The Last Story

[TwilightRiku_13]

Originally Posted by varsha

I'm thinking about making the next chapter about the party

That's cool. I mean, you're the author, and you should write about what you feel needs to be in the story. If you're going to write about the party, have Xigbar get drunk and throw up on Xemnas' shoes. That would be hilarious.

[varsha]

CHAPTER 26

GUMMY SHIP : EVA'S ROOM

"Ugg.. oh man I fell asleep again with....Riku! and this is the second time" mumbled Eva as she let her grip go wich then ended up making Riku fall on the ground. "What happened" yelled Riku as he sprung up. "I don't know... oh know it's Sora's birthday" answered Eva as she listened to the noise out side. "So?" asked Riku as he got up. "I have to get his present which is in Namine's room, and I only have two minutes" answered Eva as she looked at her watch. "Actually you have thirty minutes sin you uncle put a potion so you don't miss much" answered Riku as he picked up the empty bottle from the desk. "Well come on lets go" answered Eva as she went into her wardrobe and came out in a second in party dress. "Riku went red as he saw her with less skin covered up. they headed out the room to get Sora's present.

GUMMY SHIP : KAIRI'S ROOM

"Oh good you guy are awake" answered Kairi as she saw them come in. "How did the scare go without me?" asked Eva. "We got pictures and Xigbar took your place since he walked in while we were planning" answered Kairi. "That little perv?" answered Eva shocked. "Yeah but oh well, come on lets go get some punch" answered Kairi. "Can't I got to get birthday boys present" answered Eva heading for Namine's room. "I wouldn't go in there if I were you" answered Kairi as she stopped her. "Why not, that's where it is?" asked Eva. "Well it's kind of hard to explain..... Roxas is getting laid" answered Kairi as she looked at the room. "What, yay Roxas is no longer a virgin... WHAT!!! but I need to get the present" answered Eva. "Just knock on the door" answered Kairi. "That would be rude and I think Roxas doesn't want to ruin his first" answered Eva. "Hey we would probably hear them and if there is no um.... sounds of activity we go in" answered Riku. "What if they are nude?" answered Eva looking at Riku. "Why would they be looking at each other in the nude, beside there's no other way" answered Riku. "Ok fine" answered Eva grumply. They approached the door and Eva listened and nothing was going on so she slowly opened the door suprised it was opened and went in with Riku. "Alright lets find the present, it's got a paupu fruit wrapper ok" answered Eva as she searched the room. "They found lots of drawings and Riku found one strange and showed it to Eva and she shone a light on and saw it was a picture of Namine and Roxas doing it. They threw the picture and then heard Namine and Roxas approach the door. Riku and Eva quickly scrambled to the bottom of the bed and found the present but had to stay under there because Namine and Roxas came in. "Glad we got the protection" answered Namine as she locked the door. "Yeah, I'll get started" answered Roxas as Eva and Riku immidiatly saw his boxers land in front of them. "I'll go start the shower" answered Namine as they saw her enter the showers. Roxas slapped on the protection and went in and locked the door. "Lets get the hell out of here" answered Eva as she and Riku got out from the bed. They ran out the door with the present and closed the door.

GUMMY SHIP : SORA'S ROOM

"Happy birthday" answered Eva as she gave Sora the gift. "Thanks" answered Sora as he opened it. "I better get going see ya" answered Eva as she and Riku left the room. Out side Xemnas gave him a beer since he knew that he turned eighteen on January. "Hey I think I had a bit of too much vodka" answered Xigbar as he ended up vomiting all over Eva's dress. "Eww" answered Eva as she looked at her dress. Riku put his beer away as he saw the vomit and then Xigbar spewed up all over Xemans's face. "Why you little"yelled Xemans.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Ha ha!!! I so loved the part with Xigbar; Xigbar plus any type of alcohol just do not mix. I also liked the part with Roxas and Namine; about time Roxas got some action. Now, Sora and Riku need some action. It might be a little difficult with Riku, you know, because of Xemnas. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

