Organization Omega

[Azrael]

It's certainly excellent although hopefully you'll learn to leave the script format but it is interesting! I assumed that you gained inspiration from me since my RP concerned about Marluxia and his own Organization but Org XV is not mines :D

[Allister Rose]

Originally Posted by Silent Avera

So sorry! I've been away at A-kon with no internet, but I'm back, I'm back now!

*Reads*

EDIT: Hmmmm, I feel a bit suspicious towards Marluxia since he put a collar on Lestraxil; collars to me signify submission, ownership, blind loyalty, stuff like that. I like the first person point of view :3 I haven't read from that angle in a while so I'm intrigued by it very much so =^.^= I also like the weapon choices for the "new" members, the weapon Lestraxil has is a nice contrast to her somewhat shy personality as whips to me are like, sharp snaps of anger :P

Anywho, just ah, work on your grammer, and I will be-a keepin' up with this story. =^.^=

Yes, i really need to work on grammar. I dont really know exactly what i'm doing wont (i'm basically falling englsih anyways) but if i find something that doesnt sound right, then i'll edit it.

but yes the mystery on the collar and the personality was really in depth of Lestraxil. i didnt exactly have an original design for the others, so there might be a secret meaning to there weapons (if they thought that far ahead)

Originally Posted by Sa'id

It's certainly excellent although hopefully you'll learn to leave the script format but it is interesting! I assumed that you gained inspiration from me since my RP concerned about Marluxia and his own Organization but Org XV is not mines :D

really? i guess i'm under rating my fanfic too much. i thought it was horrible. oh well, i know the grammar is the most important. right now i'm looking for an editor. and since Iridium told me it was ok to use the script format, i went ahead and used it.

Also i never heard of your RP but i will now definitely check it out.

[Azrael]

Just read it if you wish but please continue to update this! I am pretty intrigued if Marluxia is able to pull off his rebellion or even succeed againist Sora!

[HeartOfTheHero]

wonderful second chapter! keep up the good work!

[Allister Rose]

Chapter III

As I sat there on the throne, I just couldn’t swallow all the answers that they were given to me. Although I’m feeling overwhelmed, I don’t seem to show it as much as I thought. The emotion-controlling collar must really be working. Still, I found out that I’m just a being with no heart? And kingdom hearts…Marluxia said it was currently being made by this Ansem-guy taking the hearts of worlds. This is all new to me…I didn’t expect these answers to hold even more mystery and surprises. As I drifted in my mind, I noticed everyone was quiet. I looked around to see why everyone was as quiet as I was and noticed something. It seems I wasn’t the only one overwhelmed by the answers given to me. Rudimix is also pondering to the mystery within the answers, and Xenka keeps scratching his sideburn. It only lasted for a short while though. After that, they both stopped and looked towards Marluxia as if they were waiting for something else.
Marluxia: Now that everything is cleared and all questions are answered, it is time for us to move on and do your daily missions. It is to investigate Worlds that have yet to be discovered by the Real organization. Xenka, you will be working with Larxene in this world called "Olympus Colleseum." Lestraxil and Rudimix, you will work together into the world called "traverse Town." Is everything Clear?"
Everyone: yes master Marluxia.
Marluxia: I now give you the coordinates to the worlds I need you to go. Do what I usually have been ordering you to do, inspect the area and give me a report, if you finish faster than expected than do whatever you wish to do in that remaining time. Is everything clear?
Rudimix, Lestraxil, and Larxene*: Yes sir!
Xenka: Wait!!
Marluxia: hm?
Xenka: You answered all of “their” questions, but now I have a question to ask you, Marluxia!!
Marluxia: Very well, Go ahead and ask your question, but please hurry, we can’t stay in this room for too long.
Xenka: You may have answered why we exist, what we are, and what you need us for. But why are we doing these futile missions for? You always order us to inspect these worlds, but for what!? We never find anything in the worlds you send us to and we don’t know what exactly you want us to find anyways. Shouldn’t we be plotting on how we can defeat this Xemnas guy and make you the new leader, instead of going to random worlds?
Marluxia: heh
Xenka: Why are you laughing!? Stop acting like a stuck up Leader!
Larxene: Quiet Xenka! You dare speak to master Marluxia that way!
Marluxia: Calm down Larxene, its ok…Very well Xenka, I will answer your question. Why do I send you to missions? It’s because I don’t want Ansem to be ahead of us. True, though Xemnas is the leader of the organization, Ansem is the one who is pulling the strings. Ansem has no intention in helping Xemnas. He is merely using him for the time being. Ansem is taking hearts of the worlds, the worlds that have already been inspected by the real Organization. This allows him to get even closer to obtaining Kingdom hearts. So I’m going to ask you all an important question. Do you know how Ansem finds the hearts of the worlds?
Rudimix, Xenka, Lestraxil: ………
Larxene: oh? You don’t know? It’s simple really. The hearts are kept inside a special door that is locked with a special keyhole. If Ansem finds this special keyhole, he will be able to get the hearts of the worlds.
Marluxia: So now you see? I send you to worlds so that you would give me a report. If I see anything suspicious in the report that may look like a keyhole to the world heart’s door, than I simply block the Door for Ansem can’t find it.
Xenka: Oh now I get it….
Marluxia: Was that all you needed from me, Xenka?
Xenka: heh, I suppose it will have to do…
Marluxia: Very well, now please take the coordinates and leave immediately. If we stay any longer than we will soon be caught by the other members. Oh, and Lestraxil, please be careful in this mission.
Lestraxil: uh…Yes sir…

