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Old October 17th, 2009, 06:14 AM   #76
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*Jumps up looking alert* oh, it's just you lot
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Old October 17th, 2009, 05:53 PM   #77
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Yay, new chapies! Wow, a lot of stuffs happened. Riku fell in love with Haruhi (That was a great part,) Sora and Kairi came back and now this Seama person. I wonder what will happen next? (And oh noes, next week will be the end?) I will look forward to it. Great jobs! :)
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Old October 18th, 2009, 02:10 AM   #78
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Wow, you sure posted a lot of chapters; it took me a while to read them all. Man oh man, there was a lot of stuff going on in those chapters. The part where Riku admitted his love for Haruhi was the funniest part to me. Her total confusion of the situation made me laugh. Also, the castle that Sami, the Goddess of Kingdom Hearts, lives in sounds absolutely awesome; I would love nothing more than to live in a place where nothing can get dirty, seeing is how my house is an absolute mess from remodeling the bathroom. Okay, I have a question, at the end of the last chapter, did the feathers that Sami gave the Host Club turn into Keyblades or something? I was confused at the end when Sami (atl least I think it was Sami) said KEYBLADERS at the very end. Just like a little clarification. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
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Old November 3rd, 2009, 02:57 AM   #79
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Hey people! I'm so sorry for making you wait so long, i was having problems with the demons of the internet (viruses) so I couldn't get on. But now that I"m back I'm giving you the next chapter! I hope you love it!

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Stuck in the Host Club
Ch. 19
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Riku stared at the Club in confusion.

“Whoa,” Sora said, “Keybladers? Riku you didn’t tell us they had Keyblades.”

“That’s because they didn’t,” Riku said shaking his head. “Look, we’ll settle this later but right now we have to get to Seama.”

“He’s right,” Kairi nodded. “But at least you guys can fight with us now,” she grinned.

“Alright let’s go,” Mickey said. “I’m glad we have more fighters, now we can finish off Seama and return this world to balance.”

Riku stopped Mickey and turned around. The whole group stopped and looked at Riku confused. “Guys… I’m sorry for what I said… I…”

“It’s alright, Riku,” Tamaki said. “We… I know you didn’t mean it. So don’t worry about it, we’re here to help you now.”

“Yeah that right!” Honey exclaimed.

“Yeah, even though you did hurt our feelings…” the twins started to cry (it was obviously fake) then they surrounded Haruhi. “Besides, we know you were just saying that so we would protect Haruhi while you were gone,” they were very close to her face as they hugged her.

“Guys…” Haruhi complained.

Riku groaned but maintained himself and gently pushed them off. “Get off of her.”

“This is great and all but let’s get going,” Kyoya said.

“For once I agree with you,” Riku said.

And with that the group headed out. With their blades swing gracefully, and slicing their enemies they were getting closer and closer to their enemy… Seama.

~Mean While~

“Neo Shadow, take the wheel,” Seama commanded. She stepped away from the wheel of her gummi ship. She leaned on the banister and thought. Seconds later a map appeared in front of her. “What world should I destroy now?”

She scanned the digital map that was in front of her. Her finger, soft but filled with evil, poked around the map, she looked at three worlds, and she needed one more world… one for Mickey, how she hated him. Riku was cute so she might keep him as pet, and but Sora smelled of light, he as just as much light as Mickey. Kairi could be a maid but she had the most light out of all of them. She could burn Seama, Kairi’s light was so bright.

Seama groaned, ‘I just need one more… one more world for that rodent. One more… one more…’ she looked around then she face-palmed. “Of course! Disney Castle! Why not destroy his world?!”

“Captain!” a Nobody called over the radio. “Captain! Captain?!”

“What is it?”

“The prisoners have escaped and they had reached the stalls!”

Seama groaned. ‘Rat! That rat did this! He somehow got out and now he’s reaching my strong hold! That rat!’ she made a fist and the digital map vanished. “Kill them! Kill them all!”

“Yes cap-…” the Nobody was dead. She could hear him being sliced and then slowly being diced.

Seama backed off, shock filled her, they were moving quickly. She had to act fast.

