KH: Org. XIII: Vacation!

[Hikari]

This has a lot of potential
Looking forward to see in which direction you'll take it
=)

[varsha]

All right that was good. sorry i did'nt put a comment for chapter one

[Seraph]

CHAPTER THREE:
Aboard the S.S. Gummi Cruiser!

From a clear view, we can see the 14 hooded members of the organization entering the ship without haste. Just as Roxas walked up, the stairs that leaded to the ship were dropped and the cruise began.

All of the members, plus some familiar faces gathered at the PLAY STATION to be briefed on the ship.

"WELCOME EVERYBODY! Welcome to the S.S. Gummi Cruiser!" A man in a white sailor suit exclaimed

Just as he said that, everyone began applauding.

"OK, first things first, you've all been gathered here in the name of the captain... ME! Just to make it short, I am currently attending some important matters with important men, so please, just do whatever you find correct here... CIAO!" He said while moving his hand in a motion it could say good bye

Just as he left, everyone began running around, doing lots of crazy stuff.

Xemnas', Xaldin's and Xigbar's Scenario:

The three of them, quiet as a silenced mage, were using every one minute of their time to enjoy the sun they were using to get a tan.

Vexen's, Lexeaus' and Zexion's Scenario:

Vexen went crazy and froze the pool that was in the PLAY STATION area, Lexeaus began hotting the ground with his Tomahawk and Zexion... Wait, where IS Zexion? Anywho, he might be using his Lexicon to drain (or steal) things with it.

Demyx's and Luxord's Scenario:

Demyx was peacefully enjoying a "concert" he was making with his water copies, until Vexen decided to freeze the pool and leave him and his copies frozen solid, more solid than knuckle head, brains for brawls Lexeaus. While Luxord, closed inside a room, was just playing Solitaire (now THAT wasn't a surprise!).

Marluxia's and Larxene's Scenario:

Both of them, as always, were plotting to make an end to the organization, of course, they had to consider the conditions they were in.

"OK! We will first make a big explosion demonstrating them our powers!" Said Marluxia

"But... isn't that, like, kind of like a cliche?" Larxene replied

"Ugh! Then what do you propose?" Marluxia said

"I think we should just wait until we arrive at the island, there are more hiding places there." Larxene replied

Marluxia crumpled a paper of blueprints of the ship and throw it at the trashcan.

Axel's, Roxas' and Xion's Scenario:

Axel was dancing in a field of flames, Roxas was alone near the corner of the pool and Xion was looking at the far horizon.

The Captain's Scenario:

"Sir, are you sure about this?" He asked a black shadow that was near the controls of the cruiser

"Of course I am, who do you take me for?" A squeaky voice said

"But, sir! Using that kind of specimens in the experiment, surely it will create some sort of incident, correct?" The captain asked

"Hawaii..." The squeaky voice said

"Yes, I KNOW the experiment is going to be-" Just as he was about to finish the sentence, he was stopped by the squeaky voice

"No you doltz! We have arrived!"

Just as they looked through the window, they saw the beauty of a world that was floating amongst them... HAWAII!!!

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[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, what the heck is going on? Who was the mysterious sqeaky voice? What kind of experiment are they planning on doing? Man, there are just so many questions. Anyway, that was a great chapter, and I look forward to the next update.

[Seraph]

Originally Posted by TwilightRiku_13

Okay, what the heck is going on? Who was the mysterious sqeaky voice? What kind of experiment are they planning on doing? Man, there are just so many questions. Anyway, that was a great chapter, and I look forward to the next update.

I can only reveal to things:

1.) I reccommend you see the Lilo & Stitch series, you should hear a character with that kind of voice.

2.) The experiments that are being planned are the whole center of the plot.

Ex.

{ EXPERIMENTS}
|
Organization XIII's Hawaiian invitation
/ \
S.S. Gummi Cruiser CHAOS Hawaiian Takeover
\ /
\ /
\ /
\ /
\ /
THE FINAL BATTLE

[Paupu911]

I really like it! I can't wait for the next updates.

[Seraph]

Originally Posted by Paupu911

I really like it! I can't wait for the next updates.

Thanks for the comment! I'll update Monday-Friday when I can, I WILL ALWAYS UPDATE the weekends.

[HeartOfTheHero]

Originally Posted by CavitaZero

I can only reveal to things:

1.) I reccommend you see the Lilo & Stitch series, you should hear a character with that kind of voice.

omg, i can't believe I didn't think of that. That just made the possibilities for this story 10 times funnier. Can't wait for the next update!

[Seraph]

Originally Posted by HeartOfTheHero

omg, i can't believe I didn't think of that. That just made the possibilities for this story 10 times funnier. Can't wait for the next update!

