The Last Story

[varsha]

CHAPTER 30

BEAST'S CASTLE : ENTRANCE

"Wait beast don't hurt her" yelled Sora as the beast was about to stike her. "Why should I?, she's the bad person" yelled the beast. "Bad person? What has Eva done to you" asked Goffy. "Eva? so thats your new name, Eva was working with maifecent when we went to the hollow bastion castle" yelled the beast as he picked up Eva who was just shivering. "It's true, Eva was able to get teken from us and used as a puppet in a dark state, she ended up defeating he beast when he first arrived, Riku should know that" answered Xemnas. "I didn't notice who she was at the time" argued Riku. "But beast that was ages ago, she's a good person reallly" answered Sora. "Fine, but I won't forgive her" answered The beast as he let her down. "You know whats funny, malifacent said that she was the protecter of the universe" answered Riku. "Thats true as well" answered Xemans. "Why doe's Eva have to be so speaical and god like" asked Sora. "Because she has a strong connection with you" answered Xemans. "We don't have a pest problem so you can all go home" mumbled the beast. "Sora, Donald, Goffy" yelled a female voice. 'Bell!" yelled Sora. "How nice to see you all, wait... WHAT SHE DOING HERE!!!" yelled Bell as she saw Eva. "Whe's good don't worry" answered Sora. "I thought I said leave" answered The beast. "Beast! don't worry every one, your welcome here, we all have rooms set for you" answered Bell. "You knew we were coming?" asked Sora. "I was suprised to but It was like some thing told me you were arriving, Oh and can I talk with Eva in private, I'll be in my room" answered Bell.

[TwilightRiku_13]

So, Eva once worked for Maleficent. I take it this was beofre Riku came into the picture, or was it at the same time. Seriously, the whole timeline thing is a little confusing. Huh, I wonder what Belle wants to talk to Eva about. This is either going to be really good or really bad. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Chapter 31 already OoO

CHAPTER 31

BEAST'S CASTLE : BELL'S ROOM

"So, what wrong?" asked Eva as she sat next to bell on her bed. "It's that rose" answered Bell. "The magical one the beast brought with him, what about it?" asked Eva. "It's been destroyed" sighed Bell. "WHAT!?, but how, I thought it was in tthe beast's room" yelled Eva as she stared at Bell. "Me too, but the beast wasn't looking at for a moment and then it was burned" answered Bell. "BURNED!? oh I know who did it and he's going to be in big trouble" yelled Eva. "I don't care if you know who it was, I just need you to find some way to make one or get one, otherwise the beast with be growly forever" answered Bell. "Hmmm.... I KNOW! maybe my brother can make one, exept it will be in a curse form but I don't see the difference, Oh and it will have to be a secret" yelled Eva. "Oh thank you so much" squeled Bell as she embraced Eva. "Bell it is time to.... OH MY GOODNESS, PLEASE TELL ME YOUR NOT A LES!!!" yelled french sounding lamp as he entered the room while Eva and Bell were Embracing each other. "Cool, is that Lumiere" answered Eva as she bent towards him. "Yes and Lumiere, It was just a freindly hug" answered Bell. "Ok.. Oh and Dinner is ready" answered Lumiere as he kissed Eva's hand. Eva and Bell headed to the dining room while Lumiere sat on Eva's shoulder.

BEAST CASTLE : DINING ROOM

"Great, now appliances love her" yelled Kairi and Namine as they saw Lumiere on Eva's shoulder. "Aw come on, he warms me up since it's winter" answered Eva as she put him on the table. "Just eat" yelled The beast since he still hadn't changed. "Actually, I wanted to each on the roof of the tallest tower" answered Eva. "Good Idea, I'll come with you" answered Marlaux as he got his plate. "Good ridence" answered the beast. Marlaux and Eva followed Lumiere towards the tower.

BEAST'S CASTLE : TALLEST TOWER

"Just like all time's ay Eva" answered Marlaux as he lay down. "Yeah, I wish it never changed thought" answered Eva as she looked at the stars. "Hey lets try find the star we always loooked for" answered Marlaux. "Ok" answered Eva. Eva and Marlaux kept on looking in the stars till they found the star. "It's still the same" answered Eva. "Sure is" answered Marlaux. "Oh I have to ask you some thing" answered Eva. Eva explained about the rose and Marlaux nodded and the started to head down when they saw, the hatch door was locked.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, first things first, Lumiere is not a lamp, he is a candlestick. Sorry, I just had to throw that out there. So, the Beast's rose was burned. I have a feeling that the idiot that did that was Axel. Now, as to why he did it, that is a total mystery. My theory is that, if he did it, it was because he had a legitimate reason or because he was being a total jackass; I'm kind of leaning toward the second option. Anayway, great job again, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