“Things never go the way you want them to… do they Sister?”

Seama almost jumped at the voice but calmed when she realized who it was. “Why are you here?” Seam’s back was still at her sister.

“Seama, Seama, Seama, you never get your way, and all because you chose to be in the dark… you were a foolish child.”

“Shut up! I’m better than you! I’m stronger than you! I’m just having a little trouble with your humans right now.”

Sami narrowed her eyes. Her sister’s back still facing her, Sami walked up closer to her. “You know good and well, darkness is wrong. Just because some people try to use it for good doesn’t mean it is, that only proves that people don’t want to live by strict ways of light.”

“Fool, people follow the dark because it’s real, it’s not filled with lies about what happens to us when we die, not that it’s safer, and good! Darkness gives you what you want on the spot and that’s life! But light makes people work for false hope and false beliefs! Light forces people to do what’s right and not what makes them happy and that’s why darkness is better and stronger than light! And so long as light exist with strict ways of living you’ll never have as many follows like I do that are willing to stay with me and my darkness forever!”

Sami narrowed her red eyes and glared at Seama, her dark sister. “I can’t match that with any amount of worlds like that but I can say this Seama, what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular,” Sami turned away from Seama’s dark glowing face. She was beautiful but… being she lived for darkness, lived in darkness and was darkness she was ugly and evil. “Good-bye Seama, I hope you change before you die.”

“I won’t die! I wont’ die! Darkness will win! Darkness always wins, Sami! Always!”

“I hope you win then, I don’t want to see my sister die for something false.”

Seama picked up a chair and threw it but Sami had already vanished into a pillar of light. Seama groaned and yelled. “Forget it! I’m destroying everything of light! Everything of light! Because light is weak! I will destroy it to prove it! It will vanished. I will destroy light and rule everything like darkness was created to do!”

Seama turned to her slave Heartless and Nobodies.

“Ma’am, what should we-”

Suddenly the ship was shifting and turning without resistance. Then the smell of smoke filled the room.

“Ma’am, they managed to shot down one of the engines!” a Nobody said over the radio.

“Kill them!”

“We can’t, Ma’am! We’re out numbered and we’re very weak as it is! We haven’t had anything to keep us awake in days! Ma’am! Save us please! Their light is too-”

The Nobody died. Seama frowned. Then panic filled her.

~ Mean While ~

Riku, Sora, Kairi, Mickey and the Host Club fought their way through the halls of the ship. Slicing each and every Heartless and Nobody, none were spared. All were killed, all were killed under the Keyblades.

“We should shut down the engines, if we do that we can slow the ship down and keep Seama from going to another world!” Mickey said.

Sora the exclaimed cheerfully, “I’m up!” he jumped into the air and attacked one part of the engine.

Riku saw one Nobody talking into a radio. Riku took it out in seconds. He could only conclude that the thing was talking to Seama on the other line. Riku moved forward.

Sora jumped down from the engine. “Done!” he threw up his thumb. He kept going, he and the others felt a form of relief, they were killing off Heartless and Nobodies and free from pain… so far.

“I found the ship’s strong hold!” Kairi yelled out.

The others headed that way.

“This is where the fight truly begins, are you ready?” Mickey asked.

There was a nod from the Host Club.

“Duh, you know I am,” Riku said.

“Always!” Sora exclaimed.

“Ready,” Kairi nodded with a grin.

“Alright, let’s go!” Mickey slammed into the door.

The room oddly was silent. They all expected Heartless and Nobodies to pour out and attack. But the room was silent, empty but one person. Seama stood in the center of the room her back towards the group.

“One… two… three… four… five… six… seven… eight… nine… ten… eleven… hm… eleven humans to kill. You all smell like light… but two of you… I hate light…” Seama turned around and faced the group. Her eyes filled with hate and darkness. She frowned, her brow filled with sweat, there was so much light in them she was having a hard time standing.

“Seama, we will stop you,” Mickey said.

“Quiet mouse, I will destroy you! You all smell of light!”

Riku stepped up, “I’m totally taking you down, you annoyed me by sending me dreams and messages, you’re going down!”

