KH: Org. XIII: Vacation! - Page 4

Seraph · April 25th, 2009, 01:14 AM

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Originally Posted by HeartOfTheHero

Very nice play on words, lol
Lexaeus in charge? This shall be interesting, since Zexion and Vexen will undoubtable give him a really hard time about it

It's the first time I've used wordplay on a fanfic, thanks! Anyway, I'm sure Zexion and Vexen know better than messing with a member whom's orders are like the superior's, I'm talking about Xaldin. He IS Number II, meaning that he MUST BE second in command.

Choc · April 25th, 2009, 01:18 AM

You mean Number III. Xigbar is Number II>

Seraph · April 25th, 2009, 01:26 AM

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Originally Posted by Choc

You mean Number III. Xigbar is Number II>

Xaldin is Number III? I always though he was Number II, his personality seemed like someone more fitting for second in-command... well, compared with a 40 year old man with the brains of a high school surfer... Hm, I seem to have gotten a brilliant idea with Xigbar, I'm going to test it tomorrow.

Choc · April 25th, 2009, 01:31 AM

Glad I could...help?

TwilightRiku_13 · April 25th, 2009, 03:08 AM

Awesome update, CavitaZero. So, Lexaeus is in charge of Team Bravo. God, this is going to be interesting. I have a feeling that Lexeaus is going to be like a father to two bickering children (Zexion and Vexen do not seem to get along very well), and, by the end of all of this, he is going to end up kicking himself. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

Seraph · April 25th, 2009, 05:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Choc

Glad I could...help?

Hm, that reminds me of some sort of a anime moment.

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Originally Posted by TwilightRiku_13

Awesome update, CavitaZero. So, Lexaeus is in charge of Team Bravo. God, this is going to be interesting. I have a feeling that Lexeaus is going to be like a father to two bickering children (Zexion and Vexen do not seem to get along very well), and, by the end of all of this, he is going to end up kicking himself. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

Hm, it wasn't my intention to make Zexion and Vexen look like they don't get along just because of that fight... Maybe I'll expand that discussion for the next 2 chapters.

Paupu911 · April 26th, 2009, 05:23 AM

I REALLY like it. can't wait for the next update!

Seraph · April 27th, 2009, 01:44 AM

CHAPTER SIX:
Group Foxtrot's fun...?

Group Foxtrot's Scenario:

On a small shack located far from the hotel, we see three members of the organization changing their clothes into comfort ones in a summer "paradise". We can see Luxord in some white shorts, some gladiator sandals and a white t-shirt with a big spade, diamond and a broken heart in it.

On the bedside, we can see Demyx sitting on the bed with his sitar on hand. Saix, is still inside the closet trying to find something to wear...

"SAIX! Hurry it up!" Demyx exclaimed

Saix slammed the closet doors and with fiery eyes and a diabolic deep voice said "I'M DONE YOU IMPUDENT MORTAL!"

"Okay! That was totally uncalled for." Luxord added

"What's our assignment?" Asked Saix while putting on some sunblock

"You were the one complaining about it, you should know." Replied Demyx

"Oh! Yeah, the "gift shop" thing... RATS!" Saix said

"Well, where's the nearest gift shop?" Luxord asked

Demyx lifted his left index finger and pointed towards the opened window and said "About five squares from here."

Both Luxord and Saix dropped their mouths and said dumbly "WHAAA?"

Demyx put on some blue shades and said "Wha ha hat?! Can't I have fun with some intelligent girls?"

"Let's just get outta here and go to the gift shop." Luxord said while opening the door

"Also, Demyx? This is an assignment not a casanova mission." Saix said

"Don't worry! I won't go to the girls." He said

Demyx lowered his voice and said to himself "They're gonna come to me! Ha ha!"

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