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| love it to bits | | 3 | 100.00% |
| it's ok | | 0 | 0% |
| nah, not my type | | 0 | 0% |
| What the hell where you thinking woman!!! | | 0 | 0% |
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| | #16 |
| Keyblade Wielder | strangely, and horrifcally, i do. O_o |
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| | #17 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 4 THE ISLANDS: RIKU'S ROOM Riku sat on his bed looking outside the window in different clothes than what her wore to the island. Riku was growled at by his mother, he had to make up many reasons to why his clothes were ripped. Riku was now wearing a coral blue long sleeve shirt, dark blue pants and white socks. "Where is she?" thought Riku looking around. "Riku! what do you want for dinner?" asked his mother from down stairs. "Stir Fry!" yelled Riku. The afternoon was not as hot as the day, the cool breeze was hitting his face ever so gently that Riku could feel like he was flying. "Sorry I'm late Riku" whispered Eva from behind him. Riku flinched and nearly fell out the window. "Eva! don't do that!" yelled Riku freaked out. "Sorry, but now is not the time to worry about that" answered Eva sitting next to Riku on the bed. "Whats wrong?" asked Riku. "There is something wrong with the light of all worlds, something causeing light to become less visible to people that have been pure with light not see it, even though Sora was a heartless once he is still fully pure" answered Eva looking Riku straight into his sea blue eyes. "How?" asked Riku tilting his head. "Thats what I'll find out... Riku, there is another person here that works to keep the light in balance, he-" answered Eva before she got cut off. "Wait, he!! Eva, I thought you were the one that only had to go!" yelled Riku moving closer to Eva. "Don't worry, the guy is a good freind, well he is to me" chuckled Eva. "And who might this HE be?" grinned Riku. "Well, lets just say he is only a good freind because he keeps buying me lunch, and because I have to give him daily bashings to keep him in balance" smiled Eva. They both laughed like they used to and stopped for a while. "But, how will you get the light fixed?" asked Riku. "By getting a new light bulb, or in this case pure light" smiled Eva standing up to stretch. Riku looked at her and couldn't help but look at her new clothes. She finally started to wear dresses, she had a long blue and white dress like the ocean that reflected the light. Riku stood up and hugged Eva from behind her. "Please don't leave me again" whispered Riku nudging his head on Eva's. Eva out her arms down and turned around. "Don't worry, I won't" whispered Eva before giving Riku a peck on the lips. "Riku! I'm comming in now!" yelled his mother from the other side of the door. "Oh no, she might start to think I'm insane kissing the air" moaned Riku widening his eyes. "I'm gald you think I'm thin" grinned Eva getting out of Riku's grip. The door opened and Riku's mother came in. She was wearing a yellow frilly dress like they used to wear in the sixties, her face looked young and beautiful with a slight serious look in here eyes, her eyes were sea blue like Riku's. "Who were you talking to?" asked his mother with a soft honey voice. "No one" shrugged Riku. Eva stood right in the middle of them and Riku's mother's face was right in front of her's. |
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| | #18 |
| Keyblade Wielder | OMGGGGGG this is suspenseful!! Its sad how eva is invisible :( Can't wait for the next one! |
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| | #19 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Hooray!!! We are gonna see some action, baby!!! So, something is going on with the light of the worlds. Is it because of the Heartless? If it is, the worlds might be screwed because those guys don't have their Keyblades anymore. Also, how is the boy helping Eva? I really have no idea how it could be. And is Eva really dead? I mean, the way you wrote it made it sound like she was but wasn't at the same time. Well, if she isn't, I really hope she comes back. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #20 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 5 DESTINY ISLANDS: RIKU'S KITCHEN Riku sat on his chair eating something his mother called suprise patty. It was shaped like a circle but was all over gray and yellow. "Mum, what did you say was in these?" asked Riku going pale. "A puishment for getting in a fight with that handsome man" sighed Riku's mother. Riku poked out his toung in disgust. "Xemnas CUTE!!!! What is wrong with my family" thought Riku. "Son, why aren't you wearing your uniform?" asked his father in a dep voice with his face behind the news paper. Riku was wearing a white button up shirt with black pants, a shell necklace around his neck with one shell stuck to a peice of fishing line, blue socks and a brown belt wrapped around his left leg. "Mufti