“I don’t fear you!” Seama yelled, “Listen boy! I fear nothing! I only hate everything! I hate light!”

Riku aimed his blade to her, “I’m taking you down regardless of what you hate, your smell is enough for me to want to hurt you.”

“Riku…” Seama hummed, “Yes, I wanted to challenge you… well, it looks like I won’t be able to now that you have this group with you.”

Riku narrowed his eyes out of anger. “Keep your eyes off of her…” Riku knew where Seama’s eyes were really looking.

In a flash Seama was holding Haruhi by the wrist in one hand… and… in the other she held a weapon that looked like a katana but it had teeth. Seama’s weapon was under Haruhi’s chin. “She beautiful isn’t she Riku?”

Before anyone could go to attack Seama had dark energy holding down both the weapons and the feet of the Keybladers.

Riku and Kyoya were the only ones free from this.

“Let her go!” Riku lifted his Keyblade to attack but Seama pulled Haruhi in the way. Riku dropped his Keyblade and froze.

Seama laughed. “You can’t even touch me. Is she that important? Is she really worth the crap of sparing me? Kill me Riku, kill me, just hurt her to get to me, c’mon, just go through her to get to me, it’s not that hard,” when Riku didn’t comply Seama turned to Kyoya, whom was also free. “Kyoya, c’mon, attack me. Does she mean that much? Does she mean everything to you? Is she your lover?”

Riku and Kyoya stood frozen as Seama held Haruhi close.

“Let her go!” Riku yelled.

“C’mon, Riku, I’ll let her go if you take our your friends, if you take them out I let her go, I’ll let her go, she’ll rush to your arms, and she’ll love you forever… just kill Sora and his light friends.”

Riku swallowed. Riku looked at Haruhi for a second and slowly inhaled. He nodded.

“No Riku no!” Mickey cried out.

“Haruhi…” Riku softly said.

Haruhi blinked and shut her eyes, she nodded and turned her head away. Seama released Haruhi for a second to watch Riku walk up to Sora. Riku sighed, “Sora… I’m sorry I had to drag you into this, like this…”

“Riku you don’t have to do this…” Sora said.

“I know,” Riku smirked. Riku then mouthed out, “Haruhi’s got this one.”

Before Sora could respond Riku turned around quickly and aimed his blade at Seama.

“Seama, I think you forgot something.”

“And what’s that?” Seama asked.

“There are three of us.”

Kyoya’s blade entered Seama’s body. But the others still weren’t free. Haruhi stabbed her blade in the ground light came from it and broke the dark bonds.

Seama looked around, she backed away, she was stunned, they were all free and ready to destroy her now.

Seama yelled so loud that it shook the gummi ship. She summoned more Keyblades each charging for them all except Riku. Riku was then left to fight Seama. “Riku, I hate you! You want to know why?! Because you’re half correct! You’re half of what is the right path! You’re half right! And if you’re half right that means you’re half wrong!” Seama charged at Riku, her feet were off the ground she was gliding so quickly that it was like she was flying with high speed.

Riku blocked her attack and Seam forced her blade down. Riku tried to force her off but her blade was stronger. Riku tried to get stronger but it wasn’t working until he felt the darkness growing in his heart, and as it grew so did the power of Seama.

“That’s right, grow closer to my side, grow closer that you will collapse under my power.”

Riku swallowed at his sweat poured down his head, if Seama put any more force on him he’d be finished. Seama lifted her blade and in seconds she swung at him, Riku slammed into the window. The window started to crack under the force. Before Riku’s body slid from the glass Seama was there to hit him again.

Haruhi saw him fall and ran to the window, Seama stood there fuming with darkness, it left her body like steam from hot food. Haruhi stared out the window.

“Riku!” They all called. Riku was going down, falling to whatever world he was crashing to. “Riku!” Haruhi called. Tears ran down her face, “Riku!”

Seama turned around and faced the other bladers. “Time to die!”

“Our time hasn’t come yet! But it’s your time to die!” Riku appeared. On his left side a bat wing and on his right side a angel wing. He had wings on his back, and they flapped allowing him to fly.