After that Marluxia snapped his fingers really loud to make the thrones lower. He then gave us our coordinates and opened a corridor leading us outside of the castle. As we walked out I couldn’t help but notice Marluxia singling me out of everyone else after he was done informing us. Why did he tell me only to be careful? And why did I get so flustered?

Xenka: Hey! Lestraxil! I need to ask you something!
Lestraxil: What is it? Can’t you see I was about to enter into my corridor?*
Xenka: That collar you’re wearing, did Marluxia give it to you? It makes you look uglier than usual…
Lestraxil: I believe you said enough slander for today. What did you really want to ask me?
Xenka: Are you in love with Marluxia?
Lestraxil: No, I’m not. Now stop bugging me about that.
Xenka Very well…just don’t get too close to him. He’s hiding something. I think it’s odd for him to give you something like that and to not tell the rest of us.
Lestraxil: He isn’t hiding anything. This collar is to help me control my emotions that I have been feeling lately. Anyways, I need to be going now. Shouldn’t you be doing the same?
Xenka: No! I shouldn’t be doing anything you would.
Lestraxil: Fine, than just go away.
Xenka: Oh? Giving orders to your superiors again? Marluxia wouldn’t like that now would he…
Rudimix: Enough with the fighting…. If you want rank to govern the organization, than fine! I’m number 3! You are number 5 and number 7. Go to the worlds Master Marluxia ordered you to.
Xenka and Lestraxil: Fine…

WORLD: Traverse Town
SECTION: First District

Rudimix: You better now?
Lestraxil: I’m fine. Xenka doesn’t get to me that easily.
Rudimix: Just asking… Hmm...This world…Doesn’t it remind you of The World That Never Was?
Lestraxil: Your right, this place is practically empty, and has a number of neon lights. Not to mention the sky is pitch black. For some reason….I feel the worlds are somehow connected to each other.
Rudimix: Well then…Let’s inspect the place, shall we?
Lestraxil: yes, check the district up ahead and I will go check the one on the right.
Rudimix: ok.

Section: Third District.

I checked the whole area but I couldn’t find anything suspicious. All I saw was a big fountain and big neon light signs. I guess there really isn’t to report about this district. Well, the area is really bright. I guess I could add that to the report. All of a sudden I hear some chuckling. So I checked behind me to see if anyone was here. But I didn’t see anyone. It was really strange. I couldn’t find anything important, but I guess the mysterious chuckling could be added to the report. Then I started to hear it again. This time I heard it from up above. I checked the roof tops before the chuckling would stop, but I didn’t find anyone and the chuckling faded away. This is starting to bother me, I should ask Rudimix if he’s heard it too.

