The Last Story - Page 5

varsha · April 26th, 2009, 02:09 AM

CHAPTER 13

GUMMY SHIP : DINING HALL

Everyone was waiting to eat the food on the table but Sora was running late for some reason. "Sould I go and check up on him?" asked Eva. "I think you should, he has been in his room for a long time" answered Riku with his tummy rumbeleing.

GUMMY SHIP : HALL WAY

Eva was halph way down the hall but then Sora bumped into her wich made them have a magor head ache. "Sorry I'm late, I just went to find the Organization coat for you just incase the nobodys don't reconise you" answered Sora while rubing his head. "Oh thanks, but how about we hurry up and get to the dining room befor Riku goes beserk" answered Eva. "Good Idea" answered Sora. Eva put on her Coat and they went of back to the dining hall.

GUMMY SHIP : DINING HALL

"Ok, who will say grace" answered the king. Eva put her hand up and started saying grace.

Oh light that concers darkness
we thank you for this food you serve to nothings and somebodies
we have nothing to offer but our gratatued
and hope that you let us remorce
Into ever lasting darkness

Everyone stared at her freaked out about the grace she just said, Riku, Namine and the king new that was the nobody grace so they didn't mind. "What type of grace was that" asked Sora horified. "the nobodies grace" answered Eva. "Oh" aswered Sora. "Alright, lets eat" yelled Riku. Everyone started to dig in, everyone exept Kairi, She was busy sneering at the look of Eva and Sora sitting next to each other and talking. Was trying to get his mashed patatoe on the spoon but instead it flung off and hit Eva on the face who then fling her peas which hit Riku who flung his entire plate that hit everyone, then Sora yelled food fight and everyone started shooting food at each other.

XxGameXfreakxX · April 26th, 2009, 04:47 AM

lol food fight

Angelic Symphony · April 26th, 2009, 12:42 PM

I love food fights : D

Good job : D

TwilightRiku_13 · April 26th, 2009, 10:36 PM

Awesome update, varsha. Huh, the Nobodies have their own grace. That was a little weird. The food fight was funny though, and so was Kairi sneering at Sora and Eva; I just like seeing Kairi angry. Anyway, awesome job again, and I look forward to more.

varsha · April 30th, 2009, 01:23 AM

CHAPTER 14

GUMMY SHIP : EVAS ROOM : BATHROOM

"Eww, I smell like a buffet house" though Eva as she cleaned her self in the shower. As she reached for the shampoo she started hearing Sora singing in his shower, wich was next door.

Marry me Juliet
You never have to be alone
I love you and thats all I really know
I talked to your dad
He"ll pick out a white dress
It's a love story
Baby just say yes

Eva just giggled since Riku put a recorder in Soras bathroom. She had finished and rapped herself in her towl she saw that there was an Organization towl. she rapped that one around her head and put on her clothes. this time she just wore the Organization uniform. She took of her towl and went in her room to right in her journal Xemnas gave her before they had their dinner at the castle.

GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK

Sora was just taking lots of quick glances at Eva since he was thinking "boyish" thoughts about Eva and her wet hair. "She's gonna notice you know" answered Riku in a cilling voice. "What I'm not checking out Eva" answered Sora hesitantly as soon as he found out what Riku ment. "I'm just pulling your leg Sora, so you no longer intrested in Kairi" asked Riku. "What, I'm not interestead in any one" answered Sora inocently. "Hey everyone we can go and land in Twilight Town" yelled Donald. "Alright lets land" yelled Eva. "Right, twilight town is not completly protected so they will need our help" answered the king.

TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT

"Ahh, it's good to be home" sighed Eva in a laid back way. "Hey it's you, the guy who's still strongest in the town, who are these dopes of yours" yelled a familiar voice. "Who you calling a dope you.... Seifer!" yelled Eva. When Seifer got a closer look at Eva he noticed her hair style and the quickly ran over to each other and embraced each other. When Sora saw the hug he had a very jealuse look on his face and he tightend his fists. "I can't believe it, after so many years I thought you had to leave" answered Seifer still hugging Eva. "Well I'm back, oh and my new name is Eva" answered Eva as they stopped embrasing each other. "Nice" answered Seifer. "Hey you guys forget about us" yelled a tough voice. "Rai, Vivi!" yelled Eva as thay gave each other a freindly group hug. "So how do you guys know each other" asked Sora trying to act tough. "Well, Seifers my boyfreind" answered Eva as Seifer put his arm around her. "BOYFREIND!!" yelled everyone but Rai, Vivi, Seifer and Eva.

