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| The Great Avalanche Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,305
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| Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 21 Posts: 843
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | *Purrs* It can be as shojo-ie as possible, I absolutely adore this chapter! X3 |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 18 EXP: | Chapter V Ώ Last night I had gotten much sleep than before. I even had a dream. It felt pretty real. I didn’t know what it meant though. I dreamed about the girl Ansem possessed. She and I were playing and laughing together. It’s like we were friends at one point. I didn’t pay much attention to it….Right now I want to see Master Marluxia. He told me last night that we will be on a mission together. Maybe I can ask him about the dream I had. Lestraxil: Hey guys, did you sleep well Larxene: Yes we did, Marluxia told us to wait for him here. He’s preparing our rewards right now. Xenka: Yeah, I bet Larxene and I got the best reward since we found that keyhole. Larxene: You dint find anything, I found the keyhole while you were watching that fight against Hercules and that wind titan. Xenka: But master Marluxia doesn’t know that, so I will most likely get the biggest prize. Larxene: whatever….hey Lestraxil, Rudimix. Were you really up against Ansem last night? He’s so powerful. I wonder how you managed to survive. Rudimix: It was two against one, how is it so hard to believe? Lestraxil: Well, it was pretty even counting the shadow creature. But you have to admit, something was wrong with him. He suddenly transformed into this girl and called me “Allister”. Then he changed back and ran away. Larxene: Well….the names given to you and the others by Marluxia are just anagrams of your original name. Lestraxil: Anagram? Larxene: Yeah, the letters of your names are mixed around and added with an X. So….Lestraxil would easily spell out Allister without the X. I’m guessing this girl knew you before you turned into a Nobody. Lestraxil: Oh, than what was your original name? Larxene: I don remember, I don’t care. Larxene’s my new name. I don’t need memories of my past. It’s kind of ironic though. Lestraxil: What is ironic? Larxene: This girl that knew you, she must have been from your Homeworld. She probably met Ansem and was trained with darkness. And you turned into a Nobody who controls darkness. I wonder if you two were friends before your Homeworld’s heart was taken. Lestraxil: My Homeworld’s heart taken? Rudimix: Yes, why do you think we are nobodies? Our hearts were probably taken by one o those heartless things or our Homeworld’s heart was probably taken. I bet it was that Ansem guy. Marluxia: You are correct, Rudimix. Sorry for the wait. Here are your rewards. Twilight town has just released a new flavor of ice cream. So I bought 7 for each of us. It’s called sea salt ice-cream. Master Marluxia then passes on the ice creams to each of us. We were curious to see what “ice-cream” taste like, especially with this new sea salt flavor out. Actually none of us were wiling to taste it. We were all new to this. Marluxia: Oh right I forgot…..Ice-cream is a treat, you eat it. It’s supposed to taste good. Just watch…. I then see master Marluxia grabbing a big bite off o the sea-salt ice cream. At first he didn’t look comfortable eating it, but then after a few more bites, he started to look more pleased. Marluxia: See? It tastes good. Kind of strange though….. Lestraxil, why don’t you try it? Lestraxil: Ok. Xenka, Rudimix, Larxene: … Lestraxil: It tastes sweet…and salty? Well you were right master Marluxia, it does taste good. After that, everyone started to try the ice-cream. They all seemed to enjoy it as well. Well…Everyone except Xenka. He didn’t look pleased like the other members….instead, he looked really mad. Xenka: I wait for you to give me my reward, and all you did was given me some dumb ice-cream!? Marluxia: You don’t like it? The other members liked it. What did you want from me? Xenka: I wanted you to me my own room or something like that! Xenka then drops the ice-cream on the ground and steps on it. I really detest him. He never appreciates anything that is given to him. He makes me so mad I felt like smacking him on the face….But as I was about to walk up to him to do it, Master Marluxia grabs my arm and pulls me back. Marluxia: Don’t let him get to you, Lestraxil. Lestraxil: Sorry master Marluxia. Marluxia: Your own room? Sigh…I suppose….in fact, why don’t I give you all new rooms. Lestraxil, you can choose any room from the 7th floor, Xenka you can choose any room from the 5th floor and Rudimix can choose one from the 3rd floor. I hope there aren’t any complaints now Xenka. Xenka: … Larxene: Isn’t there another reason why you called us here? Marluxia: Yesterday Ansem