The X Is For Betrayel (tis good shit)

[utadarocks123]

ok braig wanted to do it he got banned so i did it

its based on suvres info and will preety much span through all of the order members including tron, this is all fiction but at times will twist into the kh2 universe so watch out for spoilers

The x is for betrayal

The story of tron:

As a young boy tron was gifted in computers, creating his own video-games and making helpful gadgets for his friends and family.
But over time he started to lose interest in making simple computer games and sought out how to make games that would allow him to live in the game.
This is his story:

Mother: tron where are you
As she banged on the door to trons lab she saw a note saying "do not enter"
Tron: leave me alone i don’t want to be disturbed Im in the middle of creating a new game.
his mother new that if her son was creating games it was a serious process and was left better not disturbed but....
Mother: tron its lea he's here to see how its going
Tron: lea? Why didn’t you say so, lea c'mon in

Trons mother sighed as she could hear the several computer locks unlock themselves

Lea: tron have you heard the news
Tron: what is it?
Lea: ansems holding a computer creating contest, he’s doing some experiments in his castle but needs a super-computer
Tron: what didn’t Evan just make him on?
Lea: yeah I know but it wasn’t big enough
Tron: what that’s the biggest thing I have ever seen you could put all the worlds’ history into that
Lea: I know that Im not stupid
Tron: well did you enter us?
Lea: of course I did
Tron: oohh but I can’t Im creating this new program
Lea: what's it called again?
Tron: space paranoids, it’s a complete replica of radiant gardens but you it’s only for kids
Lea: so its just like all your other inventions
Tron: wrong, you actually get to live in this one
Lea: what serious wow how cool but how did you put everything into data?
Tron: I made this
Tron pulled a small device with a label on it SPS
Lea: what's SPS mean?
Tron: its space paranoid scanner it lets me scan anything I want and it'll go straight into the game
Lea: wow that’s crazy so you could turn anything to data
Tron: exactly!!
lea: wait this is great, Im sure ansem would like to have one of these I mean he could do his experiments in the game and if it went wrong he could just delete it
Tron: hmmm good idea ill think about it.

3 days passed while lea and tron where scanning all of radiant garden until they came across a moogle

Lea: hey tron should I scan the moogle
Tron: nah only items
The moogle handed lea a note
Lea: hhmm what is this
Lea unravelled it, the note read:

Thinking of you wherever you are

Lea: hhhmmm ok i dont understand Mr Moogle

When lea looked up the moogle was gone

Lea: huh what was that all about?
Lea scanned the paper and put it in his pocket

After the whole town square was scanned lots of people were wondering what tron was up to know.

Ralene: tron what are you and lea up to now

Lea: none of your business you smelly girl
Ralene: oh you sexist boy
Lea: you cant even spell sexist
Tron: can you to stop squabbling
Ralene: ( whispers to lea “bet he cant even spell that" lea nods)
Ralene: anyway i heard you are creating another game correct
Tron: yeah and its ready for beta testing i need one more person
Ralene: how bout elaus
Tron: i guess he'll do
Ralene runs of to find elaus but it wasn’t hard she just looked for the closest group of fan girls
Elaus: ralene what are you doin
Ralene: tron wants you to help beta test a new game
Elaus: fine ill do it but it better be more fun than that crapy pong game you just made
Tron: believe me its much more high-tech now stand still
Tron pulled out a new SPS and scanned lea and ralene and elaus

Lea: ok were in is everything good up there
Tron: yeah all systems are go but just be careful of viruses
Lea: why
Tron: you don’t wanna know

Tron scanned himself with the SPS

Tron: ok were in now the object of the game is really to meet people and stuff but this is beta version 1 the next ill be making a competition to delete viruses.
Ralene: so what do we do?
Tron: well i have put photos into your inventories of the places of the town square; all you have to do is make sure everything is in its right place
Elaus: inventory
Lea: yeah its cool just say inventory
Elaus: INVENTORY
Inventory: I am the SPI what can i do for you elaus
Elaus: ppssstt what do i say
Tron: say items
Elaus: ok ITEMS
SPI: items ok there’s a few pictures do you wanna upload them'
Elaus: i guess
Elaus opened out his hand as a pile of pictures fell into his hands

The others did the same

Tron: ok good now go see if its all correct

MEANWHILE

Mother: tron tron were are you
Mother: hhmm SPS hey
She pressed a button labelled scan and was sent into the game

Back to tron

Tron: yeeep uhuh that’s good no a little to the left

Tron could hear the little voice saying changes finished in his head over and over again

Tron: that’s great back to the town centre

Tron walked into the town square only to see a bunch of viruses
Tron: what the, inventory sword
SPI: OK UPLOADING
Tron could feel his harm moulding into a sword

Zap zap zap

The viruses were gone
Tron: whats this ahh mom what are you doing
Mother: i pressed a button now Im here
Tron: its just a game but that scratch is a doosy we can fix it up when we get home
Tron: SPI chat message to everyone now
SPI: ok what do you want to say?
Tron: everyone back to town square
Tron could see the little white light go up and hit the sky and split into three pieces.

