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| The True Assassin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,311
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | will chapter 8 take as long as this chapter did i'm just wondering |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,166
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so i need an original idea ut one that makes there character look too unique. so unitl i find the right female cast member, than yeah | |
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| The True Assassin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,311
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | oh i hope you find the right one |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 21 Posts: 845
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | I guess mine didn't help then XD Sowy 'bout that ;-; |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,166
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | no it's not that....i just cant really seem to fit the characers. the character you all want are so unique and original that they deserve there own fanfic...but the thing i was just looking for another character to fill the gap |
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| Sidekick | I'd like to see this in a CGI cutscene form...seriously it's really good!!! lol I'm ready for the next Chapter as well. |
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| The True Assassin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,311
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | see allister you have many fans |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,166
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | ‡Chapter VIII‡ Just what I wanted to see when I closed my eyes that night…..another dream about Rin…of course this time, the dream was much longer than the others. In my dream I was an orphan child who lived on the streets in the 3rd district and Rin was living where most upper class people live, in the 1st district. We did almost everything together ever since we met that one day. My dream later shows me and Rin playing in the first district. It seemed on that day I was scared of going in the first district but I trusted Rin and went along anyways. We were playing as hero and villain…I chose the villain several times and Rin chose to be the hero. Suddenly I hear a women calling Rin’s name asking where she was. After that, two women walked up towards me and Rin. One looked at me in a disgusted way while the other was smiling at me. The one who was disgusted by me was the mother of Rin, and the other woman was a close friend of hers. The next day we played again in the first district, this time in more secretive place. But the women from yesterday followed me and Rin. She was nice to me and gave me some new clothes. At first I was scared to accept a gift from a stranger but Rin told me she was a trustworthy person, so I accepted and thanked her for the gift. She smiled and left us to play. The dream still continues to show me what happened the day after. On that day I was looking for Rin in the 3rd district. Instead the women from the other day managed to find me. The woman was really nice to me once again. This time she gave me a bracelet with a purple charm on it. I again accepted and thanked her. She starts to stroke my hair stare at me for a rather long time, but I didn’t really mind. She was nice to me after all. She then asks if I have any parents and that she would like to meet them. I told her that I didn’t have any and lived all on my own. In that moment her smile suddenly disappears and begins to look shocked. She stops stroking my hair and Invites me to her house. I once again accepted her offer and followed her to her house. When I entered her house, it was really big and everything was very clean, but for a big house there were hardly any people inside. I only saw very few people cleaning and serving food. The woman than offers me a nice meal with her and her husband. Her husband was just as nice as her. We ate and talked for a while. The husband was happy I visited him and her wife. After the meal the woman whispers into his ear for a second and the man suddenly looked surprised. He then comes up to me and asks if he wanted me to join there family. I didn’t understand it at first until they gave me a simpler explanation. I really liked this woman and her husband was really nice as well, so of course I accepted there offer. Since then, me and Rin were much closer and lived much happier than before. My adopted mother was very kind to me as well and so were the nobles in the first district. Everyone was so welcoming and Rin was just as happy as they were. The dream suddenly starts to fade away into darkness… I like this particular Dream…. I want it to go on just