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Old May 13th, 2005, 09:24 PM   #16
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chapter 6:the man who call DiZ

inside the train.

rose is sitting in her seat looking at the window then a waitress pushing the cart full of food
knock on the door and rose get up and open.

waitress:hello,may i give you something to eat?

rose:yes.

waitress:what will you like?

rose:two silce of cheese pizza,a sprite,and fries,please.

waitress:okay here you go.

rose:thank you and let me pay you.

waitress:oh don't worry,a man pay me to give you to eat.

rose:what?what does this man look like?

waitress:oh wearing red and black clothes and face cover with red bangles.

rose:ah..is he in the train?

waitress:yes,in first class.

rose:thanks.

the woman left and rose eat her dinner and finish then got out her room and came to first
class then look around and spot the same man who give her cash sitting in a chair then go over and tap him in the shoudler and he look up to her.

man:hello.

rose:hello too.

man:i see you got food to eat from the waitress.

rose:yes and thank you for it.

man:your welcome and sorry for zexion to gald you like that.

rose then felt uneasy about this man and how did he know what happened.

rose:who are you and how do you know?

man:very sorry of me to gave you my name.

man:my name is DiZ.

rose:DiZ is it and tell me what do you want from me?

DiZ look at her then smile which rose find it strange.

DiZ:you can tell me everything about you.

rose:why?

DiZ:i like to know you better and maybe we can be friends.

rose:um...but i bet my mom won't like this about being friends with a man.

DiZ:she doesn't have to know.

rose:...yeah your right about it.she doesn't have to know.

DiZ:so,you ready?

rose:sure.

rose told DiZ everything about her,the islands,her family and her two best friends,riku and
sora,and her pet shadow,hiei. which caught DiZ interst then ask her about hiei.

rose:i found her in the secert cave then i took her in because hiei was lonely and she need
a friend and love to take care of her.

DiZ:i see,a heartless has a heart.

rose:heartless?what's that?

DiZ:a being born from darkness in from people's heart and form to a creature,like hiei is but
it has a heart,very strange.

rose:don't talk to hiei that way in front of me!

DiZ:sorry because heartlesses attack people and steal their hearts.

rose:really?

DiZ:yes and i think you must protect hiei from people because they might kill her.

rose:no!i must hurry to that town and find her!

DiZ:it's all right.hiei might be with sora.

rose:yeah.

then suddenly the train stop.

rose:huh?

DiZ:your here in travrsetown.

rose:really!yes and i must find them.

DiZ:goodluck and becareful.

rose:bye and i hope to see again.

DiZ:same here.

okay rose is here in trasvrsetown but on next chapter.

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Old May 13th, 2005, 09:27 PM   #17
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if you wondering why i put the four people from chain of memories because i ain't
telling!:p

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Old May 14th, 2005, 04:44 PM   #18
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chapter 7:together at last

in travrsetown.

we see milliena and tenchiwalking in the first disrict looking for leon and to see the shreets is emtey.

tenchi:wow it sure is quiet around.

milliena:yeah let's go already.


they walk ahead to find leon and the screen move to see sora holding rose's book and hiei sleeping after the island disappear and then a man found them and take them to his shop.then sora and hiei woke up to look around and see the man who help them.

man:i see you two are awake and by the way,my is cid.

sora:um..thank you.

cid:yeah,yeah and i what you to ask something.

sora:what is it?

cid:why a heartless is with you?

sora:a what?

cid:a heartless.that little shadow next to you.

sora:you mean hiei?what's wrong with her?

cid:you mean you don't know what a heartless is?

sora:no!i don't know what it is or what they do.

cid:'sigh'they attack people for their hearts and steal them to become others.

sora:it that they did but why has to do with hiei?

cid:because she might be in danger from others like her.

sora:why?

cid:she has a heart and the others don't.

sora:are you saying hiei is special?

cid:yeah,because hiei once belong to ansem and his kid.

sora:who's ansem?

cid:leon will know.

sora:oh.

then sora started to panic and look around.

sora:wait!where's rose and riku!

cid:huh?who are they?

sora:my two bestfriends.

cid:nope,sorry sora don't see them.

sora look very sad.

sora:oh.

cid:but you might find them here.

sora:really!thanks and will you look after hiei for me.

cid:sure and careful.

sora then walk out the shop and then start looking everywhere as the others were looking
for leon and sora came back to cid's shop as a young man came out from the other side.

man:they will keep coming to you as long you weild the keyblade.

sora:hey,who are you?

man:nevermind that and let me it.

sora goes in battle poision with his keyblade.

sora:what!there's no way you getting it!