A few minutes later

Elaus: why do we have to leave?
Tron: mum got in and a few viruses attack her, i don’t want this happening while the other betas are in here
Ralene: hhmm good idea ok lets go
SPI: ARE YOU SURE YOU WANT TO QUIT
Tron: confirm, yes

Wwhhhiiiiiiippppppzaaaaaatttt

A few weeks later the beta competition was held and all the viruses were deleted the game was finished and ready to show to ansem

Ansem: welcome my fellow citizens today is the day i choose my super computer and the prize is well.... a secret

A few entries were shown until

Ansem: tron tronagen could you please step forward

Tron climbed up the stairs and pulled out the SPS

Ansem: could you please explain this device to me
Evan: why the need it is obviously a Childs toy
Tron: wrong this here is the most greatest piece of technology in the world it allows you to go into the computer itself and run things from the inside
Ansem: hhhhhmmm show me
Tron: off course
Tron pressed the button on the scanner and scanned himself and the rest of the town folk into the game
Tron: this is space paranoids, its a game for kids but can also be made into a world of science
Ansem: hmmm very good
Evan: this technology is amazing but certainly you did not create it, ienzo did you help him
Ienzo: no i had no idea of anyone could do this
Tron: in this world you can do whatever you want but be wary any wounds you may get in here will transfer into the real world
Ansem: hhmm very good but on my info list it says something about a SPI
Tron: yes this is certainly the heart of the game SPI!!!
SPI: yes tron
Tron: hello SPI could you please explain yourself to the crowd
SPI: of course, my name is SPI or Space Paranoid Inventory i am here to serve whoever i am assigned to, i have many functions including an inventory to store anything you may want to keep, a chat system to talk to anyone that’s far away and of course with ought me you cannot logout
Ansem: logout?
Tron: yes of course you have to logout you see if you aren’t assigned an SPI you cannot logout so you must stay in SPP or Space Paranoid Prison this is where you are sent if you aren’t given an SPI and you trespass in here
Town folk: so how do we get one?
Tron: not to fear i will be sending out a form to get your details and then you can log-in
Ansem: well with ought a doubt this is the winner
Tron: wow what do i win?
Ansem: you get to be my right hand man and my apprentice
Tron: that’s it i would rather be a computer designer
Lea: ooohh ooohh tron can i please please take your prize
Tron: ahh fine
Lea: yay

Many months had passed since that day until tron got a call from lea

Lea: tron your computer something’s happening to it
Tron: really i better go and fix it then
Lea: thanks

A few minutes later

Tron: so what’s happening?
Lea: i don’t know ask ansem
Ansem: lea could you please leave me and tron alone for a while
Lea: yeah ok sir
Ansem: now tron there is a problem in the computer could you please fix it
Tron: of course

Tron entered the special SPS he made for ansem, it was a giant portal

Ansem: are you in
Tron: yeah of course so what’s the problem?
Ansem: hhmm oh it seems that its fixed itself now
Tron: really ok that was fast ok get me out now please
Ansem: what sorry your breaking up
Tron: i said get me out
Ansem: i cant hear pssssppp
The computer turned off and tron was left in the computer
Tron: ill have to manually get out ok SPI
SPI: yes
Tron: i need to get out
SPI: Im sorry but i cannot do that
Tron: what why?
SPI: because i am not assigned to you
Tron: ooohh nooo ansem must of gotten Evan to re-write the program so no-one could see the his information
SPI: now your going to SPP
Tron: what nooo
SPI: YES you are guards
Tron: what guards i didn’t program these
Tron was pushed and shoved into a small little compartment and was locked behind a cybernetic wall
Tron: damn Im the only one that knows how to get out unless lea can find me
Tron: guard’s do i get a free PM
GUARD: i see why not
Tron sent a message telling lea to re-write the program
Tron: now i wait

This is prelude to the story the x is for betrayal

Incase you haven’t realised the next episode will have some spoilers which will ruin KH2 for you but not really so just be careful about what you read ok

The next one should be up tomorrow and oh if you haven’t realised these are some people

Ienzo- zexion
Evan -vexan
Elaus: lexaus
Ralene: larxene
Lea: axel

Ok just wanted to clear that up ok

The next episode is

The x is for betrayal: heres a little inside to the next episode

Tron: lea pushes the yellow button it will let me free



Tron: lea you have to see this




Lea: tron what’s happening tron TRON





Ansem: tron isn’t here anymore



So there you go cant wait i know i cant

[Cloud_Unchained]

This isn't good shit. It's just regular shit.

