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| Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Philippines Age: 13 Posts: 138
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | awesome prequel! Mai's gonna watch a giving birth video? wow, wonder what her reaction will be? can't wait for the next one. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TENACITY: A PLANET I MADE, it's far from here, it grows every 300 years! Age: 17 Posts: 579
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Okay peoples, I have the next chapter for you... again. So, the little chapter with Mai watching the birth is in chapter ten... I know so far away but don't worry It'll come fast. Enjoy! Part One Riku and Mai: Trying Chapter Four A silent night in this world, Heartless were out but they were quiet. Their yellow eyes were along the ground bored and tired. They couldn’t sense those with darkness in their hearts for some reason. Then they saw a dark line cut through the star lit sky. Some were curious and stayed to watch while others filled with fear hid. The line was so dark that it made the night look like a light blue. It had a long tail and it was like a shooting star that traveled faster than a normal shooting star. The Heartless coward as the star’s voice reached their minds. “We’re coming for you! We’re coming for you Goddess of Heart Haven!” The black star blazed on and landed in a jungle like forest area. The star was hot in appearance but in fact was cold. A small blue, fluffy and cute creature crawled up to the burning rock. It sniffed it and slowly reached out to touch it. The freeze cold rock shifted and the blue creature retreated. He stared at it while in attack mode, all four of his arms were arched and ready for any attack that was coming his way. The rock shifted once more and when the blue creature heard the voice of evil he took off to warn his family. “We are here Goddess.” |
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| Rion is blindfolded kinkyness | LOL Okay the first time I read that I thought that the things inside of the rock was the fluffy blue creature XDDD But now I know its not. Interesting little introduction to the antagonists in this story. Shooting rocks from outer space seems a bit over done... And a bit too Sci-Fi for me but who knows It may work out for the antagonists. But I don't know yet, since I don't knwo who/what they are. So yeah. Other than that it was good :D |
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| Sora | Nice update, I thought it was too short but it was good, I look forward to more. |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 813
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: EXP: | So, now we have an introduction to the antagonist of the story. I wonder who or what it is and what they want with Mai. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more. |
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| Dual Wielder | Cool, yet for me I was sorta mysterious. |
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| Nobody Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: The Light in the Sky Posts: 39
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | Interesting. I don't know who these creatures are, but I can't wait to find out! Are they the voices inside her head? Can't wait for more! |
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| Sidekick Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In a dreamworld Posts: 349
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: EXP: | Is that Stitch? |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TENACITY: A PLANET I MADE, it's far from here, it grows every 300 years! Age: 17 Posts: 579
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| Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Philippines Age: 13 Posts: 138
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | who and what was that cute, fluffy blue creature? |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TENACITY: A PLANET I MADE, it's far from here, it grows every 300 years! Age: 17 Posts: 579
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Hiya! I've been off lately, sorta busy and depressed, you see I broke up with my boyfriend. There was only one problem with us, our religions almost completely opposite, he was an Athiest, and I a Christian. It hurt me break up with him but my religion, my faith, my lifestyle I'm sorry to say is more important. And even if it wasn't our relationship wasn't going to last long, we argued so much. And most of the time it was about how I was doing something wrong or how I feel about this thing or that. So yeah, I've been single for 17 years, and then my first boyfriend was 75% awesome and 25% horrible. I didn't want to break up with him but he almost made it easy saying that he hated me. Even after all the things I did to be with him, he said he hated me. Even though I lied to be with him, I allowed him to do things that normally I'd kick a boy in his groin for and I allowed him to say things that normally I'd black out on. I did it all for him and then he tells me that he hates me. He blamed me for the reason for us arguing all the time and me for him hating the relationship. And so because he was so unhappy I broke up with him, thinking if he's that stressed about us he'll feel beter if I let him go. WRONG. instead he stops talking to me saying that I hurt him. So again, I'm depressed and single. Never again will I try to show love for someone, never, I was hurt by the fact that he ignored me for two whole days. I honestly now don't want to get married, I don't want another boyfriend and I don't want any part in any form of a relationship and that includes anything involved love, sex, kissing. I mean I was hurt so much that I don't hug my guy friends anymore. I don't touch them. (sighs while holding back tears) I'm no longer eager for the things I once begged for. Well, sorry for the long A/N that was depressing and sad and crap, I only beg of you that if you feel some kind of way about