SECTION: Second District.

Lestraxil: Hey! Rudimix do you need any help?
Rudimix: You finished already? It must have been a small district then. Anyways, all I need to do is check the bell tower and I’m finished. Want to help me out with that?
Lestraxil: Alright.
Rudimix: Oh and Lestraxil, was that you would did the chuckling?
Lestraxil: No, I was about to ask you if you heard it too.
Rudimix: I heard it while inspecting the water fountain. It was strange, I could’ve sworn it was you, I just heard it.
Lestraxil: it wasn’t me. Anyways….I see there’s another water fountain in this district too. I guess we should add that to the report.
Rudimix: Yeah. But for now we should check the Clock Tower.
Lestraxil: right.
I started to investigate the clock tower inside while Rudimix checked the top. All of a sudden I started to here laughter. Was it the same one who was doing the chuckling? No…it sounds different than last time. But where is it coming from? I started to follow the sound of the laughter. It started to get louder and louder as I followed. The Laughter than led me to a door. I started to open it slowly, but when I looked inside, a black and white creature came up at me.
Unknown: boo! Hahahaha I scared you, didn’t I?
It turned out to be a black and white cat with a crown and cape, not to mention big shoes. Was this little cat making all the chuckling in the third district? NO…the chuckling I heard there had a more heavy voice.
Lestraxil: Why are you here and what were you doing here anyways?
Unknown: How rude. Shouldn’t you introduce yourself little missy? I’m Cait Sith*. And your name is?
Lestraxil: …sigh….I’m Lestraxil.
Cait Sith: Lestraxil? What kind of name is that? Hey…..are you a boy? Because that sounds like a boy’s name, don’t you agree?
Lestraxil: What? No, it’s not a boy’s name! I’m obviously a girl. You still need to answer my question. What are you doing here?
Cait Sith: Well you see…There’s this guy who delivers packages*. I usually hide someplace nearby and try to scare him. Today I heard he was going to deliver a package in the second district, so I came here hoping he would be delivering a package near the clock tower.
Lestraxil: Oh I see…Well never mind then. I thought you were the one chuckling in the other district.
Cait Sith: Nope, wasn’t me. Hey…Where did you get these dark cloaks? I saw some guy up in the ceiling that had the same one. Is there a special on dark cloaks at “Mad Hatter’s store”*?
Lestraxil: No, these cloaks aren’t meant to be worn by beings like you.
Cait Sith: Aww…that’s too bad. I think I would’ve looked cool in one of those.
Lestraxil: Too bad indeed…Wait, didn’t you say you saw someone with the same cloak here? Where is he?
Cait Sith: Oh yeah, he’s up there on the ceiling. You can go up there with this ladder.
Lestraxil: Alright, I will….
Cait Sith: Wait, I’m coming too.
Lestraxil: Hey Rudimix! Did you find anything?
Rudimix: Oh hey Lestraxil, I didn’t anything, what about you?
Lestraxil: Well, I found this strange cat that can talk.
Cait Sith: Hiya! I’m Cait Sith. Hmm…. So you two are friends? I should’ve figured it out, since you two wear the same clothes.
Rudimix: … Hmm… I guess you didn’t find anything either...
Cait Sith: Didn’t find anything? You found something alright! You found Cait Sith! The best cat in the whole universe!!! You’re lucky to meet a cat like myself.
Rudimix: Well, Cait Sith, Do you know where the keyhole is?
Cait Sith: Keyhole to what?
Rudimix: Hmmm….its nothing. I guess we couldn’t find it. Which means we finished early, didn’t we?
Lestraxil: Yes, what do you want to do now? I don’t have any munny with me, so I guess we can’t by a souvenir
Rudimix: Well…we could just look at the Sky. You know, how we always do at Memory Skyscraper.
Lestraxil: OK,
Cait Sith: So tell me? What worlds did you guys came from?
Lestraxil: Wait, how did you know we aren’t from this world?
Cait Sith: Well recently worlds have been swallowed up by darkness. The survivors of the swallowed-up worlds usually fall here, in this world. You guys obviously are remnants of another world correct?
Rudimix: No, we aren’t remnants. Our world wasn’t swallowed up by darkness, our world IS darkness. We just chose to come to this world because we wanted to.
Cait Sith: oh? So you can go back whenever you want?
Lestraxil: Yes we can.
Rudimix: Enough, cant you let me enjoy the view?
Lestraxil: Right.
Cait Sith: sorry.
Rudimix: …..sigh…..you know….This sky is different than the one we see up on Memory Sky scraper.
Lestraxil: really? How?
Rudimix: Are you blind or something? You can see the stars much brighter here than from where we use to see them. Don’t tell me you didn’t notice.
Lestraxil: You’re right. Stars sure look more interesting in this world…
Cait Sith: heh. In your home world you guys couldn’t see them so well huh? No wonder you two are in such a daze….
Rudimix: Hey Lestraxil….what did you think of Master Marluxia’s answer?
Lestraxil: I don’t really know what to think of it….He was pretty straight forward. It’s like he didn’t even cared if he hid it from us or not.
Rudimix: Yeah, I know what you mean. I guess Master Marluxia was just waiting for us to ask. So, what’s with you and Master Marluxia?
Lestraxil: Oh not you too…
Rudimix: I’m not saying you too have some romantic relationship, but you have to admit, Master Marluxia has had a bit more interest in you lately and you have been talking to him more than any of us, even more than Larxene. Also, He gave you that collar, didn’t he?
Lestraxil: Yes, but its only to control my emotions, just a mere tool.
Rudimix: Oh I see…but still, knowing Master Marluxia, He must have given you only what you need to know. I’m pretty certain that collar does more than just control emotions.
Lestraxil: Yeah, you’re probably right. But I really couldn’t care right now. I trust Master Marluxia. He is our Leader after all. Don’t you trust him, Rudimix?
Rudimix: Well considering he hasn’t been unfaithful to us all this time, I would have to say yes, I do trust him. But that doesn’t mean I can’t keep an eye on him from time to time.
Cait Sith: So…This Marluxia guy is your master…Is he cool? Can I meet him some time? Oh can I? Please!
Rudimix: hmm….he sure talks a lot……Well I believe its time for us to go back home. Lestraxil, do you know what to report to master Marluxia.
Lestraxil: yes I do. It appears that this report will be very different from the other reports we entered in the past. But none the less, we should get going now….
Cait Sith: Hey wait!!! Will I see you guys again? You guys sure are interesting.
Lestraxil: maybe….when we feel like it……
Cait Sith: Ok! Hope you feel like it soon!!
Rudimix: heh…hopefully we don’t.
So we left Cait Sith and went into our corridors and left it at that. For some reason, I couldn’t let go of the mysterious chuckling….I felt like I heard that chuckle before, But I can’t remember where I heard it….I will have to ask master Marluxia about. If anyone knows about something like this, it would have to be master Marluxia.


