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Old April 17th, 2009, 09:42 AM   #46
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same questions as twilight riku
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Old April 19th, 2009, 02:19 AM   #47
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Oh, well they will be answered soon.
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Old April 19th, 2009, 09:28 AM   #48
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Old April 19th, 2009, 09:33 AM   #49
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Okay, what the heck was that all about? How does Rainer have fourteen keyblades? What is up with her shaking necklace? Who was the person laughing evilly and knocking Rainer out? Who is Rainer really? Man, there are just so many questions here; I hope they all get answered soon. Anyway, good job, and I look forward to more.
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I am also still loving this story. Sorry that it took so long to read ^^
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Old April 20th, 2009, 10:12 AM   #50
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CHAPTER 10

DESTINY ISLAND

"Hey Sora, I’ve been wondering about Rainer" answered Riku. "What do you mean?" asked Sora. "What if she didn't die in the shipwreck, what if she was shot away to a different world?" asked Riku. "That's impossible, there is no access to the other worlds" answered Sora. "But Sora, remember the war was on before, there still is a chance" answered Riku getting a little excited. "Riku your speaking nonsense, I went to nearly all the worlds and not a single one had a sighting of Rainer" answered Sora. "THAT’S BECAUSE YOU WERN'T LOOKING FOR HER!! SORA SHE WAS YOUR TRUE FREIND, ONE THAT STUCK UP FOR YOU AND YOU RETERNED THE FAVOUR BY REPLACING HER WITH KIARI!!" yelled Riku. Sora fell of the tree terrified. "Sorry I just wish I did something rather than waste the time I had to look for her ” answered Riku after calming down. ”It’s ok, hey if king Mickey calls us on another adventure we’ll go look for her” cheered Sora. “There’s one in a million chance of that happening” mumbled Riku. As soon as he finish he looked around and found out Sora wasn’t on the tree, then he heard him calling out and telling him to come down to the beach.

SEA SHORE

As he got closer he notice something or some one was washed up on the beach right next to Sora. When he arrived he saw it was a girl with brown hair as brown as chocolate, she was wearing an Organization uniform just without the shoes and hood and her pants and coat were ripped. “Is this the girl from the capsule?” thought Riku. “Riku are you awake?” yelled Sora as he stared at the girl. “What… of course I am… she looks familiar” answered Riku after coming out of his trance. “OH CRAP!!!! SHE’S STOPPED BREATHING!!!” yelled Sora. “Well do CPR” answered Riku while trying to find his phone. “But” wined Sora. “No buts, your learning at school so this is the best opportunity” answered Riku after giving up looking for his phone. “Bet you did it with lots of GIRLS!” smirked Sora. He bent down and started doing CPR. Suddenly she opened her eyes while Sora was doing the mouth to mouth part and punched him to the side. “Cough chough, eeeew I get knocked out and find myself kissing a boy with brunette hair” yelled Eva. “Rainer…. Is it truly you?” asked Riku. “Ummm…. who are you?” asked Eva. “It’s us, Riku and Sora” answered Riku. She looked down at Sora and saw the necklace, then every thing came rushing back from her really young childhood, the friendship, the happiness, Kairi the new girl and…. the shipwreck. Tears started rolling down her cheeks as she remembered the fun they had. As soon as Sora stood up she ran towards him and hugged him, Riku came along and joined the hugging. “Who’s this?” asked Kairi as she appeared out of nowhere. They stopped hugging and turned around, there was Kairi with everyone else behind her. “Ya who is this ya” answered Wakka. “common tell us” answered Tudus with wide eyes and panting tongue. “Put your tongue in your mouth Tudus” yelled Selphie. “Don’t you guys notice, it’s Rainer” shouted Sora. “RAINER!!” everyone shouted. “Hi, but my new name is Eva” she answered Eva. “Wait… you’re a nobody” asked Riku a little bit worried. “No, the only thing chanced about me is that I have different hair and eyes, oh and name” answered Eva. “Oh, well me, Tudus and Wakka have to go see ya” answered Selphie. Kairi didn’t show it but she was really mad. “Hey it’s a gummy ship” yelled Eva. They turned around and saw the gummy ship land on the other side of the beach. “What, It must be the King, come on” yelled Sora.

