The Last Story - Page 3

Choc · April 8th, 2009, 05:34 AM

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Originally Posted by TwilightRiku_13

That was funny. Rainer and Roxas kissed, and Tracy and Seifer are jealous. Question, where the hell did Roxas fall from? What, was he playing in the rafters or something? Anyway, good job, and I look forward to more.

He was fixing the curtains above the stage.

TwilightRiku_13 · April 8th, 2009, 06:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Choc

He was fixing the curtains above the stage.

Oh, thanks for the answer. Must have missed that part.

varsha · April 8th, 2009, 09:47 PM

Any new ideas?

XxGameXfreakxX · April 10th, 2009, 08:11 AM

does rainer and roxas kinda like each other?

varsha · April 10th, 2009, 08:20 AM

CHAPTER 7

END OF DAY

"Class, since there is the school play there is no homework" anounced the Head Teacher. Everyone but Zexion yelled horay, Zexion just groaned. "Well the play is tommorow night, might as well practice" sighed Rainer. "Don't worry, me, Zexion, Larexene and Demyx wil help you and Roxas" answered Axel with a cheeky smile. "Ok, well be able to do other stuff as well since I know the lines already I'll just Need to "shiver" practice the kissing scene" answered Rainer.

AT SUNRISE HILL

"Alright and action" yelled Zeixon with a directors hat on. Rainer and Roxas went really close and then Axel yelled "STOP". Rainer turned her head and smacked Roxas with her hair. "What is it know, do you have to pee, get more food, or is it that you just need a camera?" yelled Rainer. Axel just moved to get a better veiw. "Just get it over with" Larexene shouted with hands full of candy. "Alright I'll start the timer" answered Demyx. "Alright and action" yelled Zexion. This time they did it quikly to kill time. "Alright I've got my phone, time to start sending pictures" wispered Axel. "What if she find's out it was us" wispered Demyx worried.

5 MINUTES LATER

"Alright my lips are soar, I'm stopping" mumbled Rainer. "I agree" mumbled Roxas. As soon as they stopped everyone was gone and the timmer had already stopped. A flyer slamed into her face and it read, Rainer and Roxas dished it out at sunset hill, their picture of them kissing was on it. "Alright now I'm mad" yelled Rainer. Roxas looked at tha flyer and went red and had some small sensation of rage. "I'm right behind you" yelled Roxas. Demyx was dangeling behind the clock and heard everything and wet him self again. some of went onto Larexene who was standing on the track. She thought it was rain and Demyx was having a shocker.

varsha · April 10th, 2009, 08:21 AM

You'll find out

TwilightRiku_13 · April 11th, 2009, 03:31 AM

Another good update, varsha. I so hope that Rainer beats the crap out of Axel for broadcasting the picture of them kissing. Seriously, Axel is a total jackass. And I liked Zexion as the director. It was funny picturing him with a director's cap on. Anyway, I look forward to more.

varsha · April 13th, 2009, 03:48 AM

CHAPTER 8

School was in chaos because word got out that there was going to be a pop quiz. Meanwhile Axel, Larexene, Zexion and Demyx were standing in a corner waiting for the bell to ring. "Man I can't wait for the pop quiz, I wonder if they will let me use my sitar" yelled Demyx. "Do you even know what a pop quiz is?" smirked Axel. "Of course I do, it's a quiz on pop stars, pop musicians and pop music writers" exclaimed Demyx. Axel just stared at him while thinking "he won't stand a chance". "Hey did any of you see Roxas coming through the portal with us?". "Nah, he must have gone to buy some extra school supplies" answered Axel. "Or maybe that’s an excuse your making because you lost your soul mate to a girl and had the texts, e-mails and flyers up so you could have revenge" smirked Larexene. "Shhhhhh, Rainer might be here.... I'M NOT GAY!!!!!!!!" yelled Axel. "Lets just go inside and get ahead on the pop quiz" mumbled Zexion after being trampled by students continuously. "Good idea" yelled Demyx as a bunch of screaming girls ran after him and his "shocking" new doo like the stampede from the pride lands.

