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Old July 2nd, 2009, 11:00 PM   #31
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Yep, Sora and Sutaa are on Golden Rock and Kairi and Riku are on Destiny Islands, Donald and Goofy are in Disney Castle.
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Old July 2nd, 2009, 11:20 PM   #32
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O_O Hold up.....I think I read wrong then.....*re-reads*


Where does it say that? I thought Sutaa and Ro ended up together, somewhere....
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Old July 2nd, 2009, 11:23 PM   #33
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No Sutaa saw Roxas turn into Sora and then realized that she was home.
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Old July 3rd, 2009, 02:18 AM   #34
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this story was so beauitful nice job
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Old July 3rd, 2009, 02:32 AM   #35
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That was really good!!!
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Old July 3rd, 2009, 11:38 AM   #36
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aww cute great job! :D
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Old July 4th, 2009, 08:22 AM   #37
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i wonder whats going to happen to sutaa and sora now
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Old July 11th, 2009, 07:06 PM   #38
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Thank yous!! I'm happy that so many people like my fanfic heres whats gonna start the little stories!

The Stars that shine light: Epilogue: Part 1: Wait... so now what?

The lakes waves rolled into the sandy shores of Golden Rock. I sat down and wondered where Sora was, he was probably exploring around the forests and gysers. I bet he misses his home, but how can we get there?

"Hey Sutaa! Whatcha doing?" He asked me as he sat down on the beach. I smiled.

"Thinking... about stuff." He dosen't want me to worry about him, so I can let him know that I am.

"Riku, Kairi, and me right? It's ok if you are, because I do miss them." He stared out at the lake, his eyes filled with content.

"So, now what do we do? I would like to see Destiny Islands when it's not being destroyed, and I would love to stay here and be in my beautiful world." He turned his head and looked at me.

"Well then we could use a Gummi ship to get around... and then we could switch worlds every holiday. I could bring Kairi and Riku too." I shook my head and sighed.

"If you didn't notice we don't have a gummi ship." Then he randomly ran off inside the the house and came out with pen, paper, and a glass bottle. A letter in a bottle?

"Dear Donald and Goofy,

Sutaa and I are stuck on Golden Rock and we want a gummi ship so that we can go to Desatiny Islands. We need one very quickly. Thank you.
-Sora and Sutaa"

I saw him write onto the paper and stuff it into the bottle. He smiled at me and ran off. I started to run after him until he was at a river.

"What are you doing?! Don't run off like that, there are bears here!" He laughed and smiled.

"All rivers lead to the ocean, and this has worked twice now so it's not bad to try." My shoulders shrugged and he placed the bottle into the river and it flew away downstream. We looked at it and crossed our fingers. I hope this works.
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Old July 11th, 2009, 09:45 PM   #39
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Aw what a cute Epilouge :D

As for the fic of a whole:

It has progressed into something nice and I can't wait to see if you write more (since you hinted at parts that this is only part 1).
I do wish you had put a bit more description so that I could envision things in my head better but I guess I let my imagination do most of the work.
Plus, its not too hard to fix it.
But as I said before. Its a cute, and nice fic and I really did enjoy reading it :D
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Old July 11th, 2009, 09:57 PM   #40
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Thanks hikari.
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Old July 11th, 2009, 10:05 PM   #41
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Hey no problem!
So do you plan on continuing it?
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Old July 11th, 2009, 10:10 PM   #42
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Of course! I'm just gonna wait until tuesday.
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Old July 11th, 2009, 10:15 PM   #43
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Ooo
That's super exciting :D
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Old July 11th, 2009, 10:21 PM   #44
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The epilogues are going to be kinda funny. they remind me of the little short cutscenes during the credits.
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Old July 11th, 2009, 10:33 PM   #45
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Good gracious me, that epilogue shot an arrow right through my heart! ;0; Superb symbolism there, man, I'm sooo geeking out right now it's not even funny! XD Bravo!
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