TwilightRiku_13 · April 30th, 2009, 05:02 AM

Aw, I really liked that chapter. Sora singing "Love Story" by Taylor Swift was funny; never expected a guy to sing that song. So, Eva and Seifer are boyfriend and girlfriend. I really like those two as a couple; they seem more compatible than Sora and Eva. It was funny seeing Sora jealous; between him and Kairi, I like seeing them angry. Question, where's Fuu? You only mentioned Rai and Vivi. I thought Fuu was part of their gang, unless Eva takes her place. Also, when is the Org. coming back? I really want to see them again. Oh well, great job again, and I look forward to more.

varsha · April 30th, 2009, 05:59 AM

I forgot to put her in but I'll put put her in the next chapter

varsha · April 30th, 2009, 07:38 AM

CHAPTER 15

TWILIGHT TOWN : DINER

Seifer and Eva were at the winow sitting in front of each other and shared a milk shake with each other while gazing into each others eyes. Meanwhile Sora was out side in a muddy army suit spying on them, the was also torn due to a speical turn of events.

FLASH BACK

" That will be hundred thousand munny" answered the shop keeper. "WHAT!!, but in the caluloge it says hundered munny" whined Sora. "Thats for the undies" sighed the shop keeper. "Well I have one thing to say to you... I'll take twenty" yelled Sora. "Sorry we only have one in green form, the rest are pink" answered the shop keeper. "Fine, I'll take one green and nineteen pink" sighed Sora. "Oh your in luck sir, we have one suit for thousand dollars but it's ripped" answered the shop keeper. "I'll take it" answered Sora.

TWILIGHT TOWN : DINER

"So want to come back to my place" answered Seifer with a cheesy smile. "Keep it waiting but, I can give you somthing else" answered Eva exchanging glances. When Sora listened to the mini mike he put on Eva and heard those word coming out of her lips he quickly turned his attention towards the wind where they were sitting and saw them KISSING!!. Sora just had a black out and quickly ran back to the Gummy ship with a few tears in his eyes. "Romance scene" yelled an emo voice. Eva and Seifer stopped kissing and took a look at the person that "interupted" their date. "Fuu! I wondered where you were" answered Eva. "Your working at the diner, thats low" answered Seifer while looking at her uniform. "Limited choices" answered Fuu. "Really?, what else was there?" asked Eva. "Horrible things, heres your sundae and sorry there's only one spoon, I'll leave you love birds alone" answered Fuu giving them the sundae. Seifer and Eva blushed as they looked at each other. Seifer took the spoon and scooped a bit of the sundae and put it in Evas mouth. After a while the sundae was finished and they started walking home.

TWILIGHT TOWN : OUTSIDE THE GUMMY SHIP

Sora heard they were heading home and quickly ran to the window to see what they were up to. "Well see you tommorow" answered Eva as she bent over and gave him a kiss. Sora just sneered at them and went of to bed.

XxGameXfreakxX · April 30th, 2009, 08:46 AM

wow jealousy is rising O.o

TwilightRiku_13 · April 30th, 2009, 01:37 PM

I really liked that chapter too. I so love Eva and Seifer as a couple; they just go well together. Man, what the heck is Sora's problem? He shouldn't be jealous of Eva and Seifer, he belongs with Kairi or Namine or someone else; Eva just sems a bit too aggressive to be compatible with him, at least I think so. And why did Sora need twenty pairs of underwear, nineteen of which were pink? Just asking. Oh, and I'm glad you put Fuu in, I always liked her character. And I like that she is working at a diner, that was funny. Well, enough of my rambling, great job again, and I look forward to more.

