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| Araliya, Crimson & Gildragon's Xion Registered: Jan 2008 Location: 12 to go Age: 23 Posts: 14,373
Reputation: 22 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth; Rayman 1 for the PC Level: 57 EXP: | Warning This contains spoilers up to and including Day 353. Warning Goodbye "Goodbye", she said to him, her face bright, her tone of voice cheerful. "Goodbye", she concluded, a moment before she turned and vanished into the gap in reality behind her. He doubted he'd see her again. "Goodbye". Protecting the things she cared for the most, was it? To the point she herself mattered not. He could relate, he knew, as the breeze made the sashes of his blindfold shift along with his hair. So he could protect his most important person... his very best friend... there was no other choice. This much he knew. And yet why was it that when she turned around, all he could find in his heart was doubt? Bitterness? Regret? This girl he's only known for so long, donning both a number and the coat, with a face so much like hers - like theirs, and an unwavering smile, just like his - and words, brave, heartbreaking words - all her very own. His feet detached from the ground as she made that final step. His voice formed her name, only to be carried out by the wind, reaching no one. His hand reached out, only when there was no longer anyone to reach out to. His fist clenched as he simply let it drop to his side, only to be slammed against the nearest wall. This was... for Sora... -Never see her again- This was for Sora... -She's never done anything wrong- ~Do you hate me for taking away your friend?~ This is for So- ~Nah.~ What right do you even have to want anything selfish?! -Why do I keep losing people?!- His world, his friends... Sora... eventually Naminé, no doubt, Diz would never let her... and now... now... His shoulder met the wall as he slumped against it, his covered eyes staring unseeingly at the spot the Dark Corridor was at mere moments ago. His breathing was heavy as he reached to wipe his face, only to growl momentarily at the moistness that gathered behind his blindfold. If that was how things were to be... He actually wished he could forget her already. "Goodbye... Xion." Last edited by Smile; October 9th, 2009 at 07:13 PM. |
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| [E Pur Si Muove] Registered: Mar 2009 Location: Breaking Stuff Age: 18 Posts: 4,096
Reputation: 7 ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Final Fantasy Dissisia, 358/2 Days Level: 28 EXP: | B-eautiful. There is so much emotion. |
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| For the deeds of today resonate.... | Aw, gorgeous, Smile. I can't believe I've added another het pairing to my like list. They're so cute. :D |
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| Married to Leonard ♥ | I'd say this is "3S"; Short and Sweet, without forgetting Sadness. ;w; I love it, Smileee. <3 |
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| Dual Wielder Registered: Oct 2007 Location: Wandering outside in the cold, looking for someone to love. Age: 20 Posts: 642
Reputation: 3 ![]() Currently playing: Chrono Trigger Level: EXP: | Wonderful, simply wonderful. Emotional and at the same time utterly final. |
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| Nobody Registered: Jun 2009 Age: 19 Posts: 3
Reputation: 1 ![]() Currently playing: The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks and Fire Emblem: Shadow Dragon Level: EXP: | It's been too long since I've read a new fic from you, Smile. :< But you do deliver well, as usual. Now I just need to wait for the gravity to sink in... |
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| Organization Member | oh wow. that was awesome. i hope you post more soon |
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| Stain me Red with Blood Registered: Feb 2009 Location: Somewhere where you can't spoil me Age: 16 Posts: 2,208
Reputation: 6 ![]() ![]() ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | Oh darn, this is so much better than my level of writing! I need more practice XD |
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| Enigmatic Soldier Registered: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 875
Reputation: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Hooray!!! You're back and writing. Always glad to see your stories, Smile. That was absolutely beautiful. Very emotional; I love those types of stories. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| Araliya, Crimson & Gildragon's Xion Registered: Jan 2008 Location: 12 to go Age: 23 Posts: 14,373
Reputation: 22 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth; Rayman 1 for the PC Level: 57 EXP: | Quote:
Spoilers The result is before you. Quote:
Thank you all for your comments ^_^ glad you enjoyed | ||
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| Stain me Red with Blood Registered: Feb 2009 Location: Somewhere where you can't spoil me Age: 16 Posts: 2,208
Reputation: 6 ![]() ![]() ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | Hm, probably should have played Xion's theme when I just wrote my Rion fic today... When it gets to the interaction I really messed up. That much I realised. |
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| Keyblade Wielder | I love the emotion. Its beautiful. <3 |
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| I'm still RoseateDawn. :P Registered: Sep 2009 Location: Hiding inside Riku's closet. Posts: 1,316
Reputation: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Final Fantasy: Crisis Core, BlazBlue & Magna Carta II Level: 9 EXP: | AWWMYGOD, that is so beautiful. <3 |
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| Sidekick Registered: Jun 2009 Location: CA Posts: 278
Reputation: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | That was so sad. Snif, but it was good. I enjoyed it. |
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