True Love: The Renji and Rukia Story

[13courtgarud75]

k i have writters block so im gonna write a little bit.

Chapter 4


As Rukia fell to the floor Rongiku appereared in the room and caught Rukia as she feel. Rongiku ran to the clinic five miles down and bursted through the doors.

"Please help her. She expecting a baby."

The nurse saw that Rukia was losing color in her face and blood began to spill out of her mouth. The nurse brought a stretcher and took her to the only avalible room. The doctor who had gave rukia a clear liquid wich should regain the color in her face and awaken her.

-3 hours later-

Rukia awoke and found a note by her bedside. It read,

"Rukia I'm sorry I wasn't here when you woke up but i went to go look for Renji.
love,
Rongiku."
When Rukia read the letter she grabed her clothes and ran out of the clinic without a word.

To Be Continued

[Shadow-Love]

Hey, this is a pretty good story. I just have a little critisism. Could you make the chapters longer? I like it so I'd appreciate more to read at a time.

[13courtgarud75]

Contiued:

Chapter 4:
Mystery

As Rukia was running down the road she saw Ichigo talking to a mysterious man in a black coat.

"ICHIGO!!!"

Ichigo turned and the man in a black robe disappered. Ichigo ran to rukia.

"Hey Rukia. Umm.Whats going on."

"Nothing Much. How was that?"

"Oh no one just myyy...."

Ichigo went blank. His eyes widened. Rukia heard a roar and turned around.

"RUNNN!!!!!!!"

Behind Rukia and Ichigo was a hollow. A hollow is a soul entity that has no mind. Rukia ran as fast as she could. Her ankles had begun to swell that morning. AS she ran up and down verious roads. SHe began to tirer. Ichigo began to get further and further away. Then Rukia fell flat on her face and couldn't get back up.

*stab*

Rukia turned to see Renji standing in front on her and covered in green slime. The hollow was on the floor disinagrating.

"Renji"

"Rukia im so sorry. I just couldn't handle it."

TO Be Continued...

[Bellaisima358]

Um...what just happened??? Im not that good with bleach....its bleach right? <<<To prove my stupidity

and Its getting better, reg. Describe a bit more.

[13courtgarud75]

This fanfiction really has nothing to do with bleach besides the characters.

Chapter 5:
SURPRISE and sode no shirayuki

"Renji, your back. WHy'd you leave?"

Tears began to fall down her pale face and hugged Renji.

"Its okay... lets go home." He said with remorse.

Renji and Rukia began to walk to their apartment in Karakuar Town.

-the next day-

As Rukia arose from her slumber she felt her stomach.

"Renji, WAKE UP!!!"

Rukia shoke Renji untill he awoke.

"I have a belly."

Rukia began to jump with joy. As she was jumping she began to feel nasiated.

"Oh God."

She ran to the restroom and threw up.

-later that day-

As Rukia was taking her daily strole down the neighborhood she felt a akward arua.She turned and anonced her zanpakuto(spiritual sword).

"Sode No Shirayuki"

This zanpakuto is the most beautifulest zampakto in the soul society.

"Dance number one:some no mai, tsukishiro"

Some No Mai, Tsukishiro allows you to freeze anything in the circumferance from the area you stabed. The strnge arua that was following her showed it self. IT WAS A HOLLOW. Rukia ran and sliced the ice pillar in half and the hollow. vanished.

As she landed she saw the man she had seen the night before in the black robe. He begins to clap.

"Great job Rukia. Great job."

To Be Continued...

[Traskix]

ahh i missed stuff!! and im confused lol

[Bellaisima358]

Ok...confusion. And either way, I don't get the bleach characters. DONT JUDGE ME!

Nice. its getting a lot better.

[13courtgarud75]

aww thanx lol ill update you tomorrw k.

im gonna try to post another chapter soon.

[13courtgarud75]

Chapter 6:
The mystery reveals him self

"Great Job Rukia, Great Job." said the man in a black robe as he was clapping.

Rukia looked up in surprise and readyed her zanpakuto just incase she neede to ruff him up alittle.

"Come my child. Come to me."Said the man as he motioned to her.

Rukia felt a force overcome her from the pit of her stomach to run to the man.She began to run and run until she was rapped in the mans arms.

"Sleep my child, Sleep." He put his cold long candle like fingures on her eye lids and closed them.

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Rkia woke up in dark room and felt her body to see if she was okay. SHe had felt that her clothes were different. The were silk and not the clothes she was had on before.

"how changed my clothes." she said to her self.

"I did." a short blond ,with a cherry blosom in her hair, appered next to her.

Rukia was starteled.

"Hi im Akemi." the blond said. She was beautiful, waearing a black tank top, had sky blue eyes and a bright aura to herself. "Whats your name?"

"Im rukia Kuchki, Member of th 13..."Rukia was cut off in the middle of her sentence by a boy on the opposite side of her.

He put down his hood and revealed his medium length hair, pale skin, and cherry red lips.

"Yuu dont be so rude." Akemi said.

"Hey Hotaru, can you just put her to sleep again?"

Rukia figured the man in the black robe was Hotaru.

"Be nice to our guest." Hotru commanded. Akemi and Yuu shake in fear.

"Hey Hotaru, cani open the blinds? Ineed my sun." Akemi asked.

Hotaur didn't reply but Akemi knew his answer. Rukia saw the alarm clock next to her.

"Wait what ow is it 6:30 already?"

As soon as Ruki finished her question the room she was in began to shake furiously.

" What the hell? Whats going on?"

[Traskix]

Whoa okay that was mysterious!!!

[13courtgarud75]

hehe thankyou. i try my best.

[Seeshinamaru13]

o.O wow this is so interesting... RenjixRukia is my favorite pairing.
I loved ch 2 it was so funny.
I can't wait to find out what happens next.

[13courtgarud75]

Special Thanksgiving Thread

"Are you ready?" Hotaur shouted as he brought put the turkey.

"I got the stuffing!" Akemi said.

Akime brought the stuffing to a large table in the extravigent meeting room.

Rukia ran and took her seat. She was carving turkey, stuffing,crnberries, gravy, and mashed potatoes."Hurry up!!!!" shouted Rukia, "Keeping a pregnate woman hungry isn't good for your health."

A few of the ther bount colonies joined them at the table and began passing the food around. Akemi began to move round in her chair and stood up.

"Why don't we go around the table and say why were thankful."Akemi suggested.

Hotaru thought about it for a few second. "I like the idea. I'll go first. I'm thankful for having the experience to be here with all of you."

Yuu stood up and began to talk. " Im thankful for being alive, and still kicking."

Akemis stood up and said, "I'm thankful for Yuu," she blushed"Hotaru. rukia,..." she continued for another 2 minutes, then one of the members from another coloney cut her off.

"I'm thankful for having friends to spen time with." said the male member.

The entire table turned and faced Rukia. They saw her swallowing peices of turkey whole.

"um...Rukia it's your turn."Said Akemi in a soft voice.

Rukia looked um and began to...talk."wel...maumaush," she was mumbling.

"Rokia. RUKIA!!!! Your talking with your mouth full.

SHe swalloed. "I'm thamkful for having great friends and a wounderful husband..." shebegan to cry,"and..my wounderful baby thats on the way."

The enitre room was filled with consoling remakes like"it'll be okay Rukia."

They continued to feast and consoil Rukia. The party continued on.

-HAPPY THANKSGIVING PEOPLE!!!!!

Eat someturkey and alot of pie.

Pie Rocks

-From
13courtgarud75

[Traskix]

awwwww Happy Thanksgiving. I want pie now, Thanks!