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Old July 19th, 2009, 06:38 AM   #91
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Okay, here's the next chapter. I'm sorry guys I didn't mean to make you cry... I didn't notice how sad it was until you guys said something. Then I went back and read the chapter and almost cried myself. Dag, I'm good... sorry I don't mean to hit my own horn but dag... Here's the next chapter!

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Part Three
Riku and Mai: Pregnancy
Ch. 3

Doki tilted his head. “Are you sure you want me to do that?” He waited for Riku. He couldn’t believe he was asked to do such a thing. He studied Riku for a while and blinked a couple of times trying to understand.

“Yes,” Riku sighed. “If anything happens to Mai…”

Doki nodded, “I understand, but what else do you want me to do, I can see that you’re hiding your true thoughts. What are those true thoughts?”

Riku bit his lip, there was no hiding his thoughts from a mind reading half friend half enemy. Riku made a fist and tried so hard to keep from crying. “If… if something happens to me… I want… I want you to take care of Mai, make sure she marries Axel or find Replica and have her marry him.”

Doki understood what Riku was thinking, “Riku…” he could see the pain in his face. For a second, Doki was taken back to the time when he felt the same way about Mai. And now… even if he had to do the same for Raven he’d go crazy thinking about her being alone… without him. Doki pushed the thought out of his head. “Are you sure you want me to do this? I mean…”

“Yes, I’m sure, do it, if I die make sure she’s happy with someone who will love her,” Riku said. It took everything in Riku to say those words. He’d never want to see her with another man. But… he wanted to see her happy, he wanted to see her live. Even if he wasn’t there for it, he needed her to be happy.

Doki looked at Riku. Doki bit his lip as he thought his words through. Then with a sigh he looked at Riku. “No, I won’t.”

“What?” Riku snapped his head up.

Doki smiled, “I won’t, I can’t do what you asked me. I will protect you as equally as I will protect Mai, you make her happy, and I will not stand to see her suffer.”

Riku looked at Doki, he grinned, although it was filled with sadness. “You don’t have to worry about me.”

Doki shook his head with the same smile, “If I worry about Mai I will worry about you, you and Mai are connected, if she dies, I know you’ll die and if you die she’ll die as well. I will protect you with my life.”

Riku sadly chuckled, “And to think… we were once enemies.”

“Hehe, I know,” Doki chuckled with him.

Riku rested his hand on Doki’s shoulder, “I’m glad you’re my friend now. But don’t think that I fully trust you now, you’re dating Raven.”

Doki laughed, “And I don’t trust you, you’re dating Mai,” Doki joked with Riku.

Riku sighed, “Well, I gotta know, do you truly love Raven?”

“Yes, with every fiber of my being, as Mai loves you. She could never fall for another. You humans can move on but we can’t, once you guys die we will most likely follow.”

“So you guys die when we die?” Riku folded his arms and listened.

Doki shook his head. “No, we kill ourselves.”

Riku blinked in surprise. Then he hid his eyes, ‘So that’s what she meant by that…’

“Oh… she didn’t explain did she?” Doki read his thoughts.

“No, she didn’t,” Riku sighed, “Now I can’t stand the thought of me dying.”

“That’s another reason why I was going to protect you as much as I would protect her.”

Riku looked at Doki with a warm grin, “Thank you.”

Doki shared the same grin, “I owe you, you didn’t kill me when you had the chance.”

“When?”

“Oh… never mind.”

“No, seriously tell me.”

“Nah, let me get back to Raven, I’m starting to miss her.” Doki left and ignored Riku’s demand.
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Old July 19th, 2009, 11:21 PM   #92
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aww....ex enemies bonding....well, I hope theyre ex enemies. And what exactly are Riku and Doki talkin about? Im a lil confused..
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Old July 20th, 2009, 12:39 AM   #93
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Hooray!!! Riku and Doki are finally friends!!! It is really great that they are on the same side now, especially considering they were complete and utter enemies not that long ago. Now, I know that Riku asked Doki to make sure Mai was happy if something happened to him, but what were they talking about before that? You made it seem like they were talking about something else before, so I'm kind of curious as to what it was. Also, what did Doki mean when he said that Riku didn't kill him when he had the chance? I'm kind of curious about that too. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.
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Old July 20th, 2009, 03:03 AM   #94
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That waz nice that riku and doki are becoming freinds
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Old July 20th, 2009, 03:17 AM   #95
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Hooray!!! Riku and Doki are finally friends!!! It is really great that they are on the same side now, especially considering they were complete and utter enemies not that long ago. Now, I know that Riku asked Doki to make sure Mai was happy if something happened to him, but what were they talking about before that? You made it seem like they were talking about something else before, so I'm kind of curious as to what it was. Also, what did Doki mean when he said that Riku didn't kill him when he had the chance? I'm kind of curious about that too. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.
What part do you mean? Do you mean the very beginning of the chapter? If so, Doki and Riku are talking about the same thing, Riku just restates what he wants Doki to do for Mai if anything happened to him.

