfics into books and sell em...you would make mue macho money there. I could help you wit titles...but al of mi titles are kinda lame. |
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| PSWii C: | Any help is appreciated. ![]() I mean, can't be any lamer than what it is now, can it? xD Sadly, nobody can sell fan fics unless they get permission from all the big, mighty companies which'll probably never happen. |
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| Keyblade Novice Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: NeverLand! Age: 15
Posts: 60
Rep Power: 0 ![]() | YAY! That was so awesome! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Except I feel sorry for Riku ! |
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| PSWii C: | I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I apologise for the lack of updates. Life has been rather hectic for me recently, but school's over for 2 weeks, so I'll have a new updated within 2 days. ;) |
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| Ruler of Darkness Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Hollow Bastion Age: 16
Posts: 135
Rep Power: 5 ![]() | At least you got some more readers, Omni! Congrats! *sigh* a few years ago, "Lost Memories" attracted all the attention in the fanfiction section. |
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| PSWii C: | It did, didn't it? <__< Now there's stuff like Destiny Islands Reality Show that's dominating the forum. |
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| Jabberwocky | As long as j00 like your fic, then you should continue. :D; Right? o.o ... mmyes. >.>; Please updart soon. <3 |
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| PSWii C: | I like the juicy bits of my fic, but sadly I have to go through boring bits to get to the juicy bits. Chapter 14 -------------------S-O-R-A---------------- “What do you mean?” Sora asked. “You have lost your memories, found them and now, have lost them once more. It truly is sad,” the man replied. He wore a black coat with a hood which obscured his face. “You look like him,” the man added, facing Sora, although still keeping his features hidden. Memories flooded Sora’s mind. Flashbacks. Forgotten memories. A man. Hollow Bastion. Him. “I look like whom?” Sora asked, his voice nearly a whisper. He had heard that same words before. In a place—a place connected to Kairi. There was a man, just like the one in front of him. Those same monotonous words. “He looks like you.” “Do I know you?” Sora asked, bracing himself for an attack. “No, I know you, but you have never known me,” the man replied. That meant one thing. There was more than one of these enigmatic beings. “What do you want?” Sora asked. The man stood still, seeming not to notice Sora’s presence. “You.” At that instant, Sora jumped back. The hooded figure persisted to be idle. “You are needed—needed for the completion of our task. You were sent by Destiny to fulfil just that,” the man replied. “Come with me.” “NO! I’m not going! You’ve tortured me enough!” Sora shouted, backing away cautiously. “You understand so little…” the man chuckled. “We have not tortured you. You have been tormenting yourself.” “What’s that supposed to mean?” Sora retorted. “All hearts are created on the other side of the door. And the physical being alike. We are all creations of either Light or Darkness,” the man explained. “I-I don’t understand,” Sora replied. This man, speaking in undecipherable riddle, was maddening Sora. “Yet you have come so far, and still, you understand nothing?” the man said, using words which expressed frustration and anger, but not showing it in his voice. He seemed so calm. Deprived of a personality. Deprived of a soul. “What am I supposed to know?!” Sora screamed. Why didn’t he remember anything? What was this man talking about? “We told you the truth. The truth about your past. The unspeakable truths which only we know,” the man replied. What is this ‘truth’? Sora thought. So many memories have been forgotten. “You are beginning to remember. That is all and well.” “Leave now, while you still can,” Sora said, attempting to recreate how he would normally act when faced with an adversary. Sora could definitely recollect his past experiences; his adventures, but more importantly, his strength. In reality though, Sora wasn’t sure if he had what it took to fight again: it had been too long since his last real fight. The fight against Ansem in the Word of Chaos. “You are losing your mind,” the man added. Sora looked down at his feet, avoiding the man’s hypnotic gaze. It was funny; Sora wasn’t even able to see the person’s face, but he still couldn’t look him in eye. “You can’t leave, but I can. Unfortunately for us all, I will stay for the time being,” the man muttered, reaching into his sleeve. “The time is now. You are ours now.” He whipped a huge scythe out of his sleeve and began to race towards Sora. The scythe was not an ordinary one. It was curved, much like a banana, with two blades on each end. The hooded man had tried to take Sora while he was unwitting, but Sora was ready. He leaped into the air, dodging the man’s oncoming assault. “Missed,” Sora said sheepishly. And with that, Sora opened his palm and the Keyblade appeared magnificently in his hands. He lifted it up and sent it smashing down onto the man’s spine. “There is no point in doing that,” he muttered, grinning