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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:11 AM   #61
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thats was short but cool i already know who the three are on the battlefield.
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:13 AM   #62
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Yep, It's kinda familiar right?
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:35 AM   #63
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i can't wait for the rest of the chapters
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:35 AM   #64
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Thanks, I'm gonna have one up tomarrow.
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:38 AM   #65
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thats great i can't wait
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:42 AM   #66
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Thanks.
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:45 AM   #67
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your a great writer dusk
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Old July 15th, 2009, 12:47 AM   #68
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Well not as good as SA but I do get good grades in English.
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Old July 15th, 2009, 07:51 AM   #69
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trust me your a good writer i might make a fan fic as well but not to sure but you inspired me
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Old July 15th, 2009, 09:06 PM   #70
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Thank you everyone! Here goes the third part!

The Stars that shine light: Epilogue: Part three: Destiny Islands

"This is your home!" I shouted to Sora from across the beach. He walked over to the mini island that was in the water and jumped up onto the low-hanging palm tree. A couple of star shaped fruits were hanging from the fronds, and Sora grabbed one and looked at it.

"Are you wondering where Kairi is?" I said while running over to where he sat. He shook his head and spoke.

"No, Kairi and Riku should be here in a few minutes. Hopefully, they can come." He said thoughtfully. Then I saw two boats appoaching from the biggest island. It docked and two figures came on the beach.

"Is that Sora, and Sutaa?" The girl asked. The boy walking next to her started to run and she followed.

"Riku, Kairi!" Sora yelled. He jumped off the island into the water and hugged Kairi then smiled at Riku. I walked towards them and smiled at them. They smiled back, and we started to talk, and talk, and talk. Until the stars came out.

End of Part three

Side story: Sora and the Sarong

Riku and I were talking on the island.

"So Sutaa, do you want to play a prank on Sora?" I smiled and he whispered his plan.

A couple of minutes later...

"Hey Sora I really don't get how to put on this island wear!" He walked over and I gave him the sarong. It had teal flowers on it, and it was as girly as can be. My camera was in the biggest pocket of my cargo pants waiting to be used.

"Here let me show you." Kairi sat down and watched as I pulled out my camera. Riku snickered as Sora put on the sarong over his ballon pants.

"See this is how you- wait is that a camera? Wait Sutaa!" Sora glared and sprinted after me. I dropped my camera and ran off.

Kairi picked it up and started to laugh. It was a picture of him trying to grab the camera with it still on. I smiled and continued running.

End of mini short.
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Old July 16th, 2009, 02:09 AM   #71
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that was short but great i have a feeling that sora gets to share the papou fruit with sutaa and the side story was hilarious
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Old July 16th, 2009, 02:11 AM   #72
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Thank you. I've been wanting to do that for a while now.
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Old July 17th, 2009, 08:15 PM   #73
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Epilogue: Part four: Golden Rock

As I got off the gummi ship I took a big breath. This was an awesome arrangement. Sora helped Kairi and Riku jumped off onto my beach. The smell of pine filled my nose and I sighed. Kairi and RIku looked around.

"This is Golden Rock, my home." I said happily. I stepped into the water, and felt it as it brushed arcoss my ankles. Something was troubling Sora but I didn't know what it was. His head was in a cloud up the sky, and the worst part was that no one noticed it besides me. Not Riku or Kairi. Maybe it was Roxas inside of him.

"Hey Sora, I want to show Riku and Kairi around. Are you gonna come?" He nodded and The four of us walked around my home world.

End of Part 4

Special Secret Trailer:

"Some say that the keyblade"

Sutaa stands before a person in armor.

"Why have you done this?" She yelled to the person who smiled.

"Brings Ruin and descruction"

"The stars are stuck in darkness. I was supposed to stop this!"

"But some say"

Sora is with Sutaa. He hugs her and whspers in her ear.

"i need to tell you something."

"That it brings joy and peace."

(Kairo by Utada is playing during this part)

Two girls are sitting at a table in a white room. Pictures were all on the wall and a sketchbook was laying on the table.
A dark with dark brown hair sighed and said to the girl with blonde hair,

"Namine, I want to see my true memories."

"But do you want to erase your old ones?" Sutaa paused.

Maybe darkness isn't so bad. Maybe light is to hard to reach. Maybe twilight is where the stars rest.

End of Special trailer.
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Old July 18th, 2009, 10:16 AM   #74
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awesome but short again i love how you made a trailer it was like a real trailer
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Old July 18th, 2009, 06:51 PM   #75
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The next that I write it's gonna be the sequal!
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