“No!” Seama yelled. “No!”

Riku narrowed his eyes and instantly his friends had the power of flight. Sami stood behind Riku, “Riku… fight and win.”

Seama screamed it was over. She knew it and she was going to lose. The Keybladers stabbed their Keyblades into her and she froze. The darkness turned her to stone. She was powerless now. Her body turned to stone and she was finished.

“We did it!” Honey cheered.

“Yeah… I guess… I guess we did!” Hikaru said.

They all cheered. Then something broke their cheers. The ship started to self-destruct.

“We gotta get out of here!” Sora called.

The ship started to go down nose first. They had only a few seconds before the gravity in the ship broke. “We gotta get out of here!” Tamaki yelled.

“Here! Come quickly!” Sami’s voice was heard; they all turned to the pillar of light that was at the nose of the ship. “Jump!” the voice commanded.

Mickey was the first, trusting the voice he jumped.

Sora nodded and reached out his hand for Kairi. “Trust me!” Kairi nodded and they jumped. From the back of the command-center they were basically jumping a hundred feet.

Honey saw Sora and Kairi go and grabbed Mori. They jumped together. The twins went also and Tamaki and Kyoya soon followed.

Riku reached out his hand for Haruhi. Haruhi was scared to death and could barely move. Haruhi was frozen and could barely move. Riku looked out the window and saw how they had only a few seconds before the ship would crash into the ocean.

“Haruhi! Haruhi!” Riku called but she couldn’t comply, she was scared stiff. “Haruhi!”

But it was too late. The nose crashed into the water. Riku ran to Haruhi and covered her. The impact was much, much, much, much greater that Riku thought. Everything went black and there was nothing he could see, feel or sense at all. His wings were broken.

Riku then could see, the sun was up high far above the surface. Riku swam as much as he could. He was bleeding and in pain, his wounds were burning with a flame of pain. When he got to the surface he realized that Haruhi was still alive, he also noticed that she was unwounded. Riku summed up all his energy and started to swim. He had to hurry though, his body would give out soon. Around him broken pieces from the ship, Riku collected one and got Haruhi on it. He winced in pain, he had to swim her to shore. He had no magic left and he was weak. He had to stay alive for her. He had to keep her alive. He started to kick towards land. Dragging the floating board with him.

What felt like days later Riku found a beach, his feet touched the sands. He grabbed the board and started to pull it. He got to the shore and once Haruhi’s body was away from the water Riku collapsed. He had no idea where he was, all he knew was that Haruhi was safe... for now. Riku’s body was too weak to do anything else.

Riku looked up at the sky and stared into the sun. He figured he only had a few moments left.

“Riku…” Haruhi woke. “Riku!” she saw him on his back, his body wet, bloody and his wings and a few bones broke. Haruhi quickly got to his side.

“Haruhi…” Riku said softly. “Listen… I don’t have much time left… listen… I love you… I really love you…”

Haruhi had tears crawl down her face, “I don’t know if you care for me in that way but I care for… you… I… I risked… my life… three times for… you… and this time… I won’t… be there… to save you… again…”

“No… don’t say that…” Haruhi looked around, “I’ll get help…”

“Haruhi… listen to me, help won’t come in time…” Riku held her face. “I love you too much… to… to… lie… to… you…”

Haruhi cried more tears and more tears. “I… I…”

Riku sighed closing his eyes, he held her face with all his strength… which was weak. “Haruhi… I… I…”

“I love you! Riku! I love you! Don’t die on me! Please don’t die!” Haruhi screamed out.

Riku exhaled through his nose. “I… love… you…”

“Riku!” Haruhi screamed his name. She kissed him. Riku kissed her back with all her strength and in the midst of the kiss it was over. Riku stopped breathing and his hand fell.

Haruhi for the first time felt her heart break in two. One remained in her chest and the other died with Riku. Haruhi cried on his chest. It was over… and she barely had a chance to share a moment with him. Haruhi bit her lip and cuddled next to Riku’s body. The sun started to set. Haruhi closed her eyes just as the sun vanished beyond the horizon.

