Would Anyone Be Interested In Reading a Zelda/KH Fanfic?

[TwilightRiku_13]

Holy cow, I have just read this whole story, and, I must say that this is a really good story. Man, I can't believe I didn't read this before, but I'm really glad I caught up on it. Okay, I am really liking all the characters beside Zelda. Man, oh man, she is really coming off as a total bitch, isn't she? Part of me would really like to see her get set on fire or something; seriously, she is being a real bitch. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[HeartOfTheHero]

Originally Posted by TwilightRiku_13

Holy cow, I have just read this whole story, and, I must say that this is a really good story. Man, I can't believe I didn't read this before, but I'm really glad I caught up on it. Okay, I am really liking all the characters beside Zelda. Man, oh man, she is really coming off as a total bitch, isn't she? Part of me would really like to see her get set on fire or something; seriously, she is being a real bitch. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

lol, you should have waited and read just a few parts of it at a time, because there are only two chapters left of this.
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Chapter 29


On The Way To The Castle

Link, Lya, Sora, and Midna are riding horses towards Dakaraso’s castle.
Link – Are we there yet?
Lya, Sora, and Midna – NO!
Midna – Stop asking us!
Sora – You can tell that we’re not there yet!
Lya – When you see the castle, THEN we’re there!
Link – (looking at the ground) sorry.
Lya – (sigh; looks at the Midna and Sora) I guess we were a little harsh on you.
Midna – I don’t think so. Especially considering the fact that that was the TWELFTH TIME IN 5 MINUTES THAT YOU ASKED THAT QUESTION!!!
Lya – Chill out Midna. It’s not his fault that this has been a really boring ride.
Sora – So how exactly did you get away from the Tempests, Lya?
Lya – It was really weird. Shri just came in and told me to leave. She said she didn’t need me anymore, and that if she ever caught me sneaking around the Fortress I’d regret it. But that was it. She wouldn’t tell me anything else. She just ran out of the room, and I didn’t see her again.
Midna – Maybe it had something to do with Dakaraso.
Sora – Maybe Dakaraso did something to make her mad.
Midna – (sarcastically) Of course! That’s exactly why she gave up her biggest advantage over him.
Lya – Actually, I think you’re on the right track, Sora. From what I could tell, Shri didn’t really feel like trying to train me, or do anything like that. She didn’t really care. I think the only reason that she was doing it was because Dakaraso wanted her to. I’m pretty sure he was controlling her. Or at least trying to. So she decided to get back at him by letting me go.
Midna – But what could he have done?
Lya – Who knows? Maybe we can ask him when we get there.
Link – Are we there yet?
Sora and Midna – AAAAHHH!!!!!

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, Link was really annoying with that damn "Are We There Yet" question. I mean, after reading this story, I kind of wonder how Lya, or anyone else for that matter, puts up with him. So, the last chapter is after this, right? Man, I so hope to see an epic battle royale, and Link pop the question to Lya. I mean, between his stalling and her stupidity, I am just ready to beat the crap out of both of them. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

[HeartOfTheHero]

Originally Posted by TwilightRiku_13

Okay, Link was really annoying with that damn "Are We There Yet" question. I mean, after reading this story, I kind of wonder how Lya, or anyone else for that matter, puts up with him.

I wonder that myself everytime I look at this story

So, the last chapter is after this, right? Man, I so hope to see an epic battle royale, and Link pop the question to Lya. I mean, between his stalling and her stupidity, I am just ready to beat the crap out of both of them. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

umm, yeah, about that.....no, it doesn't happen. there's a big opening for a sequel, which I haven't started yet. I was planning on writing it with Venexts, but we never got around to starting it. We have the idea, and part of the plot worked out, but...that's it. So I should be talking to him later today, and I'm going to see if he still wants to do it, or if I can just start it by myself.
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Chapter 30

The Death of a Villain

As Link, Lya, Sora, and Midna ride up to the castle, they see that the door is wide open, and that there are no guards.
Midna – Am I the only one who’s bothered by the fact that there isn’t anything here to stop us?
Lya – Midna’s right, something’s wrong here. Where’s the big lock on the door? There’s not even a “Keep Out” sign.
Link – So, what, we came all of this way for nothing? We’re just going to leave Dakaraso to wreak havoc on the universe?
Lya – No of course not! But still, this doesn’t feel right. It feels like we’re walking into a trap.
Sora – Maybe we should find another way in…
Link – oh c’mon! You can’t be serious! (sees the others’ doubtful faces) Fine. I’ll go by myself.
Link starts walking towards the castle.
Lya – Wait! Link! don’t go by yourself!
Link walks into the castle and closes the door behind him so that the others can’t follow.
Inside the castle:
Link walks down the hallways of the castle, without running into any resistance. As he comes to a large doorway, he hears two people arguing. As he gets closer he realizes that one of the voices is Dakaraso, and the other is very familiar, but he’s not sure who it is.
Dakaraso – What are you talking about? Of course I’m doing my part!
Voice – That’s not what Xemnas thinks. He thinks you should be eliminated. And that’s why I’m here.
Dakaraso – You can’t be serious. YOU? Number 8 out of 13? Why would Xemnas send you to kill me? (in a panicked voice) Wait, what are you doing? No! Don’t! (scream is cut short)
Link – (jumping around the corner in time to see Dakaraso disappear in an inferno of flames; turns to the man on the other side of the room and draws his sword) Who are you?!
Man – The name’s Axel. Got it memorized? (disappears into a black portal)
Link – (turns to look at where Dakaraso stood before, then turns and
leaves)
Outside of the Castle:
Lya, Midna, and Sora are pushing at the door, trying to get it to open, when
Link walks out.
Lya – What happened?
Link – Dakaraso’s dead. Some guy from Organization XIII killed him.
Sora – (summoning his keyblade) Where is he?!!
Link – Relax Sora. He left.
Sora – (calming down) oh. What did he say?
Link – I think that Xemnas didn’t think Dakaraso was doing his part in their agreement, so he sent that Axel guy to kill him.
Lya – Well I guess that solved one of our problems. Now we have to take care of this Organization XIII.
Sora – No Lya. You guys should stay here. Let me handle Organization XIII.
Lya – But Sora –
Sora – No Lya, Hyrule needs you and Link, (seeing Midna’s irritated expression) and everyone else who’s been helping, to stay here and protect the people. This isn’t your fight. It’s mine. Let me take care of them.
Lya – Alright Sora. You win. But, if anything happens, or if you need some backup, don’t hesitate to tell us. You know we’ll be there for you when you need us.
Sora – I know. Now I’d better get back to the other worlds, they need me. (turns and runs through a portal that had just opened behind him)
Lya – See ya around, Sora.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Was that it !?!? Seriously!?!? Damnit, you better start writng the sequel to this; I reall, really, really want to know what happens. I mean, now that Dakaraso and Shri are dead, that just leaves Organization XIII standing. Huh, I wonder what they are up to? Anyway, great job on the story, and I really look forward to the sequel. Here's hoping that that story has an epic ending /jk :P

[HeartOfTheHero]

when I manage to get to the sequel to this story it will have a much better ending. I ended this one in a hurry because I was planning on starting the sequel right away, and then I ended up writing Shades of Gray instead, lol. So the sequel to this story is on my to-do list, but it's not at the top just yet

[NaminesNobody]

I just finished reading all of this, great story lol. Omg so happy Axel is in this!!

[HeartOfTheHero]

great news for anyone waiting for the sequel! Venexts and I are going to start in within the next few weeks, so keep an eye out for it.