my ex, don't call him names, I broke up with him with strong feelings, in other words I didn't want to do it, I did it for him. Well, here's the next chapter... Enjoy! Part One Riku and Mai: Trying Chapter Five “Darn it,” Riku groaned pulling away from his wife. He heard his cell phone going off. He didn’t want to stop what he was doing but he had a feeling it was important. “Don’t,” Mai whispered touching his hand that was reaching for his cell phone on the counter. Riku almost listened to her but he collected himself and picked up the phone and looked at the ID. Riku narrowed his eyes amazed and confused. “Hey?” he answered. Mai continued to kiss his neck. “Riku, it’s me Mickey,” the squeaky voice answered. “Yeah, what’s up?” Riku could now hear the concern and worry in his voice. “Is there something wrong?” “Some worlds are having darker nights,” Mickey said. “What?” Riku asked confused. ‘Darker nights? How’s that possible? That doesn’t make any sense.’ “What’s wrong?” Mai looked up to Riku, she was curious now. By this time Mai realized that she wasn’t going to get what she wanted. She got of the counter and walked over to the cabinet to get a cup. She knew Riku would answer her sooner or later. “Yes, nights are darker, some of my agents have told me that each night became darker only after a black lice crossed the sky.” “Oh, I see,” Riku said. “But so far, Heartless are nowhere to be seen, it’s almost like they vanished.” Riku narrowed his eyes while he thought. This wasn’t good, the last time less Heartless were around they were being stored up for a battle. “So when are you going to summon me?” “Mai is coming too,” Mickey said. “Sora and Kairi too.” “Why do you need all of us?” “Keybladers,” Mickey said. “Keybladers,” Riku sighed. “A gathering of Keybladers, huh? Am I coming?” Mai asked. “Yeah,” Riku nodded to her. Mai nodded back and headed for the room to get dressed. “I’ll summon you when you’re ready we don’t have enough time to get a gummi ship ready so be ready as soon as possible.” “Got it,” Riku said nodding. Riku hung up the phone and thought. ‘What’s going on now?’ |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TENACITY: A PLANET I MADE, it's far from here, it grows every 300 years! Age: 17 Posts: 579
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | This was for making you wait so long, here's the next chapter..... Enjoy! Part One Riku and Mai: Trying Chapter Six “We could always have a quickie,” Mai said. “Mai, stop, I’ve changed my mind, we’re going to wait.” Mai frowned, “Fine, I’ll end up winning sooner or later.” Riku rolled his eyes and seconds later a ray of light appeared and both Riku and Mai were taken from their house. Benjie had tagged along too. Mai had asked the King if he could come. They were in the garden of many carved animals. Riku looked around, ‘Odd,’ he thought ‘He’s not here to greet us’. He shrugged and walked to the door at the corner of the wonderfully green garden. Going up the stairs, they came to the long hall with only two doors. They walked pass the large light purple doors. They headed for the library. There they found Mickey sitting at the desk. Mai let Benjie down to greet Pluto, they were good friends, and every now and again Mickey would allow Pluto to go to their house. Mai enjoyed watching them play; they were always playing together or sleeping together. Pluto was sorta Benjie’s big brother. “Hi, King Mickey,” Mai greeted. “Mai, I told you, you can call me Mickey,” He smiled. “Sorry, it’s hard to get use to,” Mai blushed a little and scratched the back of head. “So where’s Sora and Kairi?” Riku asked. “They’re not here, yet, they were right in the middle of something else that I asked them to do.” “Oh, okay,” Riku nodded. “So do you have beds ready for us?” Mai asked, “I’m a little tired, you know how it is,” Mai said. “Oh, yeah, we have rooms ready for you, I was hoping we talk a little more about Heart Haven.” “When I wake up, right now I’m tired,” Mai said politely. “I know, I still wish I knew why that happens,” Mickey said deep in thought. He was referring to Mai’s side effects to staying in the Human realm. Mai smiled, “Benjie you can play with Pluto if you want,” Mai turned to Benjie and Benjie wagged his tail and jumped on his older brother. “Chip and Dale will show you to your room, Mai, Riku you and I need to talk so can you stay for a minute or two?” “Sure,” Riku nodded. “Hey Mai!” Mai heard the voices of Chip and Dale, her favorite chipmunks. “Hey you guys, I told you I’d be back didn’t I?” she grinned. “Yeah… you’re pretty,” Dale said half blushing. “Thank you,” Mai grinned. Mai knelt down and kissed him on the head. Dale had little hearts appear in his eyes and then he fell back. “Hey what about me?!” Chip protested. “I didn’t forget you,” Mai kissed his forehead. He swayed but he controlled himself. Mai giggled. Riku laughed with her. Mai stood and after a moment they led her to her room. Dale was still sorta out of it. He walked hunched over with his arms dangling, half dazed but all with a smile on his face. Riku turned to Mickey and grinned. “What did you want to talk about?” “I might need you to come with me to the worlds alone to check out what’s going on,” Mickey said leaving his desk and going to Riku. “Ah,” Riku folded his arms, “So when? Tonight?” “I’ll tell you when, don’t worry,” Mickey said, “Who knows it might be two or three days from now.” Riku shrugged while his arms were still folded, “Alright,” he said casually. “Okay, get some rest or something, you look tired,” Mickey smiled. Riku grinned, “I’m not that tired,” he said, “Don’t worry about me.” “Riku,” Mickey groaned. Riku dropped his arms, “Alright fine,” he was tired but he didn’t want the king to worry about him so much. Riku left, leaving Benjie with Pluto and the King. Riku knew where the room was, it was most likely the same one Riku was given the last time he had been in the castle (without Mai). Riku walked to the end of the hall and touched the wall, why the castle was made like this was behind him but at the very