1. The script format isn't working. It makes you look lazy and unexperienced.
2. So many spelling and punctuation errors, I can barely grasp on to what's going on at all.
3. It's boring and dull. No excitement, nothing.

[utadarocks123]

ITS a prelude so it isnt meant to be to exciting

also i used word to do the spelling and punctuation so obviusly u didnt pay attention in english class (try copying it and put it on your word hey)

and its based on someones uncompleted info so its hard to make up new stuff with stuff that tells you like the beggining and end

belive me when i start talking bout the org youll be like hey thats so cool and wow

i didnt really want to do tron but i had to so the rest would work

also its my first fan fic so dont get annoyed at the scripting i mean look at withought the heartless it goes on forever and the scriptings like this right

[N.E.O.]

[quote=utadarocks123]ITS a prelude so it isnt meant to be to exciting

also i used word to do the spelling and punctuation so obviusly u didnt pay attention in english class (try copying it and put it on your word hey)

and its based on someones uncompleted info so its hard to make up new stuff with stuff that tells you like the beggining and end

belive me when i start talking bout the org youll be like hey thats so cool and wow

i didnt really want to do tron but i had to so the rest would work

also its my first fan fic so dont get annoyed at the scripting i mean look at withought the heartless it goes on forever and the scriptings like this right[/quote



YEA THATS TRUE ITS PRETTY GOOD SO FAR KEEP MAKING MORE

[Cloud_Unchained]

Originally Posted by utadarocks123

ITS a prelude so it isnt meant to be to exciting

Ahem. Contradiction. A prelude is supposed to pull the reader, which in this case is me, into the story.

Originally Posted by utadarocks123

also i used word to do the spelling and punctuation so obviusly u didnt pay attention in english class (try copying it and put it on your word hey)

Mispellings:1
Grammatical Errors: 4

Maybe before YOU post, you should check that in Microsoft Word too, dumbass.

Originally Posted by utadarocks123

and its based on someones uncompleted info so its hard to make up new stuff with stuff that tells you like the beggining and end

Maybe you should pay attention in YOUR English class and learn how to finish sentences.

Originally Posted by utadarocks123

belive me when i start talking bout the org youll be like hey thats so cool and wow

Originally Posted by utadarocks132

also its my first fan fic so dont get annoyed at the scripting i mean look at withought the heartless it goes on forever and the scriptings like this right

Without The Heartless is a piece of literary crap out of the ass of a twelve year old.

Anything else you'd like to add?

[utadarocks-again]

im back i got banned on accident lol or something happened a confusion

i just finished axels thing so it should be up soon its good but im finding it hard to write it

this one has got some action but not much so im sorry but its gonna get more faster

[unknow_92]

its good for uncompleted info

[utadarocks-again]

yeah ok im now proof reading the new one so it should be up very soon

[utadarocks-again]

ok here it is

The X is for betrayal Lea demise

While ansem was locking tron in the SPC lea was helping ramuial with the garden

Ramuial: lea can you please pick the weeds for me?
Lea: of course ramuial

After a few hours of picking weeds lea began to realise that tron hadn’t come out yet

Lea: i have to go, sorry i can’t help anymore
Ramuial: hhmm haahhaahah
Lea: what’s so funny?
Ramuial: oh it’s just that you act so much like a weed to ansem
Lea: what are you talking about?
Ramuial: sucking life from his very soul just like a fire to a forest although they are so much alike, being free to grow until someone comes to stop it but in the case of a fight the fire always wins do you see that?
Lea: i haven’t the slightest idea of what you’re talking about but i have to go now
Ramuial: ok but please give this to ansem