discovered our plans for a coup d’état against the organization. This means he will be hunting us down. So we can’t just inspect worlds anymore like before. This time we need to train so that we can be strong enough to take down Ansem. Today you will roam around the world that never was and train against these heartless creatures. Do you all understand me? Everyone: Yes sir! Marluxia: oh, Lestraxil, you will train with me today. Lestraxil: oh ok. Marluxia: Here are the coordinates of a new world I want you and I to go, I heard that the sunset looks really nice there. Why don’t we go and see for our selves, shall we? Lestraxil: ok. Master Marluxia and i then open our corridors and went to the coordinates he gave me. When I got there, it showed this huge island with a big view of the ocean. It was also very windy and cold for such a sunny place. I could even see a small island not so far away from here. Marluxia: It’s great isn’t it? Lestraxil: yeah, where did you find this place? Marluxia: I overheard Xemnas talking about the key living in this world. So out of curiosity I came to check it out. Lestraxil: Key? Why would a key be living here? And do keys even live? Marluxia: I don’t understand it either. All I know is that this “key” person lives here. Lestraxil: heh. You think Xemnas is a little crazy? Marluxia: That’s why I need this organization. So I can run the organization properly and so that we all get what we want, our own hearts back. Lestraxil: hmm…well still…this view is very nice. Marluxia: it ill look even better at sunset. Let’s just wait at the shore until it’s time. Lestraxil: ok. It’s been a few hours since we waited for the sunset, master Marluxia and I both sitting at the shore close together, it felt really great. The sun was very close to setting. As we waited, we started to see some kids rowing there boats towards the main island. I specifically saw a women sitting at the beach all alone. I was a bit curious to see her sit there. She was just looking at the children rowing back. So I came up to her. Lestraxil: Excuse me. Are you here to see the sunset too? It doesn’t seem like your staring at the sun. Lady: Oh no, I’m just waiting for my sun, he also watches the sunset. Lestraxil: Son? What’s that? The lady then starts to laugh. I didn’t understand. Did I say something wrong? Hmm…Maybe Marluxia could explain it to me… Lady: It seems you have been skipping school, young lady. Haven’t your parents ever called you “daughter” or have you ever seen another parent call there young boy “son”? Lestraxil: uh...Parents? What are those? Lady: Oh dear…are you an orphan? Lestraxil: I don’t know….but can you tell me more about it. Lady: Your parents are those who gave you birth. They take care of you since you were a child. They usually call there little girl “daughter” or there boy “son”. Lestraxil: Oh….and you’re waiting for your son? Which one is it? Lady: It’s the one in red with brown hair. Lestraxil: Wow, he looks really cute. Lady: Maybe one day you’ll have a kid of your own. Lestraxil: yeah, probably. I’ll most likely get more than just one. The lady then starts to laughs again, except a little louder than the first. She then takes a deep breathe and looks at me very deep. Lady: Your eye’s…..they’re bright red. The boys must have asked you to be there soulmate now and then. Lestraxil: oh no, I’m already someone’s soulmate. Lady: really? You’re so young. I didn’t expect someone like you to choose so easily. Lestraxil: Actually my soulmate is right there sitting at the beach. Marluxia: Lestraxil, who are you talking to? You’re about to miss the view. Lestraxil: oh, sorry. I was just curious to se what this lady was doing. She says she is waiting for her son right there. Marluxia: oh, well it’s ok. Why don’t we watch the view all together? Lady: oh thanks for the offer but I’m afraid my son just arrived at the shore. Well, I’ll be seeing you two. If you ever want to visit, I live at the small white house right there. Lestraxil: oh ok. I’ll remember. Marluxia: Anyways….isn’t the view perfect? Lestraxil: yeah….the lady at the beach….she told me a lot of stuff I didn’t know about. Marluxia: Really….What did she say? Lestraxil: oh, about sons and daughters and parents. Stuff like that. Marluxia: oh didn’t you ever have parents? Lestraxil: I don’t remember….I don’t think I ever had parents if this is the first I hear about it. Marluxia: Well…its ok, once we get our hearts back, you’ll remember if you did or not….. Lestraxil: yeah….I’m happy that you took me here, Master Marluxia. The sunset looks really nice. Marluxia: you know…the clouds in the sky give off a very faint glow of pink when the sun sets….its like they’re trying to make the sunset look even better. The pink mixed with red looks really nice, don’t you think? Lestraxil: where did you hear that? It almost doesn’t sound like you. Marluxia: oh you