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Old October 19th, 2009, 09:21 PM   #16
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Thank you Chaos. What did you like and not like (specifically) and do you have any advice for how I can improve?
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Old October 20th, 2009, 12:09 AM   #17
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actually i like the part about the letter for riku and how you showed emotions and descriptions. you were spot on *thumbs up* there was nothing really wrong with it. It was awesome to me 8D
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Old October 20th, 2009, 12:11 AM   #18
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Thank you for the review.

Sorry, I try to get all my reviews like that, I want to know how I can improve, and what people liked specifically.
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Old October 20th, 2009, 12:30 AM   #19
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you are welcome anytime i hope you write something relating to riku and kelsie i bet it be great like this one ^_^
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Old October 20th, 2009, 12:38 AM   #20
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I am writing Identites... when I finish Timefixer. Rilsie will play a part in there... it is where I found the pair.

There is Rislie ins WotU and Dawn of a New Key.

And I'm doing some Rilsie stuff (happy) for Dawn of a New Key too.
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