And for my other readers, When Doki said that he owed Riku one he was referring to the time when Riku was in Kingdom Hearts and when he gave up right before he was thrown out. If you recall Nikushimi stopped Riku from attacking Doki while he was a wolf. Riku could have easily killed Doki because as an animal in Heart Haven the emo-troller is slight weaker when it comes to animals. Nothing special. I think... yeah, I didn't add that anywhere...
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Old July 20th, 2009, 03:16 PM   #96
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Oh, okay I understand now. (Above) I got pretty emotional when Riku said, “Yes, I’m sure, do it, if I die make sure she’s happy with someone who will love her.” How sweet...
Anyway, I'm very curious to see what heights Dawn and Dusk will go to get Mai and everyone else. Will people die? Another great chapter!
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Old July 21st, 2009, 06:59 PM   #97
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Here you go my fans! Another chapter! I hope you enjoy it!

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Part Three
Riku and Mai: Pregnancy
Ch. 4

A month had passed, Mai’s belly was getting larger and the enemy was never seen during that time.

“Riku… I don’t feel so good,” Mai complained, her ankles were hurting her the most but Riku kept her off her feet so they won’t get soar.

“Don’t worry, it’s just a side-effect,” Riku held her tighter. He was doing everything he had to keep his tears back. He wanted this to wait and now he had no choice but to stick with it.

“We can’t stay here for long Riku, we have to take her to Disney Castle,” Mickey said, he had come to help protect Mai a few weeks ago, he observed that Mai was more like a human now, her eyes were a strange reddish hazel instead of red. This made Riku worry, what if she became human and she couldn’t wield a Keyblade? Or what if she couldn’t protect the baby? What if she died giving birth? So many things ran through his mind…

“I know,” Riku answered the King. He hated thinking of Mai being human, she wouldn’t be able to defend herself and she could get hurt. “But… we can’t travel by gummi ship.”

The others gave him a confused look. That was the only way for them to get to Disney Castle.

Doki read Riku’s mind and nodded, “Riku has a point, we can’t travel that way, Dawn and Dusk can attack us, even in light speed.”

“I see,” Mickey pressed his thumb against his lips and thought.

Vincent sighed, “Why not move Mai to Heart Haven?”

“She’s even more vulnerable there than here,” Doki explained. “Because she’s more human she’ll have human sicknesses while there. Riku fell victim to that,” the others looked at him, “I’ll explain later.”

“That’s not good,” Yuffie said.

“I could move her but… it would hurt me a lot, opening up a corridor that large,” Doki said. “You see, moving Emo-trollers is difficult when they’re weak, so if I open a corridor it will drain me a lot.”

Riku looked at Doki. The others noticed that the two were sharing thoughts. “Would that work?” Riku then asked out loud.

“I could but it would hurt,” Doki answered.

“What do you plan to do?” Raven shook Doki for an answer but he did not answer, his eyes were fixed on Riku.

“No,” Mai said, “Riku, whatever you’re thinking don’t do it.”

“Mai it may be the only way to get you to Disney Castle… safely,” Riku said, his eyes never leaving Doki’s.

“Are you sure, Riku?” Doki asked. “If this fails you’ll be scarred.”

“Yes,” he nodded. “I’m very sure.”

“Then come with me,” Doki stood and Riku followed. Riku and Doki left the dinning room. Mickey, Mai, Vincent, Raven, Yuffie, Tiffa, Cloud, Sora, Kairi and Axel watched as the two walked away, Riku closed the doors and they were now completely unheard behind the door.

Mai wanted so badly to stop whatever they were doing. But her weak legs made it impossible to stand. She sat on the coach filled with fear of what might happen.

“Okay, are you ready?” Doki asked. He gave Riku a serious look.

Riku nodded. “Yeah.”

“You’re going to have to take your shirt off so I won’t burn it.”

“Yeah,” Riku pulled off his light blue shirt and shook his hair. (A/N: Sorry can’t help it, his hair turns me ON!)

Doki sighed, and arched his arm. Lifting his arm Doki stretched out his fingers. His finger tips started to glow and then from there they turned red. Doki then threw his hand into Riku’s bare chest, there a black like hole appeared and it opened a path for Doki to get to Riku’s heart. Riku groaned with pain.