CHAPTER 27

GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK

As everyone nibbled on their pancakes they kept on thinking about the big party. Then Roxas and Namine walked in the room looking tired but new and everyone strarted to stare at them. "Umm.. good morning" answered Roxas as he looked at them strangley. "How was last night?" asked Kairi. "Thats a little bit private don't you think?" answered Namine even more freaked out. "Come on no need to be shy" answered Kairi looking interested. "Kairi did you drink beer" answered Namine worryed. "No, now tell me" answered Kairi geting closer. "It was good, lats all you need to know" answered Roxas. "Good? was I that bad?" answered Namine as her attention turned to Roxas. "No, it was great, but maybe we shouldn't talk about it right now" answered Roxas trying not to start a fight. "Umm.. Roxas" answered Riku as he steped next to him. "Yes?" answered Roxas as he wondered why Riku was next to him all of a sudden. "Your dick is starting to show out of your boxers" wispered Riku. Roxas went red and stuffed it back in looking emmbaresd as looked around. "Glad you had fun Roxas" answered Xigbar as he snorted. Roxas just gave him an annoyed look and truned around and saw Eva comming down the hall half asleep. "Whoa, you smell like vomit, no offence" answered Sora as he held his nose. "Thank mister vomiting perv over there" answered Eva as she pointed at Xigbar who just shrugged. "It was weird thought last night how Riku started to follow Eva every where" answered Sora in a teasing voice. "Yeah I mean Riku, you did know the times she fell asleep on you were by accident?" answered Kairi looking at him.

FLASH BACK

"Sorry guys but my times nearly up, I got to go to bed" answered Eva as she looked at her watch. "Ok good night" answered Sora as he and Kairi left. As Eva walked to her room she didn't notice Riku was with her and she went in. "Um Riku, why are you in my room?" answered Eva looking at him as he went in. "You have to sleep" answered Riku as he held the beer bottle in one hand. "Yeak, I'v got pooky bear" answered Eva as she showed him. "Huh.. oh um.. It must be the uh beer heh whops I'll leave now" answered Riku as he went red and walked out the room.

GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK

"Hey it was the beer nothing else" answered Riku as he looked emmbaresd. "I don't know" answered Kairi still looking at him. "I'm serious" answered Riku. "YOU TOUCHED MY INOCENT DAUGHTER!!" yelled Xemnas as he pounced onto Riku. "Why don't you tell him about you and Seifer?" wispered Sora as he looked at the brawl. "I'LL KILL YOU YOU UGLY OLD MAN!!" yelled Xemnans. "Thats why" sighed Eva as she ate her pancake.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Man, I am really glad that I was not at that breakfast; these guys have some very strange conversations, and Roxas had an erection at the table. And Xemnas still is overprotective of Eva and beating up anyone who gets near her. Sheesh, these people are insane. Question, when are the other Org. members coming in? Just asking. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Next chapter I'm brining one in, I'm not saying who.

[Ember]

I like it.

[varsha]

Glad you like it

[varsha]

CHAPTER 28

GUMMY SHIP : EVA'S ROOM

As Riku sat on a chair drawing he kept on glancing at Eva sleeping and then drawing again. Every one thought he was asleep but he sneaked in to draw where it was quite. When he finished drawing he folded the drawing and put it in his pocket and started to draw something else. Riku forgot about the camera and didn't know that Xemnas was staring right at him through it. Riku went a little closer to Eva since he was drawing a picture with her in it. "GET AWAY FROM MY NIECE!" yelled Xemnas as he stormed into the room and locked the door. "I'm not doing any thing to her and how did you know I was in here?" asked Riku as he saw Xemnas with a sun burnt looking tan rather than a normal tan. "I'M NOT TELLING KNOW STEP ASIDE!" yelled Xemnas. "Uh. whats all the shouting about... WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?" yelled Eva as she stared at Xemnas. "I don't think your safe around him" answered Xemnas. "Uncle you have the sickest thoughts ever, I asked Riku to draw my necklace but I fell asleep as soon I was about to give it to him" answered Eva as she showed the necklace. "Oh.. um well I guess I should leave, but before I do what was that drawing you put in your pocket?" asked Xemnas. "Wh-wh- what drawing?" hesitated Riku. "I saw you in the camera" answered Xemnas. "You still have the camera there?" asked Eva as she looked at the camera. "Safety issues since you are the only girl here that is surrounded by a hoard of boys" answered Xemnas. "What about Kairi and Namine?" asked Riku. "Namine has Roxas and Kairi doesn't have a chance, know show me that drawing" answered Xemnas. "It's just a to-do list" lied Riku. "Really it takes you that long to write a to-do list?" answered Xemnas as he looked at Riku strangely. Riku just shrugged and then a strange nose came from under Eva's bed. Eva peeped under her bed and saw Marlaux waking up. "Um Marlaux what are you doing under my bed?" asked Eva. "EVA!, oh good your ok, we must find the others" answered Marlaux as he started to crawl out. "Wow, you were sleeping there all the time" answered Riku as he looked at him. "Huh, Riku!, Whats he doing here where are we Eva" answered Marlaux as he summoned his syth. "Don't worry, he's my best friend, I'll explain" answered Eva as she held Marlaux's arm. Marlaux put his syth away and listened to Eva as she explained. "Oh, guess you now know Xemnas is uncle aye" answered Marlaux as he looked at Xemnas who just nodded for some reason. "Yeah but we manage although it's kinda ironic that you ended up under my bed" answered Eva. "Listen Eva I have to tell you something" answered Marlaux as he got a picture from his pocket. "What?" asked Eva. "I'm your brother" answered Marlaux as he showed her the picture which was her playing with him. "WHAT!, Ma-Ma- Marly" answered Eva as tears started to roll down her eyes. "It's me" answered Marlaux as he spread his arms to hug her. "Aw, you two look the same when Marlaux first saw his baby sister" answered Xemnas as he looked at them. "It's strange, first you are her uncle, and now Marlaux is her brother" answered Riku. "When I found Marlaux I knew some thing had happened so I took him in, but then he turned on me and know we're a big family" answered Xemnas. "Xemnas you left the screen on in the main deck" answered Sora as he looked at Xemnas. "Oh snap, I better hide from Kairi" answered Xemnas as he turned his attention to Sora. "To late" answered Sora as Kairi pushed him out of the way. "Don't have a chance" asked Kairi as he saw him run out side. "I think your gonna like it here bro" answered Eva as she looked at Marlaux.