varsha · May 1st, 2009, 08:52 AM

CHAPTER 16

TWILIGHT TOWN : ALLEYWAY

While everyone walked down the alleyway they had their own moods. Seifer and Eva were in their own love fantasy, Kairi was throwing flowers everywhere, Sora had someone elses storm cloud lurking him, Namine was showing Riku her new moves, Riku was staring at Eva and Seifer while the king, Donald and Goffy planed their next destination. "Ahh, isn't it romantic how Seifer and Eva love each other" sighed Kairi in a very releaved way. "Yeah, very nice, despite the way I feel for her she doesn't notice" sneered Sora still tense from what he heard last night. "Hey, Sora your losing it" wispered Riku. "Well just look at them, it's just disgusting" sneered Sora. There was a lovey dovey ora between Eva and Seifer as they walked together down the alleyway. "Hey she'll like you someday" wispered Riku. Then all of a sudden they saw Roxas sitting at the end of the alleyway eating some sea salt ice cream. "Roxas!" yelled everyone but Seifer. When Roxas saw them he quikly ran over to them. "All right we found you" answered Eva. "I'm glad you were able to look for me, but we must find the others" answered Roxas. Eva nodded her head and Seifer knew that he was one of her freinds she was looking for. "Finally we can get back on the mission" yelled Sora. "Whats wrong with you?" asked Eva. "Oh nothing, just the fact of how lousy you are and how nearly our visit here had nothing to with us just you and your "boyfreind" Seifer!" yelled Sora. "Hey, just because you don't know what love means doesn't mean you go and destroy my realationship" yelled Eva. "Alright me and Eva have a realationship" wispered Seifer. "Hey guys calm down" answered Riku. "SHUT UP RIKU!" yelled Sora and Eva. Riku just made a sad puppy face. "Sora, keep you and your pink undies your wearing right know to your self" yelled Eva. "How do you know I'm wearing pink undies? are you a perv?" yelled Sora. "I saw you buy nineteen of them you little girl" yelled Eva. "You two, stop fighting and lets go get some supplies" yelled the king. "Fine, but not with him" yelled Eva lowering her voice. Sora just walked of stomping. "Woah, I appear and the spice is out" answered Roxas.

TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT

Seifer was walking with a bunch of roses in his hand for Eva but then stopped as soon as he heard something. A giant heartless came out of nowhere and it had a heartless with a love potion in it's hand. Seifer sprung into acktion but tha heartless quikly devoured his heart.

OTHER SIDE OF SANDLOT

Eva came into tha sandlot with a smile but then when she saw Seifer die she yelled out his name and quikly ran over with her key blades ready to strike.

TwilightRiku_13 · May 2nd, 2009, 04:01 AM

No!!! Seifer can't die, or be turned into a heartless, or whatever!!! Oh man, I can only imagine Eva's distress. God, I just hope that Sora does not act like a total jerk about this whole situation. Man, I will be really pissed off if he acts like a total douchebag to Eva. Anyway, great update, and I look forward to more.

Angelic Symphony · May 2nd, 2009, 04:24 AM

Could this story get anymore interesting?

varsha · May 2nd, 2009, 06:33 AM

CHAPTER 17

TWILIGHT TOWN : TRAM COMMON

"SEIFER!" yelled Evas voice from afar. "Ignore that, it's probably those two getting their game on" sighed Sora. Everyone just stared at Sora and looked shocked about his dirty thought. "Or maybe it's because yhey found a GIANT HEARTLESS!!" yelled Riku pointing at the heartlesses head who had Eva circling around it on a giant keyblad made by twelve of the blades. "Oh, my bad" shruged Sora in emmbarasment. "Enough talk, we gotta help Eva" yelled the king. "Right, Namine give Kairi a weapon" commanded Sora. "No prob" answered Namine summoning asword for herself and Kairi.

TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT

Evaryone ran at full pace to get to the sandlot that they forgot to notice the Nobodies helping Eva. "Alright lets... what the" yelled Sora as he and Eva started to get pulled into a portal the heartless with the love potion went into. "Sora you get rid of the one inside, we'll deal with the big one" yelled Riku. "Ok" Sora yelled back.

?????

