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Old April 9th, 2006, 05:46 AM   #1
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ok
here's my new fan-fic, The Chronicles of Destiny Island. I won't be stoping my other one, Catch me as I fall... But I wanted 2 start a new one.

This is comedy, action, romace and drama....ENJOY! :D
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Chapter One...
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"VALOR!"

"WISDOM!"

"VALOR!"

Sora smacked Riku on the head. "Idiot, everyone knows that Wisdom is way stronger than Valor!"

Riku shook his head. "Your mad!"

"Whatever!" Sora rolled his blue eyes and hopped of the dock on to the soft sand. Then angrily stormed up the beach.

Riku rolled his eyes too and streached out on the dock. "Your mad because I'm right," Riku mummbled to himself.
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Kairi was laying in the secret place, reading her favorite book. The Sora stormed in. She sighed, knowing that him in Riku were in another fight.

She sighed again, "You two at it again?"

Sora nodded quickly. "We sure are." Sora took a deep breathe and then Kairi knew that he was gonna get really mad. "I CAN'T BELIVE HIM! I HATE HIM! HE THINKS VALOR IS BETTER BUT IT'S NOT, WISDOM IS THE BEST FORM. WHAT WOULD HE KNOW ANYWAY?! HES SUCH A LITTLE..." Sora went on calling Riku every possible name and sware word. Kairi just tuned out, and then when he was done began to talk again.

"You two are so STUPID!" Kairi walked over to Sora and playfully punched him in the arm. "How can you two be bestfriends and then suddenly hate each other because you two each like differnt forms? It's just very pathetic!"

"Yeah so what. Hes stupid," Sora was rubbing his arm where Kairi had punched him. "It's just hes been so mean and annoying ever since him and Selphie broke up! Hes angry about it and taking it out on me!" Sora's face was red with anger.

Kairi folded her arms. "Maybe hes extremly sad about Selphie and him? Did you ever even ask him about his feelings on it?"

Sora rolled his eyes and sighed loudly. "Oh your right Kairi, I'm so sorry. I can't believe I didn't ask Riku about his feelings. Oh, I have any idea! Why don't I have Riku over for a sleepover tonight and we can make cookies, paint each others nail, do each others hair and talk about our feelings!"

Kairi rolled her eyes. "Sora, you know what I mean!"

"I sure bet Riku would look good with braids in his hair," Sora went on annoying Kairi even more.

She just rolled her eyes, "Sora..."

"Oh! And I could put pink ribbons in his hair too. I bet my parents would love it if me and Riku put on dresses and did a fashion show for them. Yeah! That's a fantastic idea. Say, Kairi, would you like to come to the fashion show?"

"OK SORA I GET IT!" Kairi giggled. "Now I have to get going, it's almost dinner." Leaving it with that, Kairi turned around and left. Heading towards her house. Sora just through his head back and laughed and when I stopped he ran to catch up to Kairi.

When he finally caught up to her, he reached out and grabbed her hand and pulled her into him. "I'll see you around?"

"Yeah, of course." Kairi put her arms around Sora, "I'll call you."

"I'll be waiting." Sora put his hands on the back of Kairi's head and pushed her head up to his. Then they kissed for a long time. Untill the mayor stuck her head out of Kairi's house.

"Oh, for goodness sake! You two are kissing again!" Kairi and Sora ignored her and just kept on kissing. "Alright young lady, you two can kiss later. Now it's dinner, so wash up." She went back into the house and closed the door behind her. Then Kairi and Sora broke apart.

"Ok Sora, I'm really hungry. I'll call you laters!" Kairi waved and skipped to her house and on the porch turned around and shouted "Love you!"

"I love you more!" Sora waved.

Kairi just smiled and opened the door and entered her house.

Sora turned around, grinning ear to ear but his smile ended when he was suddenly face to face with Riku. He had been very sensitive of seening people kiss every since him and Selphie broke up. Riku scowled and said in an unhappy voice, "you two sure like each other."

Sora just shrugged and nodded. "Yeah, I guess so." There was a long pause, "so, Riku what up?"

Suddenly a grin spread across Riku's face and Sora's looked at him confused. "Guess who I'm going out with as of thirty minutes ago?"

Sora didnt know who it was but smiled any way. Riku was finally over Selphie. "I dunno, who?" Sora looked at Riku desperatly.

"Rikku!"

Sora's expression changed back to being confused. "Uh...what?"

Riku gave a weak laugh. "Come on Sora, you know who. Rikku, the girl who has the same name as me except spelled differnt."

