Riku and Mai 2 - Page 14

TwilightRiku_13 · September 1st, 2009, 02:09 AM

That was AWESOME!!! I really loved that ending. I am just really glad that everything worked out in the end, especially with Crystal and Benjie and Imani and Zexion. I so loved Doki's reaction to Benjie at the door; that was funny. I also liked it when Benjie turned into a dog and then turned back with no clothes on; almost fell out of the chair laughing. One question, when Imani said that Saix was Zexion's 'dad', what did she mean by that? Did you mean like Saix is some kind of guardian to Zexion? I mean, I can understand the whole guardian thing, if that is waht you mean, but I was confused when you said dad because Saix isn't that much older than Zexion, well, at least to me. Anyway, great job on the stories.

varsha · September 1st, 2009, 02:23 AM

Aw thaty was cute with benjie turning into a small dog.
Still can't beleive it's over.
aw well, still was a good read.

Bellaisima358 · September 3rd, 2009, 01:13 AM

Awwww......cuteness ending.....
Again, you are wonderful, Zipporhass!!!

September 1st, 2009, 02:09 AM	#196
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 813 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: Riku and Mai 2 That was AWESOME!!! I really loved that ending. I am just really glad that everything worked out in the end, especially with Crystal and Benjie and Imani and Zexion. I so loved Doki's reaction to Benjie at the door; that was funny. I also liked it when Benjie turned into a dog and then turned back with no clothes on; almost fell out of the chair laughing. One question, when Imani said that Saix was Zexion's 'dad', what did she mean by that? Did you mean like Saix is some kind of guardian to Zexion? I mean, I can understand the whole guardian thing, if that is waht you mean, but I was confused when you said dad because Saix isn't that much older than Zexion, well, at least to me. Anyway, great job on the stories.

September 1st, 2009, 02:23 AM	#197
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: Riku and Mai 2 Aw thaty was cute with benjie turning into a small dog. Still can't beleive it's over. aw well, still was a good read.

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