October 12th, 2009, 03:18 PM
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| Heartless Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Twilight town with my friends noming on some ice cream Posts: 57
Rep Power: 1  Level: EXP: |  Raining Darkness Prologe Mist felt rain. She hated rain she hated getting wet at all, but this rain was different. As soon as the first rain drop hit her pale skin, she froze. Unable to move she called out to her friends, but her lips wouldn't form the words. Without being able to move or talk Mist started to panic. Help! She tried to scream. Then the darkness faded around her all she could she was black. That was when she thought she was going to die. Chapter 1 When Mist woke up she was in a white room, the darkness was gone. Thats all I have so far enjoy! |
 
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October 12th, 2009, 04:13 PM
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: wonderland. Age: 14 Posts: 495
Rep Power: 1 Currently playing: Pokemon Sapphire. Level: EXP:   |  Re: Raining Darkness That was extremely short. I like your details, but I can't know anything from just these sentences. I look forward to more. |
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October 12th, 2009, 04:21 PM
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: watching Adam Lamber's AMA performance with Axel (dont wacth around young ones. trust me. *_*) Posts: 570
Rep Power: 1 Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days (Day 302) Level: EXP: | Re: Raining Darkness short, but awesome. try to make the next one a little bit longer. |
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