day" sighed Riku. Riku never even once saw his fathers face, even when he was a baby, he was more interested in the news than his own son. Riku sneaked the suprise patty in his pocket and put away his plate. "I'm going mum" answered Riku as he opened the door. "Good bye" replied his mother before giving him a sloppy kiss on the cheek. "Dear, why do you find that teacher so atractive?" asked Riku's father. "Because he actually notices me, unlike you" mumbled Riku's mother. Riku's father sighed and kept on reading. DESTINY ISLANDS: DESTINY HIGH Riku walked up to a bin near the entrance and threw away the suprise patty he took. "Can't belive mum is that cruel" mumbled Riku under his breath. "Why don't you just buy some cereal?" asked Eva popping up behind him. Riku jerked forward and slipped on a appled core that was not thrown away and got thrown into the bin. "Warning next time Eva!" yelled Riku from the bin. "Sorry Riku!" yelled Eva before helping him out. "How can I know where you are so that one day I don't jump off a building!" yelled Riku fustrated with a piece of old bread in his head. "What do you expect me to do? wave my hands like a monkey!" yelled Eva waving her hands like a maniac. Riku frowned and walked off. "Aw come on Riku, here I got you something to eat" answered Eva walking next to him. Eva handed over a sandwich filled with shredded carrots, lettuce, mayonase, cheese and ham. Riku looked at the sandwich for a moment and then sighed looking at Eva with sad eyes. "How do you know what I like?" asked Riku looking away. "I'm your girl freind, how else do you think, oh and I know what everyone else likes because like is light stuff" smiled Eva. Riku turned back to Eva and then took the sandwich. "Now, something about you I want to know, is it true that if you did exist when we were all puny, you would have a secret crush on me?" asked Riku smirking. Eva got a shade of red on her cheeks and turned her head away from Riku's gaze. "W-why do you ask??" asked Eva hesitantly. Riku grinned and hugged Eva kissing he on the cheek. "Just curius" smriled Riku. Eva smiled and stuffed some of his sandwich in his mouth. "Eat or you wil starve, I know you like to not eat anything but a sandwich is healthy" smirked Eva. "Sound like my mother already" smirked Riku. "Hey Riku!" yelled Sora wearing even more different clothes. Sora had changed his hair and made it look black and styled like zexions, gothic lipstick, skull earing, look black coat, long tight leather pants and big black boots. Riku's mouth opened wide after Eva's. "What the hell is wrong with Sora?" asked Eva. "I have no idea" answered Riku. "Hey, do you like my new look, cool right?" asked Sora doing a twirl when he reached Riku. "You look a like a goth slash emo!" yelled Riku. "No I don't" protested Sora. "I think your the one that needs help, not the retarded kids" giggled Riku. Eva giggled alongide Riku before she stopped and started look around. "What's wrong, whispered Riku under his breath so Sora couldn't hear. "That boy that woks with me, is inside" whispered Eva. Riku looked onward toward the door. "Looks like I'll finally meet this guy Eva has to work with" Last edited by varsha; October 21st, 2009 at 05:43 AM. |
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| | #21 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Okay, seriously, is Eva dead yes or no? I ask because the way you are writing it tells me that she isn't dead, but I'm pretty sure that Eva died at the end of your last story. I think I have to go back and read the end of your other story just to be sure. So, now we get to see the guy who is helping Eva. I wonder who he is. And Riku's mom likes Xemnas? It would be really funny if Riku's mom divorced his dad and married Xemnas; that would make things really awkward between Riku and Eva. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #22 |
| Dual Wielder | Nah Eva's not dead. she's the person that keeps the light in balance with that boy, I'm gonna post later on this week or next week. I'm not sure when cause I got lots of stuff to do and I can't really make the chapters too fast. |
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| | #23 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Oh, okay, now I get it. Thanks for the explanation; I was really confused. Anyway, I look forward to the next update. |
