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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | First of all, thanks for the titles and atists of the other songs; I normally don't listen to Coldplay, and I haven't heard that Lifehouse song in a really long time. Secondly, the song to this chapter is "Pictures of You" by the Last Goodbye (I think that's the name of the band). Now, back to the story. So now Lya has met King Daltus. He seems like the kind of guy that could be a great friend to Lya in the long run, and he also seems like he gets annoyed with his daughter sometimes. So, is the fight between Lya and Zelda in the next chapter? I'm pretty sure you said it was. Either way, I can't wait to see how this goes; Zelda seriously needs to have her ass handed to her. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #17 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: FF7 Crisis Core Level: EXP: | King Daltus kind of lets Zelda do whatever she wants since her mother isn't there anymore, but she does annoy him sometimes (I think she annoys everyone sometimes) and yes, Lya and Zelda do have a little bit of a fight in this chapter that I'm about to post, but I'm saving the really good fight for later _____________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 8 I’m alright, Nobody worry ‘bout me, Why you got to gimme a fight? Can’t you just let it be? Link didn’t show up right away the next morning the way that I thought he would. Alright, fine, I’ll admit it; I was hoping that he would come early. He was a more interesting companion than Zelda, who refused to acknowledge my existence unless she absolutely had to. The only thing she would talk to me about was my wardrobe. When I asked for pants and a shirt, she gasped and refused to even consider it. She tried to force me to wear another ridiculous dress, and we had a little bit of a fight … and, well … she stopped trying to make me wear dresses. “Zelda what happened?” Link asked when he saw her black eye. Hey, don’t get mad at me, she deserved it. “Oh, there was a monster that broke into the castle this morning,” What? “I stopped it before it could hurt our new friend here.” She smiled fondly at me. Oh, so that’s how you wanna do this… “Yes,” I said smiling back at her, “I don’t know what would have happened if Zelda hadn’t stopped the” my voice turned cynical, “little lap dog that attacked me this morning. It tried to lick me to death.” Zelda gave me another one of her poison glares while Link was laughing. “So,” I said as I turned to Link, “did you find any information on the portal that brought me here?” “I think so,” his expression turned serious, “some of the people who survived a lizalfo raid a few days ago heard them talking about a way to another world that is untouched by anything in this world.” “Wait, Link,” Zelda said, “lizalfos can’t talk.” she said slowly, like she didn’t think that he knew that. “I’m aware of that Zelda, but that what these people told me. And there are some that can talk. I’ve come across a few that knew a few words. Just because most of them can’t speak our language doesn’t mean that there aren’t some who can.” Zelda looked away. I can’t say that I felt sorry for her. “Sooooooo, what does that mean?” I asked. “I’m not sure yet, but I think we might figure some things out faster if you helped me.” Zelda looked up at me, and I knew that if I agreed to go with him she would do everything she could to make me suffer. “That’s a great idea, Link,” I said, “let’s go!” He nodded and led me out of the castle before Zelda could say anything. This is too much fun, I thought as I followed Link through Castle Town, if Zelda would loosen up some I might lay off, but since she keeps this up, I have to mess with her. “You could be a bit nicer to Zelda,” Link said quietly as we walked up to his horse. He was adjusting something on her saddle, and I walked up to her head and stared into her intelligent brown eyes. “She could be a bit nicer to me, too,” I said as I ran my hand down the horse’s face gently. Link sighed and nodded slightly. “She shouldn’t have tried to make you wear another dress like the one yesterday. Especially since you told her that you didn’t like it. But you didn’t have to hit her.” “Wait, how did you know about that?” “One of maids told me about it.” “Oh,” I looked over at him, and saw that he had taken a brush and a comb out of one of the saddle bags. “Comb Epona’s mane for me?” “Sure.” I took the comb and stood working out the tangles that had formed in the horse’s mane. She turned and looked at me, and I swear, it was like she was laughing at me. I relaxed a little bit, and kept combing her mane until it felt like silk. By that time Link was done brushing her, and he helped me up into the saddle behind him. We rode out past the little town that I had seen my first day here and just kept going. I