RAINERS ROOM (THE LAIR)

"What have you found so far Blondie" yelled Rainer while wearing an army suite. "I found a note from Seifer asking you on a date, a note from Tracy asking...ME ON A DATE!!!, a note showing you getting struck by lightning, the flyer "shiver", and Axels camera at the scene of the crime" answered Roxas before taking a big gasp of air. "Seifer wants to go out with me" squealed Rainer. "EEEWWW, Tracy wants to go out with me, GROSS!!" yelled Roxas. "Oh grow up, now back to business, the only useful clue is Axels camera which means, the criminal is at school" answered Rainer. "But we can't go, we're the laughing stock of the town and school" whined Roxas. "That’s why I have a few disguises" smirked Rainer. "GREAT" sighed Roxas.

SCHOOL GATES (STILL CHAOTIC)

Rainer and Roxas walk in looking like drugeis while Rainer is singing the mission impposible song.

Dun Dun, Dun Dun
Dun Dun, Dun Dun
Dun Dun, Dun Dun
Dun Dun, Dun Dun
Dunnunnun
Dunnunnun
Dunnunnun
Dun Nun

"Hey if we want to enter quietly, why don't we not sing" suggested Roxas. "Why it gives you the sneaky mood" whined Rainer. "Alright alright, no need for puppy eyes" answered Roxas. "Yay, now lets go eves drop on some of the gossip girls" suggested Rainer. So they went off and did some eves dropping, they found out Seifer wears pink undies, Tracy has a wall of pictures with Roxas on every one of them and the struggle manager is GAY. "Hey did you get a text, e-mail and flyer from Axel?" whispered one gossip girl. "Yes I did, can't believe Roxas loves Rainer" whispered the other. "I do not lover whispered Roxas to him self. He turned round to speak wit Rainer but then saw her running to the other side of the school. he followed her and saw her beating up Axel while he was yelling "AHHH, IT'S A DRUGIE, AND HE HAS THE WATER!!!!"

The scenes are to dangerous even for me to say, lets see what Seifer is doing.

"You did give Roxas the note right" asked Seifer. "Of course I did" answered Rai while stuffing his face with a burger (Mmmm). They stayed silent, then went back to beating the nerd.

Back again

NATIONAL HOSPITAL
"Where am I" asked Axel. "Your at the National Hospital" answered the Nurse.
"Oh" answered Axel. "Here have some water" answered the Nurse. "AAAAHHHHHH" screamed Axel.

AT THE HALL AT NIGHT

It was the end of the play and everyone clapped, some even cryed. "There you have it folks, now go home.

BACK STAGE

"Xemnas, do we have to do this" whined Larexene. "Yes we do, you know we were just here to retrieve her" answered Xemnas. "Hey guys..... what are you doing?" asked Rainer hesitantly. "Sorry" answered Roxas, Axel and Demyx. Before she could ask why they were sorry they knocked her out leaving her to go into a deep sleep.

TwilightRiku_13 · April 13th, 2009, 05:18 AM

Okay, now I am really intrigued with Rainer. Who is she? Why does the Organization want her? Man, so many questions. Anyway, good job again, and I look forward to more.

XxGameXfreakxX · April 13th, 2009, 09:26 AM

lol "AHHH, IT'S A DRUGIE, AND HE HAS THE WATER!!!!" now thats funny XD ur story is awsome

varsha · April 15th, 2009, 07:03 AM

Why thank you

varsha · April 15th, 2009, 08:09 AM

CHAPTER 9

Rainer giggled at a few of the memories they had, but then frowened at what they did to. Rob her of her life, freinds, family and her dignity. "Hey Rainer, can I talk to you?" asked Roxas from the other side of her room's door. "Uhh... I'm getting changed" yelled Rainer quickly putting on her training gear. "Oh.. ok.. is it ok if I talk to you from outside?" asked Roxas. "I some part of the land of the dragons, a boy standing outside a girls room means they're a PERVERT, PERVERT!!" yelled Rainer annoyed. "WHAT, BUT I'M NOT A PERVERT!" whined Roxas. "Hey you two love birds mind hurrying up, don't want to get late" yelled Axel. "OH MY GAWD, IT LIKE YOU HAVE NEVER HEARD OF A GIRL AND HER CHANGING!!" yelled Rainer. "HEY, AXEL, ROXAS, MIND GIVING HER SOME SPACE!!" yelled Larexene. "OH S***, THE B**** IS OUT!!" yelled Axel after running away. "WHAT DID YOU SAY A******!!" yelled Larexene. "Hey, is there a porn party" asked Xigbar. "SHUT UP, I'M TRYING TO READ ROMEO AND JULEIT!!" yelled Zexion. "Gawd, save me" pleaded Rainer. "I'LL SHOW YOU ROMEO AND JULEIT!!" yelled Larexene.