insanely. “Huh?” Sora was dumbfounded; a huge blow like that didn’t even faze him. The man lifted his scythe up and tore through Sora’s shirt sleeve. The scythe made contact with flesh, and as expected, tore the skin open. Sora fell to the ground, clutching his arm. “You can’t defeat me. You have lost sight your hope. The light. You are hopeless. All abilities lost. You don’t even know where you are or what is going on,” the man said. “I won’t die. I’ll return… to K-K-K…” Sora began stuttering, struggling to unscramble his memory. “Riku… I’ll find him… and King Mickey!” he shouted, throwing the Keyblade at the man. “It’s happening.” The man turned to leave. The Keyblade was about to make contact when the hooded person faded away. “Come back, you coward! Sora screamed. The man was gone. The Keyblade clattered on the coarse concrete as it collided with a wall of one of the nearby buildings and fell to the ground. Sora was alone. -------------------------H-I-K-A-R-U---------------------- I sat down in the doll bed, fluffing up what seemed to be a pillow. “Goodnight kid,” Woody said, leaving our room, if that’s what you could call it. We had fled from the Heartless and have set up camp in a bookshelf. Mitsuko and I were sleeping in under a pile of books shaped as a kind of shelter. We each had a bed to ourselves. I looked over at Mitsuko. “Oh, I was wondering: how long was I unconscious for?” I asked. “Not that long,” she replied. “Probably about an hour or so.” “Oh, Thanks. G’night,” I said. She looked back at me. “Goodnight Hikaru,” she replied, smiling. I smiled back. She tucked herself in and slowly drifted off to sleep. I watched her as her body slowly rose up and down with her breathing. How can she sleep so easily? I have nightmares. Nightmares that I can’t even remember. I can’t sleep. I realised that I had been nearly five days since Twilight Town was destroyed. Five days since my father died. Five days since I’ve seen Katsu. Where could he be? Is he still alive? I don’t know how, but I could feel his presence nearby. Mitsuko loved him. I knew it, and have known it ever since she came to Twilight Town. She’d had a crush on him from the first glance. It was amazing how cruel life could be. I had tried so hard, only to be crushed. Was it that she only wanted me around to help her find Katsu? No. Don’t think like that. She’s one of your best friends! Why would she do something like that to you? Then it struck me. Something that my father told me. “Hey, love makes you do some crazy things.” I don’t know why he told me, or when, but there was a meaning to it. A secret meaning. Could it be? Mitsuko is a teenager, just like me. That’s when love and lust take over. Could she be using me? I pushed the thought away. Why would she? I sat in my bed and watched her peacefully resting. How very beautiful she was. With her streaming blonde hair, her diamond blue eyes. Stupid hormones. I’m going crazy! It feels weird looking at her, yet, amazingly good. I wasn’t sure what was happening to me, but I was sure that she felt the same way with Katsu. Stupid Katsu. Why? What was so good about him anyway? Pssh. I lifted my blanket over my body and wrapped myself up. I thought of the good times in Twilight Town. The old memories. I saw myself, Kyle, Mitsuko and Katsu running through the streets, looking at all the shops. We would buy comics and all those childish things. Then, something unexpected appeared. Two people. A man and a woman. Then I fell asleep. -------------------K-A-T-S-U---------------- Had Hikaru won her heart? Was it possible? A punk like him? Katsu walked along the sandy ground, looking at the night sky. The glimmer of the moon shone beautifully in the air. He picked up and rock and threw into the distance. Where could they be? I had to find them, Katsu thought. I had to find her. The flames in the distance provided warmth and gave him a feel of protection. He felt a hand on his shoulder. “Hey kid,” said the voice. Katsu turned around. There was what appeared to be an extremely pale man with blue fire for hair. “Who are you?” Katsu asked. “Hades. God of the Underworld. At your service,” he said, bowing. “What do you want?” Katsu asked, raising an eyebrow. “Hey, the question is, what do you want?” Hades replied. |
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| Dual Wielder | WOW....0.0...AMAZING!!!! I LOVED IT. HAHAHA Hades...wait whats gonna happen to Katsu..is Hades gonna use him to get to Hikaru...wait...NOOOO...DONT DO IT KATSU...RUN HIKARU RUN!!!! RUN AWAY HADES IS COMING *my sister rolled her eyes at me* my sis: yell louder...i dont think the characters heard you... me: Ok...*yelling*NOOOO...DONT DO IT KATSU...RUN HIKARU RUN!!!! RUN AWAY HADES IS COMING !!!* my sis: I was being sarcastic *(has ears covered with hands and pillows and soft muffly stuff...* sry for dramatics...but hey this is really good...wait...OH NO I THINK I KNOW...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....oopz 0.o @.@ I'm going crazy with this good fan fic...keep it up. If you enjoy writting it...keep writting it. Okey? even if you dont have LOTS of fans...the peoples who you do have as fans love it. KEEP IT UP...its way better than anything i have ever written. |
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| PSWii C: | Thanks. =) I'm happy that it got you so excited. xD |
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