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| | #24 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 6 DESTINY'S HIGH : HALLWAY Riku, Sora and Eva entered the hallway and looked around. People were all over the place getting books and running to classes. "Never seen the school in a buzz like this" answered Sora shocked. "Me ether" answered Riku looking around for the boy Eva talked about. "Hi Eva!" yelled a sudden boyish voice. "Hi Chaz" smiled Eva looking straight towards a boy. He had a noble look with blong hair tied in a pony tail, green eyes, a dimond earing, tanned skin, tall musly look like Riku's, a white singlet, black skinny jeans and bulky black shoes. "Uh Sora I'll see you later" answered Riku walking towards Chaz. "Ok" answered Sora before walking in a diferent direction. Riku approached Chaz who just stood there staring at Riku. "So this is your boyfreind, he looks a little old for you Eva" answered Chaz glaring at him. Riku glared back and already they had become enemies. There was a moment of silence between them for a while. "Your not my dad so zip it" snapped Eva breaking a short silence. "So you have to work with a snoty jerk" grumbled Riku. "At least I'm not the one that's dark" mumbled Chaz. Eva looked at them glare at each other while haveing a confused face. "Um... did I miss somthing?" asked Eva looking at them funny. "No Eva you didn't, I was just seeing how this 'freind' of your is since your my 'girlfreind'" explained Riku looking back at Eva. "Hmmm, I really already don't understand what you see in this guy" shrugged Chaz. Eva looked at the two bickering and smiled while wondering what was wrong with them. "Well, I'm going to class, you want to see Xemnas again?" asked Riku looking at Eva. Eva smiled and nodded. "Sure, why not since he was so attached to me, but I'm glad I'm a memory and not related to him" giggled Eva. "Well, I'll se you back at the core later" answered Chaz before dissapearing. When Chaz was gone Riku started to speak. "I don't like him" mumbled Riku. "You got no choice, I have to work with him, if I don't who knows what will happen" shrugged Eva. "But he looks so, I don't know, perfect?" shrugged Riku looking away. Eva cuddled him and gave him a kiss on the cheek. "That is just what happens when you have a girl freind Riku, you find a boy that becomes my freind and you think he's a threat" giggled Eva. "When did you get so smart on this stuff?" asked Riku looking at Eva. "I read books too Riku" giggled Eva. "Yeah, romance novels" laughed Riku. "What, their nice" shrugged Eva. |
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| | #25 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Oh boy, I predict a rumble between Riku and Chaz. Well, I guess that is what you get when you mix jealousy and testosterone. So, do Riku and Chaz know each other from some other time? Or does Chaz just know of Riku from just things like rumors and stories. It just seemed like Chaz already knew Riku. OH well, I'm sure all will be revealed soon. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #26 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 7 "Ok now... Riku your late, thats not like you, one weeks detention!" yelled Xemnas as Riku walked throught the door. "What! But I just came late!" yelled Riku. "Fine, five days!" yelled Xemnas. Xemnas was wearing black pants, a lab coat, pink button up long sleeve top with a blue tye, and black shoes. Riku lunged over and walked to a desk at the far end of the room. "That was rude" whispered Eva hiding in the shadows. "Yeah, but I tell you he's out to get me Eva" whispered Riku. "Just because We're an item? Now thats harsh, I'll talk to him after class" whispered Eva. "What, but he's now fully light" whispered Riku. "Yeah but he spet more time in the darkness than you so I should be able to talk to him" whispered Eva. "Who are you talking to?" asked a girl with blond hair. Riku made a small jump on his cahri but made it look like he just turned his head. "Oh hi Lana, no one" sighed Riku calming down. "Oh, hey heres the hand out Xemnas wanted me to give you" answered Lana. She was wearing a short skirt with white stockings, red shoes, white t-shirt with a black jacket over the top that had fluff at the end of the sleeves, her face was very soft looking and she had unusual yellow eyes with natural red lips. Riku took the hand out for science and started to write his name on it. "Ok se ya" smiled Lana walking away. "She new?" asked Eva. "Yeah" answered Riku. "Ok I have to go, see ya later" smiled Eva before dissapearing. |
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| | #27 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Hm, do I detect some jealousy in Eva towards the new girl, Lana? It definitely sounds like it, especially with her just disappearing like that. Man, I cannot wait to see how this all turns out. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #28 |