The stars were out. Haruhi kept her eyes closed. But then she winced when the sun suddenly rose again. She opened her eyes to see a pillar of light. She jumped up so quickly she forgot Riku wasn’t awake. She sighed sadly and grabbed his body. She did what she could to drag it into the light pillar portal.

Once inside Haruhi looked up to see a wolf waiting there. Haruhi had tears in her eyes. She turned her head away. The wolf had silver fur and golden eyes. He looked at Haruhi, the wolf came close and when he came closer Haruhi realized how large it was. This wolf was standing at least five feet tall. His body was at least six feet long. He was massive, his teeth were large and clearly sharp, his golden eyes however were soft and gentle yet powerful and wise.

The wolf sniffed Haruhi’s hair. After he studied her he gazed into her eyes. ‘Be not afraid.’ Haruhi could hear his words clearly, they came to her in her mind.

The wolf sniffed Riku’s dead body and turned to Haruhi.

“Can you help him?” Haruhi asked.

The wolf nodded. ‘I can,’ the wolf sniffed Riku again, ‘I am Silver Ghost, that is my name. But you may call me Silver.’

Haruhi nodded. She watched at the wolf bit Riku’s shirt and collected Riku on his back. Once the body was on Silver’s back he turned to Haruhi and led her to the castle she had spent time in. There everyone waited. Haruhi walked close to Silver, she wasn’t going to leave his body.

Haruhi paused. The wolf, Silver, paused with her, she lowered her head as she thought. She held her breath for a second. Sighing Haruhi looked at Riku.

‘He will be fine.’

“I hope so…” Haruhi said. “Silver?”

‘Yes?’

“What will happen to Riku when he wakes up?”

Silver turned his head to her, ‘I can not say, Sami knows all, not me.’

“Okay… I see.”

They continued their way to the castle. They were not far off from the castle. Soon they were at the doors of the castle. The doors opened and Silver walked in and walked to the fireplace hall. There Sami, Mickey and the others waited. The teens were asleep nestled by the fire and sleeping soundly. Sami was standing waiting, it looked like. Mickey was slowly nodding his way to sleep.

“Silver, you’ve returned.” Sami said as if not surprised. “King Mickey,” she called his attention at that moment the teens also woke.

“Riku! Haruhi!” They all cried at once. They were so excited by Sami and Haruhi were the only ones not as excited. Haruhi, with Silver’s help, pulled Riku’s body down from Silver’s back and laid him on the large sofa. Riku’s wings were broken and a mess, some feathers were missing from his angel win and his bat wing was torn.

“Riku, you sleepy bum get up,” Kairi said. She smiled at Riku thinking he was sleeping. Sami nodded to Silver and Silver walked Haruhi away. She was tired and she could barely stand. She wanted to speak but she was tired beyond belief, she wanted nothing more than to tell them Riku was dead. But she figured Sami would take care of it.

“Haruhi seemed… upset…” Tamaki pointed out.

“I wonder… why…” Kyoya thought.

They group tried to wake Riku but failed.

“Fangirls!” the twins screamed together. But Riku didn’t even flinch.

Sami sighed, she walked over to Riku and touched his face. “He is dead.”

The group was silent. They looked at Riku and Sora touched his forehead, it was cold. The group sat around for a second… holding their tears in, and Kairi was the first to cry out. She held Sora and Sora allowed his tears to fall down his face.

“Do not cry,” Sami said after ten minutes or so.

“Don’t cry?!” Kyoya stood. He threw his glasses off out of rage. “This is why people aren’t so eager to be in the light. They always end up hurt! Someone always ends up hurt! Someone always has to suffer! The light is the true enemy and always has been!”

“Kyoya stop,” Honey asked. He cried with Kairi, Mori holding him.

“No! this is why people don’t rely on a being they can’t see because this happens! A person who has done nothing wrong by our own standards had died because of your standards! Have you ever thought that maybe your standards are too high?! Have you?!”