"Uggg.. where are we" asked Eva as she got up from sitting on Sora. "How should I know, your the darkness expert" answered Sora rubbing his head. "Wait, I know this place now, It's where all the people that died because of a heartless go, where Seifer went" answered Eva befor bursting into tears. "Wait, your saying, Seifers dead... gosh I geuss that sad" shruged Sora. "STOP ACTING LIKE YOU CARE!!!" yelled Eva. Then all of a sudden the heartless poped up and sprayed the potion on Sora. "Oh I care sooo much for you my love, nothing really matters" answered Sora out of the blue and he started hugging Eva and kissing her on the cheek. "Uhhh.. Sora?" answered Eva freaked out. "When shall we met my love?" answered Sora in a dreamy voice. "GET OFF OF ME!" yelled Eva as she found out what he ment and he went flying away. "TIME TO FINISH THIS YOU HEARTLESS.... HEARTLESS" yelled Eva while pointing her keyblades at the heartless. She fought the heartless while hitting Sora away a few times and defeated it. Then Sora went back to his old self wondering what happened. Then Seifers shadow spirit came out of no where. "Seifer!, so you really are dead" yelled Eva shedding a little tear. "Don't worry, things happen, like when I had a brain freeze, take care of your self and rememder, I'll always be in your heart" answered Seifer befor dissapering. Eva smiled and yelled over to Sora "lets go home". "How?" asked Sora. "With a portal" answered Eva and pushed Sora into her portal.

TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT

"Alright your back, let me guess, one of you got sprayed with the potion?" answered Riku. "Your right, it was Sora and I still have the kiss mark "shiver" " answered Eva. Sora went red and everyone giggled but Sora and Eva. "Hey look it's a key hole" yelled Kairi. "Alright I'll block it" yelled Eva, Sora, Rilku, Roxas and the king. "Uhh.. maybe Eva should" answered Namine. Everyone nodded and Eva blocked the key hole. "Well, our job is done, oh, sorry about Seifer" answered Riku. Eva just shedded a few tears and got comforted by Roxas and Namine. Everone ran over to the gummy ship and left off.

GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK

Eva, Kairi and Namine were sitting together and were talking about the next world.

Angelic Symphony · May 2nd, 2009, 06:34 AM

Lol. Eva was sitting on Sora xD

Good chapter. Loved it.

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April 26th, 2009, 02:09 AM	#61
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 585 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: the new jak and daxter game! Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 13 GUMMY SHIP : DINING HALL Everyone was waiting to eat the food on the table but Sora was running late for some reason. "Sould I go and check up on him?" asked Eva. "I think you should, he has been in his room for a long time" answered Riku with his tummy rumbeleing. GUMMY SHIP : HALL WAY Eva was halph way down the hall but then Sora bumped into her wich made them have a magor head ache. "Sorry I'm late, I just went to find the Organization coat for you just incase the nobodys don't reconise you" answered Sora while rubing his head. "Oh thanks, but how about we hurry up and get to the dining room befor Riku goes beserk" answered Eva. "Good Idea" answered Sora. Eva put on her Coat and they went of back to the dining hall. GUMMY SHIP : DINING HALL "Ok, who will say grace" answered the king. Eva put her hand up and started saying grace. Oh light that concers darkness we thank you for this food you serve to nothings and somebodies we have nothing to offer but our gratatued and hope that you let us remorce Into ever lasting darkness Everyone stared at her freaked out about the grace she just said, Riku, Namine and the king new that was the nobody grace so they didn't mind. "What type of grace was that" asked Sora horified. "the nobodies grace" answered Eva. "Oh" aswered Sora. "Alright, lets eat" yelled Riku. Everyone started to dig in, everyone exept Kairi, She was busy sneering at the look of Eva and Sora sitting next to each other and talking. Was trying to get his mashed patatoe on the spoon but instead it flung off and hit Eva on the face who then fling her peas which hit Riku who flung his entire plate that hit everyone, then Sora yelled food fight and everyone started shooting food at each other.

April 26th, 2009, 04:47 AM	#62
XxGameXfreakxX Nobody Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: gamerz world ;D Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story lol food fight

April 26th, 2009, 10:36 PM	#64
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 823 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Awesome update, varsha. Huh, the Nobodies have their own grace. That was a little weird. The food fight was funny though, and so was Kairi sneering at Sora and Eva; I just like seeing Kairi angry. Anyway, awesome job again, and I look forward to more.