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*I forgot to mention this. When over 3 people in script format speak simultaneously, I will simply put “everyone”, but if there are only 3 or under who say the same thing simultaneously than I will just list there names. Sorry if this might confuse people. If you think there’s a better way, than please PM me or just comment it here. Marluxia will probably never be included within “everyone” since he will hardly have the same thoughts of the other members, and if he does, I probably won’t make him say it simultaneously with more than one member.
*corridor is short for corridor of darkness. The sentence just doesn’t feel right when I say it as a whole word, so I abbreviated it. That way the sentence can flow a little faster.
*For those who aren’t familiar with Cait Sith, he is a cat from final fantasy VII (Just look him up on Google images). I had to add SOME ff character and usually its ff7 for kingdom hearts (1). But for now I merely used him for comedy, though I did add a bit more reference to the character than originally planned. Also, I plan on having Cait Sith more often and of course, Warrior of light (final fantasy I). Give me your opinion on that.
*Cait Sith is referring to Cid. If you don’t remember, he is a delivery boy (man) and works on gummi ships in kh1. (Not that I’m calling you dumb or anything, it’s just that my proofreaders didn’t get that little detail, so in case a few of you didn’t get it, I added a little note) Cid will most likely appear in the story depending on how many times Marluxia’s organization visits traverse town.
*Cait Sith is referring to the store in the second district, the one that sells coats and shoes. But in this story, mad hatter constantly changes the product line so right now he’s selling cloaks. He will probably change it again later on the story. (Again, my proofreaders didn’t get that little detail, so I had to add a little note on it).