Sami calmly nodded her head, “I have, of course, but changing my standards is foolish. If I change my standards I came saying you are a god. But I am the Goddess, no you. So changing my standards would only make you follow me as long as you’re happy and doing what you want. But sadly it doesn’t work that way. Have you ever questioned your standards Kyoya? Have you ever noticed that half the time you fail yourself? But my standards are always the same, and because they are it makes it easy for anyone to follow, they never change and never will. I am the start and end. I was when nothing was. I am when things will be. Regardless if you can’t see, I am there. Regardless if you can’t hear me, I’m speaking, and regardless of if you don’t feel me, I am there, touching your life and heart, you just choose to ignore me,” Sami walked over to Riku, “Riku, rise, walk again.”

Sami stepped away and in that instant Riku sucked in air. But his eyes didn’t open. Riku turned his dead to the side and continued to sleep.

“Kyoya,” Sami said, “My standards are high because I love you. I always win, I hate your mistakes but I love you. I love all the things I created. I never made a made a mistake, I gave you free will and you as humans used it against me. But I still love you and I still forgive you. And if that’s not enough for you to love me back then there’s nothing I can do.”

“You could force us,” Kyoya said.

“Then it wouldn’t be free will, will it?”

Kyoya lowered his head. “No…”

“Right, when Riku wakes up you all will be back at school, as if nothing happened, it will only be a few moments later. No one will remember the attack, only you shall remember it.”

“But…” Sora started but lowered his head. He couldn’t finish his statement.

“Sora, don’t worry,” Sami rested her hand on his shoulder. “I will call on you when the worlds are in need.”

“Will… will Riku remember anything?” Tamaki asked.

Sami grinned. “Well… I’d say yes but knowing him he’ll mistake it as a dream, most of it anyway.”

“You’re right,” Sora chuckled.

“Riku will wake soon, remember me. Remember that I am always there.”

“Wait-”

A bright light shined and the world of untold beauty was gone.

Riku woke he was on the sofa, he was staring at the pink ceiling. He held his head and thought back. ‘What the heck happened?’ he questioned.

“Riku!” Riku followed the voice and was instantly pounced on. “Riku!” then he was kissed, full on the lips. Riku was wide eyed as he stared at the girl that he thought didn’t understand how he felt.

“Haruhi?” Riku stared filled with total confusion. ‘She… she threw herself on me? She actually kissed me?’

“Riku, you’re awake!” Honey danced around.

Riku looked at Honey and slowly stood. Riku looked around. The others were just around waiting for nothing it looked like.

“What happened… did I miss something?” Riku asked.

“Maybe…” The twins said together with an evil grin.

“Yeah, I missed something.”

“Yeah… you did.” Haruhi said smiling.
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Old November 3rd, 2009, 03:53 PM   #80
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aw!!!!!!!!! Riku died!! T.T then he lived!! yay!!!!!! but why duz it haf to end?? is it? i hope not
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Old November 3rd, 2009, 10:33 PM   #81
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That was a nice chapter.
Aw man it had to end!
Aw well it was a good fanfic.
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Old November 4th, 2009, 04:38 AM   #82
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That was so great!!!! I really liked the ending; I was just so happy so see Riku alive. Man, that was a really great story, I'm just a little sad to see it all end. Anyway, great job on the story, and, if you write another one, I'll definitely read it.
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Old November 14th, 2009, 07:49 PM   #83
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The last chapter, i'm glad you guys liked it ^^ uh... idk what to say except thankies my fans! I'll try to work on another story for you but as of now i got nothing but original fiction. So yeah i'll try to think of something ^^

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Stuck in the Host Club
Ch. 20
Closing

After that school day the group was free to go off and enjoy their break. There was no club meeting and the group didn’t take any time to meet each other. They agreed to meet the day school came back in session. During the break Riku learned of what happened to him. He soon learned that what he thought was a dream wasn’t a dream. Haruhi was glad to fill him in.

Riku spent his time with Haruhi, after his time with his friends he felt refreshed and was more eager to spend time with Haruhi, the others understood and Mickey, Sora and Kairi went back home.

Riku came back the day school was back in. He met the Host Club in the Music room. They met after that week.

Kyoya was there in a notebook. He pushed his glasses up his nose. “Oh, Riku, there you are.”

“What?” Riku shrugged, he looked at himself, he was wearing his uniform, so what could be wrong?

