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| love it to bits | | 3 | 100.00% |
| it's ok | | 0 | 0% |
| nah, not my type | | 0 | 0% |
| What the hell where you thinking woman!!! | | 0 | 0% |
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| | #31 |
| Dual Wielder | I might not be able to post too fast since I'm not allowed on the internet as much as I was allowed before. I'll try and post more chapters with the time today. Last edited by varsha; November 2nd, 2009 at 12:16 AM. |
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| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 10 DARK LANDS : THE CASTLE Eva punched a man in her way from goin inside a room. "Why are you acting agressive? I thought we were the nice guys?" asked Chaz smirking all the way. Eva punched him in the guts and laughed. "What am I supposed to do? These guys won't compromise?" asked Eva smiling. Chax held onto his stomach sighed. "Fine, but please don't ever do that to me again" pleaded Chaz walking up to Eva. "Whatever, hey look, these guys are smarter than they look" answered Eva pointing towards a camera. "So what? we're not going to award them or anything?" asked Chaz shooting a fire ball towards the camera. "Yeah, but this means we gotta be careful, there are traps all over this place and they could activate one if they know where we are standing" answered Eva looking at Chaz. "How about we plow through here instead?" asked Chaz. ".... Why didn't you do that sooner?" asked Eva looking at Chaz blankly. "Heh, I wanted to see how well you knew me" chuckled Chaz before he grabbed a wing shaped stone. He hled it up and it lit up with white light. White curved beames of light hit the stone and then it exploded creamy blue light before showing a giant white bird like creature. "Lets go" answered Chaz jumping on. Eva juped on as well and the bird started to fly. "What will happen if one of us dissapears?" Eva asked out of the blue. "Eh? why'd you ask that?" asked Chaz raising an eyebrow. "I don't know, your are my partner" asked Eva laying down. "Yeah, I know, don't worry if one of us dissapeared the other would have to find another with pure light" answered Chaz. They had a moment of silence until the bird squaked. "We're here" answered Chaz pointing towards the window. They jumped in and saw a man holding a shot gun shivering in the corner. He had one black ripped wing and red hair gelled back that matched hi red pants and red T-shirt. "St-st-stay back" hesitated the man. Eva rolled her eyes and then shot a white band out and crushed his shot gun. "Now, about the light" answered Eva walking towards him. DESTINY ISLANDS : RIKU'S ROOM Eva portaled in after talkign with the man and saw Riku asleep. She sighed and then walked over to his desk. "Where would he have put it?" she thought rustling through the papers on his desk. She looked around and then found what she was looking for. "Just as they said, a person still filled with a high amount of darkness will have one of these. She looked at it and sighed. It was a black crystal chained up. She picked it up and sighed once more. "I'll put it back before he wakes up" she thought opening a portal and leaving. Riku sprung up when she was gone and then looked concerned. "Eva.... why would you want that type of summon gem?" he thought before falling asleep again. |
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| | #33 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Huh, what does Eva want with that summoning gem? What does this gem do? Man, so many questions, but no answers. I hope all will be explained soon. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #34 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 11 HEART OF THE WORLDS: CENTER Eva stood in middle of an giant, white, empty room with the walls going up where you couldn't see the end. "I have the dark summon crystal, and light summon crystal, I hope this works" thought Eva before grabbing the dark chained crystal and a light glowing crystal. She smashed them together and then a giant explosion of colours and smoke happened and then a girl figure and a boy figure showed up. "I wonder who summoned us?" asked the boy figure. "Shut up" grumbled the girl figure. When the smoke form the explosion dissapeared a girl with bandages covering her face apart form her mouth and right eye appeared with a boy with golden hair and a pure white slightly tanned face appeared. "Are you two the heros of the dimension?" asked Eva. The girl turned her face and looked at Eva. "Yes we are, who are you?" asked the girl. The girl was not short and taller than Eva with a slim and well built body, had brown skin, you could tell by the skin around her mouth and her eyelid, black hair with a small badage band around the top, a blue eye, bandages all over her body, black t- shirt, black skinny jeans, brown big