OTHER SIDE OF THE BEACH

“Hey it’s Sora” yelled Donald. “Hey, Riku look it’s Donald and Goffy” yelled Sora. They met at the corner of the shore and the King was with them. “Oh good Eva’s with you” answered King Mickey. “You were looking for me…why?” asked Eva. “Well you know you’re the ultimate Keyblade wielder, so I need you to help me find the other organization members and defeat maleficent, luckly you took over one world which she can’t touch” explained the King. “So she separated us” answered Eva. “Wait a second, what is an ultimate Keyblade wielder?” asked Sora. “I’ll show you” answered Eva. She summoned her Keyblades, all fourteen of them and all Sora did was stare. “We’ll have to leave immediately so grab your supplies and lets leave” answered Mickey . “The usual routine” answered Riku. “I’m going to buy some clothes” answered Eva. “Ok, we’ll leave at night” answered Sora.

10.00 PM AT THE GUMMY SHIP

“Hey nice threads” answered Tudus who was the only one seeing him off. “In your dreams” answered Eva. She was wearing a white t-shirt with a black feather on it, gray gloves and white jeans. “Lets go” answered Riku.
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Old April 21st, 2009, 04:05 AM   #51
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What the hell just happened? So, was the person laughing evilly Maleficent or someone else? It sounded like it was Maleficent, but I'm still not quite sure. Also, is the Organization good now? You made it sound like they were when King Mickey said they need to get the Organization and defeat Maleficent. Sorry, I'm still a little confused as to what is going on. Well, I'm sure everything will come to light soon enough. Anyway, good job again, and I look forward to more.
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Old April 22nd, 2009, 10:44 AM   #52
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why is kairi mad? is it because rainer is back?
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Old April 22nd, 2009, 01:04 PM   #53
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Good chapter. Mysterious even : D Keep going!
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Old April 22nd, 2009, 11:11 PM   #54
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CHAPTER 11

GUMMY SHIP

"Your magesty, I still don't understand why we are looking for the Organization?" answered Sora. "Well as you all know Malifecent wanted the Organizations castle when the fight was finished, right?" answered the king. "Well yeah but we destroyed the castle and the Organization" answered Sora. "True but the Organization survived and found a new way of becoming somebodys and protecting people, oh and Eva, Xemnas wasn't joking about the father thing, turns out he is your uncle" answered the king. "WHAT, your saying we fought our freinds family member and the Organization is now good" yelled Sora. "But your magesty, my uncle never made contact with me" answered Eva. " Oh he did, ever since you were a baby he nutrured you for a long time but was blinded by darkness when Ansem started reasearch, why he saved you on that day of the shipwreck" answered the king. "Oh, then I wished I got to know him better" answered Eva sadly. "Don't be sad, everything will be fine, now what about malifecent?" asked Riku. "Well she took over the new castle the Organization made, oh and Sora, Roxas is back in the Organization again" answered the king. "Awww man" sighed Sora. "Don't worry, he's my freind" smiled Eva. "I know a few embarasing moments too" smirked Riku. "Don't you dare" yelled Eva. Everone laghed, Kairi was standing behind a wall trying to find a way to get Eva out of the picture since Sora and Eva are bonded. "Hey Sora, do you still have our freindship necklace?" asked Eva. "Sure do" answered Sora holding out his necklace. It was crown shaped like Soras but Evas one was gold. "I'll read the engraving on mine" answered Eva.


By sea I leave
By sea I came
We shall find each other
The same way
Through and through

"Awww how romantic" sighed Riku. Eva crunched her knuckles and Rikus eyes widened and he ran through the hall way like a maniac. "GET BACK HERE OLD MAN" yelled Eva as she chased him. "Thats our Eva, I think I should read mine out" answered Sora.

I am the land
I am the beach
Find the sea wanderer
And my work is complete
Through and through

"Hehe" giggled Donald. "Shhh, quite" wispered Goffy. "Hey you guys, we're coming up to Radiant Garden" yelled the king. "All right prepere to land" yelled Goffy.

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Old April 23rd, 2009, 03:29 AM   #55
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cool
lol "GET BACK HERE OLD MAN"
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Old April 23rd, 2009, 04:28 AM   #56
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Wait a minute, I'm kind of confused. How long after the end of KH2 does all of this take place? A few months? A few years? I'm just trying to figure out the timeline. Also, Xemnas is Eva's uncle? Xemnas never struck me as a person with family, and he also looks a bit young to be an uncle, at least that's what I think. And another thing, Roxas is in the Org.? I mean, if the Org. is now made up of somebodies, shouldn't Roxas and Sora be reconnected? Sorry about all the questions, but I'm just a little confused as to what is going on. Anyway, awesome job, and I look forward to more.
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Old April 23rd, 2009, 08:39 AM   #57
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Well this kinda happens a few years past the end of kh2, like maby after no: 3. (I don't know what happens in no: 3)
Secondly Xemnas is pretty old, well thats what I think, he probably does have a family, just forgotten, like him.
Lastly the Organization found a new way, they aren't somebodies yet.
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CHAPTER 12

