His Blazing Path (ch.9)

[Disc Jockey]

Good idea, varsha.
Sorry you guys, but I have had NO time for writing. Hanging out with my friend on Saturday ruining my typing time, and I have school and stuff, and since my parents are split up I have to go to my Dad's house at 4 and there's no computer at his house... and ARGH!! I promise on Wednesday I will get to typing!

[varsha]

I can wait^^ (Not like I said that before lol)
Sad to hear your parents are split up, just asking, if you feel uncompfortable don't answere.
Now does it feel to have your parents split up?

Any way, I write most of the time in school, it's better because the computer doesn't restart and there is broadband! (Also because I'm a loner)

[khfreak17]

woah.... this is really good. i cant wait for the next chapter

[Disc Jockey]

Originally Posted by varsha

I can wait^^ (Not like I said that before lol)
Sad to hear your parents are split up, just asking, if you feel uncompfortable don't answere.
Now does it feel to have your parents split up?

Any way, I write most of the time in school, it's better because the computer doesn't restart and there is broadband! (Also because I'm a loner)

Nahh, split parents are fine with me. The broke up quite a while ago, so I'm used to it. But my dad's computer SUCKS so that's the only negative.
I can't type in school because I don't have time. That, and this website is my second life. My friends don't really know about it, and I'd be embarrassed to tell them.

Originally Posted by khfreak17

woah.... this is really good. i cant wait for the next chapter

Thank you SO much. Coming from a pro-writer like you, that means a lot :)



FINALLY! A NEW CHAPTER!!! Putting it up now :)

[Disc Jockey]

Chapter Four: Arrive

------------

“Well, what?” Axel said as he jumped from his sleep. He looked around, and found Namine sitting opposite side of him.

She laughed and said, “Well you finally woke up, sleepy head.”

“Uh, sure, okay. So what are we talking about again?”

“You asked me what kind of information the Twilight Town residents were used for,” Namine replied.

“Oh, right. So what were they used for?” Axel said, still dazed.

“Well, they’re used for information about… Number XIII. Roxas.”

“Who’s Roxas?” He cocked his head.

“God, you really don’t remember anything, Lea.” Namine put her hand to her head.

“I’m not Lea. Tell me who Roxas is.”

She sighed, and continued. “Roxas is a nobody, like you and I. He was… well, actually, he was your closest friend before you left.” Axel started to make a comment but Namine put her finger to his lips. “Ask questions when I’m done. Anyways, Roxas was a valued member of the Organization. But he… rebelled, sort of. He is still a member of the organization, but he isn’t needed. Personally, I think Roxas was one of the most important members. But when he acted out, I sure as hell changed my mind. I haven’t seen him in an extremely long time. But when you’re Lea again, he’ll be back… I know it.”

“Okay, two questions. What do you mean by, ‘When I’m Lea again’?” He said nervously.

“Ummm, well… where we’re going is… a special place. It’s where your somebody is being placed. He is in a pod, sleeping… kind of. What’s strange is that, you shouldn’t even be here. Your somebody was turned into a heartless at some point, we know this as a fact. But what we don’t know, is how he turned back into a somebody. Something must have opened up his heart again. We don’t know what it is, though! It’s bothered us for a very long time. Yet, the Organization has a feeling that when you become Lea again, you will know, and you will tell us. I feel so silly talking about Lea and calling him ‘he’ when half of him is sitting right here…”

“So, what your saying is, I’m going to go to Lea, and never be… never be me again? Seriously?” He widened his eyes.

She breathed heavily, and closed her eyes. “Axel, yes. I’m sorry. But you will be whole. You might look different, and maybe act different too, but you will feel… invincible. Like nothing can hurt you….,” she coughed and continued, “Okay, anyways, umm, what? Okay okay, so anyways, when we get to this place that we’re headed… I need to, um, leave.”

“Where do you need to go?” Axel immediately started worrying.

“I need to um… ummm… I need to visit someone.” She looked around violently.

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah, yeah, I’m fine. There’s just someone I need to see, soon.”

“Okay, well, can I ask my other question?” Axel pushed.

“Yes. Ask away.” Namine closed her eyes.

“Okay, well you said that Roxas rebelled,” he put his finger to his cheek and said, “What do you mean by that?”

She laughed nervously and answered. “Roxas, as you know, was a valued member of this Organization. He knew all of our, ahem, plans. And he used these plans, and made them his own. And ruined everything. The organization is still recovering from the chaos. He ran away after that, and we cannot find him. We need your help. That is our main plan for you. We need you to join us, and find out where he is. You’re the only one who knows to fit in. You’re the only one who will be whole—“

“Wait! Why do I have to join with you guys? Is it a necessity?” He folded his arms and pouted.

“Well… yeah, for the most part…” Namine looked at Axel with pleading eyes. She really wants me to join… Axel thought.

