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Old April 19th, 2009, 01:53 AM   #31
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Why do i get the feeling that Xemnas's plans will clash dramatically with Hamsterveil's?
Looking forward to the next update!
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Old April 19th, 2009, 02:48 AM   #32
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The three of them, quiet as a silenced mage, were using every one minute of their time to enjoy the sun they were using to get a tan.
Xemnas getting a tan. Hah.

This looks promising, can't wait for the next chapter. :D
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Old April 19th, 2009, 03:10 AM   #33
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Hooray, an update!!! I feel bad for all the Org. members with the crappy assignments; I'm sure they all rather be doing what Xion, Roxas, and Axel were sent to do. So, what is this Nobody ENH thing that Larxene and Marluxia have to unpack? Part of me has a bad feeling as to what it is, but I guess we'll all find out soon enough. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
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Old April 19th, 2009, 02:46 PM   #34
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ya I have a bad feeling too. who's the squeaky voice and why is it squeaky?
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Old April 19th, 2009, 04:37 PM   #35
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^It sounds like Hamsterviel, and if I remember correctly, he's from Lilo and Stitch.
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Old April 20th, 2009, 10:24 AM   #36
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alright another update
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Old April 21st, 2009, 04:03 PM   #37
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^It sounds like Hamsterviel, and if I remember correctly, he's from Lilo and Stitch.
hahaha! maybe it is Hamsterviel. ^ ^
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Old April 21st, 2009, 11:16 PM   #38
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Why do i get the feeling that Xemnas's plans will clash dramatically with Hamsterveil's?
Looking forward to the next update!
Let's just say that Xemnas never though that the ENH Nobodies were going to turn out useful.

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Xemnas getting a tan. Hah.

This looks promising, can't wait for the next chapter. :D
His a Nobody! You never know how nothingness can react to your skin!

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Hooray, an update!!! I feel bad for all the Org. members with the crappy assignments; I'm sure they all rather be doing what Xion, Roxas, and Axel were sent to do. So, what is this Nobody ENH thing that Larxene and Marluxia have to unpack? Part of me has a bad feeling as to what it is, but I guess we'll all find out soon enough. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
ENH stands for ENHanced, you should get some ideas out of that word.

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^It sounds like Hamsterviel, and if I remember correctly, he's from Lilo and Stitch.
He IS Hamsterviel!
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Old April 21st, 2009, 11:51 PM   #39
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His a Nobody! You never know how nothingness can react to your skin!!
Lol, seeing how he's already tan...XD guess he's just keeping it up.
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Lol, seeing how he's already tan...XD guess he's just keeping it up.

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Also, on a side note, tell me how someone that spends 24/7 of his "whole life" watching a heart-shaped moon form keeps getting tanned? It must be the Room of Sleep!
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Old April 22nd, 2009, 11:32 PM   #41
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When I go through my mom's magazine, I see those spray things that make you tan. It must be those(even though, girls use them...)

The Room of Sleep = tanning booth.
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When I go through my mom's magazine, I see those spray things that make you tan. It must be those(even though, girls use them...)

The Room of Sleep = tanning booth.
Perhaps the Room of Sleep is a chamber filled with that spray?
Also, I will update the fanfic tomorrow.
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Old April 23rd, 2009, 11:12 PM   #43
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Perhaps the Room of Sleep is a chamber filled with that spray?
That would be plain crazy of him. ._.
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Yay
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That would be plain crazy of him. ._.

Yay
What can you expect? His a heartless "man" claiming he doesn't exist and we see him quite clearly.


CHAPTER FIVE:
Team Bravo's arguments

Group Bravo's Scenario:

Vexen, Lexaeus and Zexion were in their hotel rooms getting changed so that they can finish their assignment, search for Hawaiian provisions. From the closet, we see Vexen coming out... in the sense that he finished getting ready.

We see him with a light blue t-shirt and some dark blue shorts with some black shades. Huddling in a corner, Lexaeus is prepared for his assignment with a light brown t-shirt, cream-colored shorts and a hat similar to those the tourists wear.

And finally, sat in one of the three beds reading his Lexicon, Zexion hasn't even changed his clothes.

"Zexion, it's your turn to change." Said Lexaeus while staying still in the corner

Zexion closes his book and responds with "CLOTHEAUS CHANGEWINDUS!"

Suddenly, a cyclone comes out of nowhere and traps Zexion in it. When the wind suddenly stops blowing, Zexion is seen with his new clothes; a light gray t-shirt, some black shorts, black sandals and some shades.

Zexion gets a sticky note from his pocket and says "Since I have this, I'm the group leader."

"And who are you to say you were handed that note!" Vexen responds while approaching him, taking the note out of his hand and leaving an angered Lexaeus

Just when Lexaeus was about to open his mouth to exclaim something, a strong wind blows and a voice is heard.

"Don't waste time arguing, Numbers IV and VI! I name Number V the group leader."

The wind stops blowing but Vexen's face showed a wide disappointment and Zexion's a smirk.

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Old April 24th, 2009, 10:41 PM   #45
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From the closet, we see Vexen coming out... in the sense that he finished getting ready.
Very nice play on words, lol
Lexaeus in charge? This shall be interesting, since Zexion and Vexen will undoubtable give him a really hard time about it
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