"How's it spelled?"

"R-I-K-K-U."

Sora nodded, rembering now who she is. She was in a few of his classes at school. She was a little annoying. "Sweet!" Sora playfully smacked Riku. "Good job!"

Riku just smiled and nodded. He shifted where he was standing and then let out a yelp. "OWE." He grabbed his barefoot. "I stepped on a rock!"

Sora laughed a little. "Well,that's what ya get for walking around barefoot." Then I suddenly noticed something on one of his toes. It was a toe ring. "Why do you have a toe ring on?" Sora looked curiously at Riku.

"Oh, yeah." Riku looked down at his toe. "Someone gave it to me."

I smiled. "Who?"

He awnsered, "Yuffie."
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Old April 9th, 2006, 04:11 PM   #2
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could someone plz tell me what you think of it?
cuz then ik if i should keep going or not.
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Old April 9th, 2006, 07:34 PM   #3
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Uh-oh. Riku's a playa XD

Poor Riku,I know,he needs a girlfriend but that sux him & Selphie broke up. I liked that coupling but I wanna know how the others will be like, Riku x Rikku ^^

I like it very much.
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Old April 9th, 2006, 08:01 PM   #4
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OMG! I love it!^^ You have to write more its so awesome!^^
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Old April 10th, 2006, 01:42 AM   #5
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thanks everyone!
i'm fighting the final boss in kh2 so if i finish it i'll put up the new chapter 2nite
if not...then it will be up tomorrow
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Old April 10th, 2006, 03:21 AM   #6
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YAY!!!!!!!^^ That would be awesome poisonedheart!!!!!!^^ I cant wait because its so good!!^^
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oh no
ok i wrote the new chapter last night and posted it and then this thing showed up that said upgrading so i wasnt sure if the new chapter got up but i guess it didnt:(i worked so hard on it
i'll try to get it up later 2day
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ok heres the re-write of chapter 2...
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"SORA GET OFF ME!" Riku screamed at Sora who had him in a headlock.

"NO NOT UNTIL YOU TELL ME WHY YUFFIE GAVE YOU A TOE RING!"Sora shouted at Riku.

Riku struggled to get Sora off of him for a bit then grabbed his arms and managed to wrench him off. "What is wrong with you!?" Riku screamed at Sora once he got him off. Sora said nothing though but just smacked Riku's arm. In response to that Riku punched Sora hard in the stomach and Sora fell to his knees, clutching his stomach.

"WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?!"Sora screamed.

"For smacking me," Riku said calmly and began walking towards his house. The Sora managed to pull himself up and ran after Riku. Sora leaped up and jumped on Riku's back.

"AHHHHHHHHH...S-O-R-A!GET-OFF-OF-ME!" Riku said threw gritted teeth. They stood there for about a minute,stuggling. Riku grabbed Sora's arms and yanked him off of his back. Sora landed on the ground with a thud.

Now they were both furious at each other. They began attacking each other freely. Punching each other at any chance they had. Then suddenly there was someone shouting behind them.

"WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU TWO IDIOTS DOING?!" Kairi was standing just a few feet away from where Riku and Sora fought. She walked up to them angrily and grabbed the back of their shirts, pulling them apart from each other. "YOU TWO ARE JUST BEATING THE CRAP OUTTA EACH OTHER OVER SOMETHING MOST LIKELY REALLY DUMB!" She gave angry looks to each of them and then let the back of there shirts go.

Sora and Riku didn't leave but they didn't look at each other, just stood apart, arms folded. Kairi sighed.

"You guys fight a lot," Kairi began,"but this is the first time blood was drawn. What's up with you two?" She looked at one then the other, waiting for an awnser. When Kairi didn't get one she sighed again. "Fine, don't awnser me then."She paused for a second,"maybe you guy should take a break from each other for a while."

For what seemed like an eternity but was only a few minutes no one said anything. Then Riku broke the silence.

"Ok, your right Kairi." Then he began walking slowly back to his house. Only when he was inside did Kairi and Sora speak.

"Sora?"Kairi walked over to him and gently put her hand on his shoulder.

"Yeah," Sora held Kairi's hand but did not look at her. His nose bleeding and he was most likely going to have a black eye when he woke up.

"There's only about a month left of summer vaction. Maybe if you and Riku don't hang out with each other for that time you guy'll have time to cool of a bit. Then when school starts up again you guys can hang out again."

'That's a good idea.' Sora thought. Then he turned to Kairi. "Yeah, good idea. How come your so smart?"

