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Re: Abandoned Heart (THE ULTIMATE YUNA HATER FIC!)
Old February 25th, 2006, 11:07 PM   #76
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Yeah, you did. Everyone knows I'm the best liar on this site.

When I'm lying.

Sometimes I'm brutally honest.

But you'll never know when, because I'm a liar.

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Re: Abandoned Heart (THE ULTIMATE YUNA HATER FIC!)
Old February 25th, 2006, 11:11 PM   #77
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Who's that n00b?

Oh well, updart.
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Old May 17th, 2006, 04:14 AM   #78
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Chapter 13: It's Dangerous Business Walking Out Of Your Front Door (underOATH)

Yuna lay shocked on the floor. The cold planks beneath had chilled her face. Struck down by her own child, her own flesh and blood. She stared at the faces who stared back at her, almost mockingly. Kanynt's cold blue eye had turned to Ketso. He looked down at his sword and put his hand on the hilt. Kanynt flicked his thumb and let the sword fly out of its sheath and into his other hand. He held it up to Ketso's throat. He smirked as he watched his brother swallow what could be his last breath.

In the other room, adjacent to Kanynt's back, Rikku had laid her head on Gerard's torso. She heard his heart beat grow faster and faster. He began breathing at a regular rate again and she smiled. She kneeled at the side of the bed to watch him rise from his sleep. She heard Kanynt's threats in the other room. She turned back to Gerard and pressed her lips onto his cheek. Gerard opened his eyes in a smile, but he began to hear Kanynt's evil speech in the other room as well.

"Now, brother. This situation seems all so desireable. For me, at least. Unlike you, who had enjoyed living a happy life, until now. Now, I control your fate. Tell me, what's it like with Father? Are you happy? What's it like to have a mother who isn't ashamed of you?" Kanynt said, his voice booming so that everyone could sense his anger. "Do you know what it's like growing up knowing that you're a bastard child?"

Each of these words tore at Yuna. Every syllable was a dagger, cutting away at her very heart. She watched as Kanynt had almost burst into tears. Watching his eyes forming sad tears, she tried to stand up. Now, more than ever, she was sorry. The same could be said about his "father." Gerard laid in bed, careful not to make a sound. Rikku was just as scared as he was, but not for herself. But for Kanynt.

"...Rikku?" Kanynt asked. He watched as Rikku put away the last of the dishes. She had finished cleaning up the table after dinner, which was only attended by Kanynt and herself. It was quiet at the table. Rikku turned around to see Kanynt slouched upon the table with his hair covering his face.

"Hm?" she smiled. She pulled a chair from under the table and sat in it. She slouched herself into the same position as Kanynt. He moved his head up to see a pair of smiling bright emeralds on his "aunt's" face. The thing about his family, was that he couldn't tell if it really was one. It all began with Gerard. He was the father of Ketso and supposed husband of Rikku in the future. Yuna, Kanynt's mother, gave birth to Kanynt, having the father being Gerard. Yuna was also Rikku's cousin, which made his mean only more immoral.

"...Do you love Gerard?" Kanynt asked.

"Well, of course! That's a silly question. Why would you ask something like that?" she asked, still smiling, but unbeknownst to Rikku, even after his promise, he still continued being the same unfaithful character he was.

"You do realize that..." he said sitting up. He looked at her smile. Would it be wrong to bring about sorrow to such a jovial angel? His only words were, "Ignorance is Bliss," he murmured to himself. Rikku asked for him to repeat himself, but he disregarded the request. It would hurt too much to watch her cry.

"C'mon. Your mom should be back any minute,"

"It's not as if I cared. She could leave as long as she wants,"

"Aww... Why is that?"

"Not like you'd care," he said.
Rikku pressed her mouth close to Gerard's ear. She opened her mouth to whisper.

"Gerard... I know this might be too late, but it's better late than never. We need to be strong. I don't want to be worried about who you're with, when you're with them, or what you're doing. I want complete faith that you love me and you'd never do anything to hurt me. And knowing that I don't have that is eating at me, and eventually, this'll leave me a hollow shell. Tell me you love me and that you always will," she said crying. Gerard put his hand on her face and opened his mouth, but the door was kicked open.

-End Chapter-
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Re: Abandoned Heart (THE ULTIMATE YUNA HATER FIC!)
Old May 17th, 2006, 04:19 AM   #79
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*kills Yuna, Kanynt, and anyone else who would've entered the room at that time*

YOU *********************!

D:<

As soon as someone knows a cussword that long, please inform me. :3
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Old May 17th, 2006, 04:28 AM   #80
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*kills Yuna, Kanynt, and anyone else who would've entered the room at that time*

YOU *********************!

D:<

As soon as someone knows a cussword that long, please inform me. :3
You're in the room too.

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Old May 17th, 2006, 03:59 PM   #81
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o.o

...Kanynt better get his SWORD away from Ketso, or I'm goin' UKBARM on his -coughfinecough- ass. <.<;

-chucks softball at Kanynt's HEAD-
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Old May 17th, 2006, 11:41 PM   #82
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o.o

...Kanynt better get his SWORD away from Ketso, or I'm goin' UKBARM on his -coughfinecough- ass. <.<;

-chucks softball at Kanynt's HEAD-
You seem like a very easy person to blackmail.

._.

I'mma tell Kanynt.

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Old May 18th, 2006, 12:26 AM   #83
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YOU BETTER NOT OR I WILL KILL YOU. WITH A SOFTBALL UPSIDE THE HEAD. D:<

Like that one lady ... in that one movie....

Yeah. :D
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Re: Abandoned Heart (THE ULTIMATE YUNA HATER FIC!)
Old May 18th, 2006, 04:47 AM   #84
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Pickle, update.

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Old May 20th, 2006, 02:04 AM   #85
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Nice update!*Still feels sorry for Kanynt*
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