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April 4th, 2005, 11:55 PM
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#1 | | I taste delicious
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Registered: Mar 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,176 | The KH2 story from my view Ok this is a story about if me and 2 friends were in KH2 and this is our story(this is first person so its through my eyes and im Max just to fill you in)
Chapter 1.
We looked around the empty streets of our town.
No more heartless that I can see. I said.
Ya but check it out. Drew said. He pointed and we saw a kid,duck and a doglike thing walking torwards them.
Can we help you. David said.
No we are just looking around. Sora said.
Max get your staff out theres more heartless. Drew said and David already was fighting with his duel sowrds.
Right. I said and we ran at the heartless. More and more keep appearing as the fight went on. It took a while for us to relize that the three strangers had joined in the fight. It wasnt long untill all six of us were back to back and surronded.
We need to run theres to many. Sora shouted.
We gotta run for the gummi ship. Donald shouted.
Is that the keyblade. Drew said.
Ya why. Sora said.
They gotta escape. I shouted.
Right. David said. Explosioin. David shouted and blasted a path. They began to run but the world was falling apart.
There it is. Donald shouted and the gummi ship was just ahead but then Darkside poped up in front of it.
This thing again. Sora shouted through all the strange noises.
We can take it. Drew said and the clash began. It was only about a minute when everything went dark and i was knocked out (gotta go say if you like and ill keep going)
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April 5th, 2005, 12:34 PM
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#2 | | I taste delicious
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Registered: Mar 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,176 | Re: The KH2 story from my view Chapter 2: The stronghold. I awoke in a strange feild. When i finally got myself to get up I saw David practiceing his moves and Drew still out. Is Drew ok. I said What. He said in a panicked voice and notice it was me. O yeah hes fine. Ok. i said and looked around. Any sign of the keyblade master. No. i heard to see Drew getting up. We finally find him and then our world disappears and he vanishes.
Hey. David said.
What. Drew said annoyed that he enterupded his whinning.
There's a light there. David said.
Wow there is. Drew said.
Yeah i see it. I said
Well lets go. David said so we all started runinng towards it. About half way we strated hearing noises in the tall grass part.
Is it just me or is something out there. I said.
Yeah and its comeing at us. Drew said and I turn around to see heartless coming. It didnt take long to get into a fight. after about one minute we relized we were getting closer to the light and saw what looked like a castle or a stronghold.What is that. I said after the heartless were slayed.
I don't know. David said.
I do. Drew said
You do? I said stuned
No. He replied. but i say we go in we are just an open target here for the heartless.
I agree. David said.
Then its settled. I said and we walked to the main door. Now what.
Allow me. David said. Explosion. He shouted but it had no effect.
Hey sherlock. Drew said and push the door open.
Whatever. I said and walked in. I wonder why this place is abandened.
Maybe a gohst lives here. David said.
Shut up. Drew said
No you. David shouted back. This went on for a while untill the sound of a door unlocking broke it up.
Next chapter: The test
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April 6th, 2005, 08:52 PM
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#3 | | I taste delicious
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Registered: Mar 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,176 | Re: The KH2 story from my view Chapter 3: the test We all at some point got some sleep in or at least thats what I hope. I was the first to get up so i looked around a bit better thhen we could before and found the place very erire. I found that the door had open, another huge door like it, Big statues of things and strange writting on the wall. David got up next and kicked Drew so he would get up. A couple moment after i heard footsteps and then the other strange door open and a strange man walked in. I congragulate you for your courage to sleep as an open target to the heartless. He said and began to continue. I am amazed at your knoledge of magic or else you could not have unlocked my front door. Ha i told you my magic had a effect. David shouted at Drew. I am amazed. He continued not noticing them argue. Of your strength to surive a word desruction without losing your heart. You. he said pointing at David. Are a magician with more strength then most. then pointed to Drew. You are strange warrior but has a strong will. Then pointed at me. You are silent boy who has a strange gift that is stoping me from figureing out who you are. But that does not matter. He said and walked through the doorway. Anyway i have test you are going to take. He says. What if we refuse. Drew asked. Simple you have no chioce. he said and we fell through the floor. When we hit the bottom i looked around and heard his voice. Now through that door is a maze were you most get past anything i throw at you and this will test your courage. David and drew were already up and ready for a fight so did the same and we walked into the maze. Next chapter:The maze with the other maze.
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April 6th, 2005, 09:19 PM
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April 6th, 2005, 10:31 PM
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Registered: Mar 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,176 | Re: The KH2 story from my view thanks Chapter 4: the maze within the maze
I looked around the maze and it seemed to go on for miles.
Which way? Drew asked.
How would I know. David said and they got into there little fights but I was busy trying to figure out who this guy is but I was intterupded by David.
Max. Lets go. David said. I looked behind me to see them walking away. I ran after them and the minute they turned the heartless appeared they fought.
I hate when we have to fight in cramped spaces. Drew said slashing a heartless. There were only about 5 so it didn't take long to end it.
I dont get it. I said thinking outloud.
Of course you dont this is a maze. David said.
No who this guy is and what this is about. I said just following Drew. I mean he can figure out who we are like and knows all about our pass and for some reason cant figure out who I am.
Just stop thinking about it and since he controls the heartless we can beat his sorry little. David was saying but was interuped by Drew screaming.
Drew! We both shouted and ran around the corner to see him standing in front a huge pit.
What? I asked.
This. he said pointing down on at the pit to see nothing but darkness.
Wow. I said and spat down and never heard it.
Well we go the other way i guess. Drew said.
No I got a better idea. David said. I looked at him confused and then he looked at the pit. Water shot. He shouted and water flew over the pit and shouted. Blizzard and froze the water so there was a path.