caught me so quickly. I actually learned the line from Axel. Anyways…I think you look very beautiful in this light Lestraxil, I promise, these words come from me, 100%. Lestraxil: You look really nice too Marluxia…..I love you so much… Marluxia: I love you too, Lestraxil. As we were both about to kiss, we started to hear a faint screaming from the little island. Maybe one of the kids got stuck there. Lestraxil: Marluxia, a kid is in trouble. I have to help him. I’m sorry this had to happen. Marluxia: Don’t worry about it. I just opened a corridor for you, go help the child. Lestraxil: yes, master Marluxia. I ran into the corridor that led me to the little island. But the sun has set along time ago. I couldn’t see where the child was. Then I heard another scream. This time I could tell it was a boy. Lestraxil: boy! Where are you! Boy: I’m over here! Someone please help me! Lestraxil: I can’t see you! Tell me where you are! Boy: I’m in the cave behind the waterfall! Please, hurry! Lestraxil: Ok, I’m coming after you. The entrance to the cave was a bit small, I couldn’t fit in. I tried squeezing through but I couldn’t even fit my top half. So I had to open a corridor to get in there. When I got in, I couldn’t see a thing, it was pitch black. I started to hear cry. Lestraxil: hey, I’m here. What’s wrong, boy? Boy: *sniff* I was playing swords with my friend, but he finally beat me. So we got in a fight and I ran away in this cave and told him to eave me alone for the whole day. Lestraxil: Is that all? So your friend beat you, which was only one time. You shouldn’t fight for thing like that…. Boy: I know…*sniff* but now I’m scared…. Lestraxil: Why are you so scared? Boy: Because it’s so dark, I can’t see anything. The darkness scares me. Lestraxil: The darkness shouldn’t scare you….Did you know? There’s darkness in each of us. So you cant be scared of something that’s inside of you. Boy: really? Lestraxil: Yeah. Boy: But I’m not going to be friends with that kid ever again! He abandoned me… Lestraxil: Maybe your friend thought you didn’t want to talk to him, Isn’t that why you went in here all on your own. Boy: maybe… Lestraxil: Why don’t we get out of here? Hold my hand. I know another way on how we can get out. Boy: *sniff*ok. I took the boy in the corridor. Hopefully the darkness wouldn’t consume him for being in the corridor too long. I’ll just take him outside the cave, that’s enough time for him to get out of the corridor without it consuming him. Lestraxil: ok, here we are, safe and sound. Boy: Wow! How did you do that? Lestraxil: It’s a secret. So…Where’s your boat? Boy: It’s over there. Can you help me row it back to the other shore? Lestraxil: ok. I looked around to see where Marluxia was but I couldn’t see him. So I just kept on rowing with the boy. I hope I didn’t upset Marluxia. Boy: Riku Lestraxil: huh? Boy: Riku, that’s my name, what’s yours? Lestraxil: I’m Lestraxil. Riku: heh, that sounds like a boy’s name. Lestraxil: oh? maybe I should’ve left you in that cave all by yourself. Riku: oh no, please, I’m sorry. Lestraxil: I was just kidding. Anyways...are you going to give your friend another chance? Riku: I don’t know… Lestraxil: Well, you should. He’s your friend. I bet he’s worried about you right now. Riku: I guess…. I haven’t seen you around here. Are you a new visitor? Lestraxil: You could say that…. Riku: Will I see you again? Lestraxil: Sure…. Look, we already arrived at the shore. I guess I should be going. Riku: Wait! Lestraxil: what is it? Riku: can you walk me to my house? Lestraxil: Sure, which house is it? Riku: It’s the one with the blue roof next to the house that’s white. Lestraxil: Oh I see….ok then let’s get moving. Riku: You know…you’re really nice and pretty, Lestraxil! Lestraxil: oh thanks Riku. You’re really nice too. Riku: So how did you know about darkness inside people? Lestraxil: uh…I don’t know….I guess, someone taught it to me along time ago…. Riku: oh that’s cool. As I passed the white house, the boy sitting at the stairs starts yelling out Riku’s name and running towards us. I assume this was the boy he is friends with. The boy suddenly hugged Riku and started to cry. Riku: Sora? Sora: I’m sorry Riku. I shouldn’t have cheated on that one match. You were supposed to win. I guess I was tired of losing. Riku: its ok, I’m sorry I was so mad….Let’s promise never to fight for something silly like that. Sora: OK! I promise. Lestraxil: See…I told you your friend was worried about you. Sora: Hey, who are you? Lestraxil: oh I’m nobody…. It’s great you two made up. Well, I should be going…. Riku: Bye Lestraxil! Sora: Lestraxil? I thought he was a girl! Lestraxil: I AM a girl. You little brat, Riku had more manners than you. Sora than grins really big and puts his hands over the back of his head and begins to laugh. I didn’t expect kids to think my name was funny…rotten little brat…. Sora: heh heh, I’m sorry. I wasn’t trying to be mean. Lestraxil: its ok I guess….well goodbye Riku….and Sora After I left the two, I still couldn’t see Marluxia anywhere…I hope he didn’t get mad at me….I decided to look for him on the highest hill but I didn’t see him….Sigh….I hope he’s still around here. As I turned around he appears right in front of my face. Lestraxil: oh, Master Marluxia….I was looking for you…Where did you go? Marluxia: I was watching you. You were really nice to those kids….Almost as if you were there mom. Lestraxil: Really…I guess I have a thing for kids. Marluxia: you did well…It’s really late now…we should be going back home. Lestraxil: uh…right….hey, thanks for taking me here, Master Marluxia. I really enjoyed that sunset…. Marluxia: No problem… Master Marluxia sounds like he’s happy but he doesn’t look happy at all….maybe I really did do something wrong and he doesn’t want to tell me…. Lestraxil: I’m sorry Master Marluxia…. Marluxia: It’s ok…next time we’ll spend our time much better. But you shouldn’t be sorry….you did something good. Lestraxil: Well still…. Marluxia: Rest easy, Lestraxil… He then kisses me on the cheek and goes back to his room. For some reason, the kiss on the check didn’t feel as good as the one he gave to me on my lips….It’s so unfair….He says I did good, but why don’t I feel good inside? 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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 18 EXP: | Hey guys, i have two openings, one female and one male. PM me, and i'll see what i can do with your characters. It wont be first come, first served. i will need to see your characters description and put the best one that fits the story. I will have to ask you to choose a solid color for hair or highlights. NO BLONDE!!!! too many blonde organization members. try to choose an original attribute. a pretty decent personality, and of course a not-so complicated weapon. Try to find an original weapon, if you can. so i'll summarize it, hair color, eye color, weapon, attribute, and personality. I'll do my best to add you in the final drawing. I draw pretty well, pretty close to kh style. Anyways, so i'll accept only one entry from each person. If you want to be in it, jsut PM me and follow the list that i ask of you. If you want me to make one for that would be great. The one thing i miay ask, is try to keep it within my drawing style, i only draw bangs. i cant draw hair popping up. |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 21 Posts: 843
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | Squee~! A lovely calm chapter, although I still feel a little suspicious towards Marluxia for some reason, even though he seems to be rather nice at this point, giving into demands and all. Also the part with kid Riku and Sora was so cute! X3 |
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| The Great Avalanche Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the freezing Cold Age: 16 Posts: 2,305
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | chapter 5 is so great i love how young sora and riku are there and the ice cream part. man this story just keeps getting better great job as always |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Honestly, I don't even know anymore Age: 16 Posts: 554
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | wonderful job once again! omg i want to know what happens next!!! |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 18 EXP: | thanx for the support, it seems i've been getting a bit of regulars here. Not that i dont mind, but can you guy's do me a favor? can you spread it alittle bit? just for those who like shojo and action mixed together |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 21 Posts: 843
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | Spread it? Um, like advertise it or something? |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
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| Waker of the winds Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Outset Age: 18 Posts: 5,841
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() ![]() Level: 25 EXP: | Chapter 5 seems a lot more like playwright then the other ones. No transition between dialog and narration of the surroundings and what's going on. It's not necessarily a bad thing, but including little quips about small details would make it seem a bit more life like. |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
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| Hot Crusader/Janissary lurv start! | I liked the new chapter. |
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| Lestraxil (allister nine) Join Date: May 2009 Location: Khinsider Age: 19 Posts: 4,095