didn’t ask where we were headed; I was much too busy watching the colorful landscape fly by around us. Once we got to a small settlement on the edge of a forest, we stopped and had lunch and let Epona rest. We also talked to a few of the villagers, but none of them were much help. One did mention that he had seen a group of lizalfos heading towards the mountains, but he hadn’t known who to tell, since not many people had been able to stop them. We thanked him and headed that way. “Lya, once we get closer to the mountains, I’m going to find a village for you to stay in.” "What? Why?” I cried out. “I thought you needed me to help you.” “I do, but I don’t want you to get hurt, so I have to go by myself.” “What makes you think anything would happen to me?” I asked stubbornly. He looked over his should at me, and gave a ‘you’ve got to be kidding me’ look. “Okay, so I didn’t do so good when those things attacked me yesterday, but that was just because they took me by surprise!” “You honestly expect me to believe that?” he said. “I was hoping you would…” He sighed and looked away for an instant. “Do you know how to fight?” “Sort of…” “No ‘sort of.’ Either you do or you don’t, and I think we both know that you don’t.” “You could teach me,” I said quietly. He groaned, and looked at me with pleading eyes. I kept my stubborn expression. “I’ve known you for barely 24 hours, and you’re already becoming a pain. But I guess if I don’t teach you you’ll get someone else to. So, I guess I can teach you a few things.” I grinned and threw my head back as I shouted “Yes!!!” Link looked like he knew he was going to regret this, but he smiled and shook his head at my enthusiasm. He spent the next two days teaching me how to use a sword, and by the end of the last day, I felt comfortable enough to face up against a few of those lizalfos. So long as Link was somewhere nearby. Link still looked like he wasn’t sure I was ready, but he didn’t say anything, and we headed up the mountain. It’s your life, And isn’t it a mystery If it’s nobody’s business, It’s everybody’s game |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Oh yeah, go Lya!!! I would've punched Zelda too if she made me wear a dress, especially with a fricken corset. So, Lya and Link are off to see what is really going on. Part of me thinks that Ganondorf is behind all of this, but I could be wrong. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. Oh, and what was the song to this chapter? I didn't recognize it. |
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| | #19 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: FF7 Crisis Core Level: EXP: | the song for chapter 8 was "I'm Alright" by Kenny Loggins ______________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 9 Who doesn’t know what I’m talking about, Who’s never left home, who’s never struck out, To find a dream and a life of their own, A place in the clouds, a foundation of stone We didn’t find anything worth mentioning in the mountains. Just pain and destruction caused by Ganondorf’s monsters. Link and Zelda had been working to get rid of the Dark Lord for some time, but their efforts didn’t seem to make much of a difference. Link took me to the little village that I had seen on my first day in Hyrule. His grandmother lived there, and he introduced me to her. She was a very sweet lady, and we got along very well. She offered me the spare room in her house, since I didn’t have a place of my own, and I gladly accepted her offer. I think Link liked this arrangement better than me staying at the castle, and he made sure to stop by everyday to see how I was doing, but he had work to do, and he could only stay for a little while each time. The spring weather was nice during the day, but it turned chilly at night. Sometimes the villagers would have a bonfire, and that was always fun. I settled into my new life easily, and I didn’t regret being there. But sometimes I would find myself wondering about my friends. I was still concerned about what had happened to Steven, but at that point it seemed that I might never know what had happed to him. Thinking about that would always put me in a bad mood, and I would go off by myself a lot. Link found me on one of those days. I was sitting in a small clearing in the woods, staring listlessly at the ground, when he came up behind me. “What’s wrong?” he asked as he put a hand on my shoulder. I jumped and had to fight back a scream, I hadn’t heard him at all. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you,” he sat down next to me and tilted my face up so that he could look into my eyes. “Tell me what’s bothering you, please.” “I…” tears started forming in my eyes (unlike the ones in the garden, these were not fake!) “I just really miss my friends.” I started sobbing softly as he pulled me to him and gave me a hug. We sat like that for a long time, him holding me and me sobbing into his shoulder. When I finally stopped crying, I started to push away from him, but then I changed my mind. I settled my head on his shoulder and closed my eyes. He just smiled and didn’t say anything. After that day, I would go to that spot if I was feeling homesick, and he would always show up, even if he wasn’t anywhere near the village, somehow he just knew. We had become very close friends in a short amount of time, and I had a little bit of a crush on him. I think he liked me back, but I wasn’t sure, and I never asked him, just in case he didn’t. I didn’t want things to be awkward between us. Gradually the homesickness faded, and I didn’t really feel it anymore. I felt like Hyrule was my home, and I was glad that I had gone there. My life had improved so dramatically that sometimes I still considered the possibility that I was dreaming. But eventually I stopped thinking about that, too. I learned all kinds of things from the people there, and I was able to teach them some things, too. I found all kinds of opportunities, but none of them were what I really wanted to do. I wanted to travel with Link, and help him try to restore peace to Hyrule. But he was too stubborn to even consider it. He kept telling me that he didn’t want me to get hurt, and I kept telling him that I wouldn’t. Eventually he gave in, just like I knew he would. I always got my way when I asked him for something. Many precede and many will follow, A young girl’s dreams no longer hollow, It takes the shape of a place out west, But what it holds for her, she hasn’t yet guessed |
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| | #20 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Firstly, about the Chapter 8 song, I don't know who Kenny Loggins is, and, secondly, the Chapter 9 song is "Wide Open Spaces" by the Dixie Chicks (I goggled it). But, whatever, back to the story. I really liked that chapter. Link and Lya are a really great couple. I just really like how both of them are there for each other and how they became fast friends. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| | #21 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: FF7 Crisis Core Level: EXP: | yeah, I'm really happy with how their relationship works out throughout this whole series of stories. you can tell that they both like each other, but Lya's too stubborn and shy to admit it at first, and Link isn't sure if she likes him back. Anyways, here's Chapter 10, which is probably one of my favorites so far XD ______________________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 10 Does anybody know what’s going on? Can anybody tell me where we went wrong? Can anyone say why wrong is right? If we want a little peace well we got to fight We traveled all over Hyrule, and I got to see so many things that I had never even dreamed of before. Everything was relatively peaceful, and Ganondorf’s monsters were seen less often. Link had started to think that maybe we were winning the battle against him, but I wasn’t so sure. I hadn’t met the guy in person, but from everything that I knew about him from the games, I knew that he usually had something tricky up his sleeve. About a month after I had started traveling with Link, we were headed to a village high up in the mountains. Even though it was summertime, there was snow on the ground in the area of the mountains where we were headed. We had left Epona at the base of the mountain, and we were hiking up to the village. When we were about halfway there, a freezing wind started up, and before we knew it, a blizzard had blown up around us. Link found a small cave in the mountainside, where we made a fire and settled down to wait out the storm. The temperature dropped, and it had to have been below 0° Fahrenheit. I was shivering terribly, even though I had on a heavy coat and boots. Link seemed to be doing better than I was; he was only shivering a little bit. I was sitting as close to the fire as I could get. “Lya, you need to back up some, or your coat with catch on fire,” Link warned me. “N-n-n-no it w-w-won’t,” I was so cold, I would have sat in the fire if I could have. “Lya, please back up just a little bit, you’re making me nervous,” he pleaded. “S-s-s-stop w-w-w-worrying s-so m-much, nothing’s g-g-going to h-happen.” As I said that, the sleeve of my jacket brushed up against one of the embers in the fire and the flames raced up my arm. I shrieked as I jumped back, and Link tried to put the fire out. It had spread too quickly, and he jerked the coat off me before it actually burned me. He managed to put the fire out, and he held my coat up to see how damaged it was. The whole sleeve and part of the back were burned black, and the sleeve had some holes burned through it. He sighed as he tossed it aside and took off his own coat, which he wrapped around me. Then he pulled me