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The Untold Story
Old August 24th, 2005, 08:04 PM   #1
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Default The Untold Story

We all know the story. of how a young boy gained the power of the keyblade. How he joined together with a magician and a kinight to take on the evils of the world. How he saved both his freinds from the darkness. How he sealed Kingdom Hearts.

But.....

There is another story that was never told. A story of heroics and bravery. For you see, Sora, Riku and Kairi were not the only children fighting the heartless, or have you forgotten...........there were three other children who lived on Destiny Islands.

This is their story.

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The night sky turned black. Not even the stars could be sen as darkness covered the islands. The ground started to shake as the children all woke up. A young boy with spikey blonde hair awoke to find the world coming to an end. He looked out of the window to see 3 boats already missing from the docks. He quickly got dressed, picked up his fighting stick and made his way to the boats.

As he arived he was met by his two freinds, one a young boy a year older then him who was carrying a blue ball, and a girl who was wearing a yellow dress.

The three children stood there as they watched their island start to get pulled apart by a giant vortex in the sky. The young spikey haired boy ran forward towards his boat and jumped in, followed by his freinds. However fate would not let then join their other freinds.

Out from the ground shadows started to attack the group. They moved together to take a defensive position. As they gathered their strength the boy with the ball spoke to his freinds,

"Tidus, Selphie. What are these things?"

Selphie turned around and looked at the boy,

"I don't know Wakka. But we gotta save the village."

Tidus, Wakka and Selphie all dived forward and started to attack the shadows. They attacked with all their might, but their attacks had little effect on their opponents. The shadows moved closer and surrounded them, preventing them from escaping.

Then the wind picked up. The vortex had finished its business with the tiny island the children played on and was now focused on the village. Houses began to rip out of the ground and the grass was having trouble staying in the ground. the wind picked up even more and the children found themselves being taken from their places.

Tidus, Wakka and Selphie each started to grab each others hand, forming a triangle. They flew up into the sky, unaware of what lay ahead of them. They didn't know now but they were going to embark on an adventure which would help Soar save the universe.

(This is the first Fan-Fiction i've ever written so i'd appreciate any comments which you all have thanks.)
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Old August 25th, 2005, 12:55 AM   #2
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not bad my friend. Ill look for the next chapter i think.
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