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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Somewhere over the r.a.i.n.b.o.w Age: 18
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | ALRIGHTY! I decided that I wanted to try and make my own fic, so here it is! Please remember this is my first fic, so dont be too harsh...<.< >.> Okay, a summary! Umm, this is the story about what became of Kairi after her dramatic parting with Sora at the end of Kingdom Hearts. Also, this story is told in Kairi’s POV. Okay, I’ll stop blabbering now, lol. This is My Story: Memories Untold Note: This chappy is kinda a prologue - it goes through the events of the ending of Kingdom Hearts. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ I stood uncomfortably on the sandy area which I was located. I examined my surroundings with my cerulean blue eyes, while my red, crimson hair lay over my eye. It was dark, and a light, hazy mist was enshrouding the place. I lightly shuffled backwards, as the land around me was slowly moving away… “Kairi!” My thought was instantly put on pause. I lifted up my head to find Sora running toward me. “Sora!” I yelled back, walking up to him. Suddenly, the ground shifted uneasily, and I lost my balance. Sora leaned in and caught me by the arm, helping me regain my balance. However, he didn’t let go of my hand. “Kairi,” he began again as the area of land around us started to move apart. “Remember what you said before? I’m always with you too. I’ll come back to you, I promise!” Our separate sections of ground began growing more and more distant, and we were both on our toes, attempting to hold on as long as time would allow. I stared deeply into his beautiful aqua eyes, cherishing them. I knew this could be the last time I saw them up close. I looked at him with both love and sadness in my expression. I longed for his embrace, for him to hold me in his arms. I knew this wasn’t going to happen, and that thought alone made me ache inside. “I know you will!” I yelled out, right before we lost our grip on each other. Our separate platforms of ground wandered apart. I made a futile attempt to reach him again, and saw that he did the same. I stepped as far forward as I could, hoping to keep Sora in sight as long as possible. I needed to savor this moment, and remember his last words to me. I began to realize how much I loved the little things about him - his cocky laugh and smile, the way his hair moved with the wind, even his big yellow shoes. I stood there, watching him move further and further away. I didn’t even notice that there was more sand gathering around me. As I reluctantly watched him go, I suddenly felt empty inside. I held my hands together and briefly closed my eyes. Then, a small light gently floated down from the sky. It landed in my cupped hands, and I looked up. To my utter surprise, I saw hundreds - no, thousands - of these beautiful, magical lights. I looked around in amazement, holding out my hands. Suddenly, there was a bright, colorful light. What I saw next shocked me. Destiny Islands was appearing before my very eyes. I looked around as more and more of the island was recreated. Everything was raising up from the ground and returning to its original state, as if nothing had ever happened. Even the ocean managed to crawl its way back up towards the shore. I looked out at the ocean and caught my last glimpse of Sora before he was consumed by a beautiful blue light. I saw him calling out to me, but I couldn’t hear a word. I desperately wanted to call back, but I knew that he would only hear me as much as I could him - meaning not at all. I stood there and lowered my head, but then looked up again to find wonderful lights raising up from the blue illumination. They each individually reached a spot in the sky, and I saw that these were the stars that had been missing from the sky for so long. I watched with a slight smile on my face, and I noticed that I began to unintentionally tear up a little. The next day, the sun was back as well. With my hands behind my back, I slowly walked towards the entrance to the secret place, my purple skirt flowing in the wind. I walked inside. Once out into the open area, I put my hand lightly on the wall for a brief moment. I looked forward towards the door that’s always mysteriously been there. A light was soothingly shining through a crack in the ceiling in front of this door. I walked forward and saw the hole clearer. I looked at it for a moment before going ahead. I walked on with my hands behind my back again, examining all of the drawing that Sora and I made as a kid. I brushed my hand lovingly against the wall while walking on, giving everything a good look, taking in the memories. However, I stopped when I got to a certain pair of drawings. I bent down and looked up at them. They were the portraits that Sora and I drew of each other while little kids. The thing that touched me most was the addition to the drawing that had never been there before - Sora was giving me a paupu fruit. I gently caressed the drawing with one hand, while using the other to stifle a small laugh. The tears just came, flowing silently down my face as I took in this moment, realizing what it meant. I picked up a small rock and drew myself feeding the fruit back to Sora… Even though that is all in the past, the memories still haunt me - day and night, night and day. I see him everywhere, and I’m truly fighting hard. You may think you understand, but you have no idea. This is me - this is my story. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ SOOO - whatcha think? Leave comments please! <3 Last edited by Golden_x_Heart; 03/04/06 at 06:28 PM. |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: On the vast beaches of Destiny Islands awaiting his return..* Age: 17
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | goldie its simply amazing!!! your a great writer! cant wait til the next chappy!! |
