Riku and Mai 2

[oathkeeper100]

OMG~ Ninja and Co. are on Mai's side, yes! I liked how you showed Axel comforting Mai to, it showed he's not all fire and rage. But I am upset that Doki is back, him and his twisted ways. I can only imagine what he has in store for Mai, and poor Riku, all this is going on with him gone. Good job, can't wait for the next update.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Holy cow, say it isn't so?!?! Mai can't have any children?!?! Oh man, this is getting really crazy, and we're olny in the first part of the story. Man, not only can Mai not have kids, now Doki is back and may or may not know something, and, if he does know something, he might not tell. Seriously, this is insane. I really liked Saix in the chapter; to see him feel some kind of emotion was good to see, seeing as he is so cold. I also liked Axel's sympathy. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Woah, can't beleive those guys are in,
but doki's some one that would probably ruin most.

[Zipporahss]

Here's the beginning of part two, I couldn't let you guys hang for a few days so here's the first one.

Enjoy!

Part Two
Riku and Mai: Death and Life
Chapter One

Doki laughed again. “Do you really think I’d help you? Look at where you have me!” he glared her in the eye.

Mai frowned.

Doki sighs, he controls his laughter and it slowly becomes a chuckle. “Ah, such a beautiful face, yet I can’t have it at my own.” His laugh was out of him now.

Mai shook him, she wasn’t going to be distracted by his mood-swings. “Tell me what you know!”

Doki stared at her. He wasn’t going to answer yet. “Kiss me, as you once did. Or persuade me… I might change my mind.”

“You son of a * beep *, I’ll kill you!” Mai made a fist and punched him in the face.

Doki started to tremble, “I’m sorry,” he cried. “You know I can’t control my emotions… I’m sorry…” he whispered out as he cried.

Mai felt some form a pity. She started to back away when she realized that he didn’t answer her question. “You still won’t tell me… will you?”

“No,” he answered laughing in his tears. He laughed like it was some sick joke.

Mai punched him again.

“Harder, babe, harder!”

Mai turns red in the face and punches him again.

“Harder! C’mon! Harder!” He laughs. “You’re moving slow! Faster!”

Mai punches him three more times. But to no avail. That last punch (if given to a human) would have completely broken the jaw. Mai’s eyes started to fill with rage. She summoned her Keyblades. “You’re not going to tell me! I’ll kill you to get rid of the pain!”

Mai swung her blade and… something… no… someone stopped her…

[Zipporahss]

Here's the second one.

Enjoy!

Part Two
Riku and Mai: Death and Life
Chapter Two

“Mai stop!” Axel held back Mai’s blow from behind, Doki still on the floor stared up in amazement. “Killing him won’t get you any answers.”

Mai tried to push her arm down but Axel’s firm grip kept her from moving an inch. Mai tried with all her might but sadness consumed her and she dropped her Keyblades and fell to her knees.

Axel frowned and looked at Doki. He knew that this was Doki’s fault. Doki was trying to make her kill him. Axel walked over to Doki, he grabbed him and helped him stand. Mai’s three guardians stood close by watching. They all had come after they realized whom was laughing. Saix on the other hand was not there.

“Doki, if you help us, we’ll help you, we’ll give you one thing that you want,” Axel told him.

Doki’s eyes were wide, “Really?”

“Yes,” Axel nodded. “But you must help us first.”

Doki lowered his head. “Where’s Saix?”

At that second Saix appeared. Mai stood and listened and watched.

“What do you want?”

“Did you read all of the books?” Doki asked him.

“Yes, all of them where are you getting at?”

Doki looked at Axel then at Mai then Axel again, “What do you guys need my help for? You can figure out the rest of the clues your self.” Doki waved them away. He folded his arms and turned his head away from them.

“What are you talking about?” Mai asked him.

Doki looked at her, dropping his arms slowly. “Princess… Goddess, if you read all the books you notice that there are there are some things not spoken of. Those things are the loopholes for Emo-trollers to get pregnant.” Doki explained with a calm voice. His eyes were glued to Mai.

Mai stared at him wide eyed. “Are you sure?”

“Yes… but… before I tell you what those are I want something. One thing that’s all.”

Mai nodded, “What?”

Doki bit his lower lip and tightened his jaw for a few seconds. He thought heavily on what he wanted. His own body language told Mai that he was thinking of something was couldn’t be reversed. Mai was sure it would be that he wanted to die. He hated his life. Mai knew that Doki hated his mood-swings, he hated not being in control. He would want to die, that would be his only way out. His only exit.

Mai waited. She was sure of what was coming up.