| Dual Wielder | Ok long time not post XD ... ok that was dry but I don't care. CHAPTER 8 DARK LANDS :ALLEY WAYS Eva stood in the middle of a dark alley way wearing a black hoody and black pants while holding a terrified man with giant scars on his face. "Tell me what you know or I'll have to slowly kill you" whispered Eva. "I don't know nothing, I just went to the bar and saw some guy saying the light of all worlds is gone! please let me go!" yelled the man, he was wearing a ripped T-shirt with ripped jeans and blue sneakers. "Who was this guy!" yelled Eva slaming him onto a wall. "He lives at the old abandoned castle with his heartless minoins, thats all" answered the man pointing to the castle that the Organization had built. "Thanks" whispered Eva before throwing him into a pile of rubish. "That was a little dark Eva" yelled a familiar voice. She turned around and saw Chaz holding a two lunch boxes. "I just needed to get information" answered Eva before walking over to him. "Riiiight, it's got nothing to to do with Riku" answered Chaz handing her one of the lunch boxes. "What! why would you think that?" asked Eva slightly going red. "Well for starters, you kept your fist clenched eversince your said good by to him" answered Chaz pointing at Eva's clenched fist. Eva let her fist go and then sighed. "How about you tell me why you kept fighting with Riku?" asked Eva opening her lunch box and eating a sandwich. "Well, Eva that guy must have been popular with girls, and he might hurt you that way" answered Chaz eating his sandwich after opening his lunchbox. Eva threw her sandwich at Chaz's face and then frowned. "You mind your own buisness!" yelled Eva. Chaz wiped the sandwich off his face and then smiled. "But you are my buisness" laughed Chaz. Eva rolled her eyes and headed for the castle. "I don't think we'll be able to handle this by our selves, we'll need to ask my freinds for help" answered Eva. "Sure, but remember Riku is the only one that can see us" answered Chaz walking next to her. "Yeah I know, lets just get more info about where the light is" answered Eva. |
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| | #29 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Wow, I don't think I have ever seen Eva act like that before. I mean, I know she can fight and all, but it was a little strange seeing her just beat the crap out of some random guy she ripped out of a bar that she probably wasn't old enough to go into in the first place. Now, even with that being said, I really liked seeing Eva beat that guy up. So, is Chaz some kind of guardian of Eva or something? He definitely sounds like it. And who took over the old Organization castle? Can't wait to find out. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #30 |
| Dual Wielder | CHAPTER 9 DESTINY ISLANDS : THE ISLAND Sora lay on the sand with a black eye and a red swolen face. "Hah, I win again!" yelled Riku pointing at Sora's pathetic look. "Sora, I told you to lose the punk outfit" sighed Kairi. Sora stood up, he was still wearing the same stuff he wore to school. They were out on the island doing some sparing as usual. "What? I like this look" shrugged Sora. Kairi went over to him and punched the top of Sora's head. "If Riku can't knock any sense into you then you won't be allowed to eat anymore of my mums cooking!" yelled Kairi. Sora rubbed his head and then stood up. "Hey we haven't seen your mum for a long time" answered Sora. "I know, she's always busy making food for the new restraunt" sighed Kairi. "Don't worry Kairi, lets go help her out, we might get some free food" chuckled Sora. "Thats all you think about moron" laughed Riku. Kairi laughed along and after a while Sora joined in. "Come on, lets go" answered Riku. They ran out to their boats and raced each other to the shore, as usual Riku came first, Sora second and Kairi third. "You get changed, you know how Kairi's mum hates goths" answered Riku running off. DETINY ISLANDS : THE RESTRAUNT The restraunt was filled with people eating different kinds off food that came form different parts of the worlds. "Looks like we came in time" answered Riku walking over to the back of the kitchen with Kairi and Sora. The kitchen was filled with different smells of food and differnt looking type of poeple. The kitchen was larger than it looked form the outside, it was like a world class kitchen. They walked toward the west side of the kitchen and saw a lady with red hair like Kairi's but she was a a little obese. "Hi mum!" yelled Kairi over the noise of crackeling fish. The lady turned around and smiled. She webt over and hugged her. "Nice to see you Kairi, you ok?" asked Kairi's mum. "Yeah, we thought you might need some help, Sora was looking for some free food after helping" laughed Kairi. Sora was going red with emmbarasment and then smiled. Kairi's mother might have been a little over weight but she was still very beatiful. "Well I have some work for you, do mind gettign these orders to the tables?" asked Kair's mum showing five plates in a row filled with different types of food. "Ok, come on guys" answered Kairi enthusiasticly. They each picked a plate and headed off to their tables. They finished after a few minutes and then sat down to eat after giving out the extra ten plates. They got handed some burgers and french fries. After a while they finised and SOra and Riku waved good buy to Kairi and headed home. DESTINY ISLANDS : RIKU'S ROOM Riku sat on his bed and yawned. "No sign of Eva, maybe she'll come tommorow" thougth Riku before resting on his bed and falling asleep. |
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