close to him and put one arm around me. “B-b-but, aren’t you c-c-cold?” I stuttered as I started to take off his coat and give it back to him. “No, keep it. The cold doesn’t bother me that much, and besides,” he looked down at me, and his expression was nothing but concern, “you don’t look like you’re doing so well.” “I d-d-don’t know w-what y-y-you’re t-talking about. I’m f-f-fine,” I protested. “Sure you are,” he said as he settled back against the cave wall. “Just try to go to sleep. The storm should be over by morning.” I sighed and laid my head on his shoulder. I did feel better sitting next to him, but I still felt like I was close to freezing to death. I wasn’t about to tell him that, though. The next morning I woke up, and sure enough, the storm was over. I hadn’t slept well that night, just when I was about to fall asleep, I thought that I heard screaming, and that would keep me awake. I wasn’t sure if Link heard it or not, but he hadn’t said anything to me about it. We started hiking up the mountain again, but neither of us was very talkative that morning. I had a bad feeling about something, but I wasn’t sure what. Then we reached the village, and I knew. It had been burned to the ground. The buildings were ashes, and the people were all dead. I didn’t want to go any further than the outskirts of the destruction, but Link said he had to go and see if he could find any survivors, and I didn’t want to be left by myself. Thankfully the temperature had gone up some, and I wasn’t shivering too much, so I could talk without stuttering. “Who do you think did this?” I asked quietly as we made our way through the ruined village’s streets. I tried not to look at any of the bodies, but there were a lot of them. “I don’t know, but this happened recently. Probably last night,” Link answered as he pointed at where smoke still rose from some of the buildings, “everything would have been completely covered in snow, and it’s not.” We wandered through the village, but we didn’t find any survivors. We did find something else though. It the center of the village, a few lizalfos were arguing over some scraps of food that hadn’t been burned. One of them wore armor, and he was bigger than the others. Link drew his sword and charged at them with a battle cry that left my ears ringing. I followed quickly behind him, and drew my own sword. In just a few moments, the only lizalfo left was the one in armor. We stood a few feet away from him, and he faced us without moving. I was ready to run at him, but Link had other ideas. “Why did you destroy this village?” he demanded. The lizalfo just glared at him, and its tongue flicked out like a snake’s. I shivered under its burning gaze. “Answer me!” Link shouted as he jumped at the lizalfo. It tried to block him, but he knocked its sword out of its hand and held his sword across its throat. “Answer me!” he shouted again. “We were ordered to,” it answered. It raspy voice gave me chills. “Orders from who?” Link screamed in its face. “Do you really have to ask? Lord Ganondorf of course,” it turned its gaze to me and then said, “He sends special greetings to you, lady.” That was too much for Link. He slashed at the lizalfo with his sword, and it fell to the ground with its head a few feet away. Then he sheathed his sword and came back to me. “Let’s go. We won’t find anything else here.” I followed him quietly out of the village, and we headed down the mountain again. When we reached the base of the mountain, we found the small settlement there in ruins as well. We searched it, but there was nothing left, no survivors or lizalfos. We found Epona a few miles away from the settlement, which was where we had left her. We rode back towards the castle, and every village that we passed had been attacked. Some weren’t destroyed, but most were. When we got to Castle Town, we weren’t prepared for the chaos that had taken over the streets. Ganondorf hadn’t sent anything to attack here yet, but most survivors of the destroyed villages had come here for protection. We saw children who had been orphaned, people who had lost everything, and more pain than I had ever seen. The castle was overcrowded with people who had lost their homes. We couldn’t find Zelda or King Daltus anywhere, but they had to know what was going on by now. Link and I decided to leave them to whatever work that they were doing. They had bigger issues to deal with, and so did we. We left Castle Town and headed towards the Gerudo Desert. It was time that we paid the Dark Lord a visit. Should every living thing have a life to give? Will every little child have a place to live? Does anybody feel just a little bit scared? Isn’t it about time everybody cared? The world’s gone crazy |