April 30th, 2009, 01:23 AM	#65
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 585 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: the new jak and daxter game! Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 14 GUMMY SHIP : EVAS ROOM : BATHROOM "Eww, I smell like a buffet house" though Eva as she cleaned her self in the shower. As she reached for the shampoo she started hearing Sora singing in his shower, wich was next door. Marry me Juliet You never have to be alone I love you and thats all I really know I talked to your dad He"ll pick out a white dress It's a love story Baby just say yes Eva just giggled since Riku put a recorder in Soras bathroom. She had finished and rapped herself in her towl she saw that there was an Organization towl. she rapped that one around her head and put on her clothes. this time she just wore the Organization uniform. She took of her towl and went in her room to right in her journal Xemnas gave her before they had their dinner at the castle. GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK Sora was just taking lots of quick glances at Eva since he was thinking "boyish" thoughts about Eva and her wet hair. "She's gonna notice you know" answered Riku in a cilling voice. "What I'm not checking out Eva" answered Sora hesitantly as soon as he found out what Riku ment. "I'm just pulling your leg Sora, so you no longer intrested in Kairi" asked Riku. "What, I'm not interestead in any one" answered Sora inocently. "Hey everyone we can go and land in Twilight Town" yelled Donald. "Alright lets land" yelled Eva. "Right, twilight town is not completly protected so they will need our help" answered the king. TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT "Ahh, it's good to be home" sighed Eva in a laid back way. "Hey it's you, the guy who's still strongest in the town, who are these dopes of yours" yelled a familiar voice. "Who you calling a dope you.... Seifer!" yelled Eva. When Seifer got a closer look at Eva he noticed her hair style and the quickly ran over to each other and embraced each other. When Sora saw the hug he had a very jealuse look on his face and he tightend his fists. "I can't believe it, after so many years I thought you had to leave" answered Seifer still hugging Eva. "Well I'm back, oh and my new name is Eva" answered Eva as they stopped embrasing each other. "Nice" answered Seifer. "Hey you guys forget about us" yelled a tough voice. "Rai, Vivi!" yelled Eva as thay gave each other a freindly group hug. "So how do you guys know each other" asked Sora trying to act tough. "Well, Seifers my boyfreind" answered Eva as Seifer put his arm around her. "BOYFREIND!!" yelled everyone but Rai, Vivi, Seifer and Eva.

April 30th, 2009, 05:02 AM	#66
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 823 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Aw, I really liked that chapter. Sora singing "Love Story" by Taylor Swift was funny; never expected a guy to sing that song. So, Eva and Seifer are boyfriend and girlfriend. I really like those two as a couple; they seem more compatible than Sora and Eva. It was funny seeing Sora jealous; between him and Kairi, I like seeing them angry. Question, where's Fuu? You only mentioned Rai and Vivi. I thought Fuu was part of their gang, unless Eva takes her place. Also, when is the Org. coming back? I really want to see them again. Oh well, great job again, and I look forward to more.

April 30th, 2009, 05:59 AM	#67
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 585 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: the new jak and daxter game! Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story I forgot to put her in but I'll put put her in the next chapter