coat, black shoes and a gun hodler with a gun in it starped around her right thigh, she was atractive in a way. The boy was a two inches smaller than the girl but he had a strong fit body, had golden short blond hair, a bright face, white t-shirt, white skinny jeans, white shoes, a watch on his wrist, white wings, he had an atractive look as well. "My names Eva, I need your help on finding the light" answered Eva bowing her head in respect. These two poeple where very important, they were the ones who restored the light when it was first missing, that was back when Chaz worked alone, in return Chaz granted them never ending youth like he had, they were the symbol of light and darkness, they could never live without each other. "You need to find the light once more? That Chaz guy is not reliable is he?" sighed the girl. "Aww, cheer up Radiance, Last time was the only time it happened remember?" answered the boy hugging Radiance. "Please don't hug me Shadow" grumbled Radiance. Shadow let go of Radiance and then looked at Eva and smiled. "Sure we'll help, how Chaz doing?" asked Shadow. "He's uh.. fine I guess" answered Eva thinking about their weird names. "I don't think Shadow and Radinace are their types of name" thought Eva. "Ok, follow me, Chaz is in our small headquarters making some food" answered Eva walking out the door with Rika and Shadow following. HEART OF THE WORLDS: EVA'S AND CHAZ'S HOUSE KITCHEN "Nics to see you Chaz boy!" yelled Shadow running over to Chaz and hugging him. Radiance just hid her face in emmbarasment. "Why does he do things like that?" thought Radiance. "Nice to see you too" smiled Chaz getting out of his grip. "Well, tell us every thing" answered Radiance. They sat down and Chaz explained about Eva and that the light was stolen and how they need to get it back. "This should be easy" sighed Radiance. "Eva, you'll go and meet up with Riku and give back the summon crystal, I'll go with Radiance and Shadow and find the light" answered Chaz. "Ok" answered Eva nodding before openeing a portal and going through it. Last edited by varsha; November 11th, 2009 at 09:18 PM. |
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| | #35 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Okay, Rika/Radiance sounded like she looked like Diz in KH2, mostly because of the bandages wrap around her face. I wonder why she has those bandages wraped around her face. Hm, just curious. Also, the Shadow kid sounds annoying, but in a good way. So, those two are here to get the light back. You know, they say it will be easy, bit I have a feeling they will have some trouble. Oh well, guess we'll have to wait and see what happens. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #36 |
| Dual Wielder | Where'd you get the Rika name from? Oh and there are bandages all over her body, not just her face, thought I should say ^^ |
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| | #37 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | You had the name Rika in the chapter, but I think you edited out. I'm pretty sure that is what I read, but sorry if it wasn't. I just assumed Rika was a nickname for Radiance. Oh, and thanks for telling me about the bandages, but I'm still curious as to why she is covered in them. Oh well, all will be revealed in due time. |
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| | #38 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 12 DESTINY ISLANDS: RIKU'S ROOM Eva sneaked in popping her head around out of the closet. For some reason she ended up there. "The cost is clear" she thought before comming out and closing the door behind her. "Nice of you to show up with my crystal" answered a voice. It was Riku who was next to the closet door leainging on the wall. Eva's eyes widened and she smiled hiding the crystal. "W-what crystal?" asked Eva walkig backwards away from him. "Come on give it" answered Riku moving in on her. Riku ran to her trying to reach behind. They were close together, alarmingly close. "I don't know what your talking about" smiled Eva moving her hand with the crystal out of his site. "Come one give it" whispered Riku. Unlike Eva people could still hear him. They kept dodging each other until Eva was backed up on the bedside. They tripped and fell one each other with Riku on top staring straight into her eyes. “Here you are” answered Eva shocked. Riku didn’t show it but you could see in his eyes he was surprised. There was a sudden silence between them until someone knocked on Riku’s door. “Hey Riku you in there?” yelled Sora. “Uh coming” answered Riku taking the crystal and putting it away. “Why did that feel awkward?” thought Riku opening the door seeing Sora back to his normal self. He was wearing black track pants and a grey hoody. “Want to go to the islands?” asked Sora. “Sure” answered Riku. Sora smiled and walked down the stairs. When