[Allister Rose]

sorry guys, i removed the spacing so it would look much shorter. if you want me to put them back on, i will gladly do it.

[HeartOfTheHero]

very nicely done.
Ok, I have to ask, what's up with Marluxia and Lestraxil? but if it's a serious plot twist or something don't tell me, let me be surprised :)

[Allister Rose]

Originally Posted by HeartOfTheHero

very nicely done.
Ok, I have to ask, what's up with Marluxia and Lestraxil? but if it's a serious plot twist or something don't tell me, let me be surprised :)

Its not so serious, i cant reveal to you what the collar is. but lestraxil is completely falling for marluxia and marluxia some-what likes her. he'll soon develop more feelings for her. right now, marluxia has a small crush on her. he's trying to hide it though.

[Silent Avera]

And I'm late again.....not my fault though, again >>;


Anywho, creep chuckling = me like -> O.O

A mysterious force seems to already have the upper hand on them, empty chuckling is usually a very forboding element.

And yay for Cait Sith! I wub him X3

[Chaos]

allister your story amazing keep it up

[Allister Rose]

thanx, right now i ahve some sort of writers block that wont let me finish chapter 4. i got the idea but for some reason i keep adding this shojo feel to it

[Silent Avera]

The shojo mind is nice :3 Well, for the type of fangirl I am XD

[Azrael]

Excellent update

[Allister Rose]

