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Old September 26th, 2009, 01:05 PM   #226
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OMG!

Okay, so Eva is still in heartless mode but how will she get out of it? And why does the old hag want Eva at all?

And will Riku finally get to save his beloved?! I gotta know. I'm surprised Xemnas wanted Riku to get the kiss too. I thought that was amusing. Oh, and what was Eva doing at the jail break? I gotta know! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Old September 30th, 2009, 03:46 AM   #227
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This is it, the grand long finale. I might out a sequel once it's finished.

CHAPTER 62

GUMMY SHIP: FOYER

Everyone was in the foyer staying silent with speicial armor on. They had noticed that this will be a big fight, maybe bigger than all the ones they had all done. Riku was in destress though. His mind was feel bad as all the memories of Eva were starting to get hazy, when only one was clear. It was a memory when there was going to be a bike race Eva had gotten herself into and she didn't know how to ride one. She never asked her parents or any one to teach her, until then.

FLASH BACK

Riku was riding around on his bike untile he heard a bike falling over and Eva cursing. Riku went to investigate and saw Eva falling over her bike many times. Riku smiled at her when Eva finaly noticed and then saw her go red with emmbarasment. "Looks like you need help" chuckled Riku. Eva made a face and crossed her arms. Riku walked over to her and helped her learn about balance and how fast was too fast for her. "Ok I think I got it" answered Eva. She sat on her bike and started riding until she lost concentration and fell of again. "Aw man, it's like this bike hates me, I was able to do it on yours" yelled Eva fustrated. Riku looked at her bike and then thought of a cunning idea. "It's because your a girl" smirked Riku. Eva slowly turned her head towards him with an angry look watching him smile at her. "What did you say?" asked Eva slowly. "Hah, your just weak, if you wanna catch me gonna have to try!" yelled Riku riding off on his bike. Eva looked at him furiusly and got up and rode on her bike after him. Eva managed to catch up to hime even when he wasn't holding back and jumped on him off her bike and fell onto the beach. "Hah, you did" cheered Riku. Eva looked around and noticed she was able to ride a bike. "I can't belive I did it" yelled Eva hugging Riku. "See put your mind to it and you'll be able to do anything" cheered Riku.

FLASH BACK END

Riku smiled and went back to working on his techniqe. "Put my mind to it, thats what I'll do save her" whispered Riku to himself. "Riku! looks like we need to get rid of the heartless ships!" yelled Sora heading towards the main deck. Riku nodded and saw that that was the signal that it was time to fight. Riku headed towards the main deck an fought of the heartless with his turrent and saw the castle.

DARK LAND CASTLE: GATE

Riku decided that they needed to just fight through the entire place without stopping to get Malifecent. The gate was swarming with heartless but they managed to fight ever single one.

DARK LAND CASTLE: THE WELCOME

Riku ran straight forward through the gate leaing until the king, Donald and Goofy started laughing. "Wha-whats wrong with you guys?" asked Sora. "You are fools" laughed the king with a familiar voice. "Yeah fools" laughed Donald with a young british. The three jumped forward and atomaticly changed looks. "Ansem!" yelled Axel looking at Ansem the wise who came from the king in a dark state. "Yes, I am Ansem, but, you are all fools" laughed Ansem. "Like he said" laughed a handsome man with brown long hair in a black tuxedo with a british accent and muscular body to go with his red eyes, he had come from Donald. "You won't resist" answered a deep sounding man with long blond hair with a red bandana wrapped around his fore head and blue eyes to go with his red tuxedo, he came from Goofy. "What are you, I though you were dead!" yelled Riku. "I am the real ansem, my imposter tried to give you a better veiw of him, I am the reason Eva exists, the girl that has caused all evil and these are my aprentices, kale, the one with blond hair, and bruno" answered Ansem. "What, do you mean?" asked Riku confused. "We work with malifecent, we told her about Eva and how she is memory made by Ansem, how he gave her powers and how he created the keyblade, the rest Eva will tell you" answered Kale. "Don't play mind games!" yelled Xemnas. "Sorry, but I'm not playing anything, ask her at twilight veiw" answered Ansem dissapearing. "Ansem is.... evil?" thought Riku.

DARK LAND CASTLE : TWILIGHT VEIW

Riku didn't waste time wondering what to do next and sped to twlight veiw. The castle was similar to the old one but more large and grand. Riku kept yelling out Eva's name as he ran up. There were stairs that looked like they would never end. Riku finally caught up to the top and saw Eva standing looking at him. "Release the darkness in me Riku" answered Eva in a battle stance. Riku knew she was not making a joke, she needed to fight. Riku hestitated and had no time to choose. Riku and Eva faught in the limited space as they jumped towards each other. Riku had ended up in a situation where Eva was holding his keyblade. "I told you to release the darkness in me" answered Eva disapointed. Riku had no chouse, he new what he had to do now. Riku closed his eyes and stole one of her keyblades, one he had used against Sora in Radiant Garden. He striked Eva where her heart was and saw her walk a little bit further than she normally would when she was wounded an she started to cough blood as the darness around her started flickering. "Eva, what is going on?" asked Riku tightening his fist. "I knew, you had to know" smiled Eva. "Tell me Eva" answered Riku. "It was when you all were at castle oblivion" answered Eva. "Eva lie down" answered Riku holding Eva. Eva smiled and lay on his arms. "When you guys where there, I was created by Ansem the wise, well lets say he wanted the darkness to corrupt his mind" answered Eva.