“Stay with me, Riku,” Doki said.

Riku groaned louder and louder. His pain was like fire slowly eating away at him only hotter. Riku wanted nothing more than for it to stop, for the pain to decrease at least by a little, even by one or two degrees, just enough to stand on his feet.

Doki’s arm continued to reach into Riku’s chest.

“Doki!”

“Stay with me!”

Doki then pulled his arm out and away from Riku’s chest. Riku gasped for air as his fell to the ground.

Doki held his hand and groaned in pain. “You should be able to do that now.”

Riku held his chest and then made a fist. He lifted his hand, stretched it out and before him a corridor.

“It worked… I’m actually surprised.” Riku stood shakily and smiled.

“Me too,” Doki said, “Let’s not do that again, it hurts,” Doki said.

“You say that like you’ll have to do it again.”

“Well, if something happens to you and you stay turn to the light like you once did you will lose the power.”

“Got it,” Riku grabbed his shirt and put it back on. He sighed as his pulled his hair out. “Mai’s going to get worried.”

“Yes, maybe.”

Riku and Doki walked out of the room, Riku looked up to see tons of worried faces. Mai held the most miserable one. Mai ran to Riku. “Riku!” she yelled out tears streaming from her eyes. She never felt so worried in her life about him.

“Mai, I’m alright.”

“I heard you screaming, I heard you screaming!” she yelled.

“Mai, it’s okay, I’m fine really,” Mai continued to cry into his chest. “Don’t worry about me…” Riku realized what had happened, Riku wasn’t groaning at all, he was yelling and screaming the whole time. Riku kissed her forehead and rested his head on top of hers. Riku realized how much he worried her. He realized that he MADE her worry.
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Old July 22nd, 2009, 03:19 AM   #98
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Oh man, these two are having one hell of a time with this pregnancy, aren't they? This whole situation with Mai being pregnant is just plain bad for everyone involved, espcially Mai and Riku. So, what exactly did Doki do to Riku? I was a little confused about the whole process, and I'm still not sure what just went on. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
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Zipporahss, dont scare me like that! I thought for a second riku died!!!! God......but thank you for letting him live....wow mai n riku and doki seem to be having a real tough time with the pregnancy....But the thing that worries me most is NO MAI IS TURNING HUMAN!!!!!! AHHHHH Im freaking out here in texas!!!!
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Old July 22nd, 2009, 03:41 AM   #100
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Zipporahss, dont scare me like that! I thought for a second riku died!!!! God......but thank you for letting him live....wow mai n riku and doki seem to be having a real tough time with the pregnancy....But the thing that worries me most is NO MAI IS TURNING HUMAN!!!!!! AHHHHH Im freaking out here in texas!!!!
You're in texas? that's where I am right now! I'm in a town called LittleElm! half an hour away from Dallas!
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Old July 22nd, 2009, 03:44 AM   #101
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Oh man, these two are having one hell of a time with this pregnancy, aren't they? This whole situation with Mai being pregnant is just plain bad for everyone involved, espcially Mai and Riku. So, what exactly did Doki do to Riku? I was a little confused about the whole process, and I'm still not sure what just went on. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
TwilightRiku_13, what happened was this, Doki made it possible for Riku to open corridors like he used to, at will. ^^ Yay! The Hottie got his corridor ability back. That whole process was Doki forcing the power into Riku's heart to open corridors.

And yes, the whole thing with Mai being pregnant is pretty bad.
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You're in texas? that's where I am right now! I'm in a town called LittleElm! half an hour away from Dallas!
Zipporahss, I LIVE in Texas. But nowhere near where you are. I live way down south. In the Rio Grande Valley.


Sorry its a lil late, I'm finishing up my fic for the night. :)
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Old July 22nd, 2009, 05:07 AM   #103
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Zipporahss, I LIVE in Texas. But nowhere near where you are. I live way down south. In the Rio Grande Valley.


Sorry its a lil late, I'm finishing up my fic for the night. :)
Oh poo! I was hoping we could meet. Oh well.
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Yea well, me too....but I'm not much of a person to meet. I'm thirteen. I pretty much look like any other thirteen year old on the street......hey that is true....

neways, have u gotten a chance to read my fic?
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Yea well, me too....but I'm not much of a person to meet. I'm thirteen. I pretty much look like any other thirteen year old on the street......hey that is true....

neways, have u gotten a chance to read my fic?
No yet, but soon, right now I'm going crazy with this forum I'm on.
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