Chapter IV
WORLD: World That Never Was
SECTION: Memory Skyscraper: Rooftop
As we came into the world that never was, I started to notice that no one was here to greet us. Usually I see master Marluxia on top of the rooftop, but today I didn’t see him here. Rudimix was also curious to see that master Marluxia wasn’t here.
Lestraxil: hey Rudimix, where is everyone?
Rudimix: I don’t know. Marluxia usually waits for us at the rooftop. Something must be wrong
I looked around to see if anyone else was around, but no one was here. Its really strange, not only master Marluxia but it also seemed like no one came from there missions. Did something happen while we were gone?
Suddenly I heard some chuckling again. It was the same one as before in traverse town, this time I heard it much louder as if it was right next to me. Suddenly a corridor opens and a man with a dark coat appears wearing a red emblem.
Unknown: So I was right….Marluxia is planning on taking over the organization.
Rudimix: Who are you? Are you the one who was doing that laughing in traverse town?
Unknown: Indeed, it was me. My name is Ansem, and you two must be his accomplices. Tell me, where is Marluxia.
Wait…he’s asking where master Marluxia is….so he didn’t do anything to him? Then where would Marluxia be? Something isn’t right. If he’s not the one who has taken Marluxia, than where could he be right now? I really don’t like this situation….
Ansem: Well? Are you going to stand there quietly or will you answer me. Where is Marluxia?
Lestraxil: why should we tell you!? So you can hurt him and take him away? He’s our master, and I promise to follow him. If you think you’re going to change that, than you have another thing coming!
Rudimix: what she said! You won’t take our master from us!
Ansem: such arrogance….fine, I’ll just force the answer out of you. Its unfortunate for you….this will be your last moment to live and you won’t even get to see your master one last time.
He then summons a creature from his shadow and starts to attack us. Rudimix then summons his bow and starts hooting his arrows at Ansem leaving me with the shadow creature. Rudimix kept aiming for the head and chest but Ansem blocked it every time, so he then splits in half and turns the two halves into twin swords. I then summon my whip and begin to fight. The shadow was really strong, he kept swinging his arms so fast that I couldn’t keep up, but its moves were somehow predictable. I could see what he was going to do before it even did it. At the same time he was predicting my moves. I couldn’t understand it. It’s like we both know each other. I had to somehow change my fighting technique so he wouldn’t predict it. I usually fight alone and move as swiftly as possible so my opponent wouldn’t hear me, but maybe if I tried fighting a bit closer to Xenka’s style I could defeat it before he even makes another move. I see Rudimix holding off pretty well with Ansem, so now all I need to do is jump over and choke it to death. So I jumped and swung my whip onto its neck but the shadow creature suddenly disappeared. Ansem then suddenly flashes in front of me, grabs my neck and squeezes it.*
Ansem: it’s strange….girl, you move like darkness and fight like darkness. The person I am possessing is telling me that it knows you….could it be?...al…allis….allister?
Ansem then begins to change into this black hair girl with blue eyes…..This girl….she seemed so familiar….like I once knew he. Not only that but her hand on my neck felt familiar as well….I kept thinking where I night have seen or known her, but nothing came in mind….why did Ansem suddenly change into this familiar girl?
Rudimix: Lestraxil! Get away from him!!
Lestraxil: r-right!
The girl suddenly changes back to Ansem and begins to walk slowly towards me. I prepare my whip in case he would try to attack again. He then stops walking and starts to open a corridor.
Ansem: It seems this person that I am possessing is attached to you, Allister. This got quite interesting. This will be even more interesting if I don’t tell Xemnas about the situation….besides…you and Marluxia could never overtake the organization. It’s futile to tell Xemnas about such mundane affairs such as yourselves…so for now this is goodbye.
Lestraxil: wait! The person that you are possessing! Who is she!? And how does she know me?
Rudimix: forget it Lestraxil…he’s already leaving….
Lestraxil: But he knows something about me!
Rudimix: he’s already entered in his corridor, who knows where he’s been….besides we need to wait for master Marluxia so we can give him the report.
Lestraxil: how do you know he’s ok!? He isn’t here. Something must be wrong.
Rudimix: calm down! I know that it’s a bit scary thinking about it, but master Marluxia is strong and he has always protected us. Right now we need to trust him more than ever. Everything is going to be ok. He’ll be back.
Lestraxil: ok, I’m sorry I freaked out.
Rudimix: I know, the thought of not having a leader is scary, even for me. Lets just wait for his return and we’ll see him again, I promise.
Like he said, we waited for about an hour and just when hope was lost, Marluxia then appears out from his corridor. Not only Marluxia but Larxene and Xenka arrived as well.
Marluxia: Forgive me, Xenka and Larxene reported a keyhole In the Olympus Colleseum world, so I had to block it before Ansem could find it.
Rudimix: Speaking of Ansem, He arrived not to long ago. We fought him and his shadow creature but he managed to get away before we could defeat him. I have reason to believe he was spying on us.
Marluxia: oh? You fought him and survived? Well done, your reward will be handed to you later.
Xenka: wait! We just found a keyhole for you! Shouldn’t we be rewarded?
Marluxia: You will all get a reward for your achievements. But for now we need to worry about Ansem. You said he’s been spying on you?