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| | #22 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Aw, I really liked that chapter, especially the scene in the cave; I really liked seeing those two together. Lya is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters; she kind of reminds me of myself, very stubborn and headstrong. So, Ganondorf is destroying villages and seems to know something about Lya. Is he the one responsible for bringing her to this world? Part of me believes that, but I'm still not sure. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. Oh, one more thing, what is the song to this chapter? The lyrics aren't familiar to me. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: FF7 Crisis Core Level: EXP: | Quote:
Anyways, the next chapter should explain some more about Ganondorf's plan, and I'll try to post it soon, but I can't right now. The song for Chapter 10 is "Don't Drop That Bomb On Me" by Bryan Adams. When I pick the songs basically all I do is put my iPod on shuffle and wait for a song that fits the chapter to play and use that song. Sometimes I look for a specific song, but most of the time it's kind of random...lol | |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
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| | #27 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: watching Adam Lamber's AMA performance with Axel (dont wacth around young ones. trust me. *_*) Posts: 570
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days (Day 302) Level: EXP: | omg. that was really good. i cant wait to find out whats gonna happen next |
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| | #28 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: FF7 Crisis Core Level: EXP: | I wasn't going to post this until tomorrow, but I have nothing else to do, so here's Chapter 11 _______________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 11 What if I say I’m not like the others? What if I say I’m not just another one of your plays? You’re the pretender What if I say I will never surrender? Ganondorf’s castle was huge, with dark towers and sharp angles reaching high up. The whole structure reeked of evil power. I was starting to wonder if it had been such a good idea to come here. Link walked cautiously through the halls, and I followed close behind him. I felt like we were being watched, and I kept turning around to see if something was following us. It was probably the sixth or seventh time that I had looked over my shoulder, when I saw a shadow disappear around a corner. I gasped and turned to tell Link, but he was gone. Oh, nice job, Lya, I thought, now you’re all by yourself, and there’s something waiting for you around that corner…I shouldn’t go back there, but…I need to know what that was. And so, my infinite curiosity once again got the best of me, and I headed back to where I had seen the shadow go around the corner. I stayed close to the wall, and peeked around the corner. There was nothing there. I sighed and decided to go find Link. I turned around and came face to face with Ganondorf himself. “You can’t keep me here!” I shouted as Ganondorf locked me in a small cell in the corner of a large room. There was a piano against one wall, and the whole room just had a gloomy feeling. “Link will come to rescue me!” “I’m counting on it,” Ganondorf said as he started playing the piano. Creepy music, I thought with a shiver, Link, hurry up and get me out of here… In the meantime, I tested the strength of the bars of my cell. Ganondorf noticed me pulling at them and laughed. “Don’t waste your energy. You won’t break out of there.” I sat back and glared at him through the bars. “Aren’t you the least bit curious?” he asked. “Curious about what?” I asked sharply. The way he was looking at me made me feel sick. “How you got here,” he smirked at me. I just stared blankly at him. “You’ve been trying to figure it out, but you couldn’t find anyone who knew anything about that portal.” He turned back to the piano and played more of his music that sounded like the soundtrack to a really cheesy horror movie. “What do you know about that?” I was afraid that I already knew the answer to my question, but I had to know. He threw his head back and laughed loudly. Now I really felt sick. “I know,” he laughed more, “I know everything about that!” He stopped playing and stood up. He came over to my little prison cell and leered in at me. “I was the one who ordered the lizalfos to go through the portal and destroy anything they found. Of course, they didn’t follow my orders the way that I planned. They decided to wander through the forest and terrorize everyone before they destroyed anything. And they left the portal unguarded. But don’t worry; they were punished for disobeying me. Your world is safe. For now.” “‘For now,’ what’s that supposed to mean?” my voice quavered as I asked this. “It means you had better do exactly as I say if you want to keep your world safe.” I looked away and closed my eyes. I didn’t really