My Kingdom Hearts story - *spoilers*

[L337 kybldmstr]

Here is a story on Kingdom Hearts. Yes, it is called Kingdom Hearts 3, and yes it follows on from where KH2 left off. It also takes into account (though perhaps loosely) the secret ending in KH2. Both the KH2 ending movie and its secret ending are viewable at YouTube - just do a search. Note that this story will be taken in stages - in three acts, to be precise - but storywriting does take time, so if it doesn't say "end of act" or something like that, it ain't done yet! Please feel free to comment. Oh, and yes, there could be spoilers.

Anyhow, I reckon you've done enough waiting. So here's chapter 1:

Kingdom Hearts 3
By L337 kybldmstr

It was a bright, clear and sunny day. But Sora stood on the beach, staring into the horizon, not noticing the sky, but thinking about the letter he, Riku and Kairi had recieved the day before:

Dear Sora,

Hope this gets to you. Anyway, we need you back at the Castle or we're all in trouble! Can't say any more, in case this message gets intercepted.

Your friend Mickey

What did Mickey mean by that, Sora thought. Why was he worried that the message could get intercepted? And what had made Mickey write that letter in the first place? But at that moment, a voice broke into his thoughts.
"Mind if I join you?" said Kairi.
"Huh? Oh, no, you can stay with me."
"Okay. So," Kairi said, "what are you doing out here all by yourself?"
"Just thinking about that letter we got," replied Sora.
"Yeah, it sounded like Castle Disney was in trouble."
"Probably is," Sora spoke, "but that's not why you're talking to me, is it?"
"Well," Kairi replied, "I'm here because . . ." but she was interrupted by yet another voice.
"Well, well, well, if it isn't one lovely couple."
"Riku!" Sora and Kairi both shouted at him at the same time.
"Well, if the size 50 shoes fit, Sora . . ." Riku responded calmly.
"Size 50 . . . hey! Those are my favourite shoes! Don't diss them!" yelled Sora back angrily.
"Hey, calm down, it was just a joke," laughed Riku.
"Yeah," Sora thought, annoyed, "just like that paopu fruit thing from a year ago was a joke."
"Look," spoke up Riku, I'm here to tell you we have visitors."
"Where are they?" asked Kairi excitedly.
"Just follow me, you two, and you'll see."
So off they went, from the shore and onto the other side of the island. But Sora stopped. The island seemed to be fading, and something replacing it . . .

[LadyKairi_19]

whoa... interesting.... but shouldnt this be posted in the Fan Fiction Section? Its really good so far

[Kbdoublewielder]

yea this is cool.

[amurakansen]

dude...this isnt kh3, its the secret ending to kingdom hearts 2......

[Little_Red]

hey this is pretty interesting, i was thinking about writing my own. And they did look like woman didn't they? And yeah this should be in the fanfic section. Please PM the title and stuff if you put it in the fanfiction section.

[L337 kybldmstr]

Originally Posted by amurakansen

dude...this isnt kh3, its the secret ending to kingdom hearts 2......

Instead of thinking about what I've used, think about what might happen next . . . and yeah, I guess it should be in Fan Fiction, but I just kinda thought more people would see it if it was here.

[L337 kybldmstr]

Sorry but I've gotta run. More tomorrow in Australia!

[L337 kybldmstr]

Sorry to triple-post, but I'm back! Now my fanfic will be split into chapters, so here's chapter 2!

A fully armoured figure wielding what looked like a large, jagged key, stood in front of a large, dead creature. A Heartless. Before him lay a village in ruins, the one that the big Heartless had overrun. The knightly figure looked around him, and saw two others, with similar weapons, approach him. Anyone looking at these two would have guessed correctly they were young women. The three knights came together and moved forward towards another three giant keys. But these were different to each other. One had a gold handle and a silver blade, with a crown shape carved into it; another was black, but otherwise similar to the first one; the other had a large, sharp point on the end. The three knights each took one. As they did, the male knight noticed something in the distance. The others turned to look at what he was looking at. Something was moving, moving towards them. It looked human, but in the haze it was hard to tell . . .

"Sora! Snap out of it!"
"What?" answered Sora, rather confused. Strange, he thought.
"Well don't just stand there, hurry up!" shouted Riku.
"Sorry." He started walking again. But who were they, Sora asked himself in his head. And where was that place? What was coming towards them? Did it have something to do with Mickey's letter? Oh well, it was probably nothing.

[L337 kybldmstr]

And now chapter 3!