Rudimix: yes sir, in traverse town we heard some mysterious chuckling and when we return here the chuckling suddenly appeared again. That’s when we saw Ansem. He attacked us but we managed to hold our ground.
Lestraxil: that’s not all. He called me by the name, Allister and changed into this girl. He said that the girl was being possessed by him recognized me.
Larxene: are you sure he didn’t just “let” you win?
Rudimix: it was hard to tell. Ansem seemed pretty weak.
Marluxia: this is very interesting. Knowing Ansem, he probably won’t tell Xemnas since he sees the organization as mundane beings. So we don’t need to worry about the organization finding out, but we do need to worry about Ansem. It seems he will be trying to stop us just for the fun of it. Please everyone rest today, it was a long day and we accomplished more than originally planned. I will prepare your rewards tomorrow morning.
Everyone: Yes Master Marluxia.
Marluxia: Oh and Lestraxil, can you come into my room for a second?
Lestraxil: uh….yes sir….
When I walked in his room, he sat don and picked up his rose and smelled it for a few seconds. He then put it back down and looked back up at me. I really hope this time it wont be as emotional as the last time.
Marluxia: Lestraxil….you said that Ansem turned into a girl. Did you recognize the girl?
Lestraxil: no exactly. She looked and felt familiar but I couldn’t remember who she is. She had black hair and blue eyes. That’s all I can describe about her.
Marluxia: this is very interesting….the person who is being possessed seems to be trying to call out to you. It also seems like this person knows you….which means you are Ansem’s greatest weakness.
Lestraxil: I am? But how am I his greatest weakness?
Marluxia: In time you will know. But for now you need to try to regain your memories. The collar I gave you….make sure to keep it sake ok?
Lestraxil: ok. Master Marluxia….may I ask you something.
Marluxia: yes, what is it?
Lestraxil: Whenever I’m around you, I feel very strange. My face gets all red and warm and my hands start to fidget. I get nervous really fast when you start talking to me, even though I know I’m not afraid. I don’t know what this emotion is. Is it happy? Is it Sad? Is it Angry? I really can’t tell Master Marluxia, can you tell me what this emotion I’m feeling?
After I asked him that his eyes were wide open and he started to look a little red. Almost like how I feel when he’s around me.
Marluxia: I see….by that description, you made me realize what emotion I have been feeling…..the feelings I have for you Lestraxil….When you first arrived, I felt something really deep. I couldn’t tell what it was. So I avoided you. But lately you have been acting strange and forced my hand to approach you. Now I see what I’ve been feeling for you. The emotion you feel for me is the same emotion I have been feeling for you.
Lestraxil: really? What emotion is it? I want to know.
Marluxia then approaches me again like he first approached me the other day. This time I’m not scared…He might just want to hug me again. So I closed my eyes and waited for him to wrap his arms around me. But suddenly he puts his hands on my shoulder. I was startled to see it wasn’t a hug. His head then started to get closer to mine. I didn’t know what he was going to do this time so I left my eyes open just to see. All of a sudden he puts his lips on mine. In that instant my whole body was feeling the same emotion I have been feeling for master Marluxia but ten times stronger. This strange sensation that I was feeling made me forget about everything else and only focus on master Marluxia. Master Marluxia then backed up his lips and put his head on mine. He then started to whisper to me.
Marluxia: That is what most people call a kiss. How did you feel Lestraxil? Did you feel the same emotion but stronger?
Lestraxil: Y-yes...I did….it felt great….you must have done it a million times
Marluxia: This was my first time. When you love someone, you share your feelings to them with a kiss.
Lestraxil: is that what I have been feeling? Am I in love with you?
Marluxia: if you liked the kiss, then yes, you are. The same for me, I’m in love with you. I’m glad that we both realized what we have been feeling this whole time. If I had a heart, it would be pounding right now. Please Lestraxil, will you be my soulmate?
Lestraxil: soulmate? What is that?
Marluxia: It’s someone who is very special to the other person. They will hold a bond so close that no matter where they go, they will always be with each other. I want you to be my soulmate, so that where ever you go, you will always feel my presence and wherever I go, you will always be close to my soul. Wouldn’t that be nice, Lestraxil?
Lestraxil: yes, it would be nice…..Ok, I’ll be your soulmate.
Marluxia: Thank you, Lestraxil, your one of the greatest things that ever happened to me, I don’t want to ever lose you….. It’s been a long day. Please go back with the other members and rest. Tomorrow you and I will share a mission together, just the two of us.
Lestraxil: right….
As I walked away…master Marluxia seemed happier than usual…does being in love make you feel happy? I guess it does considering I feel happy as well. I hope we can kiss one more time….the feeling was surprisingly good and for some reason I feel a bit more confident than before. Is it because he admitted his feelings for me or is it because we both shared the same feeling to understand each other? I don’t know. But being in love....also makes me feel really happy….

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Hey guys, I hope this wasn’t so shojo. I know the romance is moving a bit quick, but don’t worry, I’ll definitely add more fighting scenes and with more detail.

my editors said if i couldnt make it any less shojo, than just leave it as it is. so i did

[HeartOfTheHero]

wonderful job! I love how this story is going so far