CHAPTER 32

BEAST'S CASTLE : TALLEST TOWER

"Damn this stupid door" yelled Eva as she pulled on the door. "The beast must have done it" answered Marlaux. "Or that IDIOT Axel" yelled Eva as she kicked the door. "Axel? how do you-... oh so thats how it was burned, I thought it was that old fashioned lamp" answered Marlaux. "Scratch this" yelled Eva as she summoned her keyblades. "Hey, don't damage the door or we're going to be fried chicken" answered Marlaux as he looked at his leftovers. "I have a better, more fun idea" answered Eva as she gave Marlaux a smile and jumped of the roof. "Eva!" yelled Marlaux as he saw her jump. Just then Eva speed up on a giant key blade grabbing Marlaux by the hand and placing him near the handle. "Don't be such a concerned family member, I already have one who's gone over the top" giggled Eva as she speed in a spiral down the tower. "Just get us down" moaned Marlaux. "Alright" sighed Eva. They flew towards the ground and jumped of to go inside.

BEAST'S CASTLE : FIRE PLACE

"There you guys are" answered the King. "Why are you guys all wet?" asked Kairi. "Some one locked the hatch and it started to rain so we had to ride on my key blade to get down" answered Eva as she gave her wet Organization coat to the coat hanger. Everyone turned their attention to the beast who didn't notice. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!, LET ME IN!, PLEASE!, THE WATER IS PAINFUL!" yelled a voice out side. "Ah ha, so Axel is here" yelled Eva. "LET ME IN PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'M SORRY FOR LOCKING YOU OUT EVA!!" yelled Axel as Eva and Marlaux approached the door. "What am I, fried chicken?" asked Marlaux in annoyance. "What's with you and chicken?" asked Eva as she stared at him. "What? no one uses it in puns" answered Marlaux. "True" answered Eva as she opened the door. Axel came bursting in and hugged Eva like a scared six year old. "There there Axel, I'll smash your face when your dry" answered Eva as she patted him on the back.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Leave it to Axel to be a baby around water and do something completely stupid and evil like burn the Beast's rose. I mean, was he just bored or just being a jackass? Oh well, I guess we'll find out in the next chapter. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

CHAPTER 33

BEAST'S CASTLE : FIRE PLACE

Axel lay on the ground shivering and for once looking cold, his hair went blue and his black marks under his eye's were also blue. "So, who would have thought Axel would wind up here" answered Xigbar. "True, but how we suspect to Xemnas in the jungle" answered Roxas. "Infact, Eva was the only one that actually endded up in a sutible place" answered Riku as he looked at Eva, then he noticed he was going red. "Why are you going red?" asked Eva as she tilled her head. "YOU SICK HEAD!" yelled Xemnas as he jumped on Riku. "Get of of him Mansex, We should be worrying about Axel" yelled Sora. "No, we should be more worried about the punishment" grumbled the beast. "Punishment for what?" shivered Axel. "For burning me rose" mumbled The Beast. "But I didn't burn your stupid rose' yelled Axel as he wiggled towards the fire. Eva sighed and covered axel in a blanket and burned it. "EVA" yelled everyone but Eva and Axel. "Ah I feel alive once more" yelled Axel as he jumped up look like his origanal self. "Axel has to be burned to get out of his 'ice form'" answered Eva. "And for the last time I didn't burn your supid rose" yelled Axel as he started to play with the fire in the fire place. "Then who else would, it was burned"answered Kairi. "What happened when the castle was attacked?" asked Eva. "Well, I picked up my porn books, got my-" ansewered Axel as he looked at the seiling. "EEEWWWWW" yellled everyone as they found out he had his privets peirced. "Oh then I blacked out" answered Axel. "Hmm, well I'm going to bed, I feel exausted" answered Eva as she strechted. "Will you to stop fighting already?" yelled Xigbar as he broke the scene of them fighting on a tower under a picture of Eva. "I will never stop" answered Xemnas. "Well, your little princess is going to sleep" answered Xigbar. "I'll tuck you in sweety" answered Xemans as he ran after Eva. "Uncle I'm not a babie" yelled Eva as Xemnas hugged her. "Hey, where's Axel" asked Namine. "Uh oh" yelled Eva as she looked out side the door. Axel was standing there with darkness pooring out of his eyes as he grinned evilly. "MUHAHAHAHAHA" yelled Axel as he flew out side. "Eveyone out" yelled the king. Everyone ran out as the castle started to shake.

BEAST'S CASTLE : COURT YARD

Out side Axel was waiting for them but as soon as Eva walked in evryone else was blown out and blocked by a wall of fire continuslly going up. Eva got out her key blades and fought him. At the end of the battle the darkness came out and rushed into Eva but Eva only got a pinch of pain in her heart. "Ohhh, what happened?" asked Axel as he rubed the back of his head. "Eva are you ok" asked Riku. "Why don't you just kiss her sores Riku" teased Xigbar. Riku sneered at him and Eva just look at them strangley. "Don't worry, Eva is fine, since she is halph nobody it is just a normal dose" answered King mickey. "Well it looks like we have to leave, Marlaux make the rose" answered Eva she trew him a rose. Marlaux zapped it and it glowed. "There you go" answered Eva as she gave the rose to the beast. "Thank you, all of, forgive me for my behavior" answereed The beast as he took the rose. "Hey, no sucking up, well see ya" answered Eva before they teleported.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, what the hell just happened? What was that darkness that consumed Axel? That whole part was really weird, insane, and confusing. Also, the part with Axel with his porno mags and his penis piercing was just really crazy and messed up; I really don't know what to say about that. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Sorry, if it's been really crazy latly, I have to think of his stuff right away at school.