Lea grabbed the piece of paper and ran away

Lea: freak
Lea ran straight to ansems study and there was ansem
Ansem: ahhhhhhh lea i was looking for you
Lea: whares tron
Ansem: hmm oh last time i saw him he was in the computer room helping fix it
Lea: but it’s been hours he should be finished now
Ansem: no, i guess it was a big problem
Lea: Im going to go check it out
Ansem: no, i mean no you cant we have a new friend could you please show him to his quarters
A man with silver-ish hair walked in to the room
? Thank you for your hospitality
Ansem: oh that’s fine xenahort
Xenahort: hmmm have you told him yet
Ansem: no he doesn’t need to know
Xenahort: good choice
Lea looked at them both with intrigue, what could they both be talking about
Lea: this way
Xenahort: ok, ansem we'll talk later
Ansem: alright
Lea left the room with xenahort and closed the door behind them
Lea: how do you know ansem?
Xenahort: we met in the town centre
Lea: the town centre I’ve never seen you before
Xenahort: hhmm a coincidence
Lea: yes a coincidence
Lea and xenahort turned a corner and walked into ienzo
Lea: ienzo what a surprise
Ienzo: leave me alone you fool
Lea: what’s wrong with you?
Ienzo: nothing is wrong with me

Lea showed xenahort to his quarters

Xenahort: thank you lea, ooh what’s that in your pocket
Lea: oh i forgot, ramuial gave it to me
Xenahort: ramuial hmm could i please have that
Lea: no it’s for ansem
Xenahort eyes went yellow
Xenahort: please boy gives it to me
Lea: fine weirdo
Lea passed the note to xenahort, xenahort's eyes went back to normal, as xenahort’s eyes passed over the note his smile turned into a frown
Xenahort: please lea do NOT tell ansem of this letter ok
Lea: whatever but what do i get?
Xenahort: heres 12 munny
Lea: wow thanks
Lea ran to get tron so they could go and get a moogle shake
Lea: i bet trons really hungry from all that hard work
Lea entered the computer room but couldn’t find tron
Lea: hhmm where is he tron tttrroooonnn
There was no reply
Lea: hhmm he must've gone home

Lea ran though the gates into the town square but something stopped him
Lea: what the hell is that?
A little black creature spotted lea, the creature turned flat and scurried under the house
Lea: what is going on in this world?
Lea ran into trons house
Lea: hey trons mom is tron here
Mother: no i thought he was up in ansems castle
Lea: no he left
Mother: oh well could you please find him for me
Lea: yeah ok i will

A few days passed until radiant garden held a search party to search for tron but lea went back to where tron was last seen
Lea: he has to be somewhere in here
Lea turned the computer on and was shocked to see that someone was locked in the SPP
Lea: SPI camera on SPP cell on
SPI: confirmed
Lea watched the screen turned black and then he saw tron asleep on the floor
Lea: tron what are you doing in SPP
Tron: huh who’s that oh lea, ansem he left me in here?
Lea: ansem did this but why
Tron: i don’t know but he’s gone crazy
Lea: right well how do i get you out of here
Tron: press the yellow button to let me out
Lea: right
Lea pressed the yellow button which let tron free
Tron: good now try and get SPI's attention
Lea: right, SPI camera cell 22
SPI: confirmed
the SPI moved to a different cell giving tron enough time to get out of SPI but now he was in a corridor were alot of guards waited
Tron: guards are in the next corridor
Lea: what do we do know?
Tron thought hard about his next move
Tron: ok press the button that says program
Lea: ok
Tron: good now find a floor program
Lea: yep got it
Tron: good now search guard floor 1
Lea: got it
Tron: ok when i count to 3 press it and then quickly bring it back up
Lea: got it
Tron: 1
Lea: 2
Both: 3
The floor disappeared giving tron enough time for tron to run across the corridor
SPI: intruder alert intruder alert all SPI to the first floor
Capsules opened up to reveal hundreds of SPI's
Tron: what has this man been doing?
Tron prepared to run, while the SPI's followed in close pursuit
Lea: there’s nothing i can do you’ll have to find a way to destroy them
Tron: ok then
Tron ran as fast as possible trying to dodge the bullets sent by the hundreds of SPI, many walls were created to stop tron but he always found another
Lea: I’ve found a program that can help you its a light cycle
Tron: of course
Tron took a left and another left and found a small golden motor bike, he climbed onto it and started the engine
The bike took off in a hurry with the SPI's in close pursuit
Tron: i need a program called light wall
Lea: ok sending
Trons arm turned into a laser with a long cord on it
Tron wrapped the cord around a pole and sped other to another one then he flicked a switch and a wall was created
Some SPI's fell for it and ran straight into the wall destroying themselves
Lea: bullseye
Tron: yeah but its not over yet
Tron followed an narrow track until he found a jump
Tron stopped right before it
Lea: you cant make it
Tron: does it have an end to it
Lea: yeah but its a long way down
Tron: sounds good to me
Tron jumped down the shaft and looked up at the SPI's flooding the shaft, the SPI's fell faster than tron
Tron grabbed an SPI and over-rid it; he drove it to the top of the shaft until BOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!
There as an explosion coming up the shaft
Lea: tron get out of there
Tron threw the SPI back down the shaft and grabbed his light cycle; he sped off trying to get away from the explosion
Tron: lea gets ready to make a wall
Lea: right
Tron quickly dodged the walls he had created; with the explosion close behind him he could feel the heat on the back of his neck
He turned a corner
Tron: now do it now
Lea: right
Lea pushed a button and a wall was created
Tron: fffffeeewww
The wall was blasted by the explosion but it stopped it from getting through
Lea: are you alright
Tron: yea Im fine but where am i?
Lea: i don’t know
Tron: hey there’s a computer
Lea: what’s on it?
Tron: ooohh no lea gets out of there
Lea: why what’s happening
Tron: lea you should see this
Lea: what tell me?
Tron: he is killing people and testing on their pzzzt
The computer turned off
Lea: tron TRON TROOOONNNNN
Ansem: tron isn’t here anymore
Lea: what have you done?
Ansem: Im afraid you have seen to much
Lea: you'll never get away with this
Ansem: ienzo, xenahort get him
Lea ran through the trio and into radiant garden, he made his way into the chapel and locked himself in it
Lea: what’s going on why is he doing this and what’s happened to tron
Ienzo appeared in the room like magic
Lea: how'd you do that?
Ienzo: its simple just give yourself into darkness
Lea: never
Ienzo: you have no choice
Ienzo grabbed the boy and took him to ansems testing area
Ansem: this boy has a strong heart he will do well