Mai waited, she could sense fear and sadness all over him. He was trying to hold it in but he was afraid to ask for what he wanted. But why was he afraid of the one wish? What could he want?

Doki closed his eyes, “I want… I want my memory swiped.”

[Zipporahss]

Last one for today.

Enjoy!

Part Two
Doki: Searching
Riku and Mai: Death and Life
Chapter Three

“What?” Mai and Axel both said in shock.

“Swipe my memory.” He repeated louder, harsher, more demanding and yet more sad and afraid.

Mai watched him tear up. “Why?”

Doki looked at her, “You really want me to answer that question?!” he yelled out, a tear ran down his face.

Mai realized what he was asking and why. Mai, the King and just having a life of mixed uncontrolled emotions just made it hard for him to live. He couldn’t control his want for her, the King screwed that up with is evil-self. Mai didn’t love him back so he always felt betrayed. And having mixed uncontrolled emotions was very depressing, Doki didn’t want to live like that, he hated to live like that.

Mai felt sad, depressed, hurt for him. “Aw, Doki…”

“Stop that!” Doki yelled, “You’re confusing me! Love me , hate me, just pick one!”

Mai was thrown back for a second. “Doki…”

Mai walked over to him and touched the side of his face, he was sad, hurt, alone, afraid, and confused. Mai did this to him, everything that was happening to him was her fault. Everything. Mai looked at his face, his face was scarred with confusion, sadness, loneliness, and forever pain.

“I won’t…” Mai said. She said gazing into his green eyes. “I want you to be happy.”

“I can’t be happy without you, you know that,” He said his voice completely soft and filled with pain.

Mai’s guilt ran through her with ever breath he took.

“Yes, yes you can, Doki. I’ll help you if you help me.”

Doki stared at her for a second and then sighs. His eyes turned away from her. “I’m doing this only because I love you…” he said he looked at her again.

Mai nodded and waited.

“Alright, look, there are three things you should do, either you kiss the same gender, kill the same gender or you don’t express, exercise the emotion that you control for a full three weeks.” Doki explained.

“That’s it?” Saix asked.

“Yes,” Doki nodded.

“What the heck?!” Mai yelled, “I’m not going to kiss or kill anyone! And I can’t just stop expressing my emotion, I have to use it!” Mai grew annoyed.

Doki lowered his head, “I’m sorry…”

Mai looked at him.

“But… will you… please…”

“No, I will make you happy,” Mai said.

“I don’t see how anyone, not even you can do that.”

“All I have to do is find someone who will love you just the way you are, you’ll forget about me after that. And then… you’ll be happy.” Mai turned to Axel. “Axel!”

“Hold it, I’m not gay!” Axel said, “Heck no!”

“You’re going to take Doki to the Human realm and find a lover for him, you idiot!” Mai commanded.

Axel turned read in embarrassment. “Okay…”

“Find a girl he’s sexually, emotionally, and physically attached to.”

Axel nodded and took Doki’s arm and opened a corridor and was gone.

Mai rolled her eyes, “Saix, you keep reading and looking for some other loophole,” Mai said in a more tender voice.

Saix nodded and was gone.

Mai sighed, she opened her corridor and went back to the Human realm. Behind her Ninja, Tundra and Hurricane followed.

“I don’t want you guys watching me but if you guys are going to just follow me no matter where I go, stay hidden, and out of my sight and Riku’s.”

“Ma’am,” Ninja bowed and they were all gone. Benjie ran up to Mai and barked happily. Mai fell to her knees and cried. Benjie stopped in his tracks and watched as his mother cried.

‘Mommy!’ he whined.

Mai completely ignored him; she got to her feet and ran for the bathroom to vomit. Mai had to tell Riku something, and she had to tell him the truth, Mai had to tell Riku everything.

She was barren.

[oathkeeper100]

Another shocker twist! Doki wants to erase his memory, but Mai wants him to be happy, that was nice of her to do. Anyway, how is she going to get pregnant? I hope Doki's telling the truth, but some of those ways of her getting pregnant, I just don't know......another great update.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, so let me see if I have this straight, Mai has to kiss someone of the same gender, kill someone of the same gender, and not exercise the emotion she controls for three weeks to get pregnant. Wow, those are very strange things to do just to get pregnant. The only one I understand is the not exercising the emotion she controls for three weeks; the kissing and the killing things though, don't know how that will work out. Also, it was really nice of Mai to help Doki find someone that he loves and is truely happy with. Part of me believes that he is going to end up with Raven, but I could be wrong. Also, I really liked the part where Axel thought Mai wanted him and Doki to be a couple; loved the reaction. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Man, those three thing she has to do is pretty..... I have no idea what to say. But I wonder who Doki will get paired up, hah that was funny how axel just randomly shouted that he was not gay.

