Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! - Page 3

Lanydx reborn · November 7th, 2009, 12:10 AM

Well this is good. Sora get all the facts straight

TwilightRiku_13 · November 7th, 2009, 01:31 AM

Oh man, Sora doesn't want to have Xion come back. Well, it is probably for the best, seeing as bringing her back will affect him negatively. I expect a major battle between him and Roxas over this situation. So, Xehanort was trying to turn Roxas into an Unversed? That's kind of what I gathered from what you wrote, but I'm not sure as to why Roxas. Is it because he is a special Nobody? I hope you explain it some more; I am quite confused. Also, are you going to say who wrote the Unknown Reports? The three you have written so far were all written by different people. I hope you do. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

Dawn Rebirth · November 7th, 2009, 05:11 AM

I'm pretty sure, his link to Grace Assasin's theory is self explanltory TR13.

Hypertech · November 7th, 2009, 01:22 PM

Sora doesn't want to bring Xion back because of the way Mickey portrayed the Unversed. Sora thinks that they are evil like the heartless and (debatebly) Nobodies. I'm getting writers block... I just don't know how to introduce the new characters... Maybe I'll hold off their into for a bit...

Lider
Age:17
Weapon: Whip-keyblade
Description: A teenage girl Nobody who has long, black hair which goes down to her waist. She has vibrant blue eyes and wears a martial arts outfit with a black belt. She is quite tall, and never seen without several lesser Nobodies surrounding her.
Personality: She is cocky and arrogant. She never runs from a fight and tries her best to fight where-ever possible. She likes to hang around with strong and tough people so she can test herself.
Likes: Battles, fights, war, winning.
Dislikes: Losing, weak people.
Bio: She has had her whip-keyblade as long as she can remember. It works just like a keyblade, but it can bend and change lengths, making it ideal for a whip. No-one knows if her black belt is real or not, as she only uses her keyblade and lesser Nobodies to fight.

I'm no good at drawing, but I'm going to try to sketch out some Manga versions of the new characters, so you may not see a new chapter for a couple of days.

Chaosmax · November 8th, 2009, 09:18 PM

I really like ur fanfic so far bro, also is Lider's keyblade like how Terra's being able to stretch out like that or in a different way? Real nice mystery surrounding the unversed, I think ur the first fanfic to actually have it. also how many people can/could use the keyblade in this story.

Fire's fan · November 10th, 2009, 05:07 PM

Pretty good so far, keep it up!

Hypertech · November 13th, 2009, 10:00 AM

I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while. In my school we do our science and IT GSCEs early, so I've been doing schoolwork :) I should update soon though- nearly done task one of IT. That should give me some free time.

Chaosmax · November 14th, 2009, 12:38 AM

Itz okay just take ur time hypertech, this story iz good don't try to rush it like I do. Can't wait for the next chapter, itz getting epic

November 7th, 2009, 12:10 AM	#31
Lanydx reborn Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: CA Posts: 138 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! Well this is good. Sora get all the facts straight

November 7th, 2009, 01:31 AM	#32
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! Oh man, Sora doesn't want to have Xion come back. Well, it is probably for the best, seeing as bringing her back will affect him negatively. I expect a major battle between him and Roxas over this situation. So, Xehanort was trying to turn Roxas into an Unversed? That's kind of what I gathered from what you wrote, but I'm not sure as to why Roxas. Is it because he is a special Nobody? I hope you explain it some more; I am quite confused. Also, are you going to say who wrote the Unknown Reports? The three you have written so far were all written by different people. I hope you do. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

November 7th, 2009, 05:11 AM	#33
Dawn Rebirth Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: on the top of the light house in Dawn Bay eating some sea-salt ice cream Age: 14 Posts: 237 Rep Power: 1 Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! I'm pretty sure, his link to Grace Assasin's theory is self explanltory TR13. Last edited by Dawn Rebirth; November 13th, 2009 at 01:34 AM.

November 7th, 2009, 01:22 PM	#34
Hypertech Nobody Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Behind the truck in the world that never was. Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 1 Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! Sora doesn't want to bring Xion back because of the way Mickey portrayed the Unversed. Sora thinks that they are evil like the heartless and (debatebly) Nobodies. I'm getting writers block... I just don't know how to introduce the new characters... Maybe I'll hold off their into for a bit... Lider Age:17 Weapon: Whip-keyblade Description: A teenage girl Nobody who has long, black hair which goes down to her waist. She has vibrant blue eyes and wears a martial arts outfit with a black belt. She is quite tall, and never seen without several lesser Nobodies surrounding her. Personality: She is cocky and arrogant. She never runs from a fight and tries her best to fight where-ever possible. She likes to hang around with strong and tough people so she can test herself. Likes: Battles, fights, war, winning. Dislikes: Losing, weak people. Bio: She has had her whip-keyblade as long as she can remember. It works just like a keyblade, but it can bend and change lengths, making it ideal for a whip. No-one knows if her black belt is real or not, as she only uses her keyblade and lesser Nobodies to fight. I'm no good at drawing, but I'm going to try to sketch out some Manga versions of the new characters, so you may not see a new chapter for a couple of days. Last edited by Hypertech; November 7th, 2009 at 08:03 PM.

November 8th, 2009, 09:18 PM	#35
Chaosmax Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: .......In the Keyblade War Age: 14 Posts: 124 Rep Power: 3 Currently playing: NBA10: The Inside Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! I really like ur fanfic so far bro, also is Lider's keyblade like how Terra's being able to stretch out like that or in a different way? Real nice mystery surrounding the unversed, I think ur the first fanfic to actually have it. also how many people can/could use the keyblade in this story.

November 10th, 2009, 05:07 PM	#36
Fire's fan Heartless Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Hitting your cat with a baseball bat. Age: 16 Posts: 64 Rep Power: 1 Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! Pretty good so far, keep it up!

November 13th, 2009, 10:00 AM	#37
Hypertech Nobody Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Behind the truck in the world that never was. Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 1 Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while. In my school we do our science and IT GSCEs early, so I've been doing schoolwork :) I should update soon though- nearly done task one of IT. That should give me some free time.

November 14th, 2009, 12:38 AM	#38
Chaosmax Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: .......In the Keyblade War Age: 14 Posts: 124 Rep Power: 3 Currently playing: NBA10: The Inside Level: EXP:	Re: Fatal Memory (a KH fanfic) WARNING: Includes spoilers for KH:Days! Itz okay just take ur time hypertech, this story iz good don't try to rush it like I do. Can't wait for the next chapter, itz getting epic

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