“Okay, fine. I’ll be a part of your Organization. But I swear, if you guys are up to aythi—“

“Yeah. Trust me.”

Axel looked away for a few minutes. He stared out the window. Surprisingly, he didn’t seem to mind that the outside was just flatlands. Twilight Town is a very busy place. Why would there be flat land outside? There’s no farms, just… just all land. He wondered, but didn’t ask questions, for fear that Namine would become upset.

The train started to slow, and the flat land started changing. What was once grassy plains was now a starry, groundless, nothing. It seemed as if he were in space, but the surroundings didn’t quite match. It was starry, but there was also a greenish haze. Almost like a sunset that just keeps on setting.

The train halted to an abrupt stop. Him and Namine got up from their seats, stretched, and started to walk off the train. Axel looked out of the train door, and couldn’t believe his eyes. What he saw was a massive, oversized mansion. It was almost like a castle, but this was extremely big. He jumped off and headed towards it.

Namine ran up to his side. She grabbed his shoulder to make him stop. “Axel,” she looked away, “Welcome to Castle Oblivion. And, this is where I leave.”

“Namine…” He turned her head back to his view.

“No, I can’t. You don’t know what’s in there, who’s in there. To go in there, you need to be brave, and don’t give up. Go in there, get what your looking for, your somebody, and bolt. I will be waiting on the edge the bushes here, meet me there when you get out.” She pointed to the foliage on the outskirts of the strange land. “And Axel…”

“Yeah?” He opened his eyes bigger.

“Please be safe.” She pecked him on the cheek and reached into her pocket. She pulled out her white gloves, opened a portal, and left.

Axel just stood there for a minute. Did she… kiss me? He couldn’t really believe what was going on. But he shook it off for the moment, and turned towards the castle. He started to walk, and couldn’t help but notice that there were no noises. None, whatsoever. Axel was a few feet from the door when he finally heard small voices.

“Yeah, I know, dude. But what happens if he gets here sooner than we thought? We’re so screwed.”

“Don’t say that. Don’t even think that. We will know when he gets here.”

“Aah! Seriously! We won’t know! We’re not psychics! Jesus Christ, I’m getting out of here!”

“Shut the hell up, would you?! God damn, let him come here! I can take him all by myself!”

He leaned against the door closer when he felt nothing to lean against. He fell on the ground and let out an “oomf”. He got on his knees and shook himself off. Axel looked up, and found a well-built man with long, gray hair and a devilish smile. The man watched as Axel attempted to regain his balance.

“What’s your problem—“

“Be quiet. Why do you ask questions when you don’t know any names? If you are wondering, my name is Xemnas. And this beautiful mansion is my Castle Oblivion.

You’re here earlier than we thought. Come inside.”


End of Chapter Four

I am actually really proud of this chapter. It took me MUCH longer than I thought, but I like it. Comment please, and enjoy :)

[varsha]

Oh I like whats happening so far.
*gasp* Namine kissed Axel this early!
I don't know whether to squel, or be worried.
Why?
because a kiss this early mean some really bad stuff's gonna happen.

I' don't think you should be to emmbarrased about your second life on the computer.
I show it off, I really don't care what people think.
But then I don't have freinds to get emmbarrased over^^
Exept here but they basicly do the same stuff as me.

[Disc Jockey]

Tee-hee about the kiss ^^

Yeah, only one of my friends know that I play video games. Gasp!
"That's like totally social suicide!" xD

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, what the hell is going on? Is Namine working for the Org. or not? What the hell did Roxas do that was so chaotic? Man, I'm just really confused, but I'm sure all will be revealed in due time. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[Disc Jockey]

Sorry for confusion! All will be revealed in short timing, probably not this chapter, but the next. I'm addicted to cliffhangers. :D

[Abbot]

...So, I was reading this. Quick question, when Axel overhears Xemnas, which one is Xemnas, and who is he talking to? Cause I found that conversation crazy amusing. xD

Keep it up, I like this.

[Disc Jockey]

1st person was Xigbar.
2nd person was Xemnas.
3rd person was Demyx (if you couldn't already tell xD)
and 4th is Larxene.

And thanks! :)

[Abbot]

Oh, I didn't know there were more than two. I kinda figured the 3rd would be Demyx, so I assumed the first was, too. But still, haha, awesome.

But seriously, take your time. Quality takes time. Look at how long BBS is taking. :P

[Disc Jockey]

Yeah thanks. I was about to say didn't i already describe them? but that's in the next chapter. xD
sorry, awful coomputer atm.
and lol at the bbs comment. that's so true!!

[varsha]

You know, this story title sounds like it's going to be way different from the title.
just saying^^
But then you can remind me of my mistake when it does go back to the tile theme, heh ^^

[Disc Jockey]

That's funny, I was thinking the same thing.
What should I change it to? I'm awful at story titles. ^^;