April 30th, 2009, 07:38 AM	#68
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 585 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: the new jak and daxter game! Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 15 TWILIGHT TOWN : DINER Seifer and Eva were at the winow sitting in front of each other and shared a milk shake with each other while gazing into each others eyes. Meanwhile Sora was out side in a muddy army suit spying on them, the was also torn due to a speical turn of events. FLASH BACK " That will be hundred thousand munny" answered the shop keeper. "WHAT!!, but in the caluloge it says hundered munny" whined Sora. "Thats for the undies" sighed the shop keeper. "Well I have one thing to say to you... I'll take twenty" yelled Sora. "Sorry we only have one in green form, the rest are pink" answered the shop keeper. "Fine, I'll take one green and nineteen pink" sighed Sora. "Oh your in luck sir, we have one suit for thousand dollars but it's ripped" answered the shop keeper. "I'll take it" answered Sora. TWILIGHT TOWN : DINER "So want to come back to my place" answered Seifer with a cheesy smile. "Keep it waiting but, I can give you somthing else" answered Eva exchanging glances. When Sora listened to the mini mike he put on Eva and heard those word coming out of her lips he quickly turned his attention towards the wind where they were sitting and saw them KISSING!!. Sora just had a black out and quickly ran back to the Gummy ship with a few tears in his eyes. "Romance scene" yelled an emo voice. Eva and Seifer stopped kissing and took a look at the person that "interupted" their date. "Fuu! I wondered where you were" answered Eva. "Your working at the diner, thats low" answered Seifer while looking at her uniform. "Limited choices" answered Fuu. "Really?, what else was there?" asked Eva. "Horrible things, heres your sundae and sorry there's only one spoon, I'll leave you love birds alone" answered Fuu giving them the sundae. Seifer and Eva blushed as they looked at each other. Seifer took the spoon and scooped a bit of the sundae and put it in Evas mouth. After a while the sundae was finished and they started walking home. TWILIGHT TOWN : OUTSIDE THE GUMMY SHIP Sora heard they were heading home and quickly ran to the window to see what they were up to. "Well see you tommorow" answered Eva as she bent over and gave him a kiss. Sora just sneered at them and went of to bed.

April 30th, 2009, 08:46 AM	#69
XxGameXfreakxX Nobody Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: gamerz world ;D Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story wow jealousy is rising O.o

April 30th, 2009, 01:37 PM	#70
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 823 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story I really liked that chapter too. I so love Eva and Seifer as a couple; they just go well together. Man, what the heck is Sora's problem? He shouldn't be jealous of Eva and Seifer, he belongs with Kairi or Namine or someone else; Eva just sems a bit too aggressive to be compatible with him, at least I think so. And why did Sora need twenty pairs of underwear, nineteen of which were pink? Just asking. Oh, and I'm glad you put Fuu in, I always liked her character. And I like that she is working at a diner, that was funny. Well, enough of my rambling, great job again, and I look forward to more.

May 1st, 2009, 08:52 AM	#71
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 585 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: the new jak and daxter game! Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 16 TWILIGHT TOWN : ALLEYWAY While everyone walked down the alleyway they had their own moods. Seifer and Eva were in their own love fantasy, Kairi was throwing flowers everywhere, Sora had someone elses storm cloud lurking him, Namine was showing Riku her new moves, Riku was staring at Eva and Seifer while the king, Donald and Goffy planed their next destination. "Ahh, isn't it romantic how Seifer and Eva love each other" sighed Kairi in a very releaved way. "Yeah, very nice, despite the way I feel for her she doesn't notice" sneered Sora still tense from what he heard last night. "Hey, Sora your losing it" wispered Riku. "Well just look at them, it's just disgusting" sneered Sora. There was a lovey dovey ora between Eva and Seifer as they walked together down the alleyway. "Hey she'll like you someday" wispered Riku. Then all of a sudden they saw Roxas sitting at the end of the alleyway eating some sea salt ice cream. "Roxas!" yelled everyone but Seifer. When Roxas saw them he quikly ran over to them. "All right we found you" answered Eva. "I'm glad you were able to look for me, but we must find the others" answered Roxas. Eva nodded her head and Seifer knew that he was one of her freinds she was looking for. "Finally we can get back on the mission" yelled Sora. "Whats wrong with you?" asked Eva. "Oh nothing, just the fact of how lousy you are and how nearly our visit here had nothing to with us just you and your "boyfreind" Seifer!" yelled Sora. "Hey, just because you don't know what love means doesn't mean you go and destroy my realationship" yelled Eva. "Alright me and Eva have a realationship" wispered Seifer. "Hey guys calm down" answered Riku. "SHUT UP RIKU!" yelled Sora and Eva. Riku just made a sad puppy face. "Sora, keep you and your pink undies your wearing right know to your self" yelled Eva. "How do you know I'm wearing pink undies? are you a perv?" yelled Sora. "I saw you buy nineteen of them you little girl" yelled Eva. "You two, stop fighting and lets go get some supplies" yelled the king. "Fine, but not with him" yelled Eva lowering her voice. Sora just walked of stomping. "Woah, I appear and the spice is out" answered Roxas. TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT Seifer was walking with a bunch of roses in his hand for Eva but then stopped as soon as he heard something. A giant heartless came out of nowhere and it had a heartless with a love potion in it's hand. Seifer sprung into acktion but tha heartless quikly devoured his heart. OTHER SIDE OF SANDLOT Eva came into tha sandlot with a smile but then when she saw Seifer die she yelled out his name and quikly ran over with her key blades ready to strike.