Riku was sure he was gone he closed the door and turned around looking at Eva who was now sitting up on the bed hanging her head down in shame. “Why’d you take the crystal?” asked Riku. “You were asleep and we needed to use it for something” answered Eva. Riku sighed and put the crystal away in a draw and then walking over to her. “Come one, lets go” sighed Riku. “Your not mad?” asked Eva springing her head up meeting his eyes.. “No, as long as it was important, I’m ok wit it, but ask next time” answered Riku turning around and walking to the door. Eva sighed and followed him out the door, down the stairs and outside where Sora was. |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Hooray!!! You're back and updating!!! It's been awhile, and I've been missing this. I really liked the awkward moment between them; that made me laugh. I so love the dynamic between Riku and Eva. They are just so great together. I got a question, will Eva ever make herself known to the others? I hope she does. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 13 DARK LANDS: ALLEY WAYS "Why are we here again?" asked Chaz. "The people that live here have light in them, that's what you need for the heart of all worlds, any way why did you want to come?" asked Radiance kicking a stone around. The dark lands alley ways had black walls and dark purple brick roads all over the place, nothing was ever different. "Radianace! thats not a nice thing to say" yelled Shadow pulling a face. "I'm not nice though" whispered Radiance. Shadow pulled his tounge out of her and then corssed his arms. "Well, I came because last time I didn't have time, but now I do" smiled Chaz when they stopped at a door. "This place is and underground tavern, the biggest bar in the city, we'll surley find a big bunch of people to take light from here" explained Radiance opeig the door that led to stairs going down to a strangely bright red light. "Um, is that red light normal?" asedk Chaz. "No.... something here killing them first" whispered Radiance putting her finger on her lips making a hush sign. She slowly walked down slidding her back on the dusty wall filled with grafitti and cobwebs. "Wait, you guys didn't say anything about killing" snapped Chaz keeping his voice down. "How do you expect we get it? they won't hand it to us in a paper bag" whispered Shadow. Radiance was at the bottom and took a peek inside before running back up fast. "What's wrong?" asked Shadow before Radiance pushed him and Chaz to the ground and shut the door with a terrified look on her eye. "What's wrong what did you see?" asked Shadow. "G-g-giant sp-sp-spider" whispered Radiance running and hiding herself in a giant bin. "..... A giant spider.... your scared of a giant spider" answered Chaz not impressed. "She's only scared of the over sized ones that are about bigger than a human, it's kind of a phobia she has, we got rid of the phobia for normal sized ones you can see, but not these big ones" explained Shadow running over to Radiance and looking at Radiance who was suckign her thumb in the space she had. "Come on out Radiance" answered Shadow. "N-n-no!" yelled Radiance. "Come on" answered Shadow reaching down. "No!" yelled Radiance turning her head. Shadow grabbed her and fell down the bin after her. "Come on, other wise I won't stop huggin you" yelled Shadow hugging her tight. "Get off me" mumbled Radiance. Shadow squezzed tighter and Radiance came jumping out folding her arms, she was going red behind her bandages. Shadow came squirming out and got up on his feet. Chaz stared at them with his mouth wide open. "You use hugs to force her to do somthing?" asked Chaz. "Hey, she doesn't like the cuddly stuff" laughed Shadow. "I'm still not going" mumbled Radiance. "Fine, we'll go" answered Shadow. They were about to open the door before the ground started to shake. A giant crack started to form infornt of Radiance and the giant spider that she taked about came flying out. "Crud, guess she had a reason to be that scared" yelled Chaz summoning a giant sword that he had to lay across his shoulder to keep steady. The spider looked at Radiance that was trying to squirm away, and then jumped forwards and swalowed her in on shot. "Oh no, now I'm mad!" yelled Shadow sumoning two blades that shone white light. "Ready, here it comes" yelled Shadow as the spider directed it's attention towards Shadow and Chaz. |
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| | #41 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Wow, Radiance is afraid of giant spiders. Well, I guess I can't blame her, I'm afraid of all kinds of bugs. So, those guys are going to kill to get the light from people so they can replace the light of the worlds. I wonder how well that will turn out. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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