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Sora Hearts and the hearts family book.
Old May 27th, 2005, 10:36 AM   #1
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Default Sora Hearts and the hearts family book.

hi,i'm making this story a spin-off of Sly cooper and the theievius raccoonus as the kingdom
hearts cast play this role of this story.

you guys will love it!;)
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Old May 27th, 2005, 10:54 AM   #2
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here's the cast role.

The Main characters

sora as sly cooper

larxene as Inspector Carmelita Montoya(hey she's cool)

ansem as Bentley(well we need the brains you guys know)

riku as murray(he will not be dumb like murray but a smart kid with good driving skills)

The Fiendish Five

vexen as sir raleigh

lexaus as muggshot

kairi as mz.ruby

axel as panda king(he use fire and fire is his favorite)

darkside as clockwerk

that's it!hope you love their roles.

see ya!
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Old May 28th, 2005, 07:04 PM   #3
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It's 4:05 in France,Paris in the morning in the town.then a shadow figure came running in
the rooftops then black wings came out from his back and fly though to the next roof and he jump again on to the Le police sign and he land safely in the ground.then his cellphone ring as he take it out and answer.the cellphone show a screen of a man wearing a long white cape,black pants,black boots,has tan skin and glowing orange eyes.

ansem:hey sora!are you there?

the shadow figure call sora is a 15 year old boy wearing a black jump suit,yellow shoes,
a necklace has a little crown hanging,deep blue eyes,brown spikey hair,short black jacklet
with two metals shoulder pads on his shoulders and holding in his hands is his weapon,the
keyblade.

sora:hear you loud and clear,ansem.

ansem:so you ARE in the police station getting information from larxene's office.

sora:sorry to left you two in a hurry but i need it to help us.

ansem:"sigh"don't worry and do you need anything to help you?

sora:yeah,tell me about this abilitiy call "high jump."

ansem:it powers up your jump,allowing you to reach higher places.

sora:thanks and see you inside.

sora use high jump and reach on the top then went inside the vent and came across laser
lights everywhere but see a open space then he jump down and take out the alarm system
and now inside the police station.then he run in the hallways and made it to larxene's office but its guarded with heavy strong forcefield.

sora:damn!its strong like larxene's lightning claws.

sora look to see a window open and he went outside then fly over to larxene's office and
go the safe then his cellphone rang and sora answer it.

sora:sora here.

ansem:you want the combine for the safe,right?

sora:yeah...

ansem:it's 2263.

sora put the number in and open the safe to reveal a packet has information on sora,take
the packet and take out a paper shape of a crown and put in the safe.

ansem:okay!come back to my mansion and we hold a meeting as you come back.

sora:got ya!

as sora get out the office and ready to fly away then a girl wearing long blue pants,red tank top,black jacket,short blond hair with two sharnd of hair standing in her hair,green eyes, red lips and she's holding those claws things jump to the screen.

larxene:stop right there,sora!

sora:ah!here's the lovely larxene!great to see you again.

larxene:yeah,yeah!don't be lovely dovely on me!

sora:ah and this gunblade is a gift for you.

larxene:which reminds me.you have to return to lord leon in blameb garden.

sora:naw its a cool blade and see ya,lovely!

she got very piss.

larxene:you bastard!

sora quickly fly away when larxene fire a lightning ball at him and this conutine when sora
saw a water tower then stop in mid-air and larxene make another lightning ball and fire.

larxene:now i got you!

but sora move away as the ball hit the tower and water came out and hit larxene as she
wash away in the shreets and scream at loud.

larxene:YOU WILL NOT GET AWAY FROM ME,HEARTS!!!!!!

the screen went black and show an FMV and sora narratored.

sora:its was a cool a moment and its good to see the lovely larxene doing and she was fine.as i heading home i look on the packet for information on the fiendish five and me.
it all started when i was 5, sitting on my father's lap.he gave me the family hearts book,you see i came from a long line of family thiefs and it shows my long line of families and their skills and we steal others thiefs stuff for ourself.as i about to inertered the book,five visiors came and attack us.my father try to fight them off but they kill him and find the book and i try to stop them but they open the book and rip off the pages and take it with them then they disappear in the world.then live homeless,i went to a home of kids with no parents, then i became friends with riku.we been together when ansem,a super rich man in paris,apdot us and me and riku are step-brothers then i learn that ansem is a friend of my father and he will train me to become a great thief and help me to find my family book and averge my father's death or if i failed then my families name will bite to the dust.

the screen went black.

hope you love it!
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Old June 1st, 2005, 09:27 AM   #4
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we see sora still flying in the sky then flew down when the screen show a mansion where
shows riku waiting outside.then he saw sora land down in the garden and run there to see
sora.

riku:hey bro!welcome home,safe and still the same.

sora:you too bro and where's ansem?

riku:ah talking to rachel.

sora:ohh!he really wants to married her.

rachel is a newib dancer in tango at hollywood that ansem met her when he is visiting a
friend of his and find her trying to practice tango but he help her getting better then they
fell in love.

riku:yeah and hey...you got what you need?

sora:yup!let's have the meeting now.

they walk inside and inside ansem's bedroom working to find one of the members of the
fiendish five.

riku:hey,this one is about vexen!

ansem:I meet him once in florida and he was a great teacher until he was kick out from
colloge when he had a affair with a student and married her.

then we hear sora's voice is talking.

sora:we find out about vexen,one of the members of the fiendish five and a very smart man and cold man.he was a teacher in colloge as he teach students until he had a affair with a female student name helen then they got married and she got pergneat and he then got kick out from colloge and helen lost her parents love and they kick her out.of course vexen then become a fiendish five in machines and he was last seen in los vegas.which i will get the pages back from him.

ansem:so are you ready to go?

sora:yeah!let's go guys.

riku:booya!Los Vegas here we come!

they got in the airship,Highwind,then fly off to vegas.

done and next chapter.
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Old June 1st, 2005, 03:19 PM   #5
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What the hell. You quadruple posted. That's a forum sin.

I can't even read the fanfic due to the several reasons: Bad puncuation, bad spelling, and it's in a damn play format.

Try correcting your grammar and I'll think about reading it.
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