He and Gantu, now that's a duo you wouldn't want in a serious thing, he he.

[Danica Syer]

Originally Posted by CavitaZero

"Yeah, what the bookworm said!" Said Luxord

I'm enjoying this fanfiction so far. But I kinda laughed at this part. Zexion, a bookworm? No, I get it! Just is funny that's all. I'm still reading but so far it's good. Just make sure it sounds more like it has description and so forth. Also when you mention 'we see', I think it sounds better if you can just "describe". It sounds better.

[Seraph]

Originally Posted by Candy Fair

I'm enjoying this fanfiction so far. But I kinda laughed at this part. Zexion, a bookworm? No, I get it! Just is funny that's all. I'm still reading but so far it's good. Just make sure it sounds more like it has description and so forth. Also when you mention 'we see', I think it sounds better if you can just "describe". It sounds better.

Hm, thanks for the tip! I'll be sure to take advantage of it.

[Choc]

Originally Posted by CavitaZero

Xemnas', Xaldin's and Xigbar's Scenario:

The three of them, quiet as a silenced mage, were using every one minute of their time to enjoy the sun they were using to get a tan.

Not like Xemnas needs it...

Originally Posted by CavitaZero

"Of course I am, who do you take me for?" A squeaky voice said

"But, sir! Using that kind of specimens in the experiment, surely it will create some sort of incident, correct?" The captain asked

"Hawaii..." The squeaky voice said

"Yes, I KNOW the experiment is going to be-" Just as he was about to finish the sentence, he was stopped by the squeaky voice

O_O Hammsterviel? (yeah I completely spelled that wrong.)

[Seraph]

Originally Posted by Choc

Not like Xemnas needs it...


O_O Hammsterviel? (yeah I completely spelled that wrong.)

Don't feel bad, from now on, let's call him Hamster Evil... or Hamsterveil. Anyway, yes it IS him.

[LadyScythe]

Originally Posted by CavitaZero

Hamsterveil. .

I had feeling it might him, at first when you said squeaky voice i thought of Pleakley,

[Seraph]

Originally Posted by LadyScythe

I had feeling it might him, at first when you said squeaky voice i thought of Pleakley,

Hm, I could dare say that his voice is a little soft, even when he screams.

CHAPTER FOUR:
Touching Hawaiian grounds!

The luxurious S.S. Gummi Cruiser lands it's anchor in the soft and clear Hawaiian sands and drops a rubber slide. From that slide, the fourteen members come dropping with the wind hitting their cloaks and getting a refreshing feeling of that tropical breeze they began to feel.

Just as the final member comes down, Roxas, Xemnas walks up to a palm tree filled with coconuts.

"OK everyone, we have arrived at Hawaii." Xemnas said while standing in the shadow of the palm tree

"From here and fort, you will be assigned to a group consisting of three members." Xigbar said while getting a sticky note from his pocket

Xigbar hands the sticky note to Xaldin and he reads "The following group, Bravo, will be composed of Vexen, Lexeaus and Zexion."

"Hmph! I hope this wild goose chase won't melt my brain down." Said Vexen

"You're instructions are as followed: You will search for Hawaiian provisions such as coconuts, ice cream and cold beverages." Xaldin said

Vexen, Lexeaus and Zexion then left.

"Group Foxtrot will consist of Saix, Demyx and Luxord. You're assignment is to search for any Hawaiian looking figurines and/or jewelry." Xaldin said

"We were sent here just to enter a gift shop?!" Exclaimed Saix while letting out a fiery wrath through his eyes

The three of them leave with a doubt on their faces.

"Group Slate will be formed by Axel, Roxas and Xion. You will look for hearts and Heartless." Said Xaldin

"Hm, we get all the action, they get the boring assignments... NICE!" Said Xion

The three of them leave.

"What about us, Superior?" Marluxia asked

"You and Larxene will help us get the hotel rooms ready down at the Hawaiian Frog Hotel." Xemnas said while walking out of the beach

"That's all? We will only unpack some boxes and out them on empty rooms?" Marluxia asked

"Don't make it look like some boring thing! You will be also unpacking the Nobody ENH we were experimenting on." Said Xigbar while catching up with Xemnas

A strong wind breezed through a coconut and it hit Marluxia's head

"OUCH! I saw that Number II!" Marluxia exclaimed while caressing his head

"I just aimed the wind at a coconut, nothing more." He replied

"GRR!"

"Let's go and unpack the things... YOU WILL UNPACK THE ENH! Ha ha!" Larxene said while running towards the crates

"No way!" Marlxuia said

"I called it first!" Said Larxene

"Ow no!" Marluxia said

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