As lea could feel ansems tools piercing his heart he feels into darkness

Lea woke up in the same room he had been in seconds ago
Ansem: ahhhhhhh that was fast axel
Lea turned around but saw no-one
Lea: what are you talking about Im Lea?
Ienzo: not anymore stand up
Lea was socked that he was now a grown man with flaming red hair
Lea: what happened?
Xenahort: you gave into darkness and now your a nobody
Lea: ggrrr you’ll never get away with this
Ienzo: too late

The naked axel walked into his quarters and there layed a black cloak
Ienzo walked in and told him about what happened and how he came to be axel
Axel: so my name is axel so what’s your name now
Ienzo: my name is now zexion
Axel: zexion huh
Zexion: yes axel i am zexion
Axel: so what’s so special about us now?
Zexion: we have powers now i am able to twist the shadows to do my bidding, so what’s your power
Axel: my power i don’t know
Zexion: just ask for it to come to your hands
Axel held out his hands and a flam appeared
Zexion: fire a good power
Axel: so what’s so good about fire?
Zexion: ask for your weapons
Axel: held out his hands and two fire wheels appeared in his hands
Zexion: they are yours to keep but use them wisely
Axel: humph
Zexion left the room in a flash
Axel knew deep down that he had no choice but join ansem it was the only way to get back to normal and to save tron

And now axel wonders around radiant garden everyday going back to the computer room to see if tron was there but always no sign, he would also check on trons mom who would morn for him everyday

Axel was only a shadow of his former self

The end

And that concludes axels story of the x is for betrayal

The next episode will be about of how zexion came to be heres some inside lines

Ansem: what would you say to darkness?

Ienzo: keep it to yourself

Xenahort: give into the darkness

Ienzo: shove it


Zexion: this power its not my own

Zexion: aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[N.E.O.]

nice one keep it up cant wait till Xemnas is part of the story

[unknow_92]

poor axel .... will u be doing all org. members as in 1-13?

[utadarocks-again]

xenmas will be apart of the story in a new fan fic called

the X is for betrayal: the X chronicles

this will be the sequal and will talk about the org in the actuall kh universe
most of this will explain how hollow bastion was destroyed and stuff

and yes all the org members are in my fan fic
but i screwed it up a bit lol but it dosent matter

[utadarocks-again]

ok heres a short story that bridges this episode to the next episode

zexion: ansem i need to know something
ansem:what is it zexion
zexion: i havent got much memory of what happened to me before i became a nobody
ansem: hhmm interesting you have no memory of your past life
zexion: no but please tell me
ansem: i will tell you but it may be something better left alone but if you must know.............................................. ...







also im starting a new portion of the fan fic called ansems diary here it is

dear diary

today i talked to zexion about his past, and the most weirdest thing happened! he has no memory of his past life.
is there a link to this phenomena and xenahort for he has absoloutly no memory just like zexion.
i plan to question him tommorow and ask him about how he came to this world for he arrived like axel, naked hhhmmm is it possible he is not from this world or even more is it possible he is not a human.

signed Ansem

[Kairi_MAX]

its kinda good. i'm not saying its boring

[N.E.O.]

I Guess The More We Read About It The More Intesting It Gets.