May 2nd, 2009, 04:01 AM	#72
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 823 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts I Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story No!!! Seifer can't die, or be turned into a heartless, or whatever!!! Oh man, I can only imagine Eva's distress. God, I just hope that Sora does not act like a total jerk about this whole situation. Man, I will be really pissed off if he acts like a total douchebag to Eva. Anyway, great update, and I look forward to more.

May 2nd, 2009, 06:33 AM	#74
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 585 Rep Power: 2 Currently playing: the new jak and daxter game! Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 17 TWILIGHT TOWN : TRAM COMMON "SEIFER!" yelled Evas voice from afar. "Ignore that, it's probably those two getting their game on" sighed Sora. Everyone just stared at Sora and looked shocked about his dirty thought. "Or maybe it's because yhey found a GIANT HEARTLESS!!" yelled Riku pointing at the heartlesses head who had Eva circling around it on a giant keyblad made by twelve of the blades. "Oh, my bad" shruged Sora in emmbarasment. "Enough talk, we gotta help Eva" yelled the king. "Right, Namine give Kairi a weapon" commanded Sora. "No prob" answered Namine summoning asword for herself and Kairi. TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT Evaryone ran at full pace to get to the sandlot that they forgot to notice the Nobodies helping Eva. "Alright lets... what the" yelled Sora as he and Eva started to get pulled into a portal the heartless with the love potion went into. "Sora you get rid of the one inside, we'll deal with the big one" yelled Riku. "Ok" Sora yelled back. ????? "Uggg.. where are we" asked Eva as she got up from sitting on Sora. "How should I know, your the darkness expert" answered Sora rubbing his head. "Wait, I know this place now, It's where all the people that died because of a heartless go, where Seifer went" answered Eva befor bursting into tears. "Wait, your saying, Seifers dead... gosh I geuss that sad" shruged Sora. "STOP ACTING LIKE YOU CARE!!!" yelled Eva. Then all of a sudden the heartless poped up and sprayed the potion on Sora. "Oh I care sooo much for you my love, nothing really matters" answered Sora out of the blue and he started hugging Eva and kissing her on the cheek. "Uhhh.. Sora?" answered Eva freaked out. "When shall we met my love?" answered Sora in a dreamy voice. "GET OFF OF ME!" yelled Eva as she found out what he ment and he went flying away. "TIME TO FINISH THIS YOU HEARTLESS.... HEARTLESS" yelled Eva while pointing her keyblades at the heartless. She fought the heartless while hitting Sora away a few times and defeated it. Then Sora went back to his old self wondering what happened. Then Seifers shadow spirit came out of no where. "Seifer!, so you really are dead" yelled Eva shedding a little tear. "Don't worry, things happen, like when I had a brain freeze, take care of your self and rememder, I'll always be in your heart" answered Seifer befor dissapering. Eva smiled and yelled over to Sora "lets go home". "How?" asked Sora. "With a portal" answered Eva and pushed Sora into her portal. TWILIGHT TOWN : SANDLOT "Alright your back, let me guess, one of you got sprayed with the potion?" answered Riku. "Your right, it was Sora and I still have the kiss mark "shiver" " answered Eva. Sora went red and everyone giggled but Sora and Eva. "Hey look it's a key hole" yelled Kairi. "Alright I'll block it" yelled Eva, Sora, Rilku, Roxas and the king. "Uhh.. maybe Eva should" answered Namine. Everyone nodded and Eva blocked the key hole. "Well, our job is done, oh, sorry about Seifer" answered Riku. Eva just shedded a few tears and got comforted by Roxas and Namine. Everone ran over to the gummy ship and left off. GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK Eva, Kairi and Namine were sitting together and were talking about the next world.

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