Rep Power: 5 ![]() Level: 18 EXP: | Chapter VI Even after the situation that occurred last night, I still managed to dream about this girl. The girl has been entering my mind quite frequently. Last night I had a dream about the girl being with friends and having a great time, I on the other hand was alone in an alley playing with a moogle doll. In my dream I felt Envy over the girl. Since I’m still new to the emotions that I’m feeling, I don’t really know why I felt envious of her. The only difference was that I was alone and she had many friends. But in my last dream, we were close friends…how come in this dream I’m all alone and she’s with other friends and not with me? Was I envious of her because she had friends and I didn’t? That would only mean that I wanted those friends or that….I wanted her to be my friend…..Hmmm….These dreams are becoming so mysterious….If only master Marluxia can forgive me about last night and help me deal with these dreams….I still don’t understand why he was upset. He was grateful that I help Riku and Sora, he even said I did well, so why is he so upset? Rudimix: So how was training Xenka? I heard you learned some pretty good technique’s against those heartless beings. Xenka: Actually, I learned this cool move that could obliterate my opponent with one blow! Unfortunately, if I tell you the technique, you will most likely find away to counter it. It’s best to be left as a surprise. Rudimix: then this means I don’t have to tell you mine. Even if I did tell you I don’t think you would be able find a way to counter it. What about you Lestraxil? Have you learned any new attack or technique? Lestraxil: ….sorry, what did you just say? Xenka: You’re so stupid Lestraxil. He asked you if you learned a new technique yesterday. Lestraxil: No I didn’t, I was too busy hanging out with Marluxia last night. Xenka: So you admit it. You are Marluxia's lover! No wonder you’re wearing that collar, he’s got you in a tight leash! Lestraxil: I’m his soulmate. Besides why is it so important to master a new technique today? Rudimix: Didn’t you know? Today we are going to have a sparring session today. It’s part of our progress report. Hopefully you didn’t need to learn a new technique to survive today’s sparring. Lestraxil: I better start training right now and see what I can do for the report. Rudimix: You better hurry. You have 6 hours to train until the sparring begins. Xenka: Hey wait! Why don’t we train together? You know I like beating you and you need the training. Plus you’ll get better experience than those heartless out there. Lestraxil: Fine…just don’t kill me. Xenka: no promises. Xenka and I fought for about four hours but he kept beating me on every match. I haven’t even touched him once….It’s like I’m not even a real opponent to him….I use to be able to even out sparring with Xenka, now it’s like he’s in a different league from me…..How did he get so strong in just one day of training? Or is it because I’m weaker? I can’t tell….Whatever it is, I can’t hold out much longer. Any more damage to my body and I’ll fade away…. Xenka: Is that all you got? Come on best 30 out of 50! Or are you just hurting yourself so you can have an excuse not to give a poor progress report to Marluxia? It’s hard to believe you managed to survive against Ansem…. Lestraxil: Damn you Xenka…..let me just take a break….I can’t breathe… Xenka: Fine! Just don’t take too long, I was having so much fun beating you. I cooled off near an alley so that Xenka wouldn’t give me a surprise attack. But even if he didn’t use any surprise attacks, I still wouldn’t be able to defeat him…I just can’t understand it. He only had one day to train, and he already surpassed me….No…He couldn’t have gotten as strong as I think he has…maybe it’s me…I obviously have lost experience and become weaker. No that’s not it either...This doesn’t explain how I wasn’t even being able to touch him. Something must be seriously wrong with me. Unknown: You always liked to hide in dark alleys, huh Allister? Lestraxil: Who’s there? Unknown: Don’t you remember me? Lestraxil: Hey! You’re that girl that’s being possessed by Ansem. Why isn’t he controlling you right now? Girl: I’m not letting him take over today because I asked him if I could visit you. So here I am, Allister. Lestraxil: Why did you want to visit me? Girl: Don’t you know why? It’s pretty obvious. Lestraxil: please stop toying with me… Just tell me girl! Why am I so important to you? Girl: Girl? You forgotten my name? You even forgot that we were close not so long ago….What kind of friend are you, Allister? Lestraxil: I don’t remember anything about you. Girl: How can you say that so bluntly? You make me so angry when you treat me like this! You’re not the Allister I once knew. Lestraxil: That’s because my name is Lestraxil! It’s not Allister anymore! The girl then summons a wing-like sword and starts to attack me. She fought just like Ansem on memory skyscraper but much more agile…I’m still pretty weak from sparring Xenka….if she hurts me in