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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Somewhere over the r.a.i.n.b.o.w Age: 18
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | thanks a lot K&S!! i appreciate the support! after i get a few more reviews, ill post the next chappy! <3 |
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| Keyblade Wielder | Wow...I'm just...overwhelmed by the awesomeness of your chappy! You're such a great writer Goldie! I can't believe you didnt try this earlier! You're simply AMAZING! I wish I was this good! ![]() |
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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Somewhere over the r.a.i.n.b.o.w Age: 18
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | thanks Oathy!! after like 2 more reviews, ill put the teh first real chappy! ![]() <3 |
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| The Unknowing Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Amongst others Age: 16
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Yay! Goldy's good! But I'm gonna wait until you post the next chapter to really crticize because (no offense) That was just the ending of KH on paper... or screen |
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| your forgotten memory Join Date: May 2004 Location: anywhere but here. Age: 19
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | That was awesome!! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! |
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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: ...I only live in places that has cookies in it... >.>...*chases the Gingerbread Man* Age: 16
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Thats a great chapter!! =D I liked it alot! I cant wait for the next chapter! ![]() |
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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Somewhere over the r.a.i.n.b.o.w Age: 18
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | thanks for all of your reviews! and BHKiller, like i said, its just like a prolouge, and i was just "refreshing your memory" if you will, lol but i understand - the first chappy will be up within the hour, so keep checking in! <3 |
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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Somewhere over the r.a.i.n.b.o.w Age: 18
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | hey! sorry to double post, but heres the next chappy! sorry its so short, and dont worry, chappies to follow will be better than this one! Chapter 1 - An Unseen Visitor ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ My crimson hair swayed in the warm summer’s breeze as I walked down the shore of Destiny Islands. It was close to 6 am, and the sun was just beginning to peak over the horizon of the ocean. I was barefoot - I liked the feeling of the sand between my toes. Sora and I use to take walks like this together nearly every day… This thought lingered in my head. For the first weeks after Sora’s disappearance, I would shake my head and try to rid thoughts of Sora when they came to me. Now I like them, and I savor each one. They reminded me of the wonderful times we use to share together, and make my love for him stronger. Everything seemed to be put on pause then though, for I suddenly felt a sharp pain in my chest, causing me to fall to my knees and scream out in pain. “Hmm, interesting…” While the pain was nearly unbearable, I managed to look up. “Who’s there?” I choked out. “Aww, you look so cute when your helpless…” I clutched my chest and slowly stood up. I began to slowly spin in circles, attempting to pinpoint the voice. “Don’t be such a coward!” I said, more force in my voice now. “Show yourself!” “Princess, you’re doing very good! I’m thoroughly impressed with your strength…” The voice gave a deep, taunting snicker and continued. “You will do quite well…” I was sick of this…voice…thing. “What are you - ” I was cut off mid-sentence, for I then felt a pain so excruciating, I thought it would never seize. The last thing I remember falling to the ground, and seeing a cloaked figure emerging from a dark portal… ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ once again, sorry its so short!! i wanted to leave you guys with a thought… <3 |
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| The Unknowing Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Amongst others Age: 16
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | YAY! You posted it! It's good! but did you change the ending? I thought it said she fell through a dark portal... |
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| Keyblade Wielder | Great chappy! It all unfolds...lol anyhow, I'm glad you decided to write Goldie. VERY impressive. |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: With my beloved Arima!! Age: 20
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | a very good start goldy!! i'm very glad you finally posted your own fan fic. keep up the quality and this fan fic could turn out to be one of the best ones on here ![]() |
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| Warrior of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Somewhere over the r.a.i.n.b.o.w Age: 18
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | thanks for all of your reviews everyone! and i didnt change the ending BHKiller, i guess you jus misread, lol ill post another chappy either later tonight or tomorrow! <3 |
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| your forgotten memory Join Date: May 2004 Location: anywhere but here. Age: 19
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | That was awesome golden! I really think this is gonna be a great story. And I love the way you write! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ |
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