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Old December 5th, 2005, 04:02 AM   #1
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I know this is in thw wrong section, but my little brother >_> wants it here because he want alot of people to see.

My little brother made-up a script of Kingdom Hearts II's ending...
Keep in mind my little bro is only 10 and doesn't completely understand everything of Kingdom Hearts.SO be nice...I think it an okay ending...

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I am using BHK since we yet to know his name...

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EM: You are going to to die keybearers.I want to see the light leave your hearts.
The pain I have suffered cause of you will be worth the death of
my order. I will be complete and you will not stop me.

Sora and BHK enter Kingdom Hearts.

Sora: The Heart isn't made only of pain and sadness. It is also full of many
other things.

BHK: Sora, we have to find the world of light before he does.

Sora nods

EM:You have may destoryed my order but, I am yet so close to being complete
than paradise will be mine, I controlled the nobody and they are searching for it
as we speak.

Sora and BHK are completely blinded by the darkness.They can't see not a the
smallest spark of light.

Nobodies appears by the hundreds

Sora: BHK, get out of Kingdom Hearts, this is my destiny....

BHK:You and I are the same Sora,this time I'll fight...

Sora nods

Sora and BHK are out numbered....

EM: You can not win....I will be complete.

BHK:Sora,we can't win

Sora: Yes, we can,keep trying.

Sora and BHK still fighting
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Flash Backs

Flash Back #1

Sora: Kairi

Kairi: Sora

Sora:Remeber what you said, I am always with you too, I'll come back for you,
I promise...

Kairi:I know you will.

Flash Back # 2

EM: I offered you unlimited darkness.That what every hearts wants.

Riku: No one can oppose what the heart orders.

EM: I am never wrong....

Sora: No matter which side your on, you will always be wrong.

Sora gaves Riku a dirty look.

Sora: Which side are you on?

Riku took his time with his answer....

Riku: Betweeeeee.....

EM blasts a beam of energy into Riku heart from behind. Riku drops to the
ground.EM make a invisible wall not to enter the fight...

Sora: RIKU!!!!!

EM: I offered you to be immoral, you reject it,
I offer you unlimited darkness, you reject it
I liked you before.

Riku trys to get up.EM blasts again.

EM: You must give up.

Sora was help less to do anything.Than, Soras keyblade sented off a beam of
light and destory the wall.

Sora goes to help Riku to gets up.

Riku: I am sorry,Sora

Sora said nothing,

Riku: Sora,remember,when distant hearts combined they will find the light within.

Another blast from EM.

Rikus body slowly disappearing.

Sora gazed in amazment that his best friend just died and disappeared.

EM: How touching...

Sora was still staring down at the ground and than his rage came out and started.

EM: I am off.

Sora runs with his Keyblade to his side, but EM gets away.Sora let out a cry
for his pain for his died friend.Now, Sora is grazing at something that came
out of nowhere.An orb of light came from the spot where RIkus body
disappeared.It came right into his heart.

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Soras flash backs reminded him of what Riku said "When distant hearts combined
they will find the light within". Sora thought to himself could have Riku really
known how to get in to the world of Light? The last remaining Keyblader could
have the power to open the door to light.

Sora: BHK, I know how to get in to the world of light.

BHK: How?

Sora: We must be one again.

BHK: How do we do that.

Sora: I have to unlock my heart and I think my heart will let you and me to be one
again,but.....

BHK: but what?

Sora: What will happen to you?

BHK: Its wasn't matter, I will always be a part of you....

Sora:but... okay

Sora took his keyblade which was a Oathkepper and stuck it into his heart and
unlocked it....It was working the BHK and him came togather and became one
once again.Once it was done.Kingdom Hearts was fillled with light of Soras
glowing heart.

Sora:Eveything is coming back to me, the true...

EM: Whats happening?Where is this light coming from?NO the light.NOOOOO!!!!!