[Zipporahss]

Here you go, the next chapter! I'm taking the SAT's this morning so I gotta do this quickly. So here it is!

Enjoy!

Part Two
Riku and Mai: Death and Life
Chapter Four

Riku walked in the mansion, expecting Mai to just jump on him. But she wasn’t at the door. Odd.

‘She’s probably upstairs,’ Riku thought, he headed that way and found Benjie in a ball whining facing the bathroom door in their room. He figured it out quickly that Mai was in there.

Riku walked over to the door and knocked. “Mai?”

“I’m fine,” she answered quickly.

Riku knew automatically that she was lying. “Mai, I’m coming in,” Riku opened the door to find Mai over the sink crying.

“Riku…”

“Mai… what’s wrong? Are you okay?” Riku walked over to her and touched the side of her face.

“Can we go to the hospital… I don’t think I can…”

Riku narrowed his eyes confused, “What are you talking about?”

“I have a feeling that I can’t have children…”

“Don’t start, we haven’t tried yet, how can you be sure?”

Mai looked at Riku’s ice blue eyes and got lost. She blinked when she realized what he was saying. “You… you…”

“Why not?”

Mai threw herself in his arms and hugged him. Riku swept her up into his arms and carried her to the bed.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Oh dear, this is very bad. I feel so bad for the happy couple; I would be really upset if I couldn't have any children either. Man, I so hope that there is a loop hole that Mai can jump through. I mean, seriously, I have no idea how she can do those three things Doki told her to do. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Aw, that was sad

[Zipporahss]

Hey there, I have the next chapter chapter for you! Sorry gotta go!

Enjoy!

Part Two
Riku and Mai: Death and Life
Chapter Five

Mai woke, Riku was rubbing her back with his hand. Mai realized that she was using Riku’s chest as a pillow.

“Riku…” she stirred.

“Good morning sleepy head,” Riku greeted her. His eyes were closed as he sat deep in thought.

“Good morning… is something wrong? You’re quiet.” Mai asked.

“Nothing’s wrong, I’m just thinking,” Riku said a grin crawled on his face.

“About what?”

“What our baby will look like,” Riku’s grin was now a full grown smile.

Mai closed her eyes as sadness filled her. As far as she knew there was no way for her to have a child. There was nothing she could do, she controlled all emotions now being that she ruled Heart Haven, she couldn’t stop expressing emotions for three weeks. And kissing or killing the same gender? That was something she wasn’t going to think about.

Mai held back her tears. “So… you’d love me even if I can’t have… a child right?”

Riku snapped his eyes open. He gazed at her in a shocked confusion. “Of course, I would, I’d love you forever, I don’t care what happens.”

Mai pulled away from his face.

Riku pulled her face back to his, he kissed her and looked at her, “I love you,” he said. Mai held back her tears, she turned away again. “Why?” Mai shook her head. “Tell me,” Riku begged.

“I don’t think I can have children.” Mai told him.

“Look if it’ll make you feel better we’ll check it out after I come back,” Riku got out of the bed.

“What? Where are you going?”

“The King needs me, he and I are going to one of the worlds to see what’s up with it, the night is not damaging the Keyholes so we’re going to see what’s really going on.”

Mai lowered her eyes, “Just come back safely alright?”

Riku half chuckled and smirked, “You don’t have to tell me, I can take care of myself.” He got dressed and left. Mai did the same but she didn’t leave the house. She collected Benjie in her arms and took him to his play room where Benjie played happily and while Mai played sadly.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Oh man, this whole situation with Mai not being able to have children just sucks so bad. Seriously, for their sake (especially Mai's), I hope that there is another loophole that Mai can jump through; I just cannot see her doing any of the things that Doki told her to do. Speaking of Doki, where has he been? I mean, I know Axel is helping him find someone to love him and make him happy, but I am just really curious as to how that has been going. Also, why is Mai being left behind for all of these missions? She is a keyblader and the ruler of Heart Haven/Kingdom Hearts, you would think that the King would need her for something. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

[oathkeeper100]

I hope you didn't think I forgot about this fanfiction, cuz I didn't one bit! Anyway, getting back to the story at hand. I too hope that there is some possible way for Mai to get pregnant. If you were to do that, I hope you wouldnt make anything to drastic for her to do so. I also have this feeling that something bad is going to happen to Riku whien he goes with the King, but that's just me. Great update, keep on writing :)