FLASH BACK

Ansem the wise stood at control panels programming Eva who was in the computer getting assembled by data. "Yes, their memories have created the creator of heartless, nobodys and keyblade" smiled Ansem. Kale looked at the girl being put together and looked intereted. "What will she do?" asked Kale. "She will be the one implanted in Sora's and Riku's and anyone else that livedon the island or have connection to Sora's memories" explained Ansem. Kale nodded. "The only way shecan save the worlds is by killing her self in the heart of all worlds" answered Ansem. "How?" asked Kale. "I predicted that a group called organization thirteen make castle above the heart of all worlds in order to presserve her, they will find out what she is and then pretty soon Sora's memories and anyone else that is connected to him will remember, only she is more of a virus, have you found the imposter yet?" asked Ansem before explaining. "No, he is clever" answered Kale. "Well, forget him, malifecent will want her later, she will use the heart of all worlds and kill Eva so this will all stop, she might look evil and act evil, but is a diguse" answered Ansem.

FLASH BACK END

Eva explained about the event Ansem thought of and how it came real. "But, what does he mean about the evil?" asked Riku. "He means that if I die, the ultimate keyblade weilder, then all the heartless, nobodies and keyblades will be destroried, you will not forget me but, you will never have to worry abut theworlds, they will be in peace for ever, there fore this will be the last time you will weild a keyblade and worry about any thing comming from your heart" answered Eva. "But, I can't let you die!" yelled Riku hugging her. "I'm sorry Riku but, you will get to now know that, I will be able to stay in your heart since I will no longer be evil, I will be the light that follows you, keeps you warm and most of all, safe" whiepered Eva before running of clutching her heart. Riku sat there looking at Eva run off. "At least I got to say... good bye" whispered Riku to himeself.

DARK LAND CASTLE : THE LIES

Eva ran of killing all the heartless. Malifecent was waiting for her with all the items. Mushu's sculpture, Pooh's golden hunney pot, Robin's golden arrow, the Beast's rose after her second visit and last, Hercules belt buckle. Eva knew that Ansem would be there trying to stop malifecent from doing the deed so she kept on running.

DARK LAND CASTLE: STANCE

Every one ran to the middle of the room where Kale and Bruno stood holding spears. "Looks like we get to play with lover boy and their stupid freinds" chuckled Bruno. "Your not getting in our way" yelled Riku. "Then lets dance" smiled Kale. They all fought them until Bruno and Kale couldn't stand any more. "We've do our job" smiled Kale trying to go away in a portal. "Not so fast" yelled three familiar voices. Everyone truned aroud and saw the king, Donald and Goofy standing ready to fight with many giant scar on their face and entire body. "Impossible!" yelled Bruno. "Probabl!" yelled Donald before zapping them. Goofy threw his sheild at them and then the king finshed off destroying them. "Your magesty, Donald Goofy!!" yelled Sora. "Hi Sora!" yelled Donald. "Look like we came in time, that nice girl neeeds our help!" answered Goofy. Everyone nodded and ran towards the top of the castle.

DARK LAND CASTLE : FINAL BREATH

Malifecent was holding od heartyless that ansem kept summoning and didn't notice Eva comming. "Malifecent, I'm gonna go!" yelled Eva. Malifecent looked at her and nodded. Eva threw the item she collected into a giant bal of light that stood in the middle of the room all the way down inder the room. "Eva!" yelled Riku. Eva smiled at Riku and threw him the rose she got from the ball. She didn't say anything and jumped into the ball. "Eva!" yelled Riku want ing to stop her but he got held back by Sora. A big shine of light shone out and sent eneryone to a dark place that never ended. "Hello!" called Riku. "Hello indead!" yelled Ansem showing up out of nowhere. "Looks like you thought it was that easy, we have ten miutes to use the rest of our powers, I'm going to inihilate you" smiled Ansem shooting a dark ball. Everyone knew they had to fight but only Sora and Riku got stuck ou side of a bubble that was created by Ansem to keep them out of the battle. Sora and Riku fought to the death and saw Ansem scream a death scream. "Whats that?" asked Kairi pointing to a small glimmer of light. "Thats Evba telling us we have to go home" answered Riku walking towards it. their key blades dissapeard and s fif the organization with out even a sound.

DESTINY ISLANDS: THE ISLAND

Riku steeped on the warm sand and saw the organization standing around looking at their clothes. "We're, sombodies now!" yelled Roxas looking at his clothes. "I guess Eva did make everything alright" thought Riku as he looked at the mountain that was covered by trees.

It is done, I will put a sequel later.

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Old September 30th, 2009, 04:27 AM   #228
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What the hell is going on?!?! Since when is Ansem the Wise a bad guy? Wher are King Mickey, Donald, and Goofy? Oh my God, you have got to finish this; i really need to know what happens next now. Great job, and I look forward to more.
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Old September 30th, 2009, 10:35 PM   #229
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I have finished this story!!
Oh and I will put a sequel later!
It will have speicial bit where I will write down what Eva wrote in her joural if you are interested.
But of course it will be and after story.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:40 AM   #230
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NOOOOOO!!!!! Eva died!!!! Oh man, Eva was such a great character, and I just hate it when good characters die. Well, at least all the worlds are at peace and the Nobodies have hearts and new clothes. Anyway, great job on the story, and I look forward to the sequel.
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Old October 5th, 2009, 03:59 AM   #231
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What the heck?! It just ends?! Oh you gotta finisht this story! You have to! I'm going crazy as it is! I must find out what's going on! I must know!

On the other hand, great job, I hops to see more of this story...

Nice update!
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