have much back on Earth that I felt was worth anything to me, but I had my friends. I still wasn’t sure what had happened to Steven, but there was a good chance that he was okay, and I knew that Hannah was still there. I couldn’t let anything happen to them. “What do you want me to do?” I asked quietly. “You will help me to get rid of your hero, Link.” “What?! No!!” I cried out, “Anything but that!” Ganondorf opened the door to the cell and stood over me. “You will do it, or you can watch you’re old world go up in flames, just like that village in the mountains,” he said menacingly. “And just like the rest of Hyrule. It will all burn, if you don’t do this.” I looked up at him, my eyes full of fear. I can’t let him destroy all of those lives, I thought, but I can’t help him get rid of Link. Oh, what am I supposed to do? It’s one life or thousands, no, millions if he goes to Earth too. I have to… But, I can’t betray Link. “No.” I stood up and glared at him. “No, I won’t do it.” He looked down at me with an amused expression. “Why don’t you think about it for a little bit? I’ll hold off the attack on your world for a while. In the meantime, you should consider what your options are. One life or many.” He walked out of the cell and slammed the door behind him, then left the room. A few minutes later, a man in a full suit of armor came and stood in the center of the room. I just sat in the corner and watched him, but he didn’t move again. It was probably close to half an hour later when Link burst through one of the doors. The guy in the armor charged at him and they fought for a while before Link finally beat him. I wasn’t really paying attention, but when the door of the cell opened I was out of there like a shot. I grabbed Link by the hand and ran out of the Ganondorf’s castle. We were out the door and quite a ways away when Link finally got me to stop. “Whoa! Hold on! What’s wrong?” He made me turn and face him. “What happened back there?” “I…” I wanted to tell him, and I was about to, when Ganondorf’s voice forced its way into my mind. Tell him what I said and I’ll make sure that everyone you ever met will suffer greatly, in Hyrule and your world. I gasped and clapped my hands over my ears, trying to block out his voice, but that was impossible. You will go back to that little village and observe everything about him. Then you will report back to me. I fell to my knees with my hands still over my ears. I felt like I couldn’t breathe. Don’t try to fight it, you have no choice. Then his voice was gone, and I could breathe again. “Lya! Lya!” Link was shaking me and calling my name over and over again. I looked up at him and saw how worried he was. “What happened?” “I…I don’t know.” He tried to help me stand up, but I couldn’t, so he ended up carrying me. I had started shivering uncontrollably, and tears were streaming down my face. Why is this happening? I’m the voice inside your head you refuse to hear, I’m the face that you have to face, mirroring your stare, I’m what’s left, I’m what’s right, I’m the enemy, I’m the hand that’ll take you down, bring you to your knees __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm really tempted to tease you all with a preview of the next story in this series, but I don't think I will, lol. |
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| | #29 |
| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 824
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP: | Ah ha, I so knew it!!! Ganondorf was behind all of this!!! Damn that evil bastard, damn him to hell!!! Whew, now that I got that out of my system, back to the story. Oh boy, Lya has gotten herself into something she can't get out of. What the heck is she going to do? If she tells Link, Hyrule and her world will be destroyed, but, if she goes along with Ganondorf, Link will end up dead. Seriously, the whole situation is a catch-22. Well, I am positive the good guys will win in the end. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. Oh, two more things, please tell me the the song and artist of the lyrics of this chapter, and please give a preview of the next story. I really like your stories. |
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| | #30 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 558
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Currently playing: FF7 Crisis Core Level: EXP: | the Chapter 11 song was "The Pretender" by Foo Fighters. I'm probably going to use it again in a later chapter, because it really fits what I'm planning to do throughout the story. As for the next story, I'm going to be writing it with Venexts, and it's going to be in a TV show format. It a cross between KH and Super Smash Bros, here's the main characters: Heroes Villains We're still planning stuff for it, but we should be starting it soon |
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