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Old August 8th, 2009, 04:11 AM   #1
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PROLOGUE:

In the year 2015 A.D a secret organization of chiroptera beings have corrupted the world when they secretly took over Countries in Europe. those countries were United Kingdom, Belgium, France, and Germany. they have infiltrated other countries in Europe and eventually taken command of all of them as well. These beings were soon discovered by Anti-chiroptera being radicals and have leaked the information to the countries holding alliance with countries in Europe. Soon the world went in full-fledged war over Europe but with simple and honorable tactics, the other countries could not have defeated Europe with their gruesome and cold tactics. Europe eventually conquered the entire world and became a new country, the one and only country left in this world has given itself a name. that name is Noir Fleurir. In the year 300 A.H.E (after human eradication) remnants of human beings have slowly made a new country in a small island near the Asia portion of Noir Fleurir called "White Remnant" and made a priority to find other remnants inside of the dictated world. Noir Fleurir has yet to notice this small rebellion and act as if nothing happened. In the year 500 A.H.E, a chiroptera being named AlVier Cresent saw how corrupt Noir Fleurir is and left to White Remnant where he made an alliance with them. Year 700 A.H.E AlVier Cresent has used his own cells for experimentation and testing. he produced a special gene that allowed Humans to become a different type of chiroptera being called the "Blue Rose". AlVier Cresent then made a new military force with a handful of White Roses called the " Rose maidens". Soon the White Remnant country agreed and allowed the Rose maidens to be the main military force within the country and eventually used for scouting human remnants. Year 900 A>H.E AlVier Cresent dies of weakness for overusing his body to create more Blue Rose gene.

Year 913 A.H.E i have been enlisted to be a Blue Rose and become part of the Rose maidens....I was just a simple street girl who went along with gangs and troublesome people. After i declined to be a Blue rose. Two rose maidens have abducted my parents and asked me once again to join. Since i cared for my baby brother more than anything else, i agreed to enlist with the rose maidens scouting unit. It's been 9 years now. I am very emotionless and my body feels different. My eye color has changed and now i must scout for humans outside of White Remnant. Human outside of White Remnant usually are scared of me. but in the end i am able to send them back to my home country....Still i have forgoten how it's like to be human and i have lost most of my past. i only remember my little brother who i visit most of the time. though he has no idea i'm watching over him, i fear one day he too will also enlist and find out my dark secret of being a rose maiden.....
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Old August 8th, 2009, 04:16 AM   #2
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This sounds like a good begining. :) Reminds me a bot of SOLDIER...
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Old August 8th, 2009, 04:34 AM   #3
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thanx...unfortunately i wont be updating this one as much as organization omega. but i will try to upload it as much as i can
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Old August 10th, 2009, 02:17 AM   #4
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I can't help but feel Blood Plus all over this, is it a play off it?

Don't get me wrong I loved that anime, but it was so sad ;0;

And the proluge starts off clean - this has a lot of potential to go all out in character depth :3
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Old August 13th, 2009, 11:53 PM   #5
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I can't help but feel Blood Plus all over this, is it a play off it?

Don't get me wrong I loved that anime, but it was so sad ;0;

And the proluge starts off clean - this has a lot of potential to go all out in character depth :3
i'm using similar concept of blood plus. i'm kinda copying a bit of vampire hunter D. aswell. the story is different but the only thing similar is that they wont use the word "vampire"
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