[TwilightRiku_13]

So, now Marluxia is in the story, and he is Eva's brother. Man, it seems like Eva is related to everyone in the Organization. Well, at least she isn't related to Xigbar because, if she was, she would need a whole lot of therapy. You know, it's a little weird that Eva is related to Xemnas and Marluxia. I mean, Xemnas has silver hair, Marluxia has pink hair, and Eva has dark brown hair; either there is a lot of diversity in this family or they all dyed their hair different colors so they wouldn't look like each other. One question before I go, how the hell did Marluxia end up under Eva's bed? That is a very odd place to end up. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.

[varsha]

Eva's hair was origanlly blue, so Marlaux's hair would have been blue but he is a nobody so his hair is different.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Originally Posted by varsha

Eva's hair was origanlly blue, so Marlaux's hair would have been blue but he is a nobody so his hair is different.

Eva's hair was originally blue? Well, if that's the case, you should have made Saix her brother. I mean, that sort of makes a little more sense to have him in the family and not Marluxia. Saix's hair is blue just like Eva's once was, and Saix is closer to Xemans than Marluxia is, seeing as Saix can be considered the boss man's bitch. Sorry, I just had to inject logic into the situation, but you don't have to listen to any of it, this is your story. Anyway, I look forward to the next update.

[varsha]

Eeeck, Saix and Eva would be depresing, or I could make him a step brother, then that would be fun, she would have to make him act like a wolf, wich he should be good at. ^^

[varsha]

I have had a lazy moment so this isn't that long.

CHAPTER 29

GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK

"Every one jump out" yelled the king as he opened the door. "Where are we?" asked Marlaux as he stared at the roses. "Wh-wh-why don't I just skip this?" hesitated as she looked at the castle. "No, we need you since we have a lot of catching up" answered Sora. "Come on Eva, your not scared are you?" asked Xigbar. "Me? scared? as if" answered Eva. "Then lets go, we should check up on the beast" answered Riku. "Ok" answered Eva. As every one walked on towards the beasts castle Eva just kept on lagging behind pretending not to be scared. Marlaux decided to do a quick prank on her and crept up behind her. "ROARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR" yelled Marlaux as he jumped up behind her. "AHHH" yelled Eva as she quickly summoned her key blades and smashed Marlaux all the way to the front door. "OW" yelled Marlaux. Every one cracked up laughing but Eva, she just made a mad face and gave a blood thirsty look which shut every one up. "Eva, didn't you over react a little bit" asked Riku as he stepped a little bit away from her. "No, I don't think I did?" answered Eva as she rubbed the back of her head. "ROAAAAAAR" yelled a more beastly person. "Very funny Marlaux, man two times, you really are a try hard" answered Eva. "That wasn't me" answered Marlaux as he cached up. Eva eyes widened as she turned around to be face to face with the beast. "You, what are you doing here?" asked the Beast as he sneered at her. "H-h-h-hi" answered Eva as she stepped back. "I haven't forgotten what you did to me back at the old castle" yelled the Beast.

[TwilightRiku_13]

Wait, what the heck? What the hell did Eva do to the Beast? Man, you really know how to leave people hanging. Can't wait until your next update, I really want to know what happens.