TRAINING GROUNDS

"Good never ending night everyone" yelled Xemnas while hugging Rainer. "Uhh.. why are you hugging me?" asked Rainer. "Because I want to feel like a father" answered Xemnas while hugging her harder. All the organization members went red trying to hold in their out bursts of lafter, everyone exept Axel, he was taking millions of pictures. "Umm.. superior, is it ok if we start training" yelled Saix before closing his mouth to stop himself from laughing, it was to much for him. "Very well" sighed Xemnas before releasing Rainer. "Rainer will first need to learn the art of the key blades, Roxas I did say you were the only one that needed to be here" answered Xemnas before the giant black wave ran past him. "Ok" answered Roxas. "Good now goodbye" yelled Xemnas after taking his cloak of revealing his swim shorts. "Alright the first thing you need to learn is to summon your keyblades" Roxas explained. "What the hell is a keyblade?" asked Rainer. Roxas sighed and summoned his. "Hmph, impresive" sneered Rainer. Roxas pretended to not notice. "Ok, now you now what a keyblade is, time for you to summon yours, just concentrait" answered Roxas. "Ok" Rainer answered. She concentraited for a while then she sumoned not one, not two, but fourteen key blades. Each one was a keyblade that each keyblade bearer used or has. "Finally, the utimate keyblade bearer is here" yelled Roxas.

RAINERS ROOM

Rainer was looking up at the sealing but then she felt her necklace and felt strange. Then she felt a shake up. She looked outside and saw and army of heartless destroying the castle. Then she heard an evil laugh and got knocked out.

TwilightRiku_13 · April 15th, 2009, 07:27 PM

Okay, what the heck was that all about? How does Rainer have fourteen keyblades? What is up with her shaking necklace? Who was the person laughing evilly and knocking Rainer out? Who is Rainer really? Man, there are just so many questions here; I hope they all get answered soon. Anyway, good job, and I look forward to more.

XxGameXfreakxX · April 16th, 2009, 08:43 AM

awsome but im confused also

varsha · April 17th, 2009, 05:26 AM

with what?

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April 8th, 2009, 09:47 PM	#33
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Any new ideas?

April 10th, 2009, 08:11 AM	#34
XxGameXfreakxX Nobody Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: gamerz world ;D Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story does rainer and roxas kinda like each other?

April 10th, 2009, 08:20 AM	#35
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 7 END OF DAY "Class, since there is the school play there is no homework" anounced the Head Teacher. Everyone but Zexion yelled horay, Zexion just groaned. "Well the play is tommorow night, might as well practice" sighed Rainer. "Don't worry, me, Zexion, Larexene and Demyx wil help you and Roxas" answered Axel with a cheeky smile. "Ok, well be able to do other stuff as well since I know the lines already I'll just Need to "shiver" practice the kissing scene" answered Rainer. AT SUNRISE HILL "Alright and action" yelled Zeixon with a directors hat on. Rainer and Roxas went really close and then Axel yelled "STOP". Rainer turned her head and smacked Roxas with her hair. "What is it know, do you have to pee, get more food, or is it that you just need a camera?" yelled Rainer. Axel just moved to get a better veiw. "Just get it over with" Larexene shouted with hands full of candy. "Alright I'll start the timer" answered Demyx. "Alright and action" yelled Zexion. This time they did it quikly to kill time. "Alright I've got my phone, time to start sending pictures" wispered Axel. "What if she find's out it was us" wispered Demyx worried. 5 MINUTES LATER "Alright my lips are soar, I'm stopping" mumbled Rainer. "I agree" mumbled Roxas. As soon as they stopped everyone was gone and the timmer had already stopped. A flyer slamed into her face and it read, Rainer and Roxas dished it out at sunset hill, their picture of them kissing was on it. "Alright now I'm mad" yelled Rainer. Roxas looked at tha flyer and went red and had some small sensation of rage. "I'm right behind you" yelled Roxas. Demyx was dangeling behind the clock and heard everything and wet him self again. some of went onto Larexene who was standing on the track. She thought it was rain and Demyx was having a shocker.