a little longer… From that point I finally woke up…. It seemed I was asleep for a very long time. I wasn’t breathing as well as I should and I couldn’t move as much as I wanted to. Maybe it’s just a reaction to the injury I had yesterday. So I took a few quick breathes to calm myself down and moved my hair so it wouldn’t cover my face…It seemed these dreams are becoming more vivid then before….still It’s a dream about Rin. If I dream more, maybe I can remember something important that can free Rin from Ansem’s control... Wait…This isn’t my room…this room is dark and the furniture was rearranged differently ….the covers of the blankets over me were incredibly heavy and soft….I tried getting up but when I saw that I wasn’t wearing anything but bandages I got embarrassed. So I covered myself with the heavy blanket and started to look around a bit more…but everything was so dark I could barely see the room. The neon lights from the outside of the building allowed me to see a small portion of the room I looked closer at the furniture and noticed a small table with a rose on top. I remember Marluxia always held a rose whenever I visited him in his room. So this must be Marluxia’s room….Why am I in his room? Last I remember…I fell unconscious on top of Rin in ‘my’ room and…..…I almost forgot…. I need to check if Rin is still here. So I walked over to the door with the covers and I was about to open it but the injury I had stopped me from opening the door. I gathered some strength and was able to grab the knob on the door. Right when I was about to turn the knob, it seemed that someone was trying to get in. When it opened, it was Marluxia who was in the front door. Marluxia: Oh, Lestraxil….are you ok? You’re still not injured are you? Lestraxil: I’m fine, Marluxia….Can I see Rin? she’s still here isn’t she? Marluxia: She left along time ago. You were asleep for 3 days now….You shouldn’t be moving! You opened up your injury that night and I had to fix it for you…..that injury was more severe than it looked…. Lestraxil: I’m sorry Marluxia…I just really wanted to see Rin. Marluxia’s eyes were really watery and red…it looked like he didn’t get any sleep at all…he also tried to hide them with his bangs so I wouldn’t notice ….I shouldn’t have made him worry like this….I was going to say something to him but he hugged me out of nowhere ….I didn’t hear him cry but I could feel the teardrops sliding down my back…I didn’t really know how to react because I never seen Marluxia like this….Is Marluxia really that worried about me? Marluxia: Please…don’t ever do something like that…I don’t want to lose you…. Lestraxil: I’m sorry Marluxia….I really am…. I won’t force myself again….. Marluxia: Good…Please rest some more…I will have someone to watch over you ok? I’ll be going to my mission now…when you are ready to walk, get the clothes I left you in the closet Lestraxil: Ok…. Marluxia then kisses me for a while and leaves. After that, I went back to bed and started to rest a little more….As expected, the moment I closed my eyes, another dream appears in my mind. These dreams are becoming some kind of usual routine whenever I go to sleep …This dream was much more detail and life-like than any other dream I have had. It’s showing me and Rin much older than the last one I had not so long ago. This time I look much cleaner and delicate than when I was an orphan in the 3rd district. Rin looks almost the same as before but taller and slightly prettier. Me and Rin are conversing and having a great time. We are both talking about some festival. I don’t really understand it all…. Rin: Hey Allister, who are you going to invite for the festival? I already invited Solomon from the second district. I heard he likes me so we might end up going home late. Allister: Aw, I was going to invite you Rin…I’m not really friends with the other people in the 1st district. Rin: geez Allister, I can’t always be with you. Allister: Yeah, I guess your right. I’ll just go alone then. Rin: Well alright. Are you going to rent a costume? Allister: Most likely, I reserved the’ mort princesse’ dress the other day ….well I’ll see you later, I’m going to check on mother. I bet she needs help with something. Rin: Alright! I’ll see you at the festival! Allister: Don’t worry! You will! I then run off and go back home with mother. When I entered the courtyard I noticed mother talking to some boys from the neighborhood. Why is he talking to them? She looks mad and was yelling at the boys. I was too scared to go there myself, so I was hiding behind the water fountain for mother wouldn’t notice me. After that I see mother kicking out the boys. All the boys seemed depressed about something. Allister: Mother, what was that all about? Mrs. Nightray: You would not believe these people….they all want a hand in marriage…I really cant take any more of this. Allister: Why