Kairi just smiled at Sora then hugged him. "You ok?"

"Yeah Sora," said putting his arms around Kairi,"Now I can spend the rest of summer with you." Then Sora leaned in and kissed Kairi.
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0.0! Fighting! This is getting good! ^^ More please!^^
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thanks
i wont be able 2 get the nxt chapter up 2 day cuz i was sick 2 day and i hav 2 go 2 bed early but i'll try 2 write a bit of it while i'm in bed and get it up 2moro when i get back from school
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OK!!! Thats awesome!!^^ Thankies poisonedheart!^^
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i mite not be able 2 get the chapter up 2nite cuz i gotta do a science project and go 2 musical practice but i'll try
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Old April 15th, 2006, 11:38 AM   #13
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srry that i havnt put the new chapter up
i've been busy and sick
i was gonna put it up last nite but i was sick and fell asleep b4 dinner and b4 it was dark outside and just woke up at like 5 something AM
but i'll start the chapter now and get it up 2day
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ok heres the nxt chapter,
srry it took so long to get up.
Chapter 3...
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It had been three days since Riku and Sora had decided not to hang out for the rest of summer, and Riku hadn't left his house since. There wasn't much that he could do. He'd wake up, eat, watch T.V, go on the computer and talk to Rikku and Yuffie on the phone, then eat more and go to bed at 10. Riku usally stayed up all night but since there wasn't anything to do he just went to bed early (or at least early to him.) He knew Sora and Kairi were most likly having the best summer ever but he didn't care, Riku didn't want anything to do with them, at least not till school started.

Rikku had said on the phone last night that Riku needed to get out of his house so she would be over at his place at noon. Riku checked is watch, it was 11:50. Rikku would be here soon.

Riku was sitting on the couch in his living room watching T.V. Still in his pjs and with food wrappers all around. For the last few days Riku had been a couch potato. He slowly got up and grabbed all of the wrappers that littered the floor and straightened the room a bit. Then he quickly went up stairs took a two minute shower and changed into new clothes.

Just as Riku was cleaned up there was a knock at the door.

"Hey Rik-" he was cut off when he saw it wasn't Rikku but instead Yuffie. "Oh, hey Yuffie. What are you doing here?"

"Rikku asked me to give you this note."

Yuffie handed Riku and neatly folded up piece of notebook paper. He opened it and read:

Hey Riku,

I'm so sorry but I can't hang out today, I'm grounded for staying on the phone to long last night. My mom gave me this whole lecture about how money doesn't grow on trees and the phone bill is gonna be so much money. I don't get why she's making a big deal out of it. We were only talking for 3 hours. lol. Well since it's my first time being grounded i'm only grounded for one day. so i can hand out tomorrow. but i'm ban from the phone for a week so i'll just stop by your place or you can come by mine. Once again sorry. I know you won't have much to do and your not gonna hang with sora or kairi so hang out with Cloud or Leon. You all can do something today. For like the third time i'm really sorry. Catch Ya later.

Lots of Love,
Rikku<3


Riku folded the letter up and shoved it in his pocket. "Well, thanks a lot Yuffie."

Yuffie shrugged, "No problem." She began to turn and walk down the steps.

"Hey, wait Yuffie."

"Yeah?" She walked back up to Riku.

Riku shoved his hands in his pockets, "You wanna do something to day?"

Yuffie smiled and nodded, "Yeah sure. That'd be cool." For a few seconds they didn't say anything.

Riku nodded, "Cool. So what do ya wanna do?"

"Swim?" Yuffie suggested.

Riku nodded again. "Yeah good idea. I'll meet you at the beach in a few minutes, ok?"

"Ok." Yuffie nodded, "see ya in a few." She waved and skipped of towards her house.

Riku closed the front door and ran up stairs to change into his swimming suit. After he changed he went into the bathroom and open on of the cabinets in there and grabbed a towel. Just as he was about to leave he stopped and went over to the window in the kitchen and looked at the beeach. Yuffie was there, and she was talking to Sora and Kairi.

"CRAP!" Riku shouted. He then looked closer. Sora and Kairi were wet and wrapped up in there towel. Riku relaxed, they had already been swimming. He watched as Sora and Kairi waved to Yuffie and hand in hand left towards Sora's house.

Now happy that he was going to be able to avoid Sora and Kairi he walked outside and ran all the way to the beech were Yuffie sat waiting.
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0.0! Cheating is there? Its so good!^^ More please!^^
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