end of the hall next to the stairs was a small panel, one would touch it and a door would slide open, revealing a hall of more doors. Riku walked down that hall, and he grinned, Pluto had his own room, it was right across the hall from Mickey’s and Minnie’s was next to Mickey’s. Riku still didn’t understand why they had separate rooms when they were married but Riku never put too much thought into it. It might get too far. After five doors Riku found his room. And he was right, Chip and Dale were leaving as he was just about to open the door. “Hey, there Riku!” Dale greeted. “Hey, Dale, is Mai sleep?” “No, she’s up, she’s waiting for you she said.” Chip said. “Well, we gotta go, we gotta clean the jets,” Chip said following Dale. They ran down the hall and were gone. Riku opened the door and walked in, seconds later he was frozen in his tracks. The door closed behind him and he was frozen at the light skin that was in front of him. But anyone who didn’t know him would have thought that he was unsurprised when in reality he could have yelled from shock. “Do you like it?” Riku tried to hold himself together, “I thought you told Raven to take it back?” “Yeah, but she convinced me that I might be able to get with I want with it.” Riku swallowed, “I… it…” “Do I look nice?” Mai went to him in her teddy (an old word for lingerie) and wrapped her arms around Riku’s neck, she stared into his eyes as she could feel him quake in her arms. Mai had him. She knew she could get what she wanted now. “Mai…” Riku started, “I admit you look nice but you won’t change my mind.” Riku said. Mai narrowed her eyes in irritation. She then frowned. “Mai, stop,” Riku said. “Stop what?” “Charming me,” Riku grinned. Mai grinned, “Then no, how many times do I get to charm you? Not much, so let me enjoy this.” “I know why Doki almost died… you’re taking my breath away,” Riku said. “Then give me what I want,” Mai said. “Darn you’re so stubborn,” Riku pulled back, “No,” he said. Mai went closer, “Why not help me take it off?” “Will you stop!” “No,” Mai kissed him and Riku wasn’t going anywhere. Mai had him, she knew it, it wasn’t like last time, last time they were both in a kitchen far from any bed. This time they were alone and would be alone for a long while, Mai slowly pulled her husband to the bed and had him fall on top of her. Mai could feel it! She was going to get what she wanted. Mai knew it, Riku did too, that they were going into deep waters. Riku was completely into her, Riku had fallen into a pit that would not be easy to get out of. He wanted so hard to pull away, he wanted so hard to stop before it got too far. Knock-knock “Crap,” they both moan. “Yeah?” Mai called for them. “It’s me, Mickey, is Riku awake?” “No, surprisingly he’s out,” Mai said. “Okay, tell him to come with me, we have to go to another world in less than three hours.” “Okay,” Mai said. “I gotta go,” Riku saw this as his bell that saved him. “No, we have a long while,” Mai said pulling him back. “No,” Riku said getting off the bed. “No, I won’t do that to you so young,” Riku shook his head. “Fine,” Mai groaned. “Should I go with you?” “No, Mickey only wanted me to go with him, remember?” “Fine, I’ll be here when you get back, okay?” “I know,” Riku half chuckled. He left the room and was gone. |
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| | #29 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TENACITY: A PLANET I MADE, it's far from here, it grows every 300 years! Age: 17 Posts: 579
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Last one of Bonus day! Enjoy! Part One Riku and Mai: Trying Chapter Seven The small blue creature got to his home of an ocean blue/green color. With his grunts and squeals he tried to warn his family to leave the house… quickly. * * * “We have landed in Destiny Island?” asked one tall figure, he was lean and very dark but his eyes were very bright in the color of gold. So was his mate next to him, she too had golden eyes. She was just as dark as he was. “I believe so, this is an island.” The female responded with a nod. They study the area for a long moment, and then the male looked down at his body. “Ah, we need cloths, Dusk,” the male said to the female. “And I think we’re on the wrong world.” “I believe so, I will find us some clothes,” Dusk responded. “Dawn, there,” she pointed into the dark jungle like forest. Their eyes were very powerful, three times stronger than that of a human’s. They walked in that direction and saw a house of green/blue color, it was like that of the ocean. “Yes, this is the wrong world,” Dawn said. “Shall we leave a message for the Goddess?” Dusk asked looking at the man that stood beside her. “We shall,” Dawn wore his evil smirk and he and Dusk summoned a dark flame that came from their hand, after it grew to the size of a watermelon it was aimed at the house, inside the two evil beings could hear the voices of fear and urgency. They fired at the house and the house was up in black, dark, evil flames. “That should get her attention and thank you for getting clothes,” Dawn turned to his long haired mate. “You’re welcome, humans have a strange diversity of colors here I couldn’t find the colors we normally wear.” “Hm… it seems we must hurry, that traitor must die.” “Let’s leave; she’s most likely on a world far from here…” Dusk paused, “No, she’s moved, we must find her.” “Yes, let’s hurry,” Dawn nodded. |
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| Nobody Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: The Light in the Sky Posts: 39
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | I'm sorry to hear about what happened between you and ur now ex-boyfriend. I can't really give you any advice, but there will be other boys that will respect you more than him. Anyway, really good chapters! I'm very curious to find out what King Mickey and Riku will discover and what these Dusks want with Mai. Good update, can't wait for more! Last edited by oathkeeper100; May 24th, 2009 at 04:28 PM. |
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