Ummm, David. I said.
What. He said.
This. And i pointed at the path he tryed to create and it was a bunch of ice platforms.
O well. He said.
No ill get across. Drew said so he pulled out his scyth and went for the first platform and stoped himself with his scyth.
Wow. I said as he made it near the end. When he went for the last jump he went a bit far and has hanging onto to his scyth so he didnt fall.
Drew! David shouted. I just stood there and came up with an idea.
Thats it. I said and jumped at the platforms. when i hit the first one i used a move that ive never tried.Controled movement. and punched the ice and toke control of the ice and flew it and grabed Drew and put him on the other side and toke David over to the other side.
And you didn't do that in the first place why. Drew said
I normally dont get that much reaction from it. I said as we walked into a circle area with steps in it.
I must cangragulate you on crossing the only challenge in this maze and got the right path. The strange man said. And llke I said a strong will. He said pointing at Drew. Magic. Pointed at David. But you still seem like a mystery. He said and pointed at the stairs. Up those stairs is the next test. He then dissapeared.
Lets not go yet. I said. lets stay here and rest then lets go because Drew is probally shoke up and we are in no condition to moe on.
Next chapter:The dark decision.
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April 8th, 2005, 04:59 PM
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#6 | | I taste delicious
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Registered: Mar 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,176 | Re: The KH2 story from my view Chapter 5: The dark decision.
I open my eyes to see David and Drew playing rock,paper siccors. You guys ready? I asked
Yeah I am. David said
Same here. Drew said
Lets go. I said and we walked ready for anything when they walked into a ring of some kind.
Where are. David said but was cut off.
You have nothing to do with this i want Drew. The strange man said.
Me? Drew said confused.
Yes you you have a strong will and could become very powerful in the darkness. The figure said.
Are you mad im not joining darkness. Drew shouted.
Then force you through power. The man shouted and charged at Drew. Drew doged but the man talked again. Think boy why didnt they save you earlier when death ways near. Drew glanced at him then at his friends.
They probally couldnt come up with a plan. He said and slashed the man on the arm but had no effect.
David could have easily saved you by creating another platform and Max could have used that move earlyer. The man said. Drew glanced at his friends for answers.
My move wasnt perfected. I shouted.
I just didn't think of that. David said.
I'll... Drew said.
Yes. The strange man said.
Ill do It(sorry chapters are so short just thats how much i do per chapter)
Next chapter: The arena duel.
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April 11th, 2005, 12:42 PM
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#7 | | I taste delicious
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I just stared at Drew as he spoke those words and watch the man laugh.
Good good. the man said. You two. He said pointing at us may go through the door to your right so you may test your stength and if you dont die youll find a sweet surpise. Me and David walked silently to the door and found ourselfs in a smalar arena.
Hey how rich you think this guy is. David ask.
Im surpised he isnt Bill Gates. I responded and a board on the far side of the arena and it said 200 and heartless began stroming in.
Ok we gotta kill 200 heartless. I said.
Simple, Explosion. He shouted and sent a wave at them. I looked up to see it now at 180.
Ok now for head on fighting. I said and charged at the heartless. We clashed and the heartlessbegan to lose number but when about 50 were left David toke a hard hit and fell to the ground. I looked and clashed over to him taking out about 2 and used my control movement on the ground and made us out of reach.
Agh. David said standing up and looking down. He wistled.
So use some magic before I take us down. I said.
I guess ill try this new 1. He said and started to foucus. Not long after storm clouds appeared and it rained and then lighting began strikeing all the heartless. When it was over the board said 1.
Wheres the last 1. I asked.
Right here. we heard Drew shout. I lowered the platform and David jumped at him.
You wanta fight us. I said grabing David
No just him. Drew answered and i got blasted to the ground and a shield came around the ring so they could duel each other.
What a mistake. David said with his sowrd drawn.
Ill make you regret what you did. Drew said and they clashed there weapons together a couple times and the Drew hit david on the arm.
Ow. He said jumping back.
You see David im no longer the Drew that isn't that strong that depends on his friends im A new Drew that is powerful and. He was cut off by a ice shard that hit his face.
A simple target. David said. You may have made it hard to lift my sowrd but magic is still.
Easy. Drew said interupting. I know. after those words a dark portal appeared and a meteor flew at David but he jumped out of the way but his sowrd got hit by it.
No! David shouted.
This is it. Drew said. My revenge!
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April 19th, 2005, 11:33 PM
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#8 | | I taste delicious
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How could you be so strong so fast. David asked.
Whats wrong are you scared that my revenge will harm you alot well keep worryin. Drew said enjoyng the moment.
Drew put your powers to the test then and fight both of us. I shouted in hope the quick plan would work.
Why not. Drew said thinking about it.
Dont get ahead of yourself you still have training you might go to far to fast. The srange man shouted.
Shut up old man.Drew shouted and brought the sheid down and i jump with my staff ready in front of David.
Time to die. Drew shouted and our weapons hit.
Why are you doing this you are our friend. I asked.
That Drew is gone. He shouted. That is your fault always considering me weak and hopeless when i was just as strong.
Then if your against us I wont worry about you anymore. I shouted and a huge black explosion emitted from our wepons.
What the. David said to see Drew on 1 knee and me standing in front of him.
You see what happens when you mess with darkness. I yelled. The same thing that happens when you yeild a sythe wrong. I said and snatched the sythe and a dark aura amitted around his wepon and it snaped in half.
You... you have dark power. The man said stunned.
Yes i do. I said when i saw his expression change and fell to see Drew with part of his scyth.
Im tried of you holding me back. Drew said to the dead body
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