April 10th, 2009, 08:21 AM	#36
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story You'll find out

April 11th, 2009, 03:31 AM	#37
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 813 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Another good update, varsha. I so hope that Rainer beats the crap out of Axel for broadcasting the picture of them kissing. Seriously, Axel is a total jackass. And I liked Zexion as the director. It was funny picturing him with a director's cap on. Anyway, I look forward to more.

April 13th, 2009, 03:48 AM	#38
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 8 School was in chaos because word got out that there was going to be a pop quiz. Meanwhile Axel, Larexene, Zexion and Demyx were standing in a corner waiting for the bell to ring. "Man I can't wait for the pop quiz, I wonder if they will let me use my sitar" yelled Demyx. "Do you even know what a pop quiz is?" smirked Axel. "Of course I do, it's a quiz on pop stars, pop musicians and pop music writers" exclaimed Demyx. Axel just stared at him while thinking "he won't stand a chance". "Hey did any of you see Roxas coming through the portal with us?". "Nah, he must have gone to buy some extra school supplies" answered Axel. "Or maybe that’s an excuse your making because you lost your soul mate to a girl and had the texts, e-mails and flyers up so you could have revenge" smirked Larexene. "Shhhhhh, Rainer might be here.... I'M NOT GAY!!!!!!!!" yelled Axel. "Lets just go inside and get ahead on the pop quiz" mumbled Zexion after being trampled by students continuously. "Good idea" yelled Demyx as a bunch of screaming girls ran after him and his "shocking" new doo like the stampede from the pride lands. RAINERS ROOM (THE LAIR) "What have you found so far Blondie" yelled Rainer while wearing an army suite. "I found a note from Seifer asking you on a date, a note from Tracy asking...ME ON A DATE!!!, a note showing you getting struck by lightning, the flyer "shiver", and Axels camera at the scene of the crime" answered Roxas before taking a big gasp of air. "Seifer wants to go out with me" squealed Rainer. "EEEWWW, Tracy wants to go out with me, GROSS!!" yelled Roxas. "Oh grow up, now back to business, the only useful clue is Axels camera which means, the criminal is at school" answered Rainer. "But we can't go, we're the laughing stock of the town and school" whined Roxas. "That’s why I have a few disguises" smirked Rainer. "GREAT" sighed Roxas. SCHOOL GATES (STILL CHAOTIC) Rainer and Roxas walk in looking like drugeis while Rainer is singing the mission impposible song. Dun Dun, Dun Dun Dun Dun, Dun Dun Dun Dun, Dun Dun Dun Dun, Dun Dun Dunnunnun Dunnunnun Dunnunnun Dun Nun "Hey if we want to enter quietly, why don't we not sing" suggested Roxas. "Why it gives you the sneaky mood" whined Rainer. "Alright alright, no need for puppy eyes" answered Roxas. "Yay, now lets go eves drop on some of the gossip girls" suggested Rainer. So they went off and did some eves dropping, they found out Seifer wears pink undies, Tracy has a wall of pictures with Roxas on every one of them and the struggle manager is GAY. "Hey did you get a text, e-mail and flyer from Axel?" whispered one gossip girl. "Yes I did, can't believe Roxas loves Rainer" whispered the other. "I do not lover whispered Roxas to him self. He turned round to speak wit Rainer but then saw her running to the other side of the school. he followed her and saw her beating up Axel while he was yelling "AHHH, IT'S A DRUGIE, AND HE HAS THE WATER!!!!" The scenes are to dangerous even for me to say, lets see what Seifer is doing. "You did give Roxas the note right" asked Seifer. "Of course I did" answered Rai while stuffing his face with a burger (Mmmm). They stayed silent, then went back to beating the nerd. Back again NATIONAL HOSPITAL "Where am I" asked Axel. "Your at the National Hospital" answered the Nurse. "Oh" answered Axel. "Here have some water" answered the Nurse. "AAAAHHHHHH" screamed Axel. AT THE HALL AT NIGHT It was the end of the play and everyone clapped, some even cryed. "There you have it folks, now go home. BACK STAGE "Xemnas, do we have to do this" whined Larexene. "Yes we do, you know we were just here to retrieve her" answered Xemnas. "Hey guys..... what are you doing?" asked Rainer hesitantly. "Sorry" answered Roxas, Axel and Demyx. Before she could ask why they were sorry they knocked her out leaving her to go into a deep sleep.