They got to the other side of the island. Sora and Kairi followed Riku as he showed them to an area near where a paopu fruit tree plantation was. And in front of them was a man.
"Well, this is our visitor," said Riku.
"Cid?"
"That'd be me," he answered.
"How come you're here?" Sora asked.
"Two reasons. One, 'cause I'm taking you for a flight in my ship. Two, so I can give you that ship."
"Where are you taking us?" asked Riku.
"Where you want to go."
"Hmmmm, how about Castle Disney?" said Sora.
"All right then. Castle Disney it is!" smiled Cid.
But to Sora, there was something about that smile that didn't seem right. The fact that Cid had just arrived here to give them a Gummi Ship and didn't mention anything else didn't add up either. There was something going on here, or maybe it was just him . . . but getting to Castle Disney was important. And there was no denying that. So slowly, but cautiously, he boarded the ship with Riku, Kairi and Cid.

The flight didn't seem bad; in fact it seemed quite good. Cid had given Sora and company some chocolate biscuits, telling them "the flight's gonna take some time." However, all of them were quiet for some reason - one that they knew was there, but they couldn't quite place it. But as they realised, to their misfortune, all things are explained in the end. It began when the ship abruptly stopped.
"What the hell was that?" shouted Riku.
"Ohhhhhh . . . just, errrrr, technical difficulties."
Riku suddenly yawned loudly, obviously unable to control it.
"Sorry," he explained, "but I'm a bit tired. Maybe I could rest my eyes for a couple of minutes . . ." which was a bit understandable, considering some time had passed since they'd left the island. But it hadn't even been "a couple of minutes" when he was snoring very, very, VERY loudly. And it was then Kairi said she was feeling a bit dozy herself.
"Maybe . . . if I just . . . have a . . . quick nap . . ." but no sooner had she let those words leave her mouth, that she was out like a light.
Sensing something was wrong, Sora asked Cid "What's with them?"
Cid just laughed and replied, "They're fine . . . for now."
"What's that supposed to . . . those biscuits! You . . ."
"Drugged you? Well, you took your sweet time figuring that one out."
But as Cid said that, Sora himself began to feel tired. However, he hadn't been hungry then, and only had three. But even three had had a strong effect on Sora. He struggled to move, but he was too weak. And with that, came a wave of pain, and then blackness.

[L337 kybldmstr]

Chapter four guys!

When Sora awoke, he found himself in a dark, circular room. He got up and took out his trusty keyblade - a large key used as a sword - which he never left home without. Actually, he couldn't leave home without it; several times he'd tried to chuck it out the window to see if it would warp back to him, and every single time it hadn't even made it through the window. At first he couldn't remember what had happened. But then it started coming back; the drugged biscuits, Cid's newfound evil laugh, his friends under the biscuit's effects. But why hadn't Cid killed them? Surely dying the same death as the others would have been a good enough trade? Why was he all evil anyway? Well, time to look for my friends, I 'spose, he thought.

Sora took stock of his position; the room was large and round, with curtains all around, except for a small gap where a door was. Seeing this, Sora rushed for the door, but it was locked. Then, remembering his keyblade, he drew it and tried smashing it. To his surprise, it gave way completely, becoming nothing more than a pile of splinters on the white marble floor. Ahead of Sora was a long corridor. Not bothering to think of the possible risks he might be taking, Sora ran out through into the corridor.

[L337 kybldmstr]

And now Chapter 5!

Meanwhile . . .

In another place, a large figure wearing a black cloak was busy watching Sora. Interesting, he thought. So he is the Master of Light. He is fortunate, I will give him that. But what of his male friend, the Master of Twilight? Hmmm . . . and it was at that moment, when a voice entered his mind;
"This world is secure."
"Good, my right-hand. Any difficulties?"
"We are all safe. And nothing serious."
"And what would that mean, exactly?"
"The residents, shall we say, didn't want what was in their best interests."
"I see. That was expected," the cloacked person said. "But was the other goal a success?"
"Yes."
"Excellent. Continue to impress me like this and you will most certainly surpass even I."
"Then I shall leave you to your brilliant mind."
"Understood." The figure turned his thoughts back to Riku. When light and darkness are combined, twilight is formed. But perhaps the two can still be separated . . .

"Donald?"
"Yes me!" replied Court Wizard Donald.
"What are you doing here?" asked Kairi.
"Saving your life, that's what!"
"How?"
"Well, Kairi," answered Donald, "Goofy and I just happened to see you floating in space. Be happy we were passing by."
"Where were you headed?"
"To your island!"
"Where are the others, then?"
"I don't know where they are, the ship malfunctioned!"
"Then we'd better start searching, Donald!"
Donald merely nodded and drew his favourite rod: the Save the Queen rod.

[L337 kybldmstr]

Sorry I just posted for the seventh time in a row, but how do you like my fanfic so far?

[Jax-Oh1]

Coooooooooollllllllll!

[L337 kybldmstr]

Great! I'll start on the next chapter once I have a few more replies!

[kevlexcruz]

Get to d next chapter. It's good.