The EM disappeared with his nobodies...

Sora was amazed of what happened. Something catched Soras eye. There stood
a wooden door,which was the same door that was in his island.In the secret
place that amazed him to know what was beyond that door.Sora walked up to
it and a keyhole appeared.His keyblade did the unlocking and there he stood in
the world of light.There he was in a place he could not explain for had stars in
the sky. There layed in the millions of tiny orbs of light.Then, his keyblade that
layed in his hand. Glowed with light and every orb of light left to it belongers
body, to become alive again.His keyblade flew out of his hand right in front of
him,and than came Mickey keyblade.Both keyblades crossed each other and
light filled Soras eyes.Before Sora knew it he was in Twilight Towns beach.

There layed on the ground was a bottle which had a note inside.Sora broke the
top of the bottle which read:

Sora,

I hope you read this because I
was the one who really put you
though these horrible times. I feel
like its all my fault.If you ever come
back for me.I will be in our secret place
waiting for you everynight.I wanted
to meet...

The note didn't say who it was from.Sora was only a few miles away from
the island. He saw a two boats which he remembered looked like Riku and Kairis
boat.Kairi must of brought all three boats back to Twilight Town. Sora geussed
that Kairi took his boat to Desiny Island. He jumped into Kairis boat and rowed
away. After the long boat ride he finally made it to Destiny Islands.Everything
was the same. All the memories of when they were little kids came back to him.
He made it to the enterence of the Secret place and was scared to see Kairi after
more than a year.He walked the long tunnel slowly.There he saw Kairi grazing that
their artwork as children than she went down to the artwork of both Sora and Kairi
sharing Paupu fruit with each other.She rested her hand on Sora.

Sora is right here in the room,but Kairi doesn't notice him.

Sora: Ka-Ka-Kairi...

Kairi slowly turns her head and and grazes at Sora.Her eyes widen.She stood up
and couldn't believe her eyes.

Kairi: Sora...Is it you?

Sora: Of course its me.

He said in a soft voice.

Kairi runs into Sora arms.

Kairi:Sora,I missed you.

Tears full her eyes.

Kairi: Oh Sora,I am sorry,DiZ told me everything that ansem did to get me here.

Sora: I thank him for that.

Tears run though her cheeks.

Kairi: Where Riku?

Sora gave her the look of death.

Kairi:No,NO...noooooooooo...

Her tears are soaked up by Soras clothes.While he is still hugging her and
he opens his eyes which he see the door is gone from the secret place.All is t
here is stone.

Later on...

Sora and Kairi leave the secret place.Which they lie on the ground of the beach.Sora

explains his journey from beginning to end.While they share a few to many paupu fruits.
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Old December 5th, 2005, 04:05 AM   #2
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I know this is in thw wrong section, but my little brother >_> wants it here because he want alot of people to see.
Don't care what your little brother wants, it's still in the wrong section. This is fanfiction so it shall go to an entire section dedicated to fanfiction. And the title is very misleading.

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Old December 5th, 2005, 04:08 AM   #3
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Sad ending for BHK.:( Good thing that it's not the real ending.:)
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Old December 5th, 2005, 04:18 AM   #4
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Uhm...Ok, I'll come out with it. This is crap.
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Old December 5th, 2005, 07:30 PM   #5
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Umm... okay. Umm... okay again. What was that? It was not crap, but... very bad. Almost crap.


Why the hell did he even write this, anyway?
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Old December 5th, 2005, 09:50 PM   #6
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dont be meana guys.....even though it kinda sucked.....
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Old December 6th, 2005, 01:40 AM   #7
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me: Uh... no comment...

Mireille: That's what he always says if he sees something really bad. No offense.
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Old December 6th, 2005, 12:47 PM   #8
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I know your little brother is only but that was still a bit bad. By the way, who typed it because there are a lot of spelling errors in it.
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Old December 15th, 2005, 11:20 PM   #9
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