RADIANT GARDEN MARKET PLACE

"I don't know why we are here in the first place" answered Eva. "What do you mean?" asked Sora in his laid back gesture. "This place is the place where malifacent can't touch and it's crawling with dusks, some have gone back to somebodys and they are still protecting this place" answered Eva crossing her arms. "Well I still don't trust nobodys, plus I want to see leon and the gang, they've done a good job" answered Sora. "What do mean you cant trust nobodys" yelled Riku, Eva and Namine. "Namine!, where did you come from?" yelled Sora freaked out. "Well since Roxas got out, I can get out, why Roxas and I got out, it's because when we become sombodys we will be induvodual somebodys" explaind Namine. "What Namine is saying is true" answered the king. "You can join us" answered Riku. "Hey who made you leader" yelled Sora while staring at Riku. "Sora, Sora, Sora, you don't think you can lead us all, besides I have the stronger keyblade" answered Riku while staring back at him. "Your both wrong, Eva is the leader since she is the ultimate keyblade bearer" yelled the king. "Didn't you guys know that? we said it on the ship" answered Eva. "But" yelled Sora and Riku. "Hah, your just sad because a GIRL is the leader" smirked Eva. Sora and Riku went red as she gave them a look. Kairi noticed and her face filled up with rage in a split second. "Well if it isn't Sora, Donald and Goffy" yelled a deep voice. "Leon!" yelled everyone but Namine, Eva and Riku. "Who?" yelled Namine, Eva and Riku. "So, the ultimate keyblade bearer does exist, that means that she is the new leader of the group" gestured Leon while turning all of his attention to her. "WHO THE HELL ARE YOU???" yelled Riku, Eva and Namine. "Sorry where are my manners, I'm Leon" answered Leon while kissing Evas hand. Sora, Riku, Namine and Kairi got jealose as they saw the kiss on the hand. "Lets go met the others all ready" yelled Sora with an angry look. "Awww, are you jealose Sora" answered Donald. "NO I'M NOT!!" yelled Sora. "Then how come your face is red like Rikus" asked Goffy. "MY FACE ISN'T RED!!" yelled Riku. "I think you stirred them up enough" smirked Loen. Eva just giggled and loved it when Sora and Riku got embarassed.



MERLINS HOUSE


"Ahh there you all are" answered Merlin. "You new we were here?" asked Kairi. "Why if it isn't Rainer, oh I"d remember your little adorable face any were" yelled Cid cutting in and hugging Eva. "AHHH! THE OLD MANS ATTACKING ME!" yelled Eva. Everyone just giggled at the thought of Eva being a little toddler and her being hugged to death by Cid. "Umm Cid you do know she is a teenager and she also is a nobody?" asked Merlin. "Oh sorry, I got a little carryed away" answered Cid while realesing his grip. "How do you know Eva?" asked Sora. "So her new name is Eva, huh, named after your mother" answered Cid. "No disrespect Cid but, that didn't answere my question" answered Sora. "Oh right, well Xeanort was a freaindly person months before the reasearch on heartless, Xeanort always brought you down here to play and I would baby sit you, but that was a long time ago" explained Cid with a sigh at the end. "Hello everybody" yelled a young female voice. "Yuffie" yelled everyone but Namine, Riku and Eva. "Hi" answered Yuffie. "All right time to check on you lot umm, Sora you remember your magic right?" asked Merlin. "Of cource I do" answered Sora. good then you will be Evas tutor" answered Merlin. "Ok" answered Sora. "So it looks like the towns in shape so we just have to leave" answered Eva. "True, but you will come to the ball right?" asked Merlin handing them an invatation. "Of course we will" answered Sora. "Bye" yelled everyone as they headed for the gummy ship.


GUMMY SHIP


"Hey, the dance Is a long way away so lets not worry about it now" answered Eva. "Good Idea" answered Kairi while quickly grabing Soras hand.
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Old April 24th, 2009, 04:33 PM   #59
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God, I so love that Eva and Sora's relationship makes Kairi jealous; I just like seeing Kairi angry. Also, I love that the Radient Garden gang is in the story; Radient Garden was always one of my favorite worlds. I'm also glad that Namine is there; she is just so great. So, when are we going to see the Org. again? Part of me wants to see Xemnas freak out when he finds out his niece is missing; he does seems like the overprotective father type. And what is this ball Merlin invited them to all about? I hope you bring that up soon. Anyway, awesome job again, and I look forward to more.
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Old April 25th, 2009, 11:38 AM   #60
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kairi is so jealous...AWSOME! :D
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