“You still have Fangirls to take care of.”

Riku started fuming. “WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITHYOU!” Riku stormed over to him.

Kyoya closed his notebook and placed it down, “You still have to see the president of you club, then you’re off the hook.”

“Really?”

“Really.”

Riku looked around, the other members seemed down at the words. Riku could see their glum faces and inside he felt glum.

“You’ll never have to step foot near this place again. Just like you wanted,” Honey said.

Riku looked at him and Riku tried to speak to him but he stepped away and turned his face.

“She’ll be here soon.”

“Okay…” Riku said. He nodded and seconds later she came in, along with others girls that were for the other members. They group smiled and sat and talked with the girls. The president came to Riku, she had a bright smile on her face.

“Riku!” she exclaimed. She smiled her bright smile and held out her hand. Riku shook her hand.

Riku led her to her table and they talked.

“So, Riku, I know for a fact you had no interest in being in this club. So, when you get the chance will you ditch?” she said into a recorder. Riku blinked. This was her last question. The other members were listening clearly. Even though they kept their eyes on their girls Riku could tell they were all listening to his conversation. Haruhi was listening more closely than the others.

Riku answered her question with a smile. The others waited and waited but nothing happened. “That depends do you know why I am in the club in the first place?”

“No.” she answered.

“Well, yes, I would ditch this place. I’d ditch this place in a heart beat, I had no choice in the matter.”

“I see, well, that was my last question, Riku, and it’s time for to leave.”

“Thanks, Zipporahss,” Riku said, he shook her hand with a smile. Riku watched her leave. She was the last girl to leave. Riku turned around and looked at the club behind him. They all had sad looks on their faces. Haruhi did too. Riku grinned, “See ya,” he waved and left the club.

“How could he be so mean?” Honey asked tears flowing down his face.

“I don’t know Honey,” Mori rested his hand on Honey’s shoulder.

“I thought he’d change…” Hikaru said.

“Me too…” Kaoru said.

“We all did but we can’t force people to do anything,” Kyoya said, using the words of Sami.

“Yeah… I guess… I guess you’re right…” Tamaki sighed.

~Three days later~

The Host Club sat silent, they were getting ready for another meeting with the ladies, when suddenly the door opened.

A silver headed boy with a map in his hands. “I found a place to cram…” he looked up from the map, “Oops, sorry wrong room,” he turned away and before reaching for the door he turned back around. “Say, is this the Host Club?”

Tamaki looked at Riku confused. “Yeah…”

“Ah! I found it! Cool… uh… say… may I ask a question?” Riku blushed.

Kyoya tilted his head, “What is it?”

Riku grinned, “Can I join?”

“Really?!” Honey asked.

Riku shrugged, “Sure… I mean, I need to join a club anyway and why not start with one with the popular guys? I can hang with a couple of snot-bags.”

Kyoya grinned, “We might have a spot.”

“Cool, can I start today?” he asked.

“Sure, we could use the extra help around here.”

“Cool,” Riku placed his book bag down, “Well, I guess I’m here to stay.”

They finished setting up the room, and when they were ready the door opened to the girls. Roses filled the air, the petals flowed in a soft breeze from nowhere.

The Host Club stood waiting, and they greeted their guests with a beautiful and soft, “Welcome.”
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Old November 14th, 2009, 07:54 PM   #84
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awesome Chapter what a way to end a good story.. or is it an end?
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Old November 14th, 2009, 10:14 PM   #85
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Ah that was a very nice soft ending.
can't wait for another creation made by you ^^
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Old November 15th, 2009, 12:05 AM   #86
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That was such a great ending. I thought it was very funny that you, Zipporahss, were the president of the Riku Fan Club; that made me laugh. I really loved the ending, but I was a little confused. How did Riku just forget everything that happened to him? Was it Sami's doing? I'm just really curious. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more whenever you get a chance.
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Old November 15th, 2009, 03:06 AM   #87
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aw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like it!!! is dere gonan b more? (dont know y i asked tat question.... O.o)
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Aw, that was good! Well writen and very cute, I might add.
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