CHAPTER 34

"Tell me already" wined Axel. "NO!, ever since you heard about it you've been nagging me" yelled Eva. "But I gotta know who your going with, is it Seifer" wined Axel. "WHO.... IS..... SEIFER!?" yelled Xemnas. "Oh just a boy Eva has a crush on" smirked Axel. "I'm going to kill you" wispered Eva as she squezed Axel's funny bone. "How long have you been seeing him?" asked Xemans lowering his voice. "I don't want to talk about" answered Eva as she turned her head. "When I find him, I'm gonna kill him" yelled Xemnas. Eva just ran to her room hiding her tears and slamed the the door. "What's up with her?" asked all the Organization members exept for Roxas. "You Idiots" yelled Riku.

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[TwilightRiku_13]

Aw, poor Eva!!! Just for that, Xemnas really needs to get his testicles kicked in, preferably by Eva because he made her cry. Anyway, great job, and I await more.

[varsha]

CHAPTER 34 (CARRY ON)

"I beg your pardon" asked Xemans. "Didn't we tell you that Seifer died" yelled Namine. "So she was dating behind my back" grumped Xemnas. "Poor Eva" answered Marlaux as he looked towards Eva's room. "Hey, why didn't you tell us?, we should have known from the start" yelled Axel. "I'm going to check to see if she's ok" answered Riku. "Shouldn't that be the brothers job?" asked Xigbar. "I'm going aswell" answered Riku.

GUMMY SHIP :EVA'S ROOM

'Knock knock' went the door as Riku and Marlaux stood out side. There was no answere. "Eva, are you ok?" asked Marlaux. Again there was no answere. Riku and Marlaux looked at each other and then noticed the door was unlocked, they decided to go in quietly. When they went in they saw that Eva in a dark cacoon. "Uh oh" answered Marlaux as he walked up to her. "This cacoon look's farmillia" answered Riku as he looked at the shape. Without thinking Marlaux smashed open the caccon and Eva came crashing down on to Riku unconshuis. A heartless came crawling out and Marlaux slashed it with his syth. "Put her on the bed, looks like you have to do some c.p.r" answered Marlaux. "Why don't you do it instead?" asked Riku. "Because your the one she has a major crush on since he was a kid" answered Marlaux. Riku went red and lay her on the bed to do c.p.r. "Riku bent down to start until Xemnas can crashing in. "STEP AWAY FROM THE GIRL!" yelled Xemnas as he tackled Riku. "Ugh... what happened" answered Eva as she woke up. "Damn, so close" wispered Marlaux to himself. "Hey you two quit it" yelled Eva. Riku and Xemnas stopped in the middle of while pulling each other's hair. "Geez Uncle, every boy that comes near me end up getting beaten, stop it for once" answered Eva as she helped Riku up. "But he-" yelled Xemnas before Marlaux put his hand over Xemnas's mouth. "How about we first ask what the hell that cacoon was?" answered Marlaux. "A cacoon? oh boy, that cacoon is ment to kill her, how did you get in it?" asked Xemnas. "Well, I just ran into the room, the heartless was there and i tried to kill it but it turned into a giant cacoon and swallowed me" answered Eva. "I wonder how it got into this ship" answered Xemnas. "Who cares, as long as noone got hurt we should be fine" answered Riku. "Hey Eva, is this Seifer kid in the um, graveyard?" asked Xemnas. "Yes, do you want to see him?" answered Eva. "I would love to" answered Xemans as he opened the portal. Eva and Xemans went in and the portal closed.
"Damn it" yelled Riku. "Don't worry prettty boy, you'll get her soon, like at the ball" answered Marlaux. "Ok" sighed Riku

[TwilightRiku_13]

Okay, Xemnas needs to show a little more compassion. I mean, he finds out that Eva's old boyfriend is dead, and all he can think about is that Eva was dating behind his back!?!? Seriously, Xemnas needs to feel some pain from his neice. Great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

the rest of the chapter is finished.
Sorry if some stuff is sloppy

[TwilightRiku_13]

Man, Xemnas really needs to chill out. I mean, Riku was only trying to revive Eva, but, of course, Xemans thinks that Riku was trying to make a move on her. Seriously, he needs to relax. Now, how exactly did the Heartless get on the ship? You would think that a gummiship with King Mickey of Disney Castle would be more secure than that. Also, I liked the ending; glad to see Xemnas show some compassion for Eva's pain. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[Aqua.]

freaking xemnas...