my current condition I might fade away….just like the other members that were too weak...I Have to think of something…If I fade right now I wont see Marluxia ever again...I can’t let that happen….I just cant! He’s ‘my’ Soulmate! He’s mine! That’s when darkness started swirling around me and went into my weapon. Lestraxil: I won’t fade away like the others! You’re not taking me away from Marluxia! Girl: Marluxia? In that moment I opened a number of miniature corridors around the girl. These miniature corridors seem to be a new ability that I just discovered…I just got find out what they do….The girl was prepared to make another attack on me so I had to focus my energy on the mini corridors. The moment I concentrated on the corridors, whips suddenly came out and wrapped the girl’s limbs completely preventing her from moving. I finally had a new technique to use in battle. But at the moment…I need to talk to this girl, since she can’t move right now, that would make it easier for me to interrogate her. She might help me regain my lost memories Lestraxil: Girl….You know me right? Girl: what of it? It’s not like you care! You completely forgot about me…. Lestraxil: …I just want to remember Girl: No you don’t! I wanted to visit you Allister, but you changed. Your wearing tis dark cloak, you have a weapon of your own and you even used it against me…. Lestraxil: ….. I then took a closer look at her. The one thing I noticed about her was her blue eyes. The first time I saw them was a mere glance and didn’t have the chance to see the radiant glow, but now I can see it really clear. I went closer to her so I can get a better look at them, but she turns away so she wouldn’t look at me. I then grabbed her head gently and moved it towards me. Her eyes have this deep blue that I just can’t resist. They even remind me of Marluxia's eyes. I was in such a daze just by looking at her eyes that I forgot I still had her trapped. Girl: What are you looking at? Lestraxil: Your eyes…they are really blue and deep…..They look beautiful….. Girl: You said that when we officially met…don’t you remember? Lestraxil: No...I don’t…but can you at least tell me your name? Maybe if you tell me your name, I could remember. Girl: It’s Rin…. Lestraxil: Rin…what happened? Why can’t I remember you? And why are you being possessed by Ansem? Rin stares at me quietly for quite a long time, as if she didn’t know what to say. Then she opens a corridor under her and falls in. I tried grabbing her hand but she managed to get away quicker than I thought. I wish I understood it all…She said ‘what kind of a friend am I’….Were we friends? ...It’s just like in my dreams. Only in my dreams, she and I were close friends…Are those dreams actually my memories of her? It all starts coming together… Xenka: Hey! Lestraxil! The sparring session has started! Your next! Where are you? Lestraxil: I’ll be right there! Just give me a minute. I think that little talk with Rin helped me rest a little…Even though she did try to fight me. Still, I got some water to drink, I’m sure I’ll be able to defeat Xenka today. Now with this new technique, I might be able to beat Rudimix. Lestraxil: Ok I’m ready, who will be my opponent? Xenka: It’s me! You better be prepared to lose. Oh! And Marluxia, you better be watching this! Marluxia: I’m watching, so please begin the sparring. Lestraxil: right! Xenka and I both summon our weapons at the same time. He always beat me with his surprise star summons and uses them against me…I Need to figure out how to dodge them…Maybe if I use the multiple whips to form a shield, he wouldn’t be able to touch me. So I summoned more whips to cover the areas where the stars usually hit me and two whips under his legs for a surprise attack. Xenka still acts like he owns this battle, but he doesn’t have a clue what’s coming to him. I’m just waiting for his secret technique to be revealed so I can summon a whip to choke him before he even has the chance to use it. Xenka: prepare to fade into darkness Lestraxil! My powerful technique will obliterate you! He then jumps over the air and levitates over the sky. He then swings his staff around over his head and starts to summon stars, but it was different than before. He use to summon 1 at a time, but now he summoned over a thousand at once. Is he really going to use all of these stars against me? He must really be crazy. I don’t think my whips will be able to be used as a shield this time. He’ll kill me and the other members! It’s too dangerous to choke him while the stars being summoned. I need to do something! Now it looks like he’s pointing the staff at me…wait…if he points it to me then all the stars will hit me….so I just need him to point somewhere else so the stars won’t hit me and give me the chance to execute surprise attack! The stars were already launched and just about to hit me when I summoned a whip to