man:fine,have it in your own way.

they battle eachother with clashing beyblades and the man fire a fireball at sora then sora
knock it like a baseball and hit then man back.then the man jump high and slash sora at the arm and he cried out in pain as the man about to do it again.a figure run very fast and and use her keyblade to slash the man's legs and he fall down in pain and sora look up to see his savior and smile happy.

sora:rose!

rose:sora!are you okay?

sora:yeah and i'm very happy you are ok.

rose blush as sora said that and she look back at the man.

rose:yeah and sora,do you know a place to stay?

sora:yup.oh!y hiei is okay and she stay with a man name cid.

rose:that's great and let's go there,quickly!

they left the man alone and see a group of girls came running toward him.

leon,are you okay!

leon:yeah i'm fine,kairi.

who did this to you?

leon:two keyblade weilders,aerith.

aerith:i see.

are they a boy or girl?

leon:one is a boy and the other is a girl,yuffie.

yuffie:ah.

leon:but the girl looks very familier to me.

aerith:really?

leon:yeah and you three find out anything?

kairi:yeah,two people from Anime castle are here looking for the weilder.

leon:good,fine them and aerith will find the weilders of the keyblade.

yuffie:let's go!

that's it.

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Old May 17th, 2005, 11:08 PM   #19
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the chapters are here.:D
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Old May 18th, 2005, 12:06 AM   #20
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chapter 8:learning everything to know

we see sora and rose running inside in cid's shop and cid look at them.

cid:whoa!what's wrong?

sora:we ran away from some guy after this weapon.

cid:really and who's this young lady?

rose:my name is rose,sir.

cid:nice to meet sora's girlfriend.

sora and rose then blush very red and sora scream at cid.

sora:she's not my girlfriend and she just my bestfriend!

rose:(still blushing)yeah like he said!

cid:whoa,whoa take it easy!

the outbrust cause hiei to woke up then see rose with a happy squeak and jump to rose's
arm then purr in her crest like a cat.

rose:hiei!your okay!

cid:yup.this little guy been sleeping waiting for you and sora.

rose:hiei is a girl.

cid:opps!sorry.

rose:hey,where's my mom and sister?

sora look down to the floor.

sora:i don't know where they are?

rose:huh?but i saw you with them coming to me and riku.

sora:i know but then you two disappear and a huge black monster came then i fought it.
then the giant ball suck the monster and we hold on to dear life but we got suck too and
that's all i remember.

rose look down to the floor with saddness then sora walk over to her and hug her for support then they hear the doorbell as it open.

they look up to see leon with others in the doorway.

leon:hello.

sora:its that man who attack me!

cid:leon!what are you doing here?

leon:to speack with the two keyblade weilders.

sora:you know him!?

rose:sora calm down! let them talk and we might know what's going.

sora:grr...fine.

rose:go on.

leon:thank you.

milliena:yeah!we been looking for you two.

sora and rose:you are?

leon:they been looking for the keyblades and you guys.

rose:why?

tenchi:because we need you two to find our princess.

sora:your princess is missing.

tenchi:yeah,excel found a note from her and we came here to find leon and you.

milliena:at least we got you two!

yuffie:let me ask you two something.

sora and rose:yes?

yuffie:have you heard someone named ansem?

sora:no,who's that?

aerith:he was our king in our homeworld but he disappear when the heartless took over
our world and he was researching the heartless too.

sora:we sorry to heard that.

leon:yeah and he had a daugther too.

rose:what happened to her?

leon:we don't know what happen to her.

aerith:she was very special to ansem because his wife pass away when she gave birth to
her child and ansem take care of her everscine.

rose:i see.

then everything begin to moving if a earthquack is here and everyone go outside to see
what's going on.

the boss is in the next chapter.

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Old May 19th, 2005, 02:55 AM   #21
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it's done and next chapter to go.
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Old May 19th, 2005, 02:57 AM   #22
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hiei is a special heartless with a sercet and rose some how know everything it saying.
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Old June 14th, 2005, 05:58 PM   #23
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what happen with the rest?
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Old June 14th, 2005, 07:10 PM   #24
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hey something happen with my story?
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Old June 17th, 2005, 01:48 AM   #25
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this really sucks!oh well i just skip to arrive in hollow bastion but sora and rose seal the other keyholes from the worlds came to hollow bastion and it's that okay with you,Monkey
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Old June 17th, 2005, 01:56 AM   #26
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Yeah just go from where you left off.
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Old June 17th, 2005, 06:32 PM   #27
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thanks and hollow bastion,here i come.
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Old July 9th, 2005, 08:23 PM   #28
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