April 13th, 2009, 05:18 AM	#39
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 813 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Okay, now I am really intrigued with Rainer. Who is she? Why does the Organization want her? Man, so many questions. Anyway, good job again, and I look forward to more.

April 13th, 2009, 09:26 AM	#40
XxGameXfreakxX Nobody Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: gamerz world ;D Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story lol "AHHH, IT'S A DRUGIE, AND HE HAS THE WATER!!!!" now thats funny XD ur story is awsome

April 15th, 2009, 07:03 AM	#41
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Why thank you

April 15th, 2009, 08:09 AM	#42
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story CHAPTER 9 Rainer giggled at a few of the memories they had, but then frowened at what they did to. Rob her of her life, freinds, family and her dignity. "Hey Rainer, can I talk to you?" asked Roxas from the other side of her room's door. "Uhh... I'm getting changed" yelled Rainer quickly putting on her training gear. "Oh.. ok.. is it ok if I talk to you from outside?" asked Roxas. "I some part of the land of the dragons, a boy standing outside a girls room means they're a PERVERT, PERVERT!!" yelled Rainer annoyed. "WHAT, BUT I'M NOT A PERVERT!" whined Roxas. "Hey you two love birds mind hurrying up, don't want to get late" yelled Axel. "OH MY GAWD, IT LIKE YOU HAVE NEVER HEARD OF A GIRL AND HER CHANGING!!" yelled Rainer. "HEY, AXEL, ROXAS, MIND GIVING HER SOME SPACE!!" yelled Larexene. "OH S*, THE B IS OUT!!" yelled Axel after running away. "WHAT DID YOU SAY A****!!" yelled Larexene. "Hey, is there a porn party" asked Xigbar. "SHUT UP, I'M TRYING TO READ ROMEO AND JULEIT!!" yelled Zexion. "Gawd, save me" pleaded Rainer. "I'LL SHOW YOU ROMEO AND JULEIT!!" yelled Larexene. TRAINING GROUNDS "Good never ending night everyone" yelled Xemnas while hugging Rainer. "Uhh.. why are you hugging me?" asked Rainer. "Because I want to feel like a father" answered Xemnas while hugging her harder. All the organization members went red trying to hold in their out bursts of lafter, everyone exept Axel, he was taking millions of pictures. "Umm.. superior, is it ok if we start training" yelled Saix before closing his mouth to stop himself from laughing, it was to much for him. "Very well" sighed Xemnas before releasing Rainer. "Rainer will first need to learn the art of the key blades, Roxas I did say you were the only one that needed to be here" answered Xemnas before the giant black wave ran past him. "Ok" answered Roxas. "Good now goodbye" yelled Xemnas after taking his cloak of revealing his swim shorts. "Alright the first thing you need to learn is to summon your keyblades" Roxas explained. "What the hell is a keyblade?" asked Rainer. Roxas sighed and summoned his. "Hmph, impresive" sneered Rainer. Roxas pretended to not notice. "Ok, now you now what a keyblade is, time for you to summon yours, just concentrait" answered Roxas. "Ok" Rainer answered. She concentraited for a while then she sumoned not one, not two, but fourteen key blades. Each one was a keyblade that each keyblade bearer used or has. "Finally, the utimate keyblade bearer is here" yelled Roxas. RAINERS ROOM Rainer was looking up at the sealing but then she felt her necklace and felt strange. Then she felt a shake up. She looked outside and saw and army of heartless destroying the castle. Then she heard an evil laugh and got knocked out.

April 15th, 2009, 07:27 PM	#43
TwilightRiku_13 Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking the red and cheering on the Washington Capitals Posts: 813 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story Okay, what the heck was that all about? How does Rainer have fourteen keyblades? What is up with her shaking necklace? Who was the person laughing evilly and knocking Rainer out? Who is Rainer really? Man, there are just so many questions here; I hope they all get answered soon. Anyway, good job, and I look forward to more.

April 16th, 2009, 08:43 AM	#44
XxGameXfreakxX Nobody Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: gamerz world ;D Age: 13 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story awsome but im confused also

April 17th, 2009, 05:26 AM	#45
varsha Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Looking for a friend that cares... Age: 12 Posts: 567 Rep Power: 2 Level: EXP:	Re: The Last Story with what?

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