pull his hand to point somewhere that won’t me or the other members. All the stars then managed to hit a random building of the coast. This was my chance. I summoned a whip to take his staff away from his hand and another 4 to hold his limbs. Now all I need to do is use my main whip to hit his pressure points and he won’t be able to fight. But right as I was about to do it, Master Marluxia grabs my hand and stops me from finishing him off. Marluxia: You both did well. I think that’s enough sparring for the both of you though. Lestraxil: But…I was just about to defeat him. Marluxia: this was just to show your progress in battle. Tomorrow we have a busy day. Axel has enough time to visit us tomorrow and will help us with our missions. So let’s just head back and take a break. You’ll need the energy tomorrow. Xenka, Lestraxil: yes Master Marluxia. Xenka: Great where did you learn that flashy trick? Lestraxil: while I was training alone… Xenka: Well whatever, I’m heading back to my room. Let’s go guys. Larxene: You’re just upset because you lost to Lestraxil. Rudimix: Please let’s go inside before Xenka makes you one of his enemies. Lestraxil: Oh, Master Marluxia…I wanted to talk to you about something. Marluxia: OK, what did you wanted to talk to me about? Lestraxil: I just wanted to say sorry for yesterday….I acted on my own and I didn’t really pay attention to you. If I could make it up to you in anyway, you can tell me right now and I’ll do it. Marluxia: Lestraxil, I already told you, it’s ok. I wasn’t upset with you in the first place. Lestraxil: but you’ve been upset this whole day….I could only assume it was my fault…Why are you so upset? Something happened. You’re not telling me anything. Marluxia: calm down…don’t cry Lestraxil: I’m not crying….I just wanted you to tell me the truth. Marluxia: And you deserve it, Lestraxil…Truth is….you remind me of a girl that I remember. I lost her along time ago before my homeworld was even destroyed….but Now that I’m a Nobody and met you, I don’t want you to end up like the girl before. Because you remind me so much of her, that I sometimes see her face when i look at you Lestraxil: So I’m just a stand-in? Marluxia: No, you are a unique person. you are much more preferable than her. Lestraxil: What was her name? Marluxia: I don’t remember….when you become a Nobody, you tend to forget some of the past and only try to remember what’s in the present. Don’t worry Lestraxil. You fought well. That brought my hopes up for you. I was scared you were too weak to handle Xenka so I was prepared to come in if it got too hectic. Lestraxil: You were scared? Marluxia: Yes I was… I felt like you were about to fade away but instead you managed to pass through Lestraxil: How was it possible for you to feel that? Marluxia: Because we are soulmates, our souls are connected. We feel each other’s souls, just like you knew I was feeling upset even though the other members didn’t notice a thing. You and I are special, Lestraxil….. Marluxia then kisses me on the lips, but this time it was a bit bigger than the first one. The kiss was much wider. Again Marluxia always finds a way to surprise me. I still liked it though. I hold his head with my hands and start to kiss back. We kissed for a while until I decided to stop. Marluxia: what did you think of that? Lestraxil: I like it, I like a lot of things that you’ve done for me….giving me this necklace and hugging and kissing me…I’m still having a few problems, but whenever I see you, its like all the problems are erased from my mind. Marluxia: I’m glad you feel hat way….We should head back. Tonight I need to sleep in nobody castle. I can’t let the real organization speculating me. You can head back on your own right? Lestraxil: I’ll be fine on my own. You just go and do what you need to do. Marluxia: Alright I’ll see you tomorrow Lestraxil. Marluxia then walks off to the white castle and I head back to my memory skyscraper. I can’t wait to head back onto my bed and dream….hmm….dreaming reminds me of Rin and my lost memories….I should just ignore it for now and worry about it when I see her. Tomorrow I’ll dedicate my time to search for her. Maybe we can be friends again. Hopefully she shows up tomorrow just like today. So tonight…the only way I can see her right now is by dreaming. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Sorry if the fighting wasnt as cool as you thought, its hard to put it into words. Also i tried making this a little yuro like but not to the point thats obvious. you know how kingdom hearts have really close bonds that look almost romantic, so i thought i should add that in aswell. Again feel free to PM me about the two organization omega openings. i'm close to adding a male, so all i need is a female. but if you think you have a good male character, i might add him in |
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