would they propose to you if they know you're already married? And aren’t you a little too old for them? Mrs. Nightray: Oh no…the proposals weren’t for me. They were for you. All of these strange boys think they can marry you just because you’re at the right age…Sigh…let’s just forget about this whole situation... I thought you went to go visit Rin today? You came home earlier than I expected. Allister: I was going to invite her to the festival, but she already found someone to go with. I guess I’m going to have to go alone… Mrs. Nightray: hmmm….Why don’t you Invite the garden boy to the festival? You are friends with him, aren't you? Of course he is slightly older, but He likes you very much and he’s the only one who hasn’t proposed. Well maybe it’s the fact that he works for me but he’s a really nice boy. I thought you liked the shy ones too Allister: hmm…well I do owe him a favor for the other day… Mrs. Nightray: See? It’s a good idea. Allister: Alright then. Tell father I will finish my studies tomorrow, ok? Mrs. Nightray: OK dear. The dream suddenly feels intense….I had this uneasy feeling, my heart is racing and it feels strange….Is my dream about to end? Allister: Hey Lumaria! I wanted to ask you something? Lumaria: Yes what is it? I’m cutting off roses for dinner tonight so please make it quick. Allister: Would you like to come to the festival with me? Lumaria: Weren’t you going with Rin? Allister: Rin is going with Solomon. So I thought maybe we should go together. Actually it was more of mother’s idea. Lumaria: Madam Nightray suggested this? Very well then, I will go but I don’t have much munny with me…I’ll see what I can do to enjoy the festival. Allister: Don’t worry about it. I’ll buy you whatever you want. Lumaria: Well that’s a bit strange for a girl to say…Well then, we will go tonight correct? Allister: Yes. I’ll take you when it’s time ok? Lumaria: heh heh heh. ‘You’ take ‘me’? Shouldn’t I be the one to take you? We live in the same house, so don’t worry about it. I’ll see you when you’re ready. Allister: Ok. The dream is so vivid…I remember every detail…It’s like this memory was really important to me….Why is this memory so important than the other ones? Maybe something is going to happen to me in this particular dream….In any case, the dream still continues. It’s showing me and the garden boy entering the festival and renting costumes and masks. As vivid and life-like the dream was, I couldn’t see the face of the garden boy this whole time. No matter how much I look at the garden boy’s face, his face would be covered with a thick white cloud…the only time I could see his face is when wearing those mask, but not I still couldn’t se it completely...I can barely see some of his face but I couldn’t see it enough to know how he looked like. Not only that but ever since the garden boy was introduced in my dream I have been feeling something awful…I can sense my injury burning ….Is this a nightmare? I can’t really tell…the dream seems so vivid and nothing wrong has happened but at the same time this awful feeling inside me is telling me this is actually a nightmare…I wanted to wake up but I didn’t know how….this dream wont let me wake up…come on, please someone wake me up!... Allister: Lumaria how do you like the festival? You’re really quiet for some reason. Lumaria: Well this was fun. I’m really enjoying myself Allister. Thanks of taking me to the festival….Oh look, isn’t that Rin over there with Solomon? Allister: you’re right. Oh! She saw us. I think she’s coming over. Rin: Hey you two. It seems you found someone to take to the festival after all. Are you two having fun? Allister: Yes, we are. Solomon: Oh? Who is this beautiful girl? Allister: Oh that’s right, we never officially met. I’m Allister. Solomon: And I am Solomon. I heard many good things about you from Rin. Would you like to come with Rin and I to the Ferris wheel? Allister: Ferris wheel? I never heard of it…. Rin: hey! I thought you wanted me only, Solomon! Lumaria: Well the Ferris wheel is a new attraction for people couples and people who are in lo- Allister: -Hey Lumaria, you want to come with me on the Ferris wheel? Lumaria: uhh…..you sure? Allister: Positive. Lumaria: very well then… Rin: Great, Solomon and I will go with you guys too! I cant take it…the dream...it feels too intense….the garden boy…he talks so much like someone I know…and this dream…I’m feeling it…I’m feeling every moment of this dream….it’s too real for me….Why cant I just wake up? I have seen enough…and yet, the dream wants to show me and the garden boy enjoying the Ferris wheel. I’m not enjoying it tough…my dream is telling me I have a fear of heights. Lumaria: Are you ok? Allister: Can you hold me? I’m scared of heights. Lumaria: if you are scared, then why did you want to come? Allister: I don’t know…I never seen a sight this high… Lumaria: Hold on to me then. The garden boy suddenly moves closer to me and kisses me right on the lips….but the kiss felt so familiar…my dream isn’t allowing me to remember…but it felt similar to Marluxia’s….. Lumaria: Oh sorry….I was a bit selfish wasn’t I? Allister: …I don’t mind…you can do whatever it was you were doing just now…. Lumaria: ‘It’ is called a kiss… Allister: OK…you can kiss me again, if you’d like. From that very moment the dream was far too intense…I can’t take it, for some reason I didn’t want to see this dream. Although the dream showed nothing bad…I just couldn’t see it anymore…that garden boy….he reminds me so much of Marluxia….Why does he remind so much of Marluxia? He talks just like him and he kisses just like him…the only ting I couldn’t compare the two with was there faces. Well, it doesn’t matter, I finally woke up from my dream…of course covered in sweat with heavy breathing….but it’s god that it’s finally over…. when I was going to get up to get some water, I saw three members sitting right beside me right in front of my face. They really startled me…geez I wish they had more manners. At first I thought it was Xenka annoying me but they look nothing like the other members….one is far too skinny to be Xenka and One is a girl and slightly shorter than me, the last one disappeared the moment I saw him. The girl and the skinny one sat right next to me and stared for the longest time. I took a closer look at them to see if I could see there faces, but I didn’t see a thing under those hoods unfortunately…although the one who is sitting casually is actually asleep while the other one was just staring quietly at my injury. I assume these are new members that entered while I was unconscious…I pulled myself up and stared back at them…it was a long awkward moment since we both didn’t say a word….I was getting annoyed by the silence so I tried to speak to them. It didn’t come out the way I wanted though…. Lestraxil: Who are you two? Unknown: …. Lestraxil: You are new members right? Wow…you two must have entered while I was unconscious…Can you talk? At least tell me your name and rank. Unknown: …Nallidex, No.9 Lestraxil: Well Nallidex…Where did the other member go? The one that was right behind you. Nallidex: There’s only me and No.8….There’s no one else here besides you…. Lestraxil: But…I jus saw someone right behind you… Nallidex: No one else is here…..Master Marluxia told me to give you this….It’s your new clothes…. Lestraxil: Uhh....thanks…I’ll just change in his closet. Lestraxil: Hey you two! Where you going? Nallidex:… Lestraxil: Why are you avoiding me? At least show your face… Suddenly one of the new members removes his hood and reveals his face. He had black hair and gold yellow eyes. He seems to have a tendency to look the other way and act as if he didn’t care much about anything. Sometimes Xenka does that but this member does it so much more than Xenka does? Suddenly Nallidex removes her hood as well. She had Teal hair and her skin was as tan as Rudimix. Her eyes were violet and she didn’t give a certain face. In fact she showed absolutely no emotion. All she did was stare…It really bothers me. Almost as if she knows what I’m thinking. Unknown: My name is Ordi-…hm… my name is Xindro. I’m No.8 Nallidex: Master Marluxia ordered to watch over you….You seem to be ok now. Lestraxil: Well…where will you two sleep? Xindro: Seventh floor, room 13. Lestraxil: That’s my room….I guess Marluxia wants me to share a room with them. Oh! I forgot to introduce myself…I’m Lestraxil, No.7 Nallidex: We know…Master Marluxia told us to watch over you. Lestraxil: hmm …I’m so hungry right now….would you two want to get a bite to eat with me? Xindro: Sure…come on Nallidex. Nallidex: …. Xindro: Don’t worry about her. She didn’t expect you to wake up. So she’s just avoiding you. Lestraxil: let’s go to the kitchen hen. We can talk some more there. Xindro: Sure what are we going to have? Lestraxil: Well…the only things I see in the fridge right now are popsicles. You want one? Xindro: I guess. Nallidex: …ok… We started to eat popsicles together in the kitchen. Since everyone is gone, the skyscraper was this silent home that constantly echoed. We have been eating popsicles the whole time and we could hear ourselves eating it with these loud echoes. It only made the moment more awkward….It’s really hard to talk to these new members. Nallidex is quiet and mysterious and Xindro sits far too casually and doesn’t look at me when he is talking….sigh…not only that but they are sleeping in my room. Nallidex: Who is Lumaria? Lestraxil: …uhh…where did you hear that? Nallidex: You were mumbling it in your sleep….So who is he? Lestraxil: He’s just someone from my memory, that’s all… Nallidex: Are you in love with him? Xindro: Sigh…Nallidex you shouldn’t ask these questions so bluntly….not that I care or anything. Lestraxil: It’s ok….I don’t know if I’m in love with him or anything…I just recently remembered him… Nallidex: It’s fine…. Lestraxil: So how do you like the organization? Xindro: It’s whatever… better than doing nothing…. Nallidex: Agreed… Lestraxil: oh, ok then….hmmmm….lets see…we could talk about- Xindro: -You don’t have to talk to us. We’re only here to watch over you…. Lestraxil: Just trying to get to know you two since we might end p being paired up for missions. Nallidex: I don’t mind…. I was about to give up on these members and just eave them here in the kitchen but I started to hear footsteps nearby. It was the other members, it looks like they returned from there mission. They all came to say hi to me. It was a bit surprising since I don’t usually see any members so happy. I even saw Xenka being happy to see me. Well I didn’t mind…I usually don’t. Rudimix: Hey Lestraxil, you look much better. How you been this whole time? Lestraxil: I’m fine…just need to look after myself. Xenka: Did you see the two new members? Lestraxil: Yes I did but…I could’ve sworn there was a third new member… Xenka: you’re weird….only two members. Besides how would you know if there were new members? Lestraxil: Not that hard to guess when they are right in front of you…still I could’ve sworn there was a third- Marluxia: Oh Lestraxil! You look much better. I hope you didn’t have too much trouble walking around. Lestraxil: Marluxia…no I didn’t have any trouble. Marluxia: Good. We should all head back to sleep now, it’s been a rough day. Lestraxil, the two new members will be sleeping with you ok? Lestraxil: Yes Marluxia. Marluxia: Very well then, tomorrow you and Xenka will train these two new members. They just entered yesterday so they still don’t know how to fight exactly. Xenka: Alright then. Hey Lestraxil, Try not to teach the new members how to die in battle, you hear? Lestraxil: Oh Xenka, your remarks are ever so clever….. Rudimix: well I’m heading to bed. It’s been a long day. Xenka: I think I’ll do the same. Nallidex: What will we do? Lestraxil: You two are tired right? Just go to sleep if you want. Xindro: Fine….. Marluxia: Lestraxil, you don’t look like your fine. Is something wrong? Lestraxil: I had another dream...this time it wasn’t all about Rin. Marluxia: what happened in your dream? Lestraxil: ‘m not really sure….this garden boy….he went with me to this festival and…. Marluxia: garden boy?... Lestraxil: Yes. He reminds of someone I know but…. Marluxia: Don’t worry about dreams…dreams are merely dreams….just try to feel better by tomorrow ok? Lestraxil: yes Marluxia… Marluxia then kisses me and sends me back to my room. The other members seem to already become comfortable in my rom. Xindro is sleeping on my bed while Nallidex is sleeping on the floor. I tried moving Xindro but he didn’t really seem to care. This night is just full of surprises….sigh…I decided to go up on the roof and stare at nobody castle for a while…I wasn’t really all that sleepy and it’s best for those two new members to be left alone for today….I guess I should avoid sleeping. After today’s dream,I don’t really want to see another one for a while….. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 554
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | !!!!!!!!! That was an amazing chapter! lol, i loved it! omg, that is so not what i was expecting. excellent job!! |
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| The True Assassin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,311
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | i like chapter and the dream was so good how you described it i love xindro you made him like i vision him and Nallidex is good to i couldn't believe the dream didn't make Lestraxil wake up this chapter was so good i can't wait for chapter 9 |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 21 Posts: 845
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | *Sounds horn* I know who Lumaria is >X3 And I'm still very suspicous about him >:) Rather peaceful chappie ^_^ I like how we got to learn more about Lestraxil's past |
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| | #74 |
| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,166
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | sorry everyone... i finished...chapter 9 will take a while....i dont have internet, so the method of uploading chapters was using flash drive and transferring in the library. but when i was washing my clothes...i kinda forgot that my flash drive was in my pants pocket. so chapter 9 